I have listened with great determination, but I'm all out of great determination and can't determine whether or not I can stand to hear the word "determination" spoken again.

Damn bud, the Hawkins and Zorgons seem to be crazy active in these stories. Change the names guys come on! If your going to have AI write these at least do some minor edits.

@manikmd2888

2 ай бұрын

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@MongeziRobertMbanjwa

2 ай бұрын

The fate of earth With grim determination The fate of humanity, some of these are repeated every 30 secs

@Red-Raider

2 ай бұрын

Better still dump the AI, learn to write or drop it all together!!!

Damn, the Zorgon Empire is getting absolutely roasted in every story. It's like they don't learn their lesson against the Hooomans.

This is awesome!!!!! More please more!!!!!!!! I love this story. And can’t wait to hear more from you

I really tried. Probably good for falling asleep to. Kinda drones on, and on, and on. Good for sleep.

Agreed. Common threads with all these stories: Lots of cutting butter and paper. Clenched jaws Weight on Shoulders Long hard roads ahead Lots of blazing Rifles spitting things Nodding grimly After each cliché falls; two more takes their place.... Fingers dancing over things If they would stop all the clichés it would be very enjoyable. You can't have a dreadnought come out and then 10 more and then "a secret stealth ship appearing after that then aliens "secretly watching" appear out of a wormhole" It's become too hard to listen to. There is always a Hawkins, Reyes, Therros, Every time. 😅 I great story with just small name changes told a very slightly different way each time. SMH I have to go. "Victory over breakfast is within my grasp". My hands steady over the toast.......😂

@Perurikun

29 күн бұрын

don't forget about everything hanging in the balance!

love this!!!

great story! keep it up

I liked this story though, long and drawn out as it was, very well done!

The story is clearly programmatic, getting better but still painful to listen to, reliant to much in disjoined catch phases and sentences. .

@CHMichael

2 ай бұрын

Feels like you already know the story..... or heard it before

@matthewellisor5835

2 ай бұрын

There is some potential but that would require significant efforts. Still, I'm arrived at the point now that the (at least largely) AI generated material should be ignored, yes! this will harm a rare few writers but this AI driven course must be abandoned, no matter the cost.

@todddenio3200

2 ай бұрын

​@@matthewellisor5835I agree completely. We as a society are becoming too dependent on AI and people don't realize that by integrating AI into our lives more and more, we are only inviting AI to have even more influence and control over our lives and over time it will take over everything and will bite us in the butt in the long term. People are losing their ability to do things on their own, including writing and thinking for themselves.

@todddenio3200

2 ай бұрын

I agree. Too much reliance on AI.

@peteratkin3788

2 ай бұрын

Its a tool rigth now, nothing more, I use AI a lot to verify and make sure the no obvious logic issues in my reports and such, it does this much better and faster than I could ever do.

A very good story.

“Evasive Manuevers!!” Hawkins barked in the softest AI voice ever invented!

Loving the stories. New different and exciting I do have a question. The art work is remarkable, the colors the shading and detail. You have tons of different alien races, which one is the look of the zorgons and other enemies.

We make a weapon to defeat the Watchers...then instead of USING it they break it into 12 pieces and PROCEED TO THROW IT AWAY....also DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION DETERMINATION

@Perurikun

29 күн бұрын

GRIM DETERMINATION! 🤣

Wahooo, The song hit me in the heart first time i herd it!! (LovefromSweden)

@shaneebz5292

Ай бұрын

It's not a song....

I liked this story

i love the stories. is there a timeline in order to listen.

Like it

Ai characters with stolen assets from other IPs with an endless supply of plot devices looted in every encounter then quickly used after to fight a stronger and if I were shitty AI "more gooderer" villains and conveniently item upgrades.

I really like this story. I want to hear a chapter 2,3, and 4

I think the future of ai stories looks bright even if there are creases ti iron out

How many beginnings is this story going to have?

I loved story wish was end to it though

Is it just me or does this story make no sense at about the hour and half mark? They assemble a weapon to stop the watchers than don’t use it and disassemble it? What?

You say you wrote it yourself, have you posted it anywhere? I for one generally prefer to read than listen.

I would rather listen to a story being read by an actual person than one being narrated by some AI voice.

I thought it was nice to listen to. It helps me sleep.

The story is good but it has a problem with repetitive phrases, and continuity. Particularly the part surrounding the machine. Seems like a wasted opportunity.

Cannot listen anymore. Too many scenes repeated with slightly different scenarios. If you would edit these out, it would be very enjoyable.

@ndlindquist13

2 ай бұрын

Yeah, this seems like some AI generated shit. The longer the story goes on, the less sense it makes...

I’m usually really forgiving for F’s made stories or even ai made stories. But this is just….bad! They make it to the bridge of all command ships but the enemy still says “I will win?”

The first one was cool but now it’s the same thing on repeat…it’s obviously AI generated.

Nice mirroring of the current state of the world.

Way too many adds…!

These are all AI written.

@josephhoward2971

2 ай бұрын

Are they? I was wondering about that, maybe someone who English is not their first language. IDK.

@TheGlock30owner

2 ай бұрын

Calling it Artificial Intelligence is an insult to intelligence.

AI is a poor story teller

The amateur narrative is a bit tiresome. It might have been a good story with better writing. Considering how often the phrase "by his side and with the power of" was used, I'd say a good bit of this was AI generated.

Utter and total rubbish!

Plotless garbage.

I agree stop spammin these, Can I block your channel? Ai written stories suck

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Ай бұрын

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