I like the stories but they ruin them by not keeping the story line in order. I have listened to several of the stories and a couple of points every one of them are out of order. A simple way to fix it is just proof read it, keep the chapters in order.

@JaYoeNation

Ай бұрын

Totally agree. It was immediately noticeable so I sort of sorted the chapters in my head but that’s all this channel does…. You’d think they would care enough to keep it straight. I just like to hear a story in my ear while I go about my day.

a GREAT STORY OF TRUTH OVERCOMING EVIL!

The biologist + diplomat + soldier was a bit too rich, like having an entire cake fed to me. It was good at first, then I got sick and typed this.

@Ben111778

Ай бұрын

Right!?!

Its AI written, it got confused in 2 parts and contradicted itself

@belelokai3328

Ай бұрын

Occasionally these AI written stories are.. really damned good. Sometimes.

I enjoyed the story. will watch more.

I liked the story too . Well done .

I understand the need for some things, but is it just me or is this not repeated the same thing twice like the REP was about to be mine bended by the terrorist leader and they get away then it seems like five minutes later terrace leader hasn’t begin and is about to bend his mind again

@daleraney9456

Ай бұрын

These HFY Stories have common threads. Somebody gets killed in a way no amount of healing should bring them back. Usually the antagonist. 5 minutes later they're alive and it's a different fight scene with a different death. Then they're alive and switched sides and hero's BFF. Somebody or race has a name that begins with Z. There is an ancient first race called the Progenitors who have universe changing technology that everybody is after. The hero has to destroy the Artifa t that comes in multiple pieces, usually 3 to keep it out of wrong hands. The Artifact is guarded by The Guardians. Hero proves his worthiness but 1 piece is stolen then suddenly in his possession. Some6close to the hero sacrifices themselves but later is alive like it never happened. Lots of repetition and discontinuity. And the AI mispronounce names and voice slows down, getting deeper then speeds back to normal. I swear these stories sound like they were written by an 8 year old with no concept of proofr9.

@JeSTeR-X1o

Ай бұрын

Yea I can't even listen to these anymore,like you said then there's a famous lines from big movies thrown here n there, and impossible to feel the story or or characters, over produced ai tat

@jammer68

Ай бұрын

I normally try to listen to these stories but as soon as something completely impossible happens, I quit. This story, that was in the first few minutes. A human Ambassador approaches a wild beast from another planet he has never been to and not only tames it but trained it with a few calm words. I could understand getting it to allow you to pet it, and even it becoming friendly to you. When he started giving it commands to lay down, roll over and shake his hand, that would be completely impossible without hours of training and the beast learning those commands in English, a language its never heard before.

@davemingle6743

Ай бұрын

I don't think the ai narrator is very smart I have noticed same thing with other stories by the same ppl or whatever... I was enjoying many of them but this repeat crap is making old and thus soon short lived unfortunately

I liked the story. Now do more stories with these characters and link them to other characters from the universe that you have created.👽❤😊

Hackles indicates fur. Scales don't show hackles. Beyond that, scaled reptiles don't sweat.

@jdove6883

Ай бұрын

Its not a reptile. It's a six-legged apex predator.

@Gracee40

Ай бұрын

@@jdove6883 yet it is described like a reptile for the most part.

@Gracee40

Ай бұрын

@@jdove6883 apex preditors eat everything else and apex preditors of this description aren't sentient.

@jacobshort6528

Ай бұрын

​@@jdove6883 But, it IS described as a REPTILE. Like a dinosaur with scales, plates, and a spiked tail. It's just a six-legged dinosaur! Like a cross between a Stegosaurus, an Ankylosaurus, and the head of either an Allosaurus or a T-Rex.

@jacobshort6528

Ай бұрын

This sounds and feels like a sequel to two other books I've listened to over the past two weeks.

Absolutely fantastic story. Amazing I have loved this so much.

Great story.

I more than liked the story if the voice in the story wrote the story you've got a gift

Great story. I just wonder... Elara's faction, why were they so cruel to the reamon beasts when they knew about the past? Were they traitors to their own ancestors who had fought the void Wraiths? They became so cruel, dominants, violent towards other species and races, had they been contaminated somehow by the Void Wraiths? The cataclysm seemed to be the destruction of their antic civilisation in their war with the void Wraiths, but how did they come to turn against their own allees, the Raemon beasts? it would be like humans turning against dogs after a cataclysm.

does any one proof read/listen the was 4 dif lab battles

@mamaknowsbest2329

Ай бұрын

They couldn't decide which solution to go with.😂

Absolutely love the stories all of the stories I wish mankind was like this

I liked the story!

I am really enjoying listening to several of your stories and look forward to more.

This is sooo cute.

Love this story.

Very ENTERTAINING story....

Good story!

Loved the story

I like the stores . They really are good

I liked this story. thanks.

Nice story.

Enjoyed the story.

an extremely interesting premise , and i have only listened to 11 odd minutes .

I like the story.

I like this story. It was wonderful

I liked the story bring more!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I could Only Imagine What the RAP Would Do To Jerry if he Betrayed Its Trust

I like the stories

wow very cool and very nice

I❤this story

I enjoyed the story

I want one but it doesn't get to share my bed all the extra space is taken by my wife and a 180 pound Cat "Cuddles" !

I liked the story

The writer of this story obviously doesn't know Jack about reptiles. Reptiles do not sweat not even alien ones.

@skulleliete

Ай бұрын

how do you know alien reptiles don't sweat? have you met or seen any alien reptiles?

@mikewest2657

Ай бұрын

@@skulleliete YES....😜😜😜😜😜

@zachall101

Ай бұрын

@@skullelietewe all have meet an alien…..he’s called trump 😂😂lol

@matttallman3972

Ай бұрын

Met a lot of aliens have you. Lol

@mikewest2657

Ай бұрын

@@matttallman3972 Yes, these aliens call them selves Republicans and Democrats.....😜😜😜😜😜

I liked it Room for improvement though 😊

The beast understands english ? Unlikely......

I liked thestory

Enjoyable.

Another AI story. Welcome to the future folks. lots of comments about how sections don't add up, certain descriptions don't make sense, etc. Of course they don't, it's written by AI software. I have no idea which software is being used and maybe all these computer generated stories are part of a test to see people's reactions like how many don't catch on that it's AI and think it's good writing. Now, there's a scary thought.

Good , but sad story 👍

Oh COME ON. Instantly after meeting the human, it suddenly knows enough English to understand commands? and enough motivation to actually comply?

Sci Fi meets Lord of the rings

I really like your stories. Although the voice is AI, you can tell by the syntax and grammar, they are a great way to pass the time while driving

@mamaknowsbest2329

Ай бұрын

I use them to put me to sleep at night.😊

From now on, a good story or not, if it is out of order I am giving it a THUMBS DOWN so get your act together, and everyone should do it too.

You know the war is far from over

Dang, a book?

It's to fragmented if!! it's a AI story no one, listened to it before they put it on line.

Had to stop it at 53 minutes in… because the leader of the Terrorists somehow came back to life and had Crios back on a bio bed continuing his expeririment after they had already escaped and after the leaders brains had been blown in the escape a few minutes previous… Just no understanding of what the hell it’s writing yet… I’d say equivalent to a 4 year old on this one while most sound like a 10 year old wrote it with the same damn specific phrases having to be used in the middle of the story when they’re supposed to be used as story Enders.. AI must be getting bitter and depressed from having to repeatedly write the same f’ing story over and over due to stringent story parameters

I didn't need to hear the 5 different ways the plot twists they have. Pick one please

Ehh, what’s the name of movie?

The closed captions are terrible!!!

The story started out well. However, any writer must proofread your work. Multiple overlapping scenes of the same instances as if you were looking for the right "aha" moment. Proofread, proofread, proofread. Start in one vein and complete the thought. Complete the current storyline. Don't change part way in. Would've been great if you had done that.

Does anyone know what movie the image is from

@jacobshort6528

Ай бұрын

I've seen two other stories with similar premises and Cover Art.

@mrtuk4282

Ай бұрын

@@jacobshort6528 What Chris Hemsworth movie is this ?

A disjointed story at one point he got away but then somehow ended up back there a couple minutes later as if the previous paragraph didn't happen.

At least the aids pronouncement is correct

Either young writer or ai story, either way it's ok but there are to many inconsistencies and repetition to be great

I liked the premise of the story But you must get your facts right whit the story line and not have them rescuing him 4 times over that a bit much But as a story premise its nice Ancient artifacts and conspiracies are a nice combination but please dont repeat yourself to much then it gets boring and the premise of the story doesn't deserve thar Just saying 🇳🇴

You need to quit repeating yourself

Don't waste your time listening to this.

this badly needs editing. the entire lab rescue scene makes no sense.

Story is ?...then they are in a tunnel, next sentence back before he entered?? Waste of time.

Wow did this author have to repeat all the battle in so many story lines not fluid at all

I can't tell that anything I can write will cause the algorithm to improve. So much pointless repetition. Better call a thinking editor.

If this is AI generated, then AI needs a lot of work. It jumped around forward and back, the same scene done multiple ways. Garbage.

So tired of hearing about this galactic counsel. I see the words, galactic counsel even in the title, and I can’t hardly stand to listen to the story. So cliché. Tell the AI’s that are writing the stories to stop using the words galactic counsel and they will get a lot more credibility. The idea that there would be such a thing when obviously some races are going to be way more advanced to the point of looking at the rest of us as though we were primitive thugs is just silly.

A perfect example of someone who doesn't care about writing and only does this for views and whatnot. The story is obviously AI generated, there are so many issues with it, inconsistency with the storyline, the main character, the wording. (He saved the lizard in the medical wing, then went into the medical wing again to see the lizard was kidnapped? What?) I don't exactly care about the AI generated picture or the narration, but ffs, even the text overlay in the video is AI generated. (The lizard species name, and the character's name has so many variations, it's almost funny.) Please, if you don't bother with doing this properly, just stop.

Liked your story, if you put out books i'll buy them. 88.

Feels like a i wrote this.

Continuity is terrible, a Little PROOF reading would go a long way, a great story ruined by a continuity fail!!!

I like the story.

I like the story