Activate the Omega 13. Never give up, never surrender.

Nice idea. But there's no way that a mothballed fleet could be brought into action in hours let alone minutes.

@toddhendricks8239

Ай бұрын

I think as a active mothball fleet / this maintained rotation on crew training Pre WW2 Japan trained piolets with no ships . While ships being built or ships being converted. This intent training created great piolets. This same for a starship could happen . Remember these ships were hidden not anandoned

@schwarziex3563

Ай бұрын

@@toddhendricks8239Well these ships here were abandonend. On a planet of all. If they were mothballed in space in direct vacuum it would be more believable (assuming the hull does not deteriorate under UV light and radiation) but on a planet? Also, placing gargantuan ships in a gravity sink like a planet seems strange.

@toddhendricks8239

Ай бұрын

@@schwarziex3563 I listen to the story and it all not possible . There would be security codes to all weapons any rockets missiles or lasers would have fIluy from age deteriation effects . . I feal poetic license has really gone overboard I say if no security codes then at best 30 percent start up not mention a crew to handle long ago TECK .look at the English language change in last 1,000 years . If lords pray spoken you will not recognize it. This written info just as bad . VIDIOS are available on language changes on scientific documental shows

@briangrevson1818

Ай бұрын

In this time, this universe

@willy3177

Ай бұрын

Hey, their fleet was not made by the lowest bidder

So one earth ship with, it would seem, one crew somehow manned a number (how many?) of super antiquated warships and defeated an enemy fleet with superior firepower and agility. There are holes in this story you can sail a supertanker through.

@stevelux9854

Ай бұрын

Think of these stories as SciFi-Porn. Massive plot holes, no character development, protagonists get whatever they want - easily, and they always win.

@markmaher4548

Ай бұрын

Say that to the HMS Queen Elizabeth class super dreadnoughts! You may of heard of at least one of them, HMS Warspite.😂😂😂

@o.w.i.m

Ай бұрын

Some are good many are like this pretty bad. I made it 3m50 seconds before thinking,.. hmm yeah Nope!

@Realitygetreal

Ай бұрын

@@stevelux9854 You hit this on the head not many get thumbs down.. could not hit the POOR WRITING DISKLIKE BUTTON FAST ENOUGH

@tomdelvetto9906

23 күн бұрын

It’s ai generated obviously

So, if these were ancient dreadnoughts, why weren't they......aww, fuck it.

@saikirito1210

Ай бұрын

Exactly

On their way back to Earth, but suddenly in combat again? Something was missed.

@badpop987

Ай бұрын

AI does that kind of thing.

@mikemaga8971

Ай бұрын

Love the story hope you continue it

@Gonner453

Ай бұрын

Seems like bad editing

@TERRYWIRT

Ай бұрын

And then on earth the uses of Dreadknot was suddenly used for the alien ship. Very confusing

@Amoth_oth_ras_shash

24 күн бұрын

@@mikemaga8971 person written in that case , sounds like there where severe hints of AI 'writing' here

This story is all over the place, ships were invincible then the aliens were taking them out then invincible again...

How long would it take for a reactor, or multiple to power up? And at least one would have to be on line before any consoles or other systems would boot up. And then weapons spinning up once power was restored to them. But the crew did all this is minutes. And in the story it's always Dreadnoughts, plural. So how can the crew from one ship power up and handle several? And every time they win a battle and head for earth, next sentence they are in the middle of a battle. And in every battle one ship's weapons tear through the enemy ships as if they were paper. Same descriptives over and over. So many holes here.

Chill down the spine. Chill down the spine. Chill down the spine. Filled with dread. Filled with dread. God damn ai likes to overuse those words.

@deancartwright9784

Ай бұрын

Paper, Paper, Paper, Paper!!!

@UncleEarl97

Ай бұрын

The phrase, “the Galaxy hung in the balance” and very close to something hanging in the balance occurred dozens of times! Originality, and at least some scientific basis for a lot of this would have made this so much better. So many over used expressions.

40 minute story stretched out to 2 hours

I love this story please keep it coming love it so far thank you very very much

one can always tell the difference between an original story written by a human author, and an AI word vomit pretending to be a story. The massive repetition of common phrases. only so many times a ship dies like paper or shatters like glass or describing the vaccume of space as the void while their hearts pound with grim determination.

I like the story I like listening to you do it very well keep it up. Thank you very much Frank.

@badpop987

Ай бұрын

I’m sure the robot appreciates that.

Great story!👍

I liked the story, I was engrossed with it

Jumping around. Crap ai voice. Ads ads ads. This is why aggro squirrel is best

Thought their shields could take a super nova ?

Poor editing. You could cut out about 20 minutes by cutting the redundant, repetitive lines.

The story has obviously been shortened cutting as much as”fat” as possible.

Yes enjoyed very. Much. More please!!

Great Story!❤

Greath storie keep it comming.

AI story telling. Flawed and incongruous.

Great story.

Continuity much?

@thehoerscorral8565

Ай бұрын

This channel embodies the worst parts of these lazy TTS voice HFY channels because of this; nothing is ordered or numbered or put in playlists so you can actually follow what's going on. You just have to guess at the end of what is obviously part 1 of a longer series and hope that the ambiguously named recommended video happens to be part 2 of the same story, not part 19 of a different story or part 1 of a completely different other story. At least the actually narrated channels put them into numbered playlists in proper order.

@johnc6738

Ай бұрын

@@thehoerscorral8565 They can't even keep One story straight. This one jumps around and changes what is going on from one sentence to the next

@thehoerscorral8565

Ай бұрын

@@johnc6738Yeah, and the repetitiveness hurts my brain. Like it will describe something, for example "The ship began splintering apart like twisted metal" and then the literal next sentence will be "Captain Evil Alien Man watched the ship splintering apart like twisted metal" ??????? why repeat the sentence so often? Once you notice this you'll hear it in every single one of these AI TTS stories LOL.

I tried to like this story. I fought to like it with everything that it took.

I really loved this story and I would love to see how it turns out.well done and riveting 😀🍀🙏❤️

I like the story :)

I thought the objective was the enemy home world and its destruction????

Let the force be with you.

Nice to see the ships in the thumbnail before they became hulks

@richardbuttle2994

Ай бұрын

Impossible to listen, ads every few mins

@Denpachii

Ай бұрын

@@richardbuttle2994 Brave browser, no adds at all, not even a skip where the add would be, like firefox is doing now.

Fun story, thanks

I like this story

I liked the story

Fantastic story telling! Will follow! AT ALL COST!

I like this story.

Way out of Timing @40:32 :Years of hard fighting?! Big gaps in time lime and how many time can you add "into the void"

The stories are so simular😮

when you write "FullStory" i await a full story not a half not a third or 90%....full means full

I like the story

I luv how the story was engaged that felt almost natural but i still felt this story overall was concepted by you but there are many elements of the story that is unnatural and generated but overall since you made some adjustment and changes and the outcome is good then i can only say keep up the good work.

I really did like your audio book. Do you have a sequel to it?

Well, i figured out why so much repetition in certain lines im the story. The big, bad aliens are xeroxians. As in Xerox. As in a copy machine from 30, 40 and 50 years ago. Excellent!

They were never used, but the hulls are scored from battle? Terran tactics would dictate movement in fleets, though a smaller group might be used for a secret mission. It takes 24 hours to safely bring a nuclear reactor up to full power, how long to fully power up a ship that large They dock with one ship but board multiple ships Yeah, not bad bones, but definately needs a human to clean it up.

@markmaher4548

Ай бұрын

It can be done faster, if you really have to, i.e. some bugger is about to drop a cluck tonne of bombs on your SSN & you need to get off the wall & out to sea. Not recomended though! 🤣🤣🤣

I likes it

Yes it's absolutely ridiculous. But go listen to the Xoraxian Empire's version and it all balances out.

0:08 "weapons and armor forged in the 21st century" ... what?

It would be better if it said how many dreadnoughts there were and how they staffed them were they slaved to one ship with AI or did they cram his ship with extra people to man them, it could of been much better if there was a bit more information only issue just light on details or could be a good little short story

SCREWED UP at the end. they were discovered & threatened but still continued to gather intelligence? you need to explain how they were able to continue their mission after being discovered by the Kalnok

Not a bad story, but it keeps jumping constantly. Was this a limitation of time or editing. If it is a time issue, you have enough material to make more than 1 volume so make this a series that will be well worth the effort.

Earth ship cannot win this war without the help of other aliens . At least this will inspire humanity presently to allow UN to rule the whole planet.

Fire fleet annihilation weapon!

I liked the story. Many times, I felt that you repeated certain phrases over and over.

Why do the story loop?

OK I am confused is this just one complete story or is there another part because it goes from here to a super carrier returning to earth

What happened to the first aliens? Why didn't they help?

that captain should have been relieved on the spot, he has an enemy fleet in full retreat and does not pursue to cause more damage and possibly capturing a less damaged ship that was not able to jump into FTL for intel, loser in charge. and when the enemy landed on earth the people on the ground want the ships in space to do something about it? firing those guns toward earth is going to cause more damage than the invasion fleet would. tell those wimps on earth crying for someone else to come save them to grab a gun and start saving themselves.

There is to much repetition in the first 25 minutes. Grinning, white knuckles, dreadnaughts firing, this could have been shortened to about 5 minutes

Ok my bad these we not active moth ball . Engine nead warm up to power systems vrews not of dreadnaught time frame security protocols

what movie or book is this?

Story is very repetitive and the time sequence between battles makes no sense.

I see as lot of positive comments with no Hearts from the “creator”. But sounds more like an A.I. generated short with little guidance from whoever paid for it. I wanted to like this, but, it needs a lot of work, also please improve pronunciation, syncing of text with audio, and more believability.

the ai is getting confused, skipping all over the story

Is this a game?

Enjoyable enough story but confused in general. Them getting the Dreadnoughts from the third planet I assumed it was ancient Earth but then they speak about defending Earth...

I like the story. You doing a great jobb giving us this.

Fix your AI its KRAP

Very nice... I really like your stories... keep them coming.

reading some of the comment below and guys for real critic only have worth if it is constructiv

They like to repeat themselves don't they

Babylon 5?

Was this compiled by an AI ? to many repertitions, have not seen this beofre, al most like the Victirian era monolouge style. Leona,

If some of you don't like the AI story, why are you here? What's the plan, insult AI into submission? You know it's not going to work, right? You're the guys who made the horse and cart, AI is the motor car. 🤦🏻‍♂️

This story is tedious and all of the commercials!

was this written by AI

So a British 1800’s Ship of the Line attacks a US DDG destroyer. I wonder who wins 😂

@markmaher4548

Ай бұрын

Erm, a modern DDG couldn't penetrate the armour of a Dreadnought class battle wagon. The main belt surrounding its citadel being 11" thick, all Dreadnought would have to do is close the range, bring her 12" guns to bear & no more DDG. Today's ASM are not designed to penetrate that kind of armour, they're designed to punch through the steel skin of a modern vessel, which, dependeding on the class is a max of about 1" thick & detonate inside the hull. They're not designed to punch through 11" of hardened steel armour plate. Oh, & the ship I've described is HMS Dreadnought, commissioned in 1906. If we jump forward just 9yrs to the Queen Elizabeth class super dreadnoughts? You're talking 15" guns & a 13" main armour belt. Todays ASM would just bounce off her.

so disjointed wtf

Way too many ads

Im sorry, but that storey line just doesnt make any sense! Hey Zoraxians, just give us a minute for us to swap ships ok? Really??

tbh not a great story. phrase repeat over and over needs a good editor.

I thought while the kalnuri team with volkov was attacking the out post the fleet was going to attack the home world! But all of a sudden their heading back to earth on the dauntless? WTF? get your time lines straight and stick with it! sorry dude nice story fucked by stupid time line skips

This AI crap needs to stop, this was not a story, but a damn boring word salad

@1first367

Ай бұрын

Why do you say it's A.I.

Sorry these things have the start of a story but, they lose the plot and turn into excess verbiage. Listened to 3 of them. At least 9 sentences reused accross them all and repeated in each. Like a primary school kid given instructions in english class without getting it.

AI shit.

This is an awful story it jumps all over the place missing things. It repeats itself if the bloke grips his arm rest one more time, i swear i'll punch the screen.

crap

Sorry fans, there's no reason for spaceships to be aerodynamic. The Borg cubes are the most realistic spaceship design. No spaceships will ever travel faster than light speed or even get close. Ergo no extraterrestrials ever. As far as this AI story, swing and miss.

Hopeless story with so many holes...

The writing is repetitive and unimaginative Like it was written like a 12 year old. Absolute garbage. And a narrator that can read would be a good thing

DO NOT WASTE YOUR TIME!!! Repeating content, the whole "story" feels like it was pieced together with open AI. Tons of plot holes the story repeats a couple parts in their entirety. This channels stories all seem to be very similar. I would say they all have huge issues after listening to 4 entire stories. I wrote better sci fi when I was 14 years old... This is obviously a gimmick this channels stories are all nearly the same, same species enemies always the same, sometimes the story loses the plot entirely leaving the listener to rewind.

boring

This is an AI story

I'm not a bot, but I will praise this crapfest if it monetizes my channel. 😅

Great story.

I liked the story

I like the story

I liked the story

I like the story