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  @rafafryc483927 минут бұрын

  good story

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  @williamjames330440 минут бұрын

  In 500,000 years, the council would be, so far, technically advanced over us. They wouldn't even care. But I would still like to see what happens next.

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  @JohnSmith-yy8gk48 минут бұрын

  there are some jumps like some chapters or pages are missing

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  @stevenlachance857649 минут бұрын

  Good story liked the reveal through the two valkarians.

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  @DrazjaСағат бұрын

  Are these all short stories or are they connect

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  @brionhorvath59192 сағат бұрын

  T b is is on of the greatest story ihave ever heard. ❤❤❤

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  @kevrig81222 сағат бұрын

  I liked the story I want more

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  @brianblackwell57132 сағат бұрын

  It is funny hearing my last name being used in a story. I love it, even knowing that there is no connection to me.

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  @user-sb7dq9qn8c4 сағат бұрын

  Love the story. Well done.

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  @jeromejohnson64485 сағат бұрын

  America knows how to enslave people. Nothing changes

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  @craigstephens29317 сағат бұрын

  One minute the enemy couldn’t be stopped next fighting back. Rubbish

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  @PeterTattam-bd3fb7 сағат бұрын

  I like the story

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  @Rebellion90s7 сағат бұрын

  "Easily" *scoff*

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  @JCC_197510 сағат бұрын

  I liked it 💜 ready to listen to the next chapter 💜 thank you!!

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  @goatkiller66610 сағат бұрын

  I know this is really pedantic, but Andromeda is a galaxy. It’s not a nebular or star cluster in our galaxy. And while our galaxy is something like 250,000. - 200,000 light years across, the distance to Andromeda is well over a million light years away. A ship that could fly from one end of the Milky Way in a week would take well over a month at maximum speed without stopping for breaks for fuel, etc. Any civilization that appeared in OUR GC regularly enough to be a member would almost certainly have fully taken over their home galaxy before ever leaving to visit us.

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  @smokeydization12 сағат бұрын

  you mean you used ai?

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  @xSayHiToEarlx13 сағат бұрын

  🫀

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  @PeterTattam-bd3fb13 сағат бұрын

  I like the story.

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  @AstroNight4414 сағат бұрын

  If the girls is 12 years old, why is this not called 'Tortured a Human Child' ? Why say girl? All the 'Tortured Human Child' Stories are ALWAYS boys, yet you have to use 'Girl' whenever the victim is a girl. How come? Can't you just fix the prompt so the AI can use 50/50 ?

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  @Jetcitywarrior-xc6uh15 сағат бұрын

  Redundant and broken timeline BORING

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  @ChadLetourneaurhavoc15 сағат бұрын

  Hey Alex had a twin lol i bet his dad didnt know since her was calling him alex

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  @PeterTattam-bd3fb15 сағат бұрын

  I like the story

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  @sandrasweeney744515 сағат бұрын

  I didn’t like the ending

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  @Palmerrip16 сағат бұрын

  What's with the six fingered hand?

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  @user-jg6kl8es7v16 сағат бұрын

  me gusta

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  @hillbillyhippipe19 сағат бұрын

  hello there storytelling it was a very good story man I like the story man it was very good thank you very much...

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  @rodeastman546519 сағат бұрын

  A great story! Thank you!

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  @jamespseaman413620 сағат бұрын

  Don’t they have more than one dreadnaught?

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  @jamespseaman413620 сағат бұрын

  The Corvan believed that the human race would give up their military secrets so easily,not! I don’t trust them!

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  @richardward911122 сағат бұрын

  How many times does Ghost have to kill Zaxon??

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  @olafseverin918123 сағат бұрын

  These r learning lessons, packed in fiction. Of my perspective, they r masterpieces of story-telling.

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  @andrewmcbride79823 сағат бұрын

  I do like the stories

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  @gewgleisatyrant1286Күн бұрын

  These stories are great, but they never seem to get to the end. Where are the rest of these stories? How are you supposed to know what order to view them in? Are they all related or do they stand alone? Its frustrating to get into one of these only to have it abruptly end before any climax. wtf?

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  @stevenfranklin7060Күн бұрын

  boring

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  @christopherfeliciano6058Күн бұрын

  How many times is he almost going to die?

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  @kevrig8122Күн бұрын

  I liked it

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  @Springfield2016Күн бұрын

  How many time can a fleet commander abandon his bridge to personally save his son, the son who died in his first engagement? You have a habit of bring the dead back to life in you stories. It shows a lack of imagination and ruins the flow of the story

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  @weech8392Күн бұрын

  I enjoyed this!

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  @sandraslemmer4213Күн бұрын

  I like the story. Trial and error and heartache at the need for the error. For, in the error part, a step back had to be taken just when compromise seemed successful. A pity, or not. Only God can say for sure 🙏

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  @spagskettiКүн бұрын

  Before you post this shit maybe have a listen to it so it's not all broke up with chapters being mixed up like a fruit salad. It's tough to follow the storyline when it skips to the end in the middle of the story.

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  @cherryberry6985Күн бұрын

  You should do like a Gundam story

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  @DaMetaEXКүн бұрын

  i have watched a few of your videos and I find it hard to follow as certain parts seem to loop replaying already played sections

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  @RSN_Charizard_OpКүн бұрын

  The A.I voice needs some work. Not pronouncing Talon the same every time is killing the immersion.

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  @erwinngitngit6425Күн бұрын

  Love the story and can't wait for the next one

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  @phillipnunley1671Күн бұрын

  This almost sounds like the game Mass Effect Trilogy, lol with the Collectors and the Reapers, with the husks of ancient civilizations transforming in reaper base ground assault units of different varieties of collectors, human husks, Rachni, Innusanans, Turians and Asari into abominations

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  @roygonzales5329Күн бұрын

  Need a part 2 to this

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  @roygonzales5329Күн бұрын

  I❤ the story

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  @andrewmcbride798Күн бұрын

  I like the story but you dragged it out. And you constantly repeating things. Get on with the story quit dragging it out

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  @456death654Күн бұрын

  good work, i can also do AI generated rubbish

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  @rafafryc48392 күн бұрын

  I liked it