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Ghost Stories by ChainReaction [MLP Fanfic Reading] (Dark Fic)

Darker fic this time, view discretion due to some themes the stories take on. Thanks again to The Lost Narrator for helping me out! She'll actually be in my next readings! I hope y'all enjoy this spokey tale.
[Story]
Ghost Stories by ChainReaction
www.fimfiction....
[Voices]
Narration, Twilight, Rarity
Kagome
Applejack
The Lost Narrator
/ thelostnarrator
[Music]
The History of Ponyville by MelodicPony
Fatal Lullaby by Adrian von Ziegler
Ghost Song by Max Ablitzer
Variati Mountis by Nitzan Sagie Hangoler

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  • @revaslatts8011
    @revaslatts80113 жыл бұрын

    Most Creative - Rarity Most Original - Applejack Most Frightening - Twilight Also, that ending scared me $#¡%less.

  • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    9 ай бұрын

    Reva Slatts Yeah and Twilight's story is the best one and the scariest

  • @airi392
    @airi3927 жыл бұрын

    Have you ever fell in love..? *WHIPS OUT RARIJACK FANFICTIONS*

  • @maxzapsgamingzepzeap2337

    @maxzapsgamingzepzeap2337

    5 жыл бұрын

    Rarijack shippers: NO BUT I'M GONNA WRITE A STORY ABOUT YOU 2 BASED ON THOSE WORDS!

  • @dantheredmemeenderdragnooo4552

    @dantheredmemeenderdragnooo4552

    4 жыл бұрын

    Um (I will never)

  • @josecarrilloii4036

    @josecarrilloii4036

    3 жыл бұрын

    ☠ *"NEVER...!!!!!"* ☠ 🎵 (blares *"Blackened"* by *Metallica* on stereo) 🎵

  • @smiththeinspiringanimator7042

    @smiththeinspiringanimator7042

    2 жыл бұрын

    LOL! XD

  • @th3m1st0cl3s

    @th3m1st0cl3s

    Жыл бұрын

    Slams massive binder on podium "Let's begin"

  • @revaslatts8011
    @revaslatts80113 жыл бұрын

    Colt: "Don't be afraid!" Rarity: *screams before fainting* Applejack: *throws books at him* Twilight: *prepares a teleportation spell*

  • @kittybuns1226

    @kittybuns1226

    Жыл бұрын

    Me:,….

  • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    9 ай бұрын

    Reva Slatts Hopefully they survived

  • @peabody66
    @peabody668 жыл бұрын

    Between Twilight, Rarity and Applejack's stories, Twilight's story has got to be the scariest.

  • @Epic11705

    @Epic11705

    2 жыл бұрын

    And with more justice to the antagonist

  • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    9 ай бұрын

    ​@@Epic11705 Yeah and the Eyeless Colt Ghost deserves his own urban Legend scary story and a whole MLP Grimdark of him and Twilight Spike and their friends and Equestria and Ponyville.

  • @Firestar4041
    @Firestar40419 жыл бұрын

    "Don't be afraid" AAHHHH!!!!! Spike: I brought the nachos :D AAAAAaaaaaahhh...... oh yea he lives here :I Spike: Sheesh and they call me a coward *munch*

  • @Firestar4041

    @Firestar4041

    9 жыл бұрын

    ***** glad it could :3

  • @ameliagallegos1688

    @ameliagallegos1688

    4 жыл бұрын

    I can honestly see this happening

  • @Guro_Boy_Subliminals

    @Guro_Boy_Subliminals

    4 жыл бұрын

    3:00 spike went to canterlot.

  • @queenlatrodectushasselti7711

    @queenlatrodectushasselti7711

    3 жыл бұрын

    Hey Firestar4041 that was a good one there’s just one problem, they said that spike is in canterlot, so if spikes in canterlot then who’s with the girls.

  • @josecarrilloii4036

    @josecarrilloii4036

    2 жыл бұрын

    Who knows...? Maybe somepony with a *knife* or *gun* stalking the girls...?

  • @moistmikutoy9110
    @moistmikutoy91107 жыл бұрын

    Then she leaned over and wispered something that scared him right to the bone. "I have siphilis"

  • @gothiqplague

    @gothiqplague

    4 жыл бұрын

    underrated comment right here

  • @rum_coke_17

    @rum_coke_17

    4 жыл бұрын

    “Syphilis”

  • @movedto4agonism467

    @movedto4agonism467

    4 жыл бұрын

    WHEEZE-

  • @rubyblaze7225

    @rubyblaze7225

    3 жыл бұрын

    It looks like the pony from the scent grimdark story.

  • @recording1781

    @recording1781

    2 жыл бұрын

    NOO

  • @Derpy-tq1qo
    @Derpy-tq1qo Жыл бұрын

    When Twilight’s story came up, and the song “Variati Mountis” kicked in, I almost INSTANTLY got goosebumps because the way she told that story made me put myself in the world of Equestria, and in the library where that incident happened. And that ending was an INCREDIBLE cliffhanger, all up to the listener’s interpretations on what happened to Twilight Sparkle, Applejack, and Rarity that night. Not only that, but this was one of the first MLP grimdarks i listened to at night at one of my relatives house, and a neighbor across the street’s light was on, but then turned off right when the story came to an end. Ohh man, just typing this out and remembering the first time I heard this is giving me goosebumps.

  • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    9 ай бұрын

    Derpy Twilight's scary story is the best and it gives me Are You Afraid of The Dark vibes

  • @patmcdonald4955
    @patmcdonald49559 жыл бұрын

    I like How Rarity and Applejack's stories talk of sex, showing they must be adults.

  • @dejabarksdale2210

    @dejabarksdale2210

    7 жыл бұрын

    Pat McDonald I'm in 5th grade and kids talk about sex all the time

  • @patmcdonald4955

    @patmcdonald4955

    7 жыл бұрын

    Fair enough. From the show though they are implied as adults. Also, kids don't typically own their own farms or boutiques.

  • @kevonmcmillan5656

    @kevonmcmillan5656

    4 жыл бұрын

    Apple jack and twilight story has cheating in it.

  • @Flowerbarrel
    @Flowerbarrel6 жыл бұрын

    I still think it's hilarious how Rarity and Applejack get mad at the other for interrupting and Applejack saying she didn't interrupt. They both did! These two just can't stop fighting, can they? They're definitely an old married couple, haha.

  • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    9 ай бұрын

    Serasia I agree and hopefully Twilight Rarity and AJ survived in the ending because this story deserves a sequel and it's one of my favorites

  • @galeshine7173
    @galeshine71738 жыл бұрын

    I wonder what kind of Ghost Story Rainbow Dash would have told...

  • @coyotealienss

    @coyotealienss

    8 жыл бұрын

    The Headless Horse!!!!!

  • @kamariowens694

    @kamariowens694

    8 жыл бұрын

    Ahhhh I see it too

  • @thesciencefanficwriter7696

    @thesciencefanficwriter7696

    8 жыл бұрын

    the tale of the singing flowers

  • @katelynbodiford5680

    @katelynbodiford5680

    6 жыл бұрын

    Kamari Owens Or The Olden Pony

  • @pauldawson5851

    @pauldawson5851

    6 жыл бұрын

    It would be the story of me

  • @Imetral0
    @Imetral010 жыл бұрын

    I find it hilarious how both Applejack and Rarity's stories involve sex of some kind.

  • @Emogak

    @Emogak

    9 жыл бұрын

    ***** #rarijack4life

  • @probrony2851

    @probrony2851

    8 жыл бұрын

    +Emogak good story

  • @jamaleanderson6586

    @jamaleanderson6586

    8 жыл бұрын

    yeah I did

  • @DavesHotChickenLover

    @DavesHotChickenLover

    8 жыл бұрын

    Applejacks was more sexual

  • @crystalwaters7573

    @crystalwaters7573

    7 жыл бұрын

    Yes. But Applejack's story though. Throughout the entire story since the first line, I just thought, "Lost had a lot of fun doing these lines didn't she...?"

  • @pasteltears1229
    @pasteltears12298 жыл бұрын

    Scariest mlp darkfic ever: Twilight opened her closet door with her magic. The door creaked, making a squeaky noise. "boo" a skeleton said from inside the closet. Twilight jumped, then said, "aaayyy you here fo a party?" "fo shizzle mah nizzle" the skeleton said.

  • @maxaroni7279

    @maxaroni7279

    8 жыл бұрын

    :D

  • @coolteethman472

    @coolteethman472

    7 жыл бұрын

    I'M CRYING XDDD 😂😂😂👌👌

  • @flowerblastandjathomas3295

    @flowerblastandjathomas3295

    7 жыл бұрын

    I cant sleep

  • @sleepiihead

    @sleepiihead

    7 жыл бұрын

    So scary that I couldn't sleep for a week.

  • @slayer1433

    @slayer1433

    7 жыл бұрын

    sleepiihead1119 oh no i feel bad i couldn't sleep for 2 weeks 😖

  • @revaslatts8011
    @revaslatts80114 жыл бұрын

    "Don't be afraid" Okay, my blood froze when I heard that.

  • @savagegavblacksmith875

    @savagegavblacksmith875

    4 жыл бұрын

    My blood froze, my heart dropped, and my mouth....well let's just say it made a screaming noise so loud that it woke up my family.

  • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    9 ай бұрын

    ​@@savagegavblacksmith875 Poor Colt in Twilight's story

  • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    9 ай бұрын

    Reva Slatts Yeah hopefully he didn't get them

  • @joshuasawtell1557
    @joshuasawtell155710 жыл бұрын

    Ok, that legit creeped me out at the end. About half way through the story I only just noticed something in the picture, at the time, I thought it was just a mark or a smudge on my computer screen, but as it got to the final few minutes of the story I realised that was the face of the child! O_O' Other than that though, brilliant read like the last one. :)

  • @sashacindersys3166

    @sashacindersys3166

    9 жыл бұрын

    Where?

  • @Cortal_Gaming

    @Cortal_Gaming

    9 жыл бұрын

    Ian Soemarna look at where twilight is staring at in the cover and zoom in, u will see it clearly

  • @Milkwhisker1

    @Milkwhisker1

    9 жыл бұрын

    Ian Soemarna Here: i.imgur.com/8q1AHvn.png

  • @B.O.Xproject

    @B.O.Xproject

    3 жыл бұрын

    Oh god I have chills I don't wanna see it

  • @cosmic_riff
    @cosmic_riff8 жыл бұрын

    Applejacks story really creeped me out XD _my_ name is Ruby XD

  • @sonicfan3588

    @sonicfan3588

    8 жыл бұрын

    yikes

  • @hollysandy1259

    @hollysandy1259

    7 жыл бұрын

    +Animated Trash hesh ka besh

  • @stekerri

    @stekerri

    6 жыл бұрын

    XD

  • @rwbyistrash603

    @rwbyistrash603

    5 жыл бұрын

    How convenient

  • @Simply_better22343

    @Simply_better22343

    4 жыл бұрын

    wait u ruby u no ded

  • @Soulcalibar41
    @Soulcalibar419 жыл бұрын

    Did anyone else notice that... thing in the top-right corner?

  • @Dan-lc1ky

    @Dan-lc1ky

    9 жыл бұрын

    +Soul Akai Not until you mentioned it.

  • @Blitz_Spencer

    @Blitz_Spencer

    9 жыл бұрын

    +Soul Akai Thanks for the nightmares, BUDDY.

  • @br7078

    @br7078

    9 жыл бұрын

    +Soul Akai Holy shit! I though my monitor was just dirty.

  • @Blitz_Spencer

    @Blitz_Spencer

    8 жыл бұрын

    ***** Yeah. "Don't be afraid..."

  • @dreamcastsonic3356

    @dreamcastsonic3356

    8 жыл бұрын

    +Soul Akai holy shit, that scared me when you pointed it out

  • @jeanniehobbes6144
    @jeanniehobbes61448 жыл бұрын

    Am I the only one who thinks this could be canon?

  • @terrorantulaplatinumcollec7034

    @terrorantulaplatinumcollec7034

    8 жыл бұрын

    +leah frederick (Leah Rants and Sings) that would be awesome if canon

  • @arkangelic

    @arkangelic

    8 жыл бұрын

    +leah frederick (Leah Rants and Sings) nope i want it to be canon

  • @terrorantulaplatinumcollec7034

    @terrorantulaplatinumcollec7034

    8 жыл бұрын

    yes

  • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    9 ай бұрын

    ​@@arkangelic I can totally see that being canon without the intercourse but the murder definitely

  • @arkangelic

    @arkangelic

    9 ай бұрын

    @@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 this comment is 7 years old 😭😭

  • @Ignitus541
    @Ignitus5418 жыл бұрын

    Couldn't the unicorns just fix the power... No I musn't apply logic or else everyone else will get angry at me for it.

  • @youdontsay9150

    @youdontsay9150

    8 жыл бұрын

    +Mini Hoovy Logic shall lead us all to a painful doom dammit!!!!

  • @puppypone9982

    @puppypone9982

    8 жыл бұрын

    +You Dont say??? we are not vulcans! logic shall not apply here!

  • @Magicalwolfgamer

    @Magicalwolfgamer

    7 жыл бұрын

    Mini Hoovy I agree with you, you would think twilight would use her magic to fix the power.

  • @ridingriptide2644

    @ridingriptide2644

    6 жыл бұрын

    gem heart I feel it was a prank

  • @torntokoroa3357
    @torntokoroa33579 жыл бұрын

    ....yeah... fuck me....i didn't need to sleep anyway. Twilight by far had the scariest...because that shit happens a lot today.

  • @ashleytrautman7743

    @ashleytrautman7743

    6 жыл бұрын

    Torn Tokoroa wait, it did? all the ghostly stuff happened?

  • @twistedfreddy9621

    @twistedfreddy9621

    6 жыл бұрын

    Torn Tokoroa fuck this snit I am leaving

  • @vamp1310
    @vamp13106 жыл бұрын

    I feel that the way Twilight hyped up her story is a nice little nod to the -trash pinging flasher- the -mash ringing clasher- the hash slinging slasher

  • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    9 ай бұрын

    Vamp The Hash Slinging Slasher and Twilight's story is my favorite and I like The SpongeBob episode Graveyard Shift

  • @bethanyevanson9443
    @bethanyevanson94439 жыл бұрын

    That was awesome Twilights story sent shivers down my spine!! While I was listening I soon noticed that there was a head with no eyes in the direction twilight was looking I felt like it was watching me!!

  • @RedWolf777SG
    @RedWolf777SG10 жыл бұрын

    O_O; Holy shit. The first two story were good, but Twilight story was....damn and what made it even more creepier is the fact that around 19:30 through the story was when I just notice the face of that ghost colt that kill by his mother and it was right after those three words were said that I had shiver down my spine and goosebumps on both of my arms. Goddammit all, whoever did the artwork for this fanfic reading did a pretty damn good job with it, unless you pay closer attention to it and give a good look over it. you would thought just a mark or a smudge on the vid. This is a good dark fanfic and the good voice acting, music, and artwork really sets the mood and theme of it, which really sells it for me. Keep up the good work, dear, I'll look forward to hearing more creepy fanfic readings from ya. =3

  • @lokiwasbored3355

    @lokiwasbored3355

    9 жыл бұрын

    The picture was from one of the episodes And the colt is added!

  • @smolson8471

    @smolson8471

    9 жыл бұрын

    I don't see the ghost colt

  • @RedWolf777SG

    @RedWolf777SG

    9 жыл бұрын

    Alexis Lyle Look at the top right corner closely. It's somewhere around there.

  • @julialam8557

    @julialam8557

    9 жыл бұрын

    Okay now I see it after like 5 replays. XD

  • @RedWolf777SG

    @RedWolf777SG

    9 жыл бұрын

    Five replays? You're kidding...right? Right? ^_^;;

  • @midnightbloom8252
    @midnightbloom82528 жыл бұрын

    does anyone else see the creepy face in the corner?

  • @mythmask7864

    @mythmask7864

    8 жыл бұрын

    Holy.. Bugs... O_O

  • @midnightbloom8252

    @midnightbloom8252

    8 жыл бұрын

    +Myth Mask lol

  • @doxieovrgwn4982

    @doxieovrgwn4982

    8 жыл бұрын

    No

  • @mythmask7864

    @mythmask7864

    8 жыл бұрын

    Good for you, Doxie...

  • @DoctorTex

    @DoctorTex

    8 жыл бұрын

    Noo.....I didn't see it... (turns up brightness) AAAHH!!! OK YEP! I SEE IT NOW!!!

  • @DarknessXxMaster
    @DarknessXxMaster8 жыл бұрын

    I love this! It's actually kind of fun to be scared sometimes.

  • @Dani_1012

    @Dani_1012

    8 жыл бұрын

    It is

  • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    9 ай бұрын

    ​@@Dani_1012 Yeah and I find Twilight's scary story the scariest

  • @Dani_1012

    @Dani_1012

    9 ай бұрын

    @@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 Woah, your reply just sent me back 7 years, I was 12/13 when I wrote this comment, now 22, nice throwback. I loved this cartoon, it was my first experience with fandom too, I've been in many other fandoms since then but none have grown to the multitude this one was, with fan creations and all, it was a special time

  • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    9 ай бұрын

    @@Dani_1012 Cool I like MLP too and I like Creepypasta Scary Stories Ghost Stories NoSleep Stories Reddit Stories and others

  • @sashacindersys3166
    @sashacindersys31669 жыл бұрын

    At the end, when they said 'Don't be afraid', I was thinking 'is it safe to come up yet?' when it showed it ended, I was all like 'YES!!! I'm ALIVE!!!

  • @samuelneilson912

    @samuelneilson912

    5 жыл бұрын

    Oh my gosh I was the same way like don't move it's just a story it's not real then an add played and I was like I SURVIVED

  • @sheshedj1995

    @sheshedj1995

    5 жыл бұрын

    😂🤣 2 true lol

  • @josephspencer6257

    @josephspencer6257

    4 жыл бұрын

    True

  • @noahdillehay1077
    @noahdillehay10779 жыл бұрын

    You sound JUST like the trio! Excellent voice acting job! Can't wait for more fan fictions, this one was awesome :3

  • @Rose-bi2rg
    @Rose-bi2rg10 жыл бұрын

    POOR LITTLE FOAL X:::( Cool story though!

  • @shadow_wisp7443

    @shadow_wisp7443

    8 жыл бұрын

    I know Shadow:THAT DARK BA- SHADOW!! Shadow:sorry sky

  • @lpsjewel324
    @lpsjewel3248 жыл бұрын

    Amazing! The whole thing is great! The voice acting, the music... But I just don't get why in stories, someone who was brutally murdered always takes revenge on others, or someone innocent for that matter

  • @chickengod3957

    @chickengod3957

    8 жыл бұрын

    It makes the whole scaaaarrryyyy 👻👻👻 Well, at least that's what I think the logic is

  • @Flowerbarrel

    @Flowerbarrel

    6 жыл бұрын

    In Japan at least ghosts just get back at anyone and everyone because they're stand-ins for forces of nature. Lots of cultures make up creatures or entities to explain natural phenomena because we'd rather have any explanation rather than being afraid and not knowing why something happens.

  • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    9 ай бұрын

    Lpsjew Yeah the ghosts who do that don't learn they got the wrong people and killing them won't solve anything.

  • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    9 ай бұрын

    ​@@Flowerbarrel There's also The Grudge

  • @magicalzal8032
    @magicalzal80328 жыл бұрын

    I thought the 3 words were going to be " I'll be back "

  • @dejabarksdale2210

    @dejabarksdale2210

    7 жыл бұрын

    Mallory Monster Me too

  • @sonofcthulu8772

    @sonofcthulu8772

    6 жыл бұрын

    *GET TO THE C H O P A A A*

  • @rum_coke_17

    @rum_coke_17

    4 жыл бұрын

    Mallory Monster now I wish that were it

  • @queenlatrodectushasselti7711

    @queenlatrodectushasselti7711

    4 жыл бұрын

    TERMINATOR!!!!!!!

  • @jaspernavall8204

    @jaspernavall8204

    4 жыл бұрын

    @@sonofcthulu8772 thats 4

  • @unholypepe
    @unholypepe9 жыл бұрын

    ***** this is one of the best fanfic reading i've ever listened to. the end of the fic though made me look around my room to see if that little kid was in there. had to force myself to go to sleep but it was good

  • @etps4444
    @etps44444 жыл бұрын

    Okay, but these are honestly amazing ghost stories. I'm a fan of spooky ghost stories that have a touch of tragedy to them, so these are lovely stories ((lovely in a dark way, of course. :) )).

  • @guti2009
    @guti20098 жыл бұрын

    the face is kinda hard to notice, but once you see it, no matter where you look on the screen you can't not notice it.

  • @Dani_1012

    @Dani_1012

    8 жыл бұрын

    Exactly

  • @LilacLycanvic

    @LilacLycanvic

    8 жыл бұрын

    What

  • @idkanymore1410

    @idkanymore1410

    8 жыл бұрын

    yup

  • @doxieovrgwn4982

    @doxieovrgwn4982

    8 жыл бұрын

    I can't see it

  • @guti2009

    @guti2009

    8 жыл бұрын

    And the fact that you can't unnotice it is just absolutely terrifying.

  • @deathheart7572
    @deathheart75727 жыл бұрын

    welp.....twilight's story will haunt my dreams for years....literally.

  • @rum_coke_17
    @rum_coke_176 жыл бұрын

    “I thought you said they were found dead in their home.” “Exactly.” Explain please!!

  • @CeoOfTheBOIS

    @CeoOfTheBOIS

    5 жыл бұрын

    but drown at same time

  • @rum_coke_17

    @rum_coke_17

    4 жыл бұрын

    My Dude more like Our Dude ... I’m sorry, I’m still having trouble catching on.

  • @victoriaguizar4656
    @victoriaguizar46568 жыл бұрын

    Applejack: "They wold even kill to be with them." Me: YANDERE!!!!!!!!!!

  • @nicolediangelo2374

    @nicolediangelo2374

    8 жыл бұрын

    yes

  • @janellehenry9698

    @janellehenry9698

    8 жыл бұрын

    OMG that's the exact same thing I was saying😂

  • @thecanadaman6862

    @thecanadaman6862

    8 жыл бұрын

    +Victoria Guizar Lol I thought the same thing!

  • @marshmallowbunnies9290

    @marshmallowbunnies9290

    8 жыл бұрын

    +Victoria Guizar same

  • @ashleywarren2786

    @ashleywarren2786

    8 жыл бұрын

    +Victoria Guizar NOTICE ME SENPAI!!!,,Honestly cant you blame for not making that obvious joke?

  • @zzzz910
    @zzzz9108 жыл бұрын

    Silver Spoon was molested oh gosh thats why shes always quite and is not always there in episodes she will dieeeeeeeeeeeeee ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh

  • @CeoOfTheBOIS

    @CeoOfTheBOIS

    5 жыл бұрын

    BRU MOMENT

  • @mollyjazz460
    @mollyjazz4608 жыл бұрын

    The last one was the scariest. I was terrified by that one badly. And it leaves you sort of at a cliff hanger.

  • @Danmeilover69
    @Danmeilover69 Жыл бұрын

    During the third story it was almost impossible to hear what twilight was saying over the background music, music which did not fit the setting super well. It made you feel more like charging into battle rather than feel creeped out. Other than that you guys still did a good job putting everything together! I hope I didn't sound too harsh.

  • @lesbianlemon8507
    @lesbianlemon85078 жыл бұрын

    of god I just realized that the pony in the corner is the same pony in scent😰

  • @AnixielLu

    @AnixielLu

    7 жыл бұрын

    Oh yea it does

  • @bloodleaf5717

    @bloodleaf5717

    7 жыл бұрын

    yeah, I'm not surprised I didn't notice the face before....

  • @RealCobaltStorm

    @RealCobaltStorm

    4 жыл бұрын

    Lol nice one blood leaf

  • @drswag0076

    @drswag0076

    3 жыл бұрын

    Big Mac i think. or at least his copy.

  • @tristan_keeb_273

    @tristan_keeb_273

    3 жыл бұрын

    Where

  • @carinnerothwell1206
    @carinnerothwell12063 жыл бұрын

    When it was morning. The authorities were called after twlight, applejack and Rarity didn't came to work. Flutteryshy, rainbow dash and pinkie began to worry as the authorities went inside the tree house library. They found a horrible site, that uses to happen 25 years ago. What they saw was gruesome. Twlight was lying lifeless on the floor, with her own pool of blood were coming out of her eye sock after her eyes were focusly removed. And written on the floor. It said: don't be afraid. Next, they found them. Applejack and Rarity were on twlights bed and were in the same state as twlight. Words speak across ponyville and the story of starshine and her devilish deeds. The story became an urban legend and a creepypasta. But what do you think, they saw. Did they really saw the ghost of starshine or was it something else?

  • @JacobMKeeneAKADrPepperKing
    @JacobMKeeneAKADrPepperKing9 жыл бұрын

    Very interesting story! You do really good Rarity and Twilight impressions, and your natural voice sounds beautiful, I am now your 6,350th subscriber! Also to TheLostNarrator, you did a good job as Applejack as always!

  • @Liongirl5137
    @Liongirl51378 жыл бұрын

    I'm shaking, I should not have worn headphones when listening to this the ending terrified me.

  • @kyliewalker9170
    @kyliewalker91708 жыл бұрын

    OMGOSH!! I JUST SAW THIS!! LOOK AROUND THE TOP RIGHT CORNER OF YOUR SCREEN WHILE LISTENING TO THIS!! DO U SEE IT?!?!?!

  • @doxieovrgwn4982

    @doxieovrgwn4982

    8 жыл бұрын

    No

  • @tickedoffsquid37

    @tickedoffsquid37

    6 жыл бұрын

    Yep... But not in the video.

  • @tickedoffsquid37

    @tickedoffsquid37

    6 жыл бұрын

    Help me.

  • @CeoOfTheBOIS

    @CeoOfTheBOIS

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@tickedoffsquid37 POLICE SIRENS WHALING IN THE BACKGROUND

  • @thischick5542
    @thischick55427 жыл бұрын

    watching this in the middle of the night is a bad idea...

  • @wandaroger1688

    @wandaroger1688

    7 жыл бұрын

    Art Girl soooooo true I regret nothing 💀

  • @heavendals.9097

    @heavendals.9097

    7 жыл бұрын

    Art Girl watching this downstairs on the couch in pitch black was a horrible I dea

  • @sonofcthulu8772

    @sonofcthulu8772

    6 жыл бұрын

    Dont give a shit cause i got a knife

  • @sylveon-kfpbarista5746

    @sylveon-kfpbarista5746

    6 жыл бұрын

    I did the exact same, but at the end, a sweat drop went down my neck and I thought it was breath (at midnight as well)

  • @savagegavblacksmith875

    @savagegavblacksmith875

    4 жыл бұрын

    No shit! Never watch creepy shit at night! ESPECIALLY AT 3AM!!

  • @goldenflame4884
    @goldenflame48848 жыл бұрын

    I haven't even started and already I think, Phhh who actually listens to warnings anyway. Right?

  • @CeoOfTheBOIS

    @CeoOfTheBOIS

    5 жыл бұрын

    yeah

  • @thesilverokami800
    @thesilverokami8009 жыл бұрын

    I freaking love this ending of the story

  • @emmigummi2895
    @emmigummi28958 жыл бұрын

    The colt in the top right corner is majestic. Said no one ever but me.

  • @LilacLycanvic
    @LilacLycanvic8 жыл бұрын

    Twilight... Stop looking at that thing in the corner and continue the story

  • @WhiteIndoraptor
    @WhiteIndoraptor2 жыл бұрын

    That last ghost story chilled me to the bone! 😨

  • @alphonselover825
    @alphonselover8256 жыл бұрын

    Wow! I didn't think anything was really gonna happen. That it was just gonna be a normal sleepover with ghost stories, nothing really creepypasta like. But that ending... Really caught me off guard!

  • @tygrahof9268
    @tygrahof92688 жыл бұрын

    Nice story. Actually didn't expect that ending; was expecting a "Boo!" kind of ending. lol

  • @ReverieHellebore
    @ReverieHellebore9 жыл бұрын

    Super scary, compliments to whoever made this, try to make an animation to this story.

  • @virieger7578
    @virieger75782 жыл бұрын

    its kinda awsome how twilights story actually summond a scary ghost!

  • @reinmanmarren5225
    @reinmanmarren52257 жыл бұрын

    i have tears in my eyes! THAT WAS SO SKETCHY!!!!

  • @RallyTheTally
    @RallyTheTally19 күн бұрын

    All of those ghost stories are really good.

  • @choleloveskittens8985
    @choleloveskittens89857 жыл бұрын

    7:05 I thougt he ate her but ok

  • @TheOldScrapIron
    @TheOldScrapIron4 жыл бұрын

    *looks in the top right corner of the screen* Me: What is that? *turns up the screen brightness* Me: Well holy sh*t, it’s slendermare😏

  • @envy_fade
    @envy_fade7 жыл бұрын

    Rarity was referenced to another fanfic, applejack referenced to yandere, and twilight to baby from FNAF sister location.

  • @kidfury2177
    @kidfury21778 жыл бұрын

    this was like the best fanfic I've ever heard good job👍

  • @crystalwaters7573
    @crystalwaters75737 жыл бұрын

    WHY THE F*CK APPLEJACK!?!?!?!?

  • @GarfieldsTeapot
    @GarfieldsTeapot4 жыл бұрын

    I'm amazed that applejack knows what a yandere is

  • @LanceTheAutobot
    @LanceTheAutobot10 жыл бұрын

    Nice Reading it gave a Nice slice of life feel wich turnd grim as the story developed also it is good to learn u are making this a thing lady emogak yet another thing i can look forward to in the week ^^

  • @daisyramirez5939
    @daisyramirez59398 жыл бұрын

    has anybody noticed the pony with no eyes watching the others from the shadows

  • @samarabrown7838

    @samarabrown7838

    8 жыл бұрын

    +Daisy Ramirez yes

  • @doxieovrgwn4982

    @doxieovrgwn4982

    8 жыл бұрын

    No...help?

  • @sonicfan3588

    @sonicfan3588

    8 жыл бұрын

    yep

  • @Connorwhatever

    @Connorwhatever

    8 жыл бұрын

    what sidr

  • @sonicfan3588

    @sonicfan3588

    8 жыл бұрын

    ***** right side

  • @josecarrilloii4036
    @josecarrilloii40362 жыл бұрын

    ⚠️ • *TV-14-DL* | *Parents Strongly Cautioned!* • ⚠️ The following program contains sequences depicting graphic subject matter that some audiences might find disturbing to some others. *Viewer discretion is advised.* -- Story Timeline(s): • Faux Pas (Rarity's story): *c. April or May of 1974.* • Ruby Willow (Applejack's story): *c. early-to-mid April of 1994.* • Star Shine and Day Shine (Twilight's story): *c. mid-to-late May of 1989.* ☠ "(chanting): *DIE!"* ☠ 🎵 (blares *"Creeping Death (Live - Cunning Stunts)"* by *Metallica* on stereo) 🎵

  • @revaslatts8011
    @revaslatts80113 жыл бұрын

    "Don't be afraid..." *screaming intensifies*

  • @revaslatts8011

    @revaslatts8011

    3 жыл бұрын

    I'm officially shook!

  • @carinnerothwell1206
    @carinnerothwell12063 жыл бұрын

    The female pony, he feel in love, was dead the whole time. Look like we have a new cryptkeeper, tale of the horror

  • @peterbutler1232
    @peterbutler12324 жыл бұрын

    Why would he say “don’t be afraid”?

  • @supercyclone87
    @supercyclone878 жыл бұрын

    That's how it ends?! Nooooo-oh well. XD Awesome story btw!!!

  • @thedidact07
    @thedidact079 жыл бұрын

    Will you ever read more fanfics?

  • @thedidact07

    @thedidact07

    9 жыл бұрын

    Ava Rojas When? It's been months now.

  • @thedidact07

    @thedidact07

    9 жыл бұрын

    Ava Rojas I've never heard of a fanfic that takes 6 months to work on. She probably just lost interest.

  • @Emogak

    @Emogak

    9 жыл бұрын

    ***** I do plan on it! I've been wrapped up in a bigger project that is taking longer then expected~ I'm super sorry for the wait but I had to move to a whole different country and have been having a hard time setting things back up.

  • @thedidact07

    @thedidact07

    9 жыл бұрын

    ***** Holy crap I wasn't expecting a reply from you! I didn't mean to sound rude if that's how I came across.

  • @thedidact07

    @thedidact07

    8 жыл бұрын

    Avia Bryan I get that a lot.

  • @pippilongstocking1493
    @pippilongstocking14937 жыл бұрын

    Wow this was good. I watched this around midnight in the dark and the last story made me scared.

  • @virieger7578
    @virieger75782 жыл бұрын

    don,t dont stop there! i want to know what happened next! what happened to rarity, applejack and twilight? what about the ghost pony? i really need to know!

  • @revaslatts8011
    @revaslatts80113 жыл бұрын

    That ghost colt needs a Snickers. He's most him when he's hungry.

  • @antonrueda1044
    @antonrueda10442 жыл бұрын

    6:49 Ayo?? I didn't expect Rarity to go to that kind of route when she was telling her story.

  • @archeishere1
    @archeishere13 жыл бұрын

    Obviously the horror story for Pinkie is Cupcakes, The Horror story for Rainbow Dash is a Barbie Girl singing the Barley the Purple Dinosaur Theme Song--This alone would scare me off of my feet.

  • @MLPSolarDash
    @MLPSolarDash9 жыл бұрын

    Jumping junebugs! That was creepy! Especially at the end! I had goosebumps all over myself and chills ran up my spine! Dang! This was great and scary! O_O

  • @deathbat5721
    @deathbat572110 жыл бұрын

    OMG I DONT KNOW WHAT IS SO SCARY ABOUT THIS PART BUT WHEN TWILIGHT SAID DONT BE AFRAID I JUST SCREAMED

  • @superlemonsama8794
    @superlemonsama87947 жыл бұрын

    It would be funny if twilight told the story of candy mare. XD Also applehack you DID inturupt rarity, TWICE. Hush yo face.

  • @Rae0814
    @Rae08146 ай бұрын

    With Rarity’s, I assumed it was a true crime and she wasn’t telling a Ghost Story until the family was drowned(?) and she admitted to making it up.

  • @Ignitus541
    @Ignitus5417 жыл бұрын

    Dont be afraid? That's it? I was hoping for a little bit better like ''You are next'' or something

  • @blaa6
    @blaa610 жыл бұрын

    Proof that pony creepy stories are better than Jeff the Killer, I hate you, Blood Whistle, Thomas and Sonic.exe. #betterwithponies

  • @emilyguzman2964

    @emilyguzman2964

    10 жыл бұрын

    Word.

  • @QueenFondue

    @QueenFondue

    10 жыл бұрын

    And Ihsoy. Especially Ihsoy.

  • @blaa6

    @blaa6

    10 жыл бұрын

    hystericaldominolego Gotta remember to recommend that to Bad Creepypasta.

  • @QueenFondue

    @QueenFondue

    10 жыл бұрын

    Bobby XD Yep

  • @bronegan8203

    @bronegan8203

    10 жыл бұрын

    Mehoymenoy

  • @doncarloancelotti2256
    @doncarloancelotti22569 жыл бұрын

    Wait so in the end... That whole thing was just part of the ghost story? Not reality?

  • @applejack9852
    @applejack98527 жыл бұрын

    Don't be afraid?! Sneaky ghost you was in way to kill them from scare XD

  • @lizzybizzy7159
    @lizzybizzy71595 жыл бұрын

    Ok the thing at the top right hand is staring into my soul ....look closely

  • @valentinalee4047
    @valentinalee40477 жыл бұрын

    TOP RIGHT CORNER EYELESS PONY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAVE UR BRIGHTNESS ALLL THE WAY UP ON KEYBOARD!!!!!!!!!

  • @darkcornerreading3884
    @darkcornerreading38844 жыл бұрын

    Me listening to this while play the sims for like:👁👄👁

  • @Twelsaloom
    @Twelsaloom8 жыл бұрын

    i LOVE THE LAST PART i WAS REALLY AMAZED !!!

  • @bigdaddy048
    @bigdaddy0488 жыл бұрын

    okayyy applejack I didn't expect that

  • @victoriagaytan899
    @victoriagaytan8998 жыл бұрын

    oh my gosh wat is that thing in the corner?!?😨😰

  • @princess1275

    @princess1275

    8 жыл бұрын

    Just d- **Drops to ground and whispers...** DON'T BE AFRAID....

  • @doxieovrgwn4982

    @doxieovrgwn4982

    8 жыл бұрын

    Is it the mysterious light?

  • @zyxelztrife2408

    @zyxelztrife2408

    4 жыл бұрын

    The ghost of the son of the previous library pony.

  • @jaspernavall8204

    @jaspernavall8204

    4 жыл бұрын

    No its the colt from scent

  • @uncomfyfish
    @uncomfyfish7 жыл бұрын

    And then a skeleton popped out

  • @rum_coke_17
    @rum_coke_175 жыл бұрын

    What did they mean at the end of Rarity’s story?? The Silver family were found dead in their home but they all drowned. I don’t understand

  • @waffuwaffle8969
    @waffuwaffle89692 жыл бұрын

    This is perfect for me! This used to be my favorite episode,

  • @Sootfall
    @Sootfall8 жыл бұрын

    that face, THE SCENT IS NEAR

  • @LunarBear64
    @LunarBear643 жыл бұрын

    *Gasp* Did anyone notice the pail eyes in the corner?

  • @pixlatedduck
    @pixlatedduck7 жыл бұрын

    Anyone notice the freaking scary pony in the background

  • @fandomerchick4742

    @fandomerchick4742

    7 жыл бұрын

    +PokeGirl Gamer I did! POINTS!!!!

  • @caeyla939

    @caeyla939

    7 жыл бұрын

    PokeGirl Gamer I did I stared at it for almost 3 minutes

  • @KisameOwnsYouAll
    @KisameOwnsYouAll2 ай бұрын

    Wow, I got some shivers.

  • @libertasgrace2547
    @libertasgrace25475 жыл бұрын

    7:51. I just realized this is a gangster story! Ha!

  • @motivation_exceeded6611
    @motivation_exceeded66115 жыл бұрын

    It’s freaking 4:35 AM and Pretty much the whole day I’ve been seeing this type of videos oh and I’ve been awake since 3:00 PM ik it’s weird but hey it’s summer vacation what did you expect ?

  • @sammiepatty4863
    @sammiepatty4863 Жыл бұрын

    DayShine:"don't be afriad" Me watching videoyears later: "i get it now, his ghost vowed to protect anyone who lives in the library from enduring a worse fate then his own". How did past me never realized? 😅😂

  • @lpskawaiidiylps9248
    @lpskawaiidiylps92486 жыл бұрын

    On the right side of the picture is a bloody pony. I got hella scared when I first saw it!

  • @mayonnaise9085
    @mayonnaise90858 жыл бұрын

    You're great at voice acting.