Being a ghostwriter must be so mischievously fun. You can just write complete crap, without even ruining your name 😂

@yinhannasjournal

3 жыл бұрын

True. 😳

@r.7530

3 жыл бұрын

Really considering being a ghostwriter now😂

@praptipanchal1469

2 жыл бұрын

I think their ghostwriter exactly did that with Kendull and Ky-Lie.

@sidrag8047

2 жыл бұрын

they even get paid well (up to 30,000 per book... if u have experience)

@gabrielleduplessis7388

2 жыл бұрын

I think it was their goal here.

13 year old Wattpad fanfic writers have more stable plot development than whatever this was

@zoyasaqib8994

3 жыл бұрын

ABJAVBAKJ PLS WHY IS THIS TRUE

@kal9728

3 жыл бұрын

The beginning of the blurb reminded me of a Wattpad fic I read but the fic was better than whatever this is

@dayshawna

3 жыл бұрын

i literally wrote a book like this when i was 12 on wattpad 😂

@tayo380

3 жыл бұрын

Wattpad authors were the blueprint😂😂

@midnightflower-rk8ec

3 жыл бұрын

FR

I think what happened was the ghostwriter took the plots of Uglies, The Selection, The Hunger Games, and any other Nameless Dystopian Books From 2014, and just mashed them together and called it a day.

@CipherDorito

3 жыл бұрын

Yep at the end of the day it's marketed as by Kendall and Kylie so-

@jennifervasquez

3 жыл бұрын

The world and character set up straight up sounded like a rip off of proxy by alex london which only came out a year before so probably not enough time to rip it off but every detail he gave before it got to the plot just made it sound more n more like a shitty version of proxy

@sarakat3707

3 жыл бұрын

Ghostwriters don't really get to pick the plot usually, the person who wants to put their name on it or the publishing company usually hands you an detailed outline.

@bell58137

3 жыл бұрын

U forgot divergent

@dysmissme7343

2 жыл бұрын

OMG ANOTHER PERSON WHO’S HEARD OF UGLIES HELLO!!! 😍😍

this was the most self-sacrificing thing you could ever done

@jasminam2814

3 жыл бұрын

respekt 😭✊

@kittycatcuti

3 жыл бұрын

A true martyr

@AD-cy4vj

2 жыл бұрын

Truly

“Kim’s sex tape had a better plot, and a more powerful climax” IM GAGGING HAHAAHA

@aknee3042

3 жыл бұрын

So was she

@ttoharr

3 жыл бұрын

@@aknee3042 PLS--

@eduardaarrais

3 жыл бұрын

@@aknee3042 girl you didn't 💀💀💀

@kasuScene

3 жыл бұрын

Gagling!!! Lol I can’t even 🤣

@nethu6577

3 жыл бұрын

@@aknee3042 I cant--....

“They have to wear corsets and their waists are cinched from the age of six - so it’s basically Kardashian bootcamp.” JACK

@meghansullivan6812

3 жыл бұрын

Read ur comment as soon as he said that :o

@amygwilliam148

3 жыл бұрын

@@meghansullivan6812 same 😂

@meghana1113

3 жыл бұрын

@@meghansullivan6812 same

@SL-ul3yr

2 жыл бұрын

It's like the ghostwriter knew the girls wouldn't even read it and wrote the story solely as an insult to them.

The fact that Maya Sloan wrote this specifically to make it seem like a Kylie and Kendall product makes every Kardashian-esque detail 1000% funnier

@stephr5914

3 жыл бұрын

Wonder of the ghost writer intentionally made it bad? 😂

@auraw2262

2 жыл бұрын

Maya Sloan understood the project

@i10i60

Жыл бұрын

She understood the assignment.

Jack: "She's a horse girl." Me: "So... she's a centaur?" Jack: "She really likes horses." Me: "Oooooooooh..."

@littledollnina8755

3 жыл бұрын

I THOUGHT THE SAME THING

@drawhanidraw

3 жыл бұрын

😂😂😂

@yinhannasjournal

3 жыл бұрын

Omg. 😂😂

@mamoru1836

3 жыл бұрын

no 😭😂

@AzulTurquesa

2 жыл бұрын

That would’ve made it better! 😂

"I'm honestly just waiting for the evil mastermind behind all this to be kris jenner" I AM CACKLING

@juliacarolyn8720

3 жыл бұрын

I KNOW

@melliexcx

3 жыл бұрын

Is that Perrie Edwards in your pfp??

@MultiLolly2000

3 жыл бұрын

Melissa Okeke no it’s actually me hahah

@melanciafish

3 жыл бұрын

@@MultiLolly2000 you look like hayley bieber omg

@MultiLolly2000

3 жыл бұрын

sofia omg no way thank you so much?!

"Even Stevie Wonders could see that and he's blind." I laughed so hard😂😂

@isidoracvetkovska9765

3 жыл бұрын

i made the mistake of drinking water in that moment

@camposmurilloalejandra3838

3 жыл бұрын

Hi, Louie!

@riajaiswal

3 жыл бұрын

@Sonya Mittal louies are literally everywhere.

@jenni230

3 жыл бұрын

Same 🤣

@stardropboy

3 жыл бұрын

@Sonya Mittal yess love louie

"Kendall and Kylie, just let some of us be poor and ugly" Brutal Jack, lol

This honestly sounds like the book I wrote on Wattpad when I was like 14 and am now incredibly ashamed of

@killitwithfire5377

3 жыл бұрын

Stuff like this really gives me confidence in my plot development capabilities. Like even the worst shit I have come up with makes so much more sense than this

@ari-in8ny

3 жыл бұрын

they probably came up with the plot from wattpad so congrats they probably ripped you off 😭

@TheBridget272

2 жыл бұрын

Lol. What's is called?

@chrisa.4292

2 жыл бұрын

You wrote that when you were barely a teenager. The writer most likely wrote this as an adult. If anything, I’m incredibly impressed

"Why are they killing those people? They are just poor and ugly" And you answered your own question. It's a book "by" Kendall and Kylie after all

@marianathi7146

3 жыл бұрын

The way I laughed-

@muniapolis287

3 жыл бұрын

Yeah that's why they don't wanna pay those factory workers in Bangladesh.

@bruna7534

3 жыл бұрын

@@muniapolis287 ooooooh tell me a bit more, I'll search for it and rub on my Kylie simp "friend"

@lesbiangoddess290

3 жыл бұрын

@@muniapolis287 that youtube name is not it but you do make a point.

@vanik1505

3 жыл бұрын

@@lesbiangoddess290 They might be Asian. I am an Indian and I have friends named Swastik and Swastika. It's a cultural thing.

"I've seen more points on a circle" dang, Jack is on FIRE today, he ain't playing around XD

@melanieventer3511

3 жыл бұрын

L'Manberg?

@khantheghost6360

3 жыл бұрын

@@melanieventer3511 you know it XD

@melanieventer3511

3 жыл бұрын

@@khantheghost6360 yeaaaah i freaked out a bit ngl

@khantheghost6360

3 жыл бұрын

@@melanieventer3511 XD

@bestiebombshell6368

3 жыл бұрын

A circle does has a lot of points but yep 💀💀God I'm annoying

"Nothing makes me want to wife someone up more than seeing them do a Total Wipeout course." --Jack Edwards, in the Year of Our Lord 2021

The hero in this is the ghostwriter. All she had to do was cash a check and moving on to better options, and she did. Bravo.

@wieauchimmer1

3 жыл бұрын

I just imagen her sitting infront of a white board, drunk with friends, collecting every popular trope possible trying to write something watpad novels would be ashamed of.

@ayajade6683

3 жыл бұрын

@@wieauchimmer1 worst part when you ghostwrite the ones hiring you and/or the publisher gives you the plot and outline. Funniest part is the ghostwriter admitted that Kris's lawyer told her to not make it above a 3.0 star.

the fact that you read this book to give us entertainment deserves a Nobel prize

@yinhannasjournal

3 жыл бұрын

Absolutely. 🥺

@calliope2069

3 жыл бұрын

A 🌟novel🌟 price, so to say. Okay, I'll see myself out :)

@linanguyen49

2 жыл бұрын

@@calliope2069 😭😭

Ok can we all just agree that Jack's humour is just ✨immaculate✨

@Meg_intheclouds

3 жыл бұрын

Yes, I was thinking the same

@gimmeanohyeah4408

3 жыл бұрын

“Stevie Wonder could see that coming, and he’s blind.”

@nosheenlalani1091

3 жыл бұрын

Need more of this!!

@yinhannasjournal

3 жыл бұрын

Yes please. 😭

@chenalindelossantos967

3 жыл бұрын

💯

This plot sounds like 80% of my dreams- especially the parts where there’s a mission, without a goal

@simranruparelia8176

2 жыл бұрын

i had a dream where my maths teacher wanted to steal a weird passport in a cave underwater (don’t know why) which resulted in there being 2 teams, and i ended up being on my maths teachers team and drowning my two best friends who were on the other team. no idea what was happening there

i bet the ghostwriter had the time of their life making this. imagine just bullshitting a book for a check. dream job.

"That place exists and it's literally L.A." I-☠

@caitlingill

Жыл бұрын

Or Florida 😂

'Kylie and Kendall if you are watching, thats a book' Jack is on a roll today😫

The delivery of such sassy lines like “Kylie and Kendall, if you’re watching, that’s a book” paired with the soft aesthetic of that outfit is everything.

Love how Jack didn’t even bother to give a spoiler alert because he knows none of us will bother to go through the pain of reading it 😭😭

Wait... the Jenner's "wrote" a book where the poor and ugly people get murdered? 🤣 I swear I had never heard of this book before today. Thank you for reading it, so we don't have to ❤️

@Maincoon77

3 жыл бұрын

Right? I was like....When? When did this happen? Lmao. I hadn't even heard about it and now after watching this, I understand why.

@marinaharakal4763

3 жыл бұрын

Sillyslicker1, you are hilarious! Love it. "...thank you for reading this book, so we don't have to..." I give you 10 out of 10 on that one.))) These bitches are loosing it. All 6 of them.

@Beaneabean

3 жыл бұрын

I heard of it because I was a Kardashian fanatic. Still wasnt interested in the book though

@urockit2011

3 жыл бұрын

and the poor ugly people have dreadlocks and braids 🙄😒

@yinhannasjournal

3 жыл бұрын

😂

Plot twist: rock bottom is actually a club and this story was just kylie and kendall describing a fun night out from the perspective of their drunk selves that night and how they viewed everything

@sabrinab4193

3 жыл бұрын

That actually makes sense

@zahirarodriguez6121

3 жыл бұрын

This would be the only thing that makes sense about that book and even if it's not part of the book.

@booksandwine6245

3 жыл бұрын

makes more sense than that whole "clusterfuck of a book" (as Jack put it)

@katitax508

Жыл бұрын

So they killed a bunch of people for fun?

Ok but what if the whole book was really unsubtly hinting at them being sisters but the BAM they’re not sisters and they become lesbian lovers

@weird_video_png8432

3 жыл бұрын

Now THAT would be a good plottwist

@marisp2588

3 жыл бұрын

New soulmate au: matching irises You have to gaze into the eyes of the people oh meet and the one that matches yours is your soulmate

"If I had a dollar for every irrelevant detail this book has given so far, I would be on the forbes list, next to Kylie" ~Jack😂😂😂

But can we talk about how COOL that AD was??!? More brands need to sponsor you JUST for the PowerPoint 😻😻 p.s already loving this

@mayranohelia

3 жыл бұрын

YES. IT WAS EXQUISITE.

@jack_edwards

3 жыл бұрын

love YOU !

@chrysoula5226

3 жыл бұрын

ADORABLE

@Rampachs

3 жыл бұрын

Normally skip the ads, but I didn't for this one because it looked interesting

@yinhannasjournal

3 жыл бұрын

Please it was great. 😭

the year was 2014 and the dystopian genre really had us all in a chokehold😭😭

@phirion6341

3 жыл бұрын

Pretty easy to rip it apart after all those years xD

@TheBridget272

2 жыл бұрын

I loved that time. I'd been obsessed with dystopia for a long time and suddenly there were dystopias everywhere I looked! Funny, I never ran across this one...

I’d love to see a ‘top 10 worst books i’ve ever read’ from Jack

@swissgoat4981

3 жыл бұрын

That may have to be a top 50. Too hard to narrow it down with what he subjects himself to for our entertainment on a daily basis.

"forget keep up with the kardashians, just keep me up with the plot" JACK YOU DID NOT

I think the world ignored it so hard that I just found out about it now.

@isabellamatos5783

3 жыл бұрын

same

@aanyaganguly8723

2 жыл бұрын

same. my first reaction was, “they wrote a book??”

@fatimazakir477

2 жыл бұрын

Because I am sure those who follow these kinda people don't have intellectual hobbies like reading...

@rubyanddelilahandnani

Жыл бұрын

Same. They know what a book is?

I am living for the sass 😂 Edit, “they’re all dancing, horrible disfigured bodies writhing together- that just sounds like a university night out” 😭😂

I was tempted to buy this book at a book sale because it was literally only 10 cents, but then I figured there was a reason why

@julieelayne

Жыл бұрын

Good call. :)

I lost it when you said "they graduated with flying colors bc they've successfully killed the poor dancing people" 😂😂😂

Idk what's about you but you make me want to read every book

@olxxa4967

3 жыл бұрын

I feel the same

@paritashah4650

3 жыл бұрын

I completely agreee

@Quiteinfamous

3 жыл бұрын

It’s the sweater vest

@marwanazeem1483

3 жыл бұрын

@@Quiteinfamous 😂😂

@Ariadne4

3 жыл бұрын

@@Quiteinfamous lol😂

Holy Shit you're just straight up roasting them every minute HAHAHAHAH

@steffibusso

3 жыл бұрын

jack could of been meaner if he wanted to 😩

@booksandwine6245

3 жыл бұрын

well, someone had to😂

@princessadrigirl6774

3 жыл бұрын

They don’t exactly make it hard 😂

"What is the point of this? I've seen more points on a circle." -Jack Edwards, 2021 Okay but, jokes aside, Jack really deserves the best quote/pun of the century award (multiple of those, in fact)

@mams2847

Жыл бұрын

Fr

“I think Stevie Wonder could see that coming and he’s blind.” Killed me💀

@swissgoat4981

3 жыл бұрын

Everytime there was an obvious plot twist, my AP Lit teacher would always say, "Helen Keller saw that coming" and I almost lost it lol.

"Ive seen more points on a circle"😂😭

@abigailcahen7921

3 жыл бұрын

That statement made me laugh so hard I had to pause the video!

@ankherin4360

3 жыл бұрын

Aren't circles an infinity of points though :D

@haby2178

3 жыл бұрын

@@ankherin4360 not infinite only 360

@ankherin4360

3 жыл бұрын

@@haby2178 A circle is an infinity of points at a given distance from a center :D If you think about it with coordinates, you can get extremely precise with lots of numbers after the comma, thus giving you an infinity of coordinates ! 360 is the number of degrees ^^

Jack ranting about this book is just so ✨therapeutic✨

Every time he said Rock bottom I had to think about this one Spongebob episode

I haven’t even finished the video, but Jack’s meticulously planned PowerPoint presentation for the ad read is already sending me into the stratosphere

the level of shade in this video is immaculate- clusterfuck is now my new fave word lmao

I’m still not fully convinced kylie and Kendall are literate

@smthinthisuniverse

3 жыл бұрын

Your profile picture suits your comment😂🍓

"She doesn't fancy any of them because she's 'not like other girls'". My 'not like other girls' phase was me repressing my sexuality. I feel so attacked

‘Just let some of us be poor and ugly’ LOL 😂😂

That SkillShare presentation was * chef's kiss * 👌

Jack really made a whole presentation I can't lmao

4:46 "i've seen more points on a circle" JUST SENT MEEEEEEEEEEE

Can we appreciate Jack’s sweater vest...it’s so cool

@emmalinakelly

3 жыл бұрын

does anyone know where its from?

@ingridhayen5143

2 жыл бұрын

@@emmalinakelly apparently YesStyle but I cant find it there

you should read emma watson's "book club" recommended books

@catherine9847

3 жыл бұрын

PLEASEEEEE JACK

@yoshuaisnotok8794

3 жыл бұрын

What's that?

@alleanamarie

3 жыл бұрын

This please!

@jfarmerswatermelon6061

3 жыл бұрын

yes

@FlyingFocs

3 жыл бұрын

In the chance he doesn't, please explain why book club was in air quotes

Lmao the horse girl is definitely Kendall and I'm 100% sure that's why there's a meaningless bit about striking a pose and how that's hard

“Just let some of us be poor and ugly” 😂 But lol honestly you told this story so well you almost made it sound intriguing. It seems like if this book was read, edited and re-structured it could’ve been a good book. Maybe if it was a comedy. Maybe then it could could get a movie deal 😂

"kendall and Kylie just let some of us be poor and ugly " is the best

No one Nobody Not a single soul Me : rewatching the skillshare ad beacuse of the Kylie and Jendall references 😂😂

@areeanachowdhury9070

3 жыл бұрын

Yep your comment made me watch that whole ad lol

Jack doing the Debby Ryan move is something I didn't know I needed to see Time-stamp: 8:02

@karlarao8736

3 жыл бұрын

LMAO

@justjoe1669

3 жыл бұрын

I loved that so much hahahaha

"Indra" in Hinduism is actually The God of Rain, also king of the gods

That spon was just 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

„Lex and Kane do all the work - just like in every group project“ this is too accurate

6:17 Wow, we’ve seen Jack reading bad books before but I don’t remember him saying he doesn’t want to read a book anymore. I’m scared.

I love your sense of humour. ‘Even Stevie Wonder could see that and he's blind.’ ‘I’ve seen more points on a circle.’ Like YESSS

*me, moments before a breakdown:* "I think it sounds really fun at rock bottom. I would like to go to rock bottom." I AM DYING JACK

Dashed line: - - - - Dotted line: - - - - - - - - Iconic line: "It's kind of like UCAS"

Can you read all the books Kendall Jenner recommends on her Instagram highlight?

@jack_edwards

3 жыл бұрын

that video is filmed and ready to go!! scheduled for sunday morning :)

"I'm honestly just waiting for the evil mastermind behind all this to be Kris Jenner"made me laugh harder than ot should

Jack you took sponsored videos to a 👏🏾 WHOLE 👏🏾 NEW 👏🏾 LEVEL 👏🏾 and I'm not mad about it.

i’ve been bed ridden the past two days thanks to chronic pain and this video is the highlight of my day 🥲❤️(besides my mom picking up my library books, bless her)

Honestly kind of sounds like a bad version of Uglies, Pretties, and Specials by Scott Westerfeld. I read those as a teenager and loved them!

“even stevie wonder could see it coming, 𝑎𝑛𝑑 ℎ𝑒'𝑠 𝑏𝑙𝑖𝑛𝑑” i’m deceased💀

All the one-liners in this vid are immaculate

“I’ve seen more points on a circle!” I’m dead 💀💀

As a Slovak myself i got super excited when you mentioned my countries name. Thank you

"I've seen more points on a circle" You, sir, have reached the peak of k o m e d y

"It's basically Kardashian boot camp" Me: I can't even.

"stevie wonder could see that coming and he's blind"

“i’ve seen more points on a circle” is definitely a line i’m going to have to use.

Im Sri Lankan and every time you mention sri lanka, im so happy. Not many ppl talk about it😂

@gardeningkittycat6025

3 жыл бұрын

i'm from Slovakia and same lol

"nothing make me want to wife someone up other than seeing someone bla blah blah" wife someone up Oh my goodness I died

I was expecting this to be like a memoir or something but it's a whole fiction novel that they didn't write at ALL,I'm--

I remember when this book came out. It got so much shit on tumblr because it was shit and because when the press asked about the books the girls didn't know anything about it. It was embarrassing tbh.

"I think Stevie Wonder could see that coming and he's blind" I LOST IT

He's just loaded with these crazy one liners. CRACKS ME UP EVERY TIME!!!

Omg 🥙🥘🥚 Cooking Mama 🥗🥖🦑 - what a throwback! I swear one hour of that taught me more about cooking than a whole term of Food Tech!

Let us all pray for every precious brain cell that Jack lost while reading this book just to give us CONTENT

" stevie wonder could see that coming......and he's blind" How i aspire to have his sense of humour

Just couldn’t stop laughing, the plot is so weird and a car crash of complete randomness and it just seems like a tick box for Kendall and Kylie to say they have written a book. As soon as you mentioned the goodread review I went on and let me tell you that is some entertainment 😂

That book sounds ridiculous! I’m glad I never bothered with it! I did read Kim, Kourtney, and Khloe’s contemporary novel, Dollhouse, because I got it super cheap at a big box store. It wasn’t that bad, from what I remember…it was a lot closer to their reality as socialites working in fashion and stuff.

PLEASE READ THE SEQUEL because I need to hear your reaction to it! This one had me laughing out loud at so many points.

Oh jack you seem like such a lovely person I can’t, your videos always make me smile! Keep up the great work 💙

Jack , you're here ! New video yay! I didn't see a new video on Sunday and I got so panicked!

When he read the description of the book am I the only one who thought of the tinker bell movie with her sister who was a winter fairy that’s basically the same plot lmao and it’s like Kendall and Kylie watched hunger games maze runner divergent and then heard they started as books and probably said we should do that

thank you for including your insight about staying focused on one plot or thing throughout the book. i have a habit of trying to include every detail in my writing so you explain that definitely helped me :)

I am in love with his content recently. He has evolved into something amazing and creative and funny. Outstanding!

As a fantasy/ sci-fi reader, this hurt my soul This also just the embodiment of ✨privilege ✨

I'm like in tears listening to your description of Lex and Kane going to Rock Bottom to kill the poor ugly people! 😂

You are my favorite booktuber of all time! You never fail to crack me up!! Wishing you all the best on this journey, you deserve it all!!

Waiting to watch this this morning was the best decision I’ve ever had - I’m having the BEST starts to my morning, watching this with my porridge right now

why would you subject yourself to this pain 😭