Listening to these stories for about a week. I have lost count of the number of times I have heard the Fate of the Galaxy hangs in the balance. LOL.

@sarttee

3 ай бұрын

because its all a.i generated...

@FlaviusAspra

3 ай бұрын

And "A beacon of hope"

@ErisstheGoddessofmanhwas

3 ай бұрын

Soooo?

@sizemore216

3 ай бұрын

And “his sidearm drawn”

@kiltmaster7041

2 ай бұрын

@@sizemore216 *followed by a clinical and flavourless description of the precise measurements of a Glock 9mm.*

He was told to destroy the broken ancient remains of the fleet and erase all data concerning its existence. And then when he returns to his ship, suddenly he knows about an incomplete super weapon that has not yet been mentioned? Seems like we are missing part of the story here.

@fberdf

3 ай бұрын

And the Kredox were a myth and suddenly are everywhere ?

@koshe86

3 ай бұрын

@@fberdf and they destroyed the human fleet then it was a new race at the end.

@ravenof1985

3 ай бұрын

its AI written, there are contradictions/omissions everywhere

@fberdf

3 ай бұрын

@@ravenof1985No, there are a lot of AI written stories over here, but usually we just get some expressions and words repeatead over and over again, not so many omissions and contradictions like this one. I must have seen in the last 2 months 80 videos like this and this is the most broken of them all.

@PaulBrannan-mb8wv

2 ай бұрын

Or how the kradox knew what they just found. Big big big gaps of this story

It is rare that i would sit and listen to a story teller at all even one like this as i have loved Sci fi all my life and have amassed a library of more than a 1,000 books in my life but i must admit i was drawn in to this one .well done sir .

@jbrobertson6052

2 ай бұрын

Hey I did the same thing I was born in 1960 and my Uncle was an All Star Wrestler back in the day with Gene Kiniski and Steve Little Bear those are the names that I remember but those guys and more of them had I guess you would call a little comic book club they all bought comic books and amongst themselves they bought every comic book that was printed that month and shared them amongst each other and then they would give them to me I was one lucky kid who ended up with hundreds and hundreds of them and before I was 6 I was reading Sci-Fi and once Star Trek started in 66 I was hooked lol. This video came on and I thought it was a movie but when I realized it was a story I was going to put something else on and by the time I found something I had been listening and I was hooked lol

@Wateringman

Ай бұрын

Then you will have a treat with Perry Rhodan: Peacelord of the Universe. Over 5,000 novels. Mostly in German though. It's translated; but English it's limited.

Ah, that is like the discovery of The Shadows and the coming out of the Vorlons in Babylon 5.

@snoobahjj2089

3 ай бұрын

Ah man of culture i see, good old Babylon 5 series

I really liked this story . I agree that this would make a great movie or even better, a mini-series.

I'm surprised they were able to do as good as they could with the mass of leaks that allowed the enemy to get all the information they needed

@lechatrelou6393

3 ай бұрын

War thunder, spatial edition

maybe it's the drugs but did they evacuate the ship twice? got lost somewhere.

@stratometal

3 ай бұрын

Yup, seems like that bit repeated itself. A copy paste/edit error?

@TairnKA

3 ай бұрын

It sounds like multi-drafts of the story got accidently edited in an odd order? Ah, s*** happens. ;-) In the first part they used a shuttle and drop ships, then they had transporters. Don't talk, shoot! Where did the data go that you had? One moment it seemed they were making peace with their enemy's, they find the Human and their back waring. Someone was in a hurry to publish this and sounds like they didn't proof read it?

@chkmcgee

3 ай бұрын

Sounds like a mental narrative of what the commander expected to happen.

@ravenof1985

3 ай бұрын

its AI written, there are contradictions/omissions everywhere

@apolloxiii5574

3 ай бұрын

Sounds like a story with multiple timeloops

I loved the story, great narrative. Thank you for sharing!

Funny how the name of the enemy changed

i really liked listening to this story and more so after a stressful day today, thank you for having it here.

I enjoyed this story and look forward to a sequel. Thank you!

You have to continue it!!! I loved it alot it felt amazing hearing it

I like the story. It had a good plot, and your narration is excellent! Thank you!

Loved the story ! Wonderful job!

Loved the story!!

I love story time ! I liked the story !

amazing story line.. would love to see it in more detail

I like the story so much that I have downloaded it. I hope you continue the story line.

Some things dont really make sense. So the Kredox were driven back into hiding mostly by humans and some other species , they were a myth but the moment Zorgax looks for the weapons parts, they suddenly appear and they have a known territory ? If that is the case why did it took them so long to look for Human Tech, specially in areas where they were defeated, makes no sense. Had Zorgax discovered the human fleet 1 week or days later, would the Kredox have already the "human weapon" assembled by then?

@chadrowin2956

3 ай бұрын

Here is a question. Would the two different technologies even be compatible?

@fberdf

3 ай бұрын

@@chadrowin2956Yes, a good question, organic hulls and human tech have nothing alike, but what i implied even makes less sense, there are some very interesting AI made stories, but this one has a lot of missing links!

I really enjoyed this short story. ❤

I enjoyed this story. Thank you !

I liked the way the story had went better then alot of the other's

The Kradoxs wants the Human Technology. Now the new Viridian threat? I like the story. I would like to hear Parts 2, 3, 4, 5, you know to the END!

Loved the story, well done.

I need a story of aliens discovering what happened in WW1

Mini series!👍👍

Good SciFi story

they went bankrupt building them . money got in the way :(

I love the stories you write Please keep up the excellent work

I love the story. Good narrative. Many thanks

Keep up the good work.

Good story. Thanks.

Love these stories. Keep it up

I liked the story. I subbed too. Thank You.

this was my first. Loved it a nd hope to listen to more. :)

That was really entertaining thanks

I like this format.

I love these stories !!!!

Awesome story

Good story reminds me of the Homeworld series of games or other games with space travel, world exploration etc. hope for part 2.

What happened after 50 mins? Previously they landed in a dropship, retrieved the energy core, engaged the enemy in battle and died heroes. Then engaged the enemy and somehow won, then landed on a planet using a matter transporter to retrieve the energy core…again?

@baldis12

3 ай бұрын

The story is sadly utter garbage

I couldn't turn it off, I listened to the end. I'm an advid Audio Books member, it would be great if your stories were a available there. there were some areas where more details would have helped. but overall, it was a very good listen.

@SuperScumble

2 ай бұрын

If you are listening on a mobile device, install firefox, set to desktop mode then load the video, minimize and it will work as audio with audio controls on the notifications ;)

I enjoyed the story and would like to hear the ending of this story. Thank you.

One of the best words I ever sent and listen to.

Love the story

Pretty good story.

holy shet, this is sick, i was listening for 5 minutes and didnt even realize its an hour long lmao, definitely binging

Cool story

❤ This is a great piece of work, it makes me wonder "what if" as though throughout our galaxy that someone is trying to contact our fledgling species not knowing if we've discovered electricity yet?😊

Not bad. Keep it up. Ignore the haters Haters that do nothing themselves always gotta hate.

Love the story ❤

I liked the story very much. It caught my interest and triggered my imagination. The loopholes are many though. Sometimes you had difficult to follow who was who. Another thing was the increasing awe of more advanced technology, one more devastating than the one before. That did not really make sense... Good luck in your future endeavours

well narrated.

I really enjoyed the story

Being a human hybrid, I like the story 😊

Parts make me think of star trek Transporters,federation, andorians, etc Nice story tho

I loved the story ❤

Nice story . They better make a movie about this story .

I like the story

Very nice 👍👍🇺🇲

I love this story

Liked the story

I liked the story very much.

Awesome this would make for a great movie mate??

I loved to story

Its look lika story for next mass efect game. Going on adventure for patrs to mega canon. Pictures of abandoned ships look pretty nice

My friend that is a great piece of artwork you have attached to this brilliant story I'm assuming AI. If so, can you tell me your various profiles for generating that art

I LIKE THIS STORIES.

nice

Good story, got gaps though.

I did enjoty the story, will there be a part 2?

The price of peace is exponentially higher with each advancement. At some point it can turn the peacemakers into the very villains they fought so valiantly. At some point multiple species must work together for every lasting peace.

Good story. Like the different view point.

I liked the story

i like the story

About 28 minutes in, the subtitle get badly out of sync with the video.

@ryanmg02

3 ай бұрын

Well the intended audience for subtitles can't hear the issue

@JS-wt8vf

3 ай бұрын

@@ryanmg02 Except for those with certain learning and perceptual disabilities that need both. Subtitles are not exclusively for the deaf.

@carlosgarate2848

3 ай бұрын

@@ryanmg02 subtitles are not only for the impaired, I follow the audio with the subtitles cause sometimes the audio only is uniteligble

Doesn't sound too bad as they win every encounter leaving the enemy dead on the floor.

This one makes little sense. Oh wait, The Kradox were searching for the weapon, too. They only had 2,000 previous years to search for it.

wait until they find a lightsaber in one of the old ships junk drawers, lol

They probably mix moonsust Industrially, instead of Smeltering it all into Aluminum.

It's funny when human is in the role of "mysteriously leaving behind epic legacy" for "alien" to discover. I'd like to think that we were never gone completely but exist in terms of still bickering among ourselves for the most ridiculous shtt like "oy mate u looked at me wrong" and have hilarious reaction like "huh duh we made that? - lol lets sell it for scraps".

Reminds me of the galactic empires books, story called all the way back…

Click on it listen to it keep your attention going I really enjoy your storytelling

Humans did have flying city’s / military bases thousands of years ago. Bc ppl now can’t imagine they say it’s crazy. Yet I was able to get a scale model to float with a large amount of lbs . Providing that we have abilities to build flying city’s . I’m trying to start building them now but I guess it’s to much power for one group to have

Like🤩

that story is trully good i waiting for second video

A link to a text version would be nice.

Good story, however...why would they not contact the humans when the "bad guys" came back. And I would have loved to hear why there was advanced human space tech long before they thought we had electricity...Atlanteans? Anunaki? I listened to the whole thing waiting for that answer...slightly bummed I didn't get an answer

About 22mins in a whole fight scene goes missing and they're suddenly on the next planet!

Am I the only one who noticed that they mixed up chapters here

@fathersplight6334

2 ай бұрын

No. I felt the same way. Somewhere in the middle of the story started going backwards and I was confused who was fighting who.

The writing is really good, so much so that it makes up for other flaws. Having said that - some of the plot points really need to be thought out better for 2nd edition. How did Kradox not find out about this super-weapon from millenia ago? Was there a spy / mole leaking critical intelligence to them? No obvious attempts to find them and stop them? Was the 3rd module already found by the Kradox? Why was it in the middle of one of their military bases? If they had it for some time, did they not reverse engineer it? Wasn't the Intrepid essentially destroyed in the battle where they first used the human super-weapon? How is it seemingly back in action in the next scene?

@baldis12

3 ай бұрын

Yeah the story makes no sense at all.

It seems like this portion of the Federation story was written by a committe or with diverging plot lines that were knitted unsuccessfully together. Was it written with AI? Some portions seem not, yet other portions almost go like a story outline that had trouble resolving. Otherwise there certainly had action, danger and a bare minimum of detail to conclude the story, like a novel that got edited down to a novelette for magazine publication. Reminded me of the Hornblower by Forester, but with minimal character development. It was entertaining, though.

Ok. Good story, but sadly the ending should have been their discovery that the Viridians are human and that they were an off shoot of humanity that were religious or autocratic or something interesting that caused a schism between the majority or humanity and these Viridians. That would have been a killer twist

What anice story

feel like i am listening to stellaris x'D

Like!

Yes I liked the story and would bet that a AI flim could be made out of it!

Too many commercials.....skipped adverts , a lot. A fun listen:)

This would be a whole lot better if the author, somehow, could tell us how the bad guys found out about ALL of the information surrounding the components of the weapon. This story got redundantly DULL…never bothered to finish watching it.

The story jumps almost as if entire chapters had been cut from the narrative.