"..weaponized gunships.."?? It wouldn't be much of a gunship if it wasn't weaponized!

@zugzug6773

Ай бұрын

You have to admit the AI is getting better

@jansandman6983

Ай бұрын

@mainmanbumfuzz8983

Ай бұрын

Gestures angrily in human. "It's in the name!"

@danielleriley2796

28 күн бұрын

The writer has NO IDEA about weaponry. They just mix terms like a shitty blender. I’ve given up at the surface to air missiles that have both tungsten and depleted uranium rods in them that are released… first that would be explosively fired from the warhead and there would be only one type of metal since the missile speed and explosive delivery needs to be tailored for the mass and density and effect on target of the two rod metals. Next will be neon yellow with reflective strips for cammo jackets….

@zugzug6773

28 күн бұрын

@@danielleriley2796 Its an AI.

When I see something using well-known sci-fi names like 'Bajoran' it makes me think it was the product of an AI, and that no human editor even bothered to look it over.

@pkill23

Ай бұрын

This channel is 100% AI generated stories

@victorfinberg8595

Ай бұрын

very impressive, then

@iamabadger

28 күн бұрын

@@pkill23 Except it's not, most of the videos are just an AI voices reading reddit posts to make money off other people's writing...

@blockhead5124

27 күн бұрын

@@iamabadger I like "SciFi Stories" (scifistories1977), still ai voices and reddit stories but the channel owner will contact the story writer, ask permission and share revenue with them from their videos. He also uses different ai voices for different characters.

@TheScoundrel70

27 күн бұрын

Well, considering Star Trek and Star Wars have borrowed heavily from people, places, and things that do, or have existed (maybe in a different language) it's not surprising that many words get modified, or repurposed to fit the narrative of science fiction.

They committed the crime of perfidy - false surrender. No quarter is to be given.

Bajorans: Consider the fate of your women. Human: Clearly you don’t know our women. I should have just marched them up here judging from what I’ve seen.

@donktheclown

22 күн бұрын

Lol. Good one, Leonidas !!

@chadrowe8452

9 күн бұрын

I like the sequel better."I'm not here as a witness"

Good story, sighed and facepalmed at the Star Trek name references though. Only inconsistency was at the end which involved the child's doll. The commander had given it back to the little girl and told her to go hide, then he had it back in his hand at the end ("Whoops").

Humanity is a force to be reckoned with. They have a lot of experience after all, fighting each other.

"Fenris" and "Bajoran"... good lord, the AI is strong in this one!

@hermes6910

12 күн бұрын

Nice catch. Something tilted me, I couldn't say what... But now I know.

This should be the base story for a movie. No drama. Just, confidence, carnage and victory....🤔

@robinstuyvesant7187

Ай бұрын

Gotta make space for the woke messages and pontification.

@dominickefrim3088

Ай бұрын

@@robinstuyvesant7187 wokeness killed Star Wars...and Halo....and Star Trek.....

I’m old enough to know that sci-fi and Hollywood usually give us a hint of what’s to come or has already happened behind the scenes.

This AIs grasp of battle field tactics is woeful.

I’m one of those old soldiers (11B), and this story was fantastic, thank you!

He gave the doll back to the little girl, but he looked at it in his hand later, and other strangeness, but an engaging story.

That looks like Titus Pullo of the XIII Legion. I would not be messing with him.

@PumpkinHoard

Ай бұрын

That was my thought. RIP Ray Stevenson.

@swiftmatic

Ай бұрын

Pullo and Vorenus were like the Hulk and the Thing of the ancient world. Fuck yeah!

@svenguinee1072

Ай бұрын

We march for Macragge! Courage and Honour!

@wesleybaldwin7060

Ай бұрын

I dunno , kinda looks like #47

@diarradunlap9337

Ай бұрын

The second guy in the picture looks like Connor MacLeod from Highlander.

The only thing that gives away that an ai is writing this is when it uses the same words to describe something . The words it uses are totally correct but it cannot understand that even though those words are the best choice to describe something, we english language speakers find it off putting to use the same metaphor or turn of phrase multiple times in the same body of text. The Ai cannot understand such subtleties of writing.

@americanjoe5486

17 күн бұрын

Great idea,,,,,, if AI is really up to this task

@BJ-bd5fc

12 күн бұрын

At least until the AI gets enough data sets (containing those human-written subtleties) fed into it. Today's AI doesn't understand or philosophize about anything. It just mimics and reformulates what us humans create.

@watchwood

7 күн бұрын

Also, Humvees in a scifi setting? That's something I'd expect a human writer to catch.

Aren't the Bajorans a race in Star Trek?

It's a good story. The only mistake the author made was at the end. When Greg looks at the doll in his hand. The mistake was that he had already handed it back to the little girl who went away. But again. Great story. :)

Dammmm, almost felt bad for the aliens for a minute! 😂😂😂

Great fun, but please, please get the text proof read before publishing. There are LOTS of spolling mistakes!

@elzwindglenraven

Ай бұрын

'spolling' lmao kewl

@donaldboyer8182

Ай бұрын

Lot's of redundant chatter from the narrator. I thought he gave the doll back to the little girl.

@iamabadger

28 күн бұрын

The whole channel is fully automated, reading and generating thumbnails pulled from (sometimes) uncredited reddit posts. It posts a 30min to 1h long video every 2 hours. There will be no proofreading here at all. It's just a cheap way of making money off of other people's work and writing...

@durbledurb3992

26 күн бұрын

@@iamabadger How did you find that out?

@johncarlaw8633

15 күн бұрын

​@@durbledurb3992 " How did you find that out?" just look at the video release rate. Also the quality. It has been happening a lot on YT and other media and getting much worse. A couple of years ago it was just people lifting stuff from reddit HFY and and other sources and running text to speech over them but now it is just wholesale AI randomness not worth wading through. If it doesn't give a source for the story it is likely a lot of AI now. On the RHS recommendation list you can click on the three dots and select "Don't recommend channel" and it isn't supposed to show them again, but sometimes it still does. Hopefully it won't tempt me with this channel again.

A verbal comic strip. Disney, your finished.

He was adopted...biological father is George s. Patton...

@suziewheeler6530

29 күн бұрын

We don't know that to be true. What are the odds? There is a lot about those stories that can't be confirmed

I hear bajorians i star thinking star trek lmao

War they wanted it now they'll regret it

You own the air, you own the war.......

88 I am a veteran of combat, the closing words by the commander have never been truer!

@markmedlin9731

28 күн бұрын

88 thank you sir for your service

@haha__hihi

12 күн бұрын

@@markmedlin9731 plot twist: grandpa is from germany /s

@manofmann8901

12 күн бұрын

​@@haha__hihiThats all I think when it asks for 88, H-H

America, we are failing miserably........

Humvee's far in the future? They wouldn't have made anything different by then?

@handleyourowntool

Ай бұрын

Nope! Humvees and outdated super bombers will never go out of style.

@handleyourowntool

Ай бұрын

Wait?! Did you take any care to see what time frame this video took place? It was the year 2024

@stevesmith7839

Ай бұрын

@@handleyourowntool It's an alternative present?

@stevesmith7839

Ай бұрын

@@handleyourowntool Lamborghini would be pleased to know. But about war, we used to have Willys Jeeps. One quote from a Warhammer game is an orc saying, "I got me an idea for making walkin..... faster." Jeeps are for making walkin faster, but eventually, with power armor, walkin... will be faster. A bombers purpose is to deliver bombs.... until bombs deliver themselves, as in missiles. We are seeing that evolution being played out in a couple modern war theaters. Bombers are rarely used to deliver bombs anymore, because they are perceptibly interceptable. They are also expensive. With the Phalanx system and other systems, intercepting even missiles and shells is becoming more a reality. Eventually, missiles and shells will have stealth tech and armor, maybe shielding. Tank armor won't be enough. It will be better to have fast, light vehicles. Probably power armor.

@Slowpoke514

20 күн бұрын

Even if this was 1,000 years in the future, you know how humans like their nostalgia. They could have named a new all terrain vehicle a Humvee just because it was a vehicle of war in the past.

I swear, if they try to ban my railgun I will go postal 😆 Good story.

This sounds like our futures history. My father worked for the experimental design department for one of our arrow space companies. He did DARPA stuff before there was a DARPA. He was very stoic about his work. At times we would be watching a documentary on future stuff like pulse weapons and pulse engine technology. I would hear him scoff As a young child I would ask "what Dad" All he would say is " we've had that technology for....hell twenty years now" and then stone face stoic again. A man of few words. I truly believe we know and posses far more technology than we will know in well, my life time. I am sure if the need arrives we will be amazed with the stuff that has been hidden from the general public. It is a shame but, true.

I really like your story. I'm a vet, and a lot of what you said in the story is true to how a soldier is and will do. Be blessed. 88.

45:05 then 46:05 erm.. your AI needs to stop smoking weed

@grogvaughan5649

Ай бұрын

TF is wrong with smoking weed?!?

@marmalade6681

Ай бұрын

@@grogvaughan5649 Absoluting nothing! ! Smoke weed everyday! But dont post weirdass shit and expect more weed! .. hmm more weed please :)

@KallenMalefic

Ай бұрын

​@@grogvaughan5649I smoked one weed now I am gay and worship Satan.

@TheSolidSnakeOil

Ай бұрын

@@grogvaughan5649 It make you say, do, write stupid things as the examples. This was definitely written by an AI. He hands the doll to the girl, "Get to safety, the battles over"? And in the next sentence he's in ship with self same doll?

@grogvaughan5649

Ай бұрын

@@TheSolidSnakeOil sounds like a you issue

Humans didn't have ftl, but are on this planet. Soo, they lived there too? Or they spent generations just to get 1% of the way there to aid them? I don't get this, the Bajoran Capital city is only miles away from the battlefield, so they also lived on that planet with the L aliens? So much is confusing and I barely started. These vids are great as a, "what not to do" if you do a little story writing.

@donaldboyer8182

Ай бұрын

We heard some talk of the Bajoran council back at the city. What happened to them? Are they still there? Not a bad story. But inconsistent.

@jackjohnson40

28 күн бұрын

Agreed! It's almost so good but then these stupid mistakes...

@williamoloughlin8298

9 күн бұрын

came through a stable wormhole, no ftl required.

@briannewman9285

8 күн бұрын

@@williamoloughlin8298That doesn’t make it any better. So, now we’re supposed to believe that they can survive the infinite gravity of a black hole, but can’t go FTL?

@Cleaver2396

6 күн бұрын

The oppressed aliens brought the humans there

The Bajoran Wormhole is now secured by Captain Benjamin Sisko. Lets hope the Cardassians dont join the Dominion.

Avatar is truly what humans are like

88. This was an amazing story. No truer words could have been spoken near the end.

Perhaps renaming the aliens as Bad-yings? Would avoid a costly cpoy right court case. However, an excellant short story. Many thanks to the author and this channel.

Bajorans getting their asses kicked? Sign me up.

@richardberry7470

Ай бұрын

Wrong Bajorans! These are insectoids with purple blood.

@richardberry7470

Ай бұрын

Or Reptillian!

@rjhergert6590

29 күн бұрын

🤣

Thank you for these great stories :)

They throw a few rockets at themselves and blame whoever it is they want to invade at the time..........

@tesmith47

26 күн бұрын

Yep america

F38 raptors...

last i checked bajorans arent reptiles...

Bajor? They're from DS9

BAJORANS? WHERE THE HELL IS CAPTAIN SISKO????

Bajoran? DS9 gonna be calling.

I recommend taking it down, then change Bajoran into something else and reupload it, otherwise you might have Paramount knocking on your door with a lawsuit. Bajor is a planet in the Star Trek universe and Bajorans are a rather prominent species in said universe.

@malahammer

Ай бұрын

Will you relax 🙄

@paulholmpileborg6340

Ай бұрын

What if the AI voice and speech to text got it wrong and its Bahyorans? Huh? How are they going to prove that its Bajorans

@erikstolzenberger1517

Ай бұрын

YOU CAN'T SUE AN AI...if it created this story using open source material, Paramount can kiss their arses...and that ridiculous trash that Roddenberry created? That's open source in this case...get yourself a law degree or shut the f up, kid.

@lucashenry6281

Ай бұрын

@@paulholmpileborg6340the subtitles.

@quetzelmedina3

Ай бұрын

@@malahammerno. Hes right.

It would also be cool if there was some sort of animation or still pictures to go along with this.

45:05 and a minute later schroedinger doll

Good man he stopped being like them

88 Nice warrior fantasy for Memorial day😅 Refreshing to have Humanity lifted up for once 😅 In Part Two, we learn the human CIA arranged the invasion.

When u attack someone and lose. Your not returning for revenge. Revenge implies something was done wrong to u. But attackers r the ones doing the wrong ones so ya

@grekofrog

Ай бұрын

Depends on the point of view of the attackers. And in a story where you got a warlike, ruthless species like these Bajorans, they could see defeating their invasion force as a humiliation, and want take revenge for said humiliation. You see, it's about establishing the barbaric point of view of the attacker. And make them more dangerous, but yet, predictable.

Sea, air, land...seal.........

0:24 "the humans had been providing humanitarian aid" yeah that sounds like a very human thing to do

@TheSolidSnakeOil

Ай бұрын

That something a lot of the writers or, let's be honest, AI never takes into a count with these stories. Also, using Bajorans.

@wizzard4063

Ай бұрын

​@@TheSolidSnakeOilit's one of the ways you can tell it's written by an AI

i keep laughing every time thinking ds9

It seems the author never watched Star Trek: Deep Space 9......

The only surprise in this story is that the bad guys are called Bajorans. There’s no nuance here.

Hi, Saagar I have seen a UFO flying around the top of the full moon & also have been visited by the Tall people while cleaning up the the beach where I live & also had & a visit by the reptilian as well who was standing by & an old car when I approached him he through a coffee cup on the ground so I picked up the cup & then moved to the shelter shed to clean up around the area then I saw a male sitting on the bench with his finger moving around the phone on my movement while I continued to pick up the rubbish. as 2 reptilians were sitting on the bench seat to moving their fingers on their phones too & the next day while turning on my TV there was a figure of 4 greys looking at me from my TV .so people wake up & let these aliens to show them a peace full greetings to the world we live in.

Good tale! Keep the good Work. Thankyou

Nah guys, it wasn't accidental - these are in fact, THOSE Bajorans, just with the Cardassian precedents never diverging as a separate people, but forming Bajoran society from the onset - Perhaps under the watchful eyes of the Pah' wraith?...

Bajoran sounds like a name plucked from Star Trek Deep Space Nine.

@GeorgHaeder

28 күн бұрын

Because it is.

Bajorans are human in appearance, cardassians are lizard like. Both groups are formidable warriors and a few humans would not stand a chance.

The assumption that the galaxy is consumed by darkness is irrational. But it is fantasy I guess.

@user-dk5um1ig4d

Ай бұрын

So new story Human visited some aliens. They had a nice chat. Peace reigned though out the galaxy. The end.

@larryselkirk426

Ай бұрын

@@user-dk5um1ig4d : I did not say there was no darkness. There would be plenty to fight. There always is. But there is more light than darkness.

@user-dk5um1ig4d

Ай бұрын

@@larryselkirk426 there is no way to tell what other races will be like when we meet them so no way we can judge weather there will be more light or dark out there. But it doesn’t matter my point was that it would make a short and boring story.

Blue blood, not purple...copper base...humans are iron base.........

the end of the battle repeated itself twice, then the aftermath of the battle repeated itself twice.

@bhaebe6671

Ай бұрын

Poorly edited

@larryselkirk426

Ай бұрын

One of the traits of AI is repetition. One of the other stories used the exact same description three times for different things.

Bajoran should be like human. When did they became scaly reptile?.

Come up with a non copyrighted alien name, and you’ve got something here.

Bajorans? What is this? Star Trek?

Lol, ah AI scripts. "He felt the bullet fracture his skull, then nothing at all. Meanwhile, ..." xD

You could have thought of a better name than Bajorans that was already used in star trek DS9.

This one doesn't suck.

seems like the AI got stuck in a loop when writing the end.

executing war prisoners because of some of some ambush is a war crime anyway

how would an alien know a white flag to be a sign for surrender... lost me there

I do notice in all these stories ,it always just the beginning,as usual we have upset every warlike race in. The universe

Great story. I enjoyed it very much. 1 to 10, I give it a 10. It was so interesting I tried to imagin in my mind how every action and order was taken place. Even trying to picture the girl with the doll.

To me that was there fault you must be brutal with people surrendering but you don't have to kill them

The humans became more powerful and tried to help other worlds be free of slavery from evil empires controlling them. But alas, it failed when a few human politicians out of selfishness and greed sold the human weapon technology to the evil empires. That's what happens in real life, so this story might as well resemble it.

Some reptilians can fly and have wings...we too can fly, without wings.......

@bicanoo_magic3452

28 күн бұрын

I know you're saying that as a joke. But I CAN kinda fly. I have levitated or risen quite fast to a height of say 40feet. I've stuck myself to the ceiling of the office. All of this with witnesses. All by people that knew me or still do. Only ONCE was it voluntary. The people that saw all this don't want to talk to me anymore. Just saying. It IS possible and DOES exist. Don't ask me how I got it or how I discovered it. All by accident and it happens when it happens. It never freaks me out. But boy do others lose it. One woman fainted cold out, right in front of me, after watching me be pegged against the ceiling in the office like a star fish.

@MrPanzerblitz

24 күн бұрын

@@bicanoo_magic3452 I see you edited this.....obviously, not enough!

Not flat....a lot bigger than we know.........blood don't look blue, until it dries...

Ok, i stopped it at Humvees. This is bollocks.

Very reflective of current events.

I really want to corrct the mistakes in the close captioning! 😆

how many times are their eyes gonna get filled with an adjective....Grammarly, where are you when you are needed most

88 I really like your stories , you make me proud to be an American- better yet you make me proud to be a woman

Odd. They won the battle, and rather than reinforcing their positions, they all went home to Earth. Sounds like American doctrine during the Vietnam War.

@4X10S

21 күн бұрын

You view the war in military terms, but war is an extension of politics. The 60,000 U.S. soldiers that were lost in Vietnam was the political defeat that U.S. couldn't accept. They lost because there was no will in U.S. citizens to fight that war, and yes, it's a loss, Communists of Vietnam won in the end defeating the South Vietnamese Democratic army. Same thing happened in Afghanistan, they never lost their will to fight, all while U.S. couldn't continue this senseless money sink.

Very soon, we'll remember who we are........

Plato once ssid., you can tell a nation's worth, by how it treats it's veterans..........

There were indeed a lot of errors in this story, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. And that is what I came here for, entertainment. Thanks. However, I hope to see less errors in the future, despite them, I liked it.

Put two pictures side by side and tell me he ain't.........

Great story 👏👏👍👍

Must have been the Maquis

I always thought Bajoran's were just religious nutters who complained about the Federation and got occupied by the Dominion. 😂

Bajoran? Reptilian? Has the AI that wrote this piece run out of names and species for extraterrestrials?

@IterativeTheoryRocks

10 күн бұрын

The ai has been trained on the sum total of all data available to it via the internet. What we are witnessing is the zeitgeist of human thinking. The ai regurgitates precisely what the ‘average person’ is thinking sci fi stories sound like. Given 90% or more of the population do not know anything about sci fi, yet are willing to give an opinion on it, we are where we are.

So the undisputed masters of the galaxy share a planet with another race / peoples which is not under their control. And humans are able to land on their home planet (as the Bajoran council was on the same planet) and kick their ass whilst there is no mention of the presumed space-battle. This just makes no sense.

Can even tell you, who set the charges........

Navy rail guns prove, Gaia is not round.... . L

88 just found your series and i love it, i dont know how many you have written but i plan on listening to them all

Not bad for a short story.

Bajions quit coping star trek

The Humans thought that world was theirs?

Excellent!! Very well done!!

His bday...4:20........