Twilight: "Spike, am I crazy?" Spike: "Well, yes, but you could be worse." You gotta love the dynamic those two share. (:

@biaklianakhiangte4911

8 ай бұрын

This was five years.........

@voriaeveningflame

7 ай бұрын

Absolutely!

Pinkie's suspicions and senses are sure!!! THERE IS A FOURTH WALL!!!

@DeadLoyalty39

8 жыл бұрын

+Taco Blend (Joshua Simpson) yES, I KNOW RIGHT?! :D HAAH.

@jakeb526

5 жыл бұрын

You just found this out?

@lornperkins4270

3 жыл бұрын

I'm sitting in that big GROVE crane with a huge wrecking ball on the end of steel chain...someone has numbered the walls and this one is #4

@strawber3seal_77

2 жыл бұрын

*the fifth wall*

@marcothecommentor9599

2 жыл бұрын

She broke it!

I would love to see an accurate animation of this fic, that would be funny

@tsunsu

5 жыл бұрын

oh yes that defnitly would be cool

@Preppiecube8347

5 жыл бұрын

YES

if Twilight Sparkle were to be in The Stanley Parable

@aquariumstudios1430

8 жыл бұрын

Yessss! 😂😂😂

@randomotakunerd

8 жыл бұрын

+Schizo Equinox That`s what I thought when I read the title too XD

@cube5337

7 жыл бұрын

Schizo Equinox yyyyyaaaaassass

@pie1o1morris46

7 жыл бұрын

Schizo Equinox Haha you're right! XD

@LordOfTheEyebots

7 жыл бұрын

Schizo Equinox the twilight parable

"LIKE, SHE SAID!" narrarator: "she said." me: XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD ~Jasmine

Twilight's reaction to "large meaty hooves" reminded me of when Peter Griffin narrated his life and got punched by Lois for mentioning out loud how she was aging badly. XD

@agentscuzz7637

3 жыл бұрын

I walked into the kitchen and sat down at the table. I looked with a grimace at the questionable meal Lois had placed in front of me. Of course, I never tell her how disgusted I was with her cooking, but somehow I think she knew. Lois had always been full of energy and life, but lately I began to grow more aware of her aging. The bright, exuberant eyes that I had fallen in love with were now beginning to grow dull and listless with a long fatigue of a weary life *punch* I awoke several hours later in a daze.

I want a narrator in my life , it would be great in schools exams if he would tell me if i was riggt or not xD

@Wisteria_Night

7 жыл бұрын

Kačka Berkova Actually it would get tiring to be able to hear a voice repeating everything you say and do. And besides that, the Narrator would just Narrate that, not give you the answers. It'd be like this. "Kačka Berkova went onto the last question of the math test. *What does two plus two equal?* They stared at the problem, thinking of the possible answers, but after a few minutes passed, nothing came to mind. Frustrated, they guessed and circled answer B "four". Class ended and they went home. Kačka Berkova went to school the very next day. They were checking the test they did yesterday for class. Seeing that they missed almost every question, they were devastated. Then they finally came to the very last question. They hoped they got this right at least. They looked down at the question, hoping to see a check mark. But they were quickly filled with grief to see an X by their answer. The correct answer was actually D "fish". Then the whole world exploded and everyone died. The end. :D

@lvivtotoro

7 жыл бұрын

But this fanfic shows that the Narrator can actually reply to you

@humblecicero4903

7 жыл бұрын

It would be hard to masturbate, too.

@wardedthorn6523

7 жыл бұрын

Uniloof Jester Not if my narrator were female and had a sexy voice...

@draggedindespair

3 жыл бұрын

@@humblecicero4903 Know it's three years too late, but I would have said, "cursed asf."

he went to go make a sandwich lol i can't. its too good.

@schmackeyjunior666

5 жыл бұрын

Is he Heavy wepons guy's cousen or Mine?

Spike sounds like Micky Mouse

@typervader

9 жыл бұрын

nlw1000 Haha, HELLO KIDS!!

@GutiSerenade

9 жыл бұрын

nlw1000 I told Kago the same thing but she doesn't BELIEVE MEEEE ;___;

@autumbreeze1129

9 жыл бұрын

nlw1000 yeah. Not sure if Spike's the best voice for guti to try, but maybe he just needs the right pitch for it. After all, Spike's voice isn't as high as a lot of readers try to make him sound

@leonasnake

9 жыл бұрын

+nlw1000 I THOUGHT I WAS THE ONLY ONE.

@RA9935

9 жыл бұрын

HO HO!! Come on Twilight, Lets visit Disney Land!! HO HO!!

"I made a sandwich what do you want?!" i love how he goes super casual after being so serious the whole time.

Wow, that was a really fantastic fanfiction right here, Wonderfully well written and it was voiced nicely! Especially that heartwarming ending, I loved it. Some humor manged to slip in too, I got laughs which is a thumbs up in my book.

@darknessmohag6181

9 жыл бұрын

+derpydash131 I agree with you... this is why I love MLP fanfics.

@larryfoulke1088

8 жыл бұрын

I kinda feel bad at the end, does that mean the narrator left her? I hope not, I would actually love to see a sequel to this fan fic.

@eroschampion7567

5 жыл бұрын

@@larryfoulke1088 there is

*Hears spikes voice* MICKY IS THAT YOU?!?!XD

@lillythekitty3934

5 жыл бұрын

YAS IT ME!!

@somedudewhodraws9377

2 жыл бұрын

Surprised Emogak didnt voice him to be hones since Spike is voiced by a woman IRL in the actual show.

@shadowbonnie1745

22 күн бұрын

"haha a g-g-ghost oh boy thats to scary for me"

Yay! Another amazing job. Gutiu was perfect to be "The Narrator"

Large.Meaty.HOOVES.

@wardedthorn6523

7 жыл бұрын

Luke Ingle THESE HOOVES AIN'T JUST FOR ATTRACTING MATES

@TheBUCfifty

5 жыл бұрын

@@wardedthorn6523 BRING IT ON, OLD MARE, BRING IT ON

@joehumpston7937

5 жыл бұрын

TheBUCfifty no ponies! Let’s be smart and bring it off!

@getreal5265

4 жыл бұрын

WHAT DID YOU JUST SAY?

@pifflesomepuffnadder855

4 жыл бұрын

@@joehumpston7937 I WANNA DO SOME KICKING!! *kicks you*

If this were to be a game, it'd be on par with Stanley's Parable level in terms of character vs. narrator.

spike sounds like micky mouse not that it matters the reading was very good excellent even

This was actually kind of cute.

I loved this fanfic reading. It gave me a lot of laughs, I loved Twilight's persistence to find out who -or what- he is, and the voice acting was well done. Stratocaster actually created a sequel to this story, and it's a lot longer to this one. You should give it a read.

@davidjones3594

7 жыл бұрын

or what*

@4agonism

Жыл бұрын

Hey, I know I'm 5 years late, but what's it called? Hehe

Omg this story is amazing! I couldn't stop laughing at the way Twilight was like "Shut up!" And the narrator is hilarious XD Best story ever!!!

Imagine all the swears you could say to her, she'd never know what they ment~ muhahaha!

Finally, a good fanfic. And one that works, and feels like it could’ve been a real episode

Emogak that was too funny lol. You have twilight down pretty well and your other voices are excellent too. And Gutiuserenade was hysterical. I'm still laughing now, and will be for quite awhile :-). Thanks so much for a brilliantly executed comedy.

Why does Spike sound like Mikey Mouse.

6:57 For the billionth time Twilight Sparkle! GO. TO. PINKIE PIE! Her 4th wall awareness could help!

@l0sts0ul89

7 жыл бұрын

Didnt work this time

Man, Guti being the narrator just makes this even funnier, but that ending though is real heartbreaking.

🎼S-P-I-K-E-Y M-O-U-S-E! 🎶

@UltimateDumbass16

5 жыл бұрын

THATS EXACTLY WHAT I WAS THINKING

@valourtata7308

5 жыл бұрын

When u haven't gone through puberty when your going through a mooting effect

This hurts my brain. It's funny, weird, and complicated.

I entered this expecting to laugh my head out. I did, but I left with a tear to my eye. A welcomed surprise, this is beautiful

O.o twilight broke the fourth wall like pinkie pie lol 😁😄😂😂

@sillymonstas

7 жыл бұрын

Rukia Kuchki iK LOL

@sillymonstas

7 жыл бұрын

🤧🤢🤣🤣🤣

@babyboyneedlove4485

6 жыл бұрын

Speaking of that party loving pony, she was so underly used in this story. If only Twilight would have been more patient with Pinky, she would not have gotten mad at the narrator.

I love this story. I come back to this story every once in a while for a good laugh.

Narrate me Narrator Sempai!!!!

@ashleytrautman7743

7 жыл бұрын

Silvrblud27 uh I think you have a problem

@djbeowulf2630

6 жыл бұрын

Ashley Trautman so true

@danijelaivezic453

6 жыл бұрын

she said

I just watched 2 grim darks time for something funny!

@mmocashout1843

8 жыл бұрын

Same

@djbeowulf2630

6 жыл бұрын

Exactly what I was thinking. I'm been watching the lost narrator

@mayathewolfdragon743

6 жыл бұрын

Omg same here! ☺️☺️

@motivation_exceeded6611

5 жыл бұрын

My limit to watch a grim dark fanfic is 3 😬😬

If my life had a narrator: Friend: how you doing bro? Me: ah, everything is just okie doki Loki! Narrator: but you see, things were not okie doki loki

Great job Pinkie your 4th wall break powers are contagious

(Halo 3 never forget song playing in the background) That made me tear up. Twilight may let things get to her and lash out, but it meant so much that she made things right. She really does have a heart of gold. That's why everyone loves you Twilight.

first 3 minutes when twilight questions the narrator: Twilight. Stuff happens, he's the narrator. There is no explanation needed!

Stanley opened the left door

that was hilarious, i want another one badly, great job in this masterpiece 😁

...............................I'm just gonna say it, I ship Twilight and the Narrator!

@ashleytrautman7743

7 жыл бұрын

Deadly Ponys whaaaaaaaat P.S. I think your right BUT how will she can kiss him and to SEE him

@ashleytrautman7743

7 жыл бұрын

Deadly Ponys can you do a Twilight Sparkle x narrator fabric please I would love it❤

@pifflesomepuffnadder855

4 жыл бұрын

Do I even need to say anything? (Say he's an idiot!) If I say that, then a bunch of people will gang up on me. (I know.)

@lornperkins4270

3 жыл бұрын

🤣🤣🤣🤣😍😍

@lornperkins4270

3 жыл бұрын

Lol he's eating s sandwich

Wonder if Nate will request her to read the sequel, "Twilight Shares The Narrator?"

@EaglesMan710

7 жыл бұрын

Yeah, look it up.

@astrallis7873

7 жыл бұрын

maybe nate could post the story twilight vs the narrator

Honestly was expecting something more nuanced than "Discord playing a trick" (my first guess). If it was a real narrator that would have been interesting! After writing this halfway through I was happily surprised!

Best fan fic

@arturiter

7 жыл бұрын

Basset Hunter Studios Stanley opened the first door to his left

Oh my gosh that was amazing, I love freakin fourth wall breaks.

a very amusing reading. does make you wonder, where exactly was fluttershy when the narrator was giving twi the silent treatment? What facial expressions were they making? What body movements? We can't know, for the narrator had gone silent.

Wow. I applaud the voices of Rarity and Twilight

there's actually a good lesson here, you dont get that often in a story like this

"I made a sandwich, Waddaya want?" line of the year

i love the ending and pretty much EVERYTHING ELSE!! :D omg this is just perfect....SIMPLY PERFECT!!! ty so much for doing this :D :D :D HAHAHAHAHA

"With her non-manish hooves"

Why is this not an actual episode yet? I love this! You did great, you guys. This is so wholesome :)

I couldent stop laughing when he was fucking with celestias magic. I had a hard time breathing I laughed so hard.

"I made a sandwich.....whadddya want." Best. Line. Ever.

I think Twilight had a right to shout angrily at him near the ending. He did mess with Celestia's magic, change Twilight's form a few times and invaded her "privacy."

@thinkwithvideos3310

2 жыл бұрын

He was just doing his job and trying to have fun. I would do the same thing. He didnt do anything to Celestia's magic, plus they were about to put him into a bottle and none of us want that. How is he suppose to give her privacy if he is stuck to her. He is stuck to narratating twilight

"Oh no you don't!" "Bacawk!" "Oh no, that wasn't supposed to happen!" "MUHAHAHAHAAHHA!" IT JUST GOT INTERESTING! LMAO!

Breaking that 4th wall too! XD I LOVE IT.

I would so be the Narrator in real life

Wow Guti. I can literally imagine Guti just walking away and making a sandwich in the middle of a reading!

Oh gosh... the Spike voice.

@Petrichor256

8 жыл бұрын

"Hey kids!!! It's me! Spikey mouse!!!"

@lillythekitty3934

5 жыл бұрын

Mickey iz dat u

hahahah damn I know kagomae aka Emogak had way too much fun with Gudiserrinade on this comissioned fanfic right here!!!=) .You guys did a great job working on this project

Personally I thought it would’ve been hilarious if a female narrator chimed in while Twilight was in the restroom

Lol...never thinks to talk to pinky pie who has all the weird happen to her and cute having spike sound like mickey mouse

Ha ha ha. Twilight losing her shi*...im cracking up..the one with a.j. is really funny too.

This was a well written story! It also gives me an idea for a video!

“Large meaty hooves” 😂😭

“This fanfic should have been called The Twilight Parable” Said Epic Brony Gamer

Beautiful and funny!a rare and wonderful combination.

genial el video, gracias por subirlo, te quedo genial, sigue asi que tienes mucho talento espero con ansias ver mas :3

only after seeing it spelled out do I realize your name is Kagome backwards. I always read it as "Emo Gak"

@IMakePeopleSaltyApparently

6 жыл бұрын

Bomble sivart inuyasha

Mister Thibs strikes gold again! :3

The voices are awesome, really c: *subs*

28:04 What the- What the heck are you eating!? 😂

@thecommentingt34

5 ай бұрын

It sounds like he is chewing on a bone or some plastic toy LOL.

This. is. hilarious. I have to say for anyone that enjoys this sort of story, I highly recommend looking into the 3 main books in the Ever After High series. It has several funny moments where one of the wacky Wonderland characters converses with the narrator and frequently tricks the narrator into giving important plot points away. I could not stop laughing throughout these moments. Highly. Recommend.

Celestia is so calm and cool

i almost teared up when the narrator was gone bro. why me man

Every time I listen to this it makes me laugh. Yes, every time( three times so far, i think) And please to the sequel!

Recently, I listened to "Narrator can hear Twilight" and this just came in full cycle 🤣

At the beginning my brain was having trouble wrapping it up XD

This is really fun. It sort of reminds me of a piece that I wrote called 'A Substandard Fanfic.' It's on Fimfiction.

This reminds of that movie with Will Ferrell. It had the same concept.

Man i really want a part two of this story :D

I love how they got along at the end

Every fandom needs one of these. Or three.

I really enjoy this story of the narrator. It was fun and great! Even though it was my first time listening to it. I'll be checking out more stories on here and as well as others. Thanks E. You and others like you who put out great stories! Later bye!🐺😄😆😃

"I actually know how to say it this time! HAH!"

*clap* *clap* *clap* *whistle* "yay!" "that was an amazing story!" said Runa "are there any other stories like this?" she asked with a smile. As Runa finished typing and clicked the post button she stairs at the top right corner of the computer. "hmm" she wondered and moved her mouse over a video that said (MLP Cupcakes)

Now i really want to listen a clopfic reading involving Rarity and her voice done by whoever did it in this video. it's just perfect darling !!!

Oh, that was good. Nicely read, well emoted. I liked.

This reminds me of that Pink Panther cartoon where the narrator verbally roasts the panther throughout the episode.

Good job Guti for narrating

A good rainbow dash or a good spike voice. Never both

Oh god. That Spike voice... like a bad Mickey Mouse.

It's times like these when you need Discord.

lol that made me laugh so hard!!! I need to breathe

now THAT WAS AWESOMEEE!!!!!!

Spike sounds like goofball

if I had a narrator in my life I wouldn't freak out I would be like huh well uhhh this is a thing now I guess

Your Twilight voice is perfect!

Spike is Mickey Mouse XD

This is hilarious, although I'm suprised that she did not suspect Discord

OMG, Spike sounds like he's trying to do an impression of Mickey Mouse. That, or he sounds like Big Mac when he tried to attend the Sisterhooves Social. LOL XD