So Chris fought Zalvor with the same plasma blade that he used to kill Zalthar. When did this happen? I remember he killed Zalthar by breaking his neck after choking him.

@josephwisniewski3673

Ай бұрын

Chris Scora broke one Zalthar's neck for executing his brother Alex Scora. Chris Hawkins killed another Zalthar with a plasma sword for turning his brother Alex Hawkins into a monster that really couldn’t do much of anything. This was all explained by the data chip that Chris Anderson retrieved after beating the third Zalthar to death with a potted plant in the council chamber for eating his brother Alex Anderson.

@GrowLLLTigeRRR

Ай бұрын

@@josephwisniewski3673 They were not both Zalthar. The first one was Zalthar while the second was Zalvor. Close, but no cigar.

Ship captains are usually the best covert operatives

Nothing is stronger then a Human with something worth fighting for.

@DoesNotConcernYou

Ай бұрын

Right. You ever seen a gorilla 🦍?

Good story bur how did I miss blade fight with general I thought he had his neck broken and why did brothers changed last names

They lost their stealth & FTL, but limped back into the Sol System? Does the author know how big space is?

The soldiers in the pictures for this look like the space marines from Warhammer 40,000

What's the problem of the subs, can you resolve it ?

Wait… I thought Chris and Alex’s last name was Scora not Hawkins. Jack’s last name was Hawkins. Why did the names change? Loss of continuity, that’s why.

@StacyBaldwin-qv5cj

Ай бұрын

Rheir momma was a 304, they had different dads

@StacyBaldwin-qv5cj

Ай бұрын

Their momma was a 304, they had different dads.

@johnjanuary2958

Ай бұрын

lol

@tomwoods5373

Ай бұрын

All the stories remind me of a science fiction book that I used to buy and read I had bought 25 of those stories when I realized I was reading the same story over and over again they just changed the names people in cities and planets I had already bought 25 of those books it was called The adventures of Perry Rodan in the final analysis day was almost 2,000 of these books printed and I knew people who bought everyone of them I quit buying them.

Loved the story. Would be cool if someone made it into a short movie and none of the PC crap, but just they way it was told.

* 88 * a very interesting science fiction story to peruse. I thoroughly enjoyed listening to it. 💪🏻🙏🏻✨

Epic. This felt like it could be the plot of -fast and furious #88

War is never a pleasant sight. Being I was a medic, I at times had to make tragic deaccessions. I do however enjoy listening to your stories.

@pvccannon1966

Ай бұрын

As someone that helped our troops in real life. I thank u for your service. This is just a story. What would happen if an alien race, caused a pearl harbor. As a very old shi fi nerd. Its fun to hear stories of. You just fucked with the wrong planet. lol

“Rubble STREWN”

I just enjoy it for what it is, a scifi story and silence filler

How old was Alex supposed to be? Late teenage years?

37:40 Yeah, Indiana Jones time. Lol

88 times I thought of dropping the story to check another. You need a better editor, to many seemingly inconsistencies. Still the base of the Story was good. Go over your AI or check it yourself before publishing.

first of all, 88. secondly, ai is just not there yet. not this voice model. the flow gets broken all the time. decent story though.

The road is long and....

He is heading for the secret base then?????

88 Times I worried about Earth.

What?? Why in the hell didn’t Chris cut down the council when they were all in there? Fools

👍🏼!

Jaysus Feckin Slow down the Closed captions that Sheit ain't even Tryin to keep up with the Voice gettin all outta sync repeatedly and rapidly.

Jack Hawkins? The kid from Treasure Island?

@jennbaker6972

Ай бұрын

No, that was his cousin, Jim Hawkins.

Sechisechi

This kind of story always makes me so mad. I cant wait for something to give humans a reason to bind together in real life. We find a hostile alien and everything that makes us diffrent is gone. Itll be US vs THEM.

@magnus5897

Ай бұрын

And go figure .. the aliens are not showing themselves i bet this region of space is under quarantaine lmao

Tedious, I reclaim my time. I'm out. too late blah

Piano keys

Maybe get the names of the main characters straight.

Too many ads!!!!!

Where is the point ?

So, the AI writer is definitely not there yet. a lot of shifts, name changes and continuity errors. I think you need to get a proofreader to go over these and fix them. AI is not ready to be writing and putting out stories on it's own. At one point the story shifted from 3rd person narration to a first person narration and back to 3rd without any real reason

Ridiculous idiocy.

The science tech details are amateurish. The galactic empire level battle tactics are childish on both sides. There are many other more coherent HFY Sci-Fi Story than this.

Who is coming up with this garbage being pumped out ?

All the cursing was unnecessary. Didn't finish it.

@VectorZero

Ай бұрын

Hahaha

@VectorZero

Ай бұрын

That wasn't all that was unnecessary.

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