Humans exploring and putting their stamp on the galaxy with war-crime torpedoes. As it tradition.

@petertoner9461

Ай бұрын

😮❤

@kennylandreth585

24 күн бұрын

It's not a war crime the first time

@carlfranz6805

17 күн бұрын

"In accordance with prophecy".

@onijerad

7 күн бұрын

@@kennylandreth585😂😂😂

20 minutes in I'm wondering whether a human reviewed this plot at any point. There are plot holes all over the place.

@randomstranger9674

2 ай бұрын

40 minutes in, it's going from bad to worse. Given how fast these are being churned out I suppose it's unlikely a human has watched it through even once before posting, let alone bothered trying to fix any of the garbled speech and nonsensical plot points.

@tetraxis3011

Ай бұрын

@@randomstranger9674From what I’ve seen these are stories written by another person, and this guy takes them and adds the voices.

@RonaldHawes-sr3cr

Ай бұрын

Karen!

@lauriestlyon8773

Ай бұрын

AI generated and auto voiced from the text.

He's embarrassed of the ship and wants to sell it..... 5 minutes later he "remembers" that his ship is the most advance tech in the galaxy....

@rjhergert6590

29 күн бұрын

yes thats normal for being shamed, sell advanced tech.

@Neteruk

21 күн бұрын

Yeah, gave up at that point. Very stupid.

Thankyou for this wonderful story I spent the rainy afternoon listening to your podcast Excellent work my freind 😊 Have a great day today ✨️

I love these types of stories. I listen to a lot of them. I would think that with all of the technology that's at play here, that someone would invent a circuit breaker so that they wouldn't keep damaging their consoles...????

@yedead1

2 ай бұрын

They never seem to be damaged 10secs later though, so maybe its the circuit breakers that keep exploding?

Galactic council: Your world is still not unified enough to be part of our club. Apply again in a century or two. Human diplomat: This is outrageous and demeaning! We have abandoned our violent ways and achieved peace. Human ship crew: Unlock the Trojan Protocol! Transform our decrepit transport into the most powerful warship anyone have ever seen! Pop out the lance rail thing and open up the missile tubes that we hid from the council. Galactic Council: And you questioned why we did let you in?

I like the story

Great story.

love it!!

Another great story 👏 👌

Loved the story.

I; being a retired Vet Navy/Army, am touched by this voiced narrative which brings back feelings of long past experiences and visions compassion, care, and the Warriors drive with brotherhood.❤

2 ай бұрын

Uhuh OK junkie.

So you take an heirloom weapon through a security checkpoint and get pissed when you lose it... genius.

Even at the very end he still cant shake the feeling its only the beginning

It is funny hearing my last name being used in a story. I love it, even knowing that there is no connection to me.

I like the story 💙💛

I love this story needs to be a movie or TV series 😊😊

@thomascassler4406

Ай бұрын

there already is , where have you been ?

Plot hole 1 how did niran know about the star chart?

The AI narrator does have its faults, it overall was a good story. My only gripe is that when it repeats entire segments of the story.

The Balls.

How... schitzo.

Sounds like jar jar binks at times

Main complaint slow down the text to match the narration please.

👍

The utter ridiculousness of some of these “scenes “ is overwhelming! The main character walks into congress and with one sentence disbands it and creates something else!?!? Did a child write this ? Because no adult would think of such utter nonsense.

@ZargothraxAC5

Ай бұрын

Chat gpt did so.... Kinda?

It started great but then they just immediately joined a random expedition? wtf 🤦🏽‍♂️ it looks like th humans don’t need the council so this whole thing fell apart after that

I had a hard time staying focused on it with the amount of commercials. I really wanted to listen to the whole thing but it felt like every 5 mins there was a commercial. For a 3+ hour story and the feeling of almost every 5 mins ads showing up, I gave up on it an hour in. I spent more time listening and skipping commercials then enjoying the story.

I would like to say that I enjoyed a little more than the first half of this story. However, it was almost as if a different author took over and steered the great Defiant into a universal brown paper bag it could find it's way back out of. Sorry, but I just couldn't hold on to finish it the whole thing.

WTF? Reyes is supposed to be In possession of the Heart and Mind of the Harvester. So how was the Prophet able to merge with it?

moor ??? or do YOU mean MAW

science already found in a couple triple dna heilix people , get ready cause it,s here , welcome too the up grade !😇🥰bless!

20 min in and I'm hella confused.

It would be an extremely good story. Whatever the cost, whatever the cost whatever the cost and many other filler words are repetitive The story has extremely good bones, but the skin and muscle lacked the intention to detail to make up a polished story. I am enjoying the story The author shows potential The plot line is far better developed than some of Jane Austen’s early works such as love and friendship😂

If this is what hfy is becoming, i dont want any part in it

Let's be real here. I like the story and all, but an ad break every 5 minutes makes it damn near unbearable

@gouryg4774

2 күн бұрын

Unfortunately that is KZread's doing

Has anyone finished this? Is it more that just computer word salad?

@OFallons

2 ай бұрын

Oh it’s Al one one ❤😅

@jackrodgersjr

2 ай бұрын

Yes. Whoever wrote this is quite a story teller.

@donte10111

2 ай бұрын

Imagine having such a high degree of brain rot that not even a story read to you is too much let alone reading a book yourself

Could this be AI speaking

I skipped out. To long commercials

Word salad, droning on for a very long time with the same phrases as all the other sci-fi audio books.

@ohioborn9929

29 күн бұрын

Thanks for the warning. Saved me 3 hours.

Another AI rambling on thinking it is producing a sifi story. Getting real old. Repeated words phrases and the same old base line shit regurgitated in different voice or order. Amazing how bad it really is. KZread should ban them. Or at least limit what they can spue out. Would rather hear from a real author. AI books stories suck

@OFallons

2 ай бұрын

Well, sounds a little harsh and narrow minded. There’s a lot more in depth with it, if, but the prejudice be removed.

@badpop987

2 ай бұрын

I try to give it a chance every now and then, but it just stays at the same level of suck.

Too many commercials I’m gone

@mikalcobbs9402

2 күн бұрын

Blaming the author because you’re too cheap for KZread premium

AI Crap

Tha AI narration keeps mis pronouncing words - very irritating.

Can't you find a Human to read this story? AI sucks

Advertising every 5 minutes... really?

@Wdhi59

2 ай бұрын

Pay for no adds

@Wdhi59

2 ай бұрын

Pay for no ads

So much cliche and excessive repetitive lines. Was this story AI generated?!

@user-vr4ph7ll9v

Ай бұрын

Yes, it's truly repetively annoying my friends. Welcome to the future!!! This shit sucks!!

@Erin-Thor

Ай бұрын

Woids like vee-tall for vital are very distracting.

@gouryg4774

2 күн бұрын

Unfortunately the AI still needs to learn proper grammar

This TTS is AWFUL.

Gave up listening after the first minute. Such moronic pronunciation ruined what might have been a reasonable story.