"Dear princess Celestia, have you ever wanted to kill somepony?" WELL THAT ESCALATED QUICKLY!?

@wendigostudiosLNandMlp66

4 жыл бұрын

Streaks Yeah...

@Cosmicthemenace

3 жыл бұрын

What a way to start a story

@somedudewhodraws9377

3 жыл бұрын

I mean this isnt too far fetched from the Real Twilight. Shes always on edge and constantly stressed out in the show. She rarely gets time to herself when thiers not a world ending threat thiers her stressing over being arranged and in order. Shes like a perfectionest in a way. Dont forget she kinda went insane with the CMC's in one episode. Whos to say thier wont be a day when she just snaps and cant take this stress anymore?

@annemarieroberts1449

3 жыл бұрын

Looks like she’s going insane on us 😰

@somedudewhodraws9377

3 жыл бұрын

@@annemarieroberts1449 I know and its scary too :C Twilights one of my top 10 favorite Ponies too.

Twilight Sparkle's actions put a new meaning in the term "Curiosity killed the cat."

@emilylarson8837

9 жыл бұрын

Damn

@coyotealienss

8 жыл бұрын

Oh wow...... :)

@cube5337

7 жыл бұрын

peabody66 oh god damnit

@MultiverseSonic

4 жыл бұрын

in this case it's "Curiousity killed the Pony."

@AgentAYM

4 жыл бұрын

But satisfaction brought it back

I can just see Princess Celestia shaking her head at the first few letters...and shaking her head turns into shaking entirely...shaking entirely turns into fear...fear turning into panic...panic turns to nightmares...and nightmares into a horrible reality. A reality in witch her 'faithful student' is now a paranoid psychopathic monster, who kills for 'science'. And now the Princess must end her student's torment, once and for all. You can only imagine how the Celestia feels on the receiving end of this.

@wendigostudiosLNandMlp66

5 жыл бұрын

Russ Ferris Poor Celestia

@Cuteilation

4 жыл бұрын

*which

@Avalonest

4 жыл бұрын

@@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 They feel relaxed...and they make me relaxed as well if i look at them

@DaniFox10000

4 жыл бұрын

Yeah but hear me out on this...what if Twilight never discovered them after the murder[s]

@FirestormDDash

Жыл бұрын

The wild thing is, im sure real life had this play out. At least one time. A mental illness all written out. Clear as day, but nobody ever saw it until it was over.

The worst part of this is that there are people out there who killed the first time from curiosity or kill for the exhilaration. Twilight already had her answer.

I can never get enough of Kagome's Twilight voice. She doesn't sound like Tara, but it doesn't seem like she's trying to sound like Tara, and I love that.

@Rofloflcopta

8 жыл бұрын

It sounds like tara

@twilight3272

3 жыл бұрын

I think you added a word there

@somedudewhodraws9377

3 жыл бұрын

I dont think shes trying to sound like Tara. She seems to be doing her own version of Twilight.

This is proof that Twilight is TWISTED. I understand she wants to know what it's like to kill, but there are less extreme methods, like TALK TO A RECENT KILLER.

@heavenlydiscorded4495

7 жыл бұрын

XD so true but she might wanna c know 1st hand u like... you p wanna know what pain is for yourself... or killing yourself. c.. or a things k like e that s

@schustette4

7 жыл бұрын

night pony that is true, but apparently twilight was hung at the end, which I do think was a little extreme. Even though she is my least favorite character, she didn't deserve that because she only did it out of curiosity.

@heavenlydiscorded4495

7 жыл бұрын

Sarah Schuster true but you killed a living pony bc of curiosity.... and i dont see why it toke so long for her to do something about it when she could have stopped her from the start... i would not even do that but i do understand .... also yes the punishment was extreme but she did get what was coming bc she was going to kill more pones... the next one could have been me or you

@heavenlydiscorded4495

7 жыл бұрын

also one more thing SHE WAS GOING TO KILL FUTTERSHY FOR CRYING OUT LOUD MY FAVORITE CHARACTER

@Guidingsonar

3 ай бұрын

The story stated that it had been decades sence a pony killed another- there is mo recent murderer for her to talk to-

Thought this would be an "edgy serial killer with no remorse or psychological side effects" story. Was positively surprised. Good reading too.

"Sincerely your faithful student twilight sparkle", never has this been more ironic.

Why didn't Luna witness these dreams

@moistmikutoy9110

7 жыл бұрын

Cara Stone that is a reasonable question

@maxmyzer9172

7 жыл бұрын

i was gonna ask to

@roboticspider4554

7 жыл бұрын

Cara Stone probably it was made before we knew that luna could go in dreams

@sethnowac8564

7 жыл бұрын

"Hello, everypony. Did I miss anything?"

@lynx3950

7 жыл бұрын

wow... i never thought of that...

Great.... Twilights a murderer, Pinkie Pies insane, Rainbow Dash is a rocket to insanity, Apple jack will bake you into pie like pinkie, Fluttershy is creepy and demented, and rarity wants to makes dresses.... with your flesh. Man if I could get all these animated (which might be a good side project when um into animation with my art) I think it would be fascinating....

@mrboerger1620

8 жыл бұрын

and the crusaders are there assistants and spike moved to back to canterlot

@Clyburn9057hi

8 жыл бұрын

SSJ Mikey Pinkie pie is the only lucky one since she would just watch and eat popcorn while all hell breaks lose UAU;

@mrboerger1620

8 жыл бұрын

+Clyburn Wubz (The Unboxing Artist X3) I'm pretty sure spike is the only lucky one here since he hasn't turned insane

@Clyburn9057hi

8 жыл бұрын

SSJ Mikey True but being with twilight and having his mother figure lose her mind probably would cause some trama but he still gets away scott free. :)

@mrboerger1620

8 жыл бұрын

+Clyburn Wubz (The Unboxing Artist X3) heh yeah but being safe is better then being trap with twilight I could imagine what spike was said when he left it'll probably be between the lines of oh god yes or sweet celestial thank you 😃

(Twilight) “What goes through a ponies mind that makes them want to kill innocent ponies? Hmm...” “...LETS FIND OUT!🤪”

@anthonyporche8110

2 жыл бұрын

Twilight: Okay. So, the good news is that I finally discovered what it's like to to take a pony's life! A little disappointing if I'm honest. The bad news is I'm gonna get arrested and then executed.

Shouldn't Princess Celestia have done something when this all started

@NoobFish23

8 жыл бұрын

I don't think she sent them. She said she wouldn't be in the first letter.

@roboticspider4554

7 жыл бұрын

ya at 0:12 she said she wouldn't

@nnova4036

3 жыл бұрын

she only sent them after the entire thing.

this was pritty good thank god you avoided the whole "I killed all my friends" thing seems like since "cupcakes" every grimdark that involves the mane 6 has them turning on eachother,this had only snipits of that and was a natural conclusion for Twilight's slow decent into madness,nicely done

[Music used (In order of appearance)] 0:00 Myuu -- Scent of Night 2:17 Myuu -- Walk into Darkness 4:37 Myuu -- Not Tomorrow (Silent Hill 2 Cover) 5:25 Kevin Macleod -- Quinn's Song (A New Man) 7:17 Myuu -- True (Silent Hill 2 Cover) 8:41 Kevin Macleod -- Classic Horror 1 10:27 Myuu - Hitsujigamine (Catherine Cover) 18:49 Myuu -- Angst 19:35 Myuu -- Something's Wrong 20:05 Myuu -- Misconception (Piano Version) 21:10 Kevin Macleod - Unnatural Situation 22:10 Myuu - SAW Theme (Charlie Clouser Cover) 23:01 Myuu -- Bad Encounter 25:42 Kevin Macleod - Controlled Chaos 26:52 Myuu -- Nebula 27:55 Myuu -- Erinnerung 31:07 myuu - Mein Herz Brennt (Rammstein Cover)

@littlepip4014

Жыл бұрын

Doing god’s work 🙏

@babythecupheadlikesRPS

Жыл бұрын

huh, most of the music is from Myuu.

@I_Eat_Lemons

Жыл бұрын

... you literally took this from the description.

my little grimdark, creepiness is magic

My entire thought process during this keeps switching from “damn twilight” to “poor twilight”

Twilight's logic in short: "I'm going to report all of the details about my fantasies and actual murder, so the Royalities can prosecute me for murdering, having hard evidence against me." *After a half of the fic* : "Well, now I'm gonna stop that". *Later* : "I'm gonna write letters anyway.". Pure genius. XD

Dear princess celstia, I will stop giving you incriminating evidence..... Next week Your fathful student, Twilight sparkle

@puppyhowler

9 жыл бұрын

she never sent the letters

@SenpaiHoran

9 жыл бұрын

puppyhowler Twilight was evicted, Celestia is reading the letters in the end and it mentioned she couldn't get the image of Twilight being executed from her head.

@Minebuilder12

9 жыл бұрын

When the letters were found they would have been a huge amount of evidence even if she hadn't exposed her self. And for some reason she kept the letters instead of burning them. So she knew that if she committed the crime she would eventually commit and kept the letters to her self it would ether be incriminating evidence and a good record of what not to become a psychopath or the ramblings of a mad pony. So she knew what the letters would do and kept writing them on purpose so she could probably keep them to herself. So in the end she knew it could be the end of her if she kept writing and she did it anyway. So she knew that she was digging her own grave and she eventually did. The way my comment comes into play was that I was saying what course of action she should have taken and I was representing that by using Twilight to act as if was writing it herself. And if you made it this there is cookies and punch by the door.

@cube5337

7 жыл бұрын

The Doctor ha

First it was pinkie now it is twilight this fandom is getting better and better

@CrystalPawProduction

9 жыл бұрын

Dont you mean worse and worse

@leechbucket

9 жыл бұрын

hades underword well My favorite pony is AppleJack because she hasn't killed anyone... Little miss RarityButcher shy PInkamina diane pie and Twilight

WOW.....this got dark extremely quick lol well Twilight always showed signs of psychotic tendencies in the actual show lol

"What I read... it disturbed me... as well as fascinated me." Me too Twi, that's why I am here

"dear princess celestia, have you ever wondered what it's like to kill another pony?" kek, im pretty sure celestia KNOWS what its like to kill another pony. also you could get plastered taking a shot for everytime twilight says "well". i love this fic and its narration, but once i noticed it, hooboy.

I just imagine her eye becoming more and more like it is in the picture with each letter

did I just listen to emogak kill scribbler? I honestly don't know how I feel about this... thanks emogak for keeping me awake for the rest of the week

Celestia: my dear sister what is wrong Luna: your student is FUCKED, I AINT GOING IN THAT DREAM WORLD AGAIN FUCK THAT SHIT

Twilight:Disturb me... Me:Twilight...You disturb me :\

This could a actually happen in this world. Someone gets excited by death and how it works. This is why this scares me.

@coldhaixx1905

3 жыл бұрын

Welp time to rejecc humanity

@stuffandthangs9893

2 жыл бұрын

@@coldhaixx1905 and return to monke

@coldhaixx1905

2 жыл бұрын

@@stuffandthangs9893 return to horse

great voice acting!

26:21-26:44 Okay, Twilight, this is really scaring me now. I wasn't really scared until this came up.

Wow, this has a similar Gothic horror feel to Poe's "The Telltale Heart" Good work, author! And good work, reader, you gave Twilight the right almost bland, almost regretful tone that was just right for the reading. Thanks!

The monsters we hear about, don't live on the outside... They reside inside of us.

It is hard to listen to the "tape" of subject no. 1's death. It feels sickening, and those screams… I think most of us have wondered, "What is it like to kill another living thing?" Most of us don't do it, I hope, simply because the actually thought is intriguing but when we actually start thinking about possibly doing it we feel sickened by the thought. Some don't commit the act under threat of incarceration. Personally I feel like crap for lying to a friend or having a spider killed because of my phobia. If I were to kill another person, I don't think I'd be able to continue on with anything after the fact. I was honestly flinching and shuddering through this reading. And I'm not even done yet.

please for the love of celestia do not turn up your volume when shes screaming, your ears shall break.

@scarykid101

7 жыл бұрын

Bundt head Lmao

@saphiriathebluedragonknight375

7 жыл бұрын

Fortunately for me I saw it coming and turned it down ahead of time.

@wandaroger1688

7 жыл бұрын

WadewGAME true................................ I learned that the hard way 😐😐😐😐😐😐😐 and twilight say hi to doctor hooves for me 😏😏😴😏

@jakeb526

5 жыл бұрын

Too late

@101wolfanime

5 жыл бұрын

That poor mare, I'm glad I turned down my volume ahead of time. And Twilight freaking out about the blood.

This is the first time I will ever put a dramatic reading into my favourites. You are amazing and I don't know if you already do more of this, but I would love to hear more of this!

About 70% sure Scribbler is a changeling. Mostly from the voices (nopony does that many so well). That and she is so well loved. Great story by the way, is it wrong that I enjoyed this as much as I did O:-)

@Rofloflcopta

9 жыл бұрын

Downfall...this reminds me of something. FEGELEIN!!!(search it on KZread or untergang)

12:18 Damn it Twilight why do you still sound so nerdy.

Holy shit this was intense...I have to wonder if the writer of this fic has had similar thoughts and urges. It just seemed to real to be entirely made up. Still though, this was beautifully done. Spot on voice acting and chilling narration. 10 out of 10!

@kowhaifan1249

2 жыл бұрын

That’s kinda mean

God, your voice as twilight gives me chills!! The emotion in your voice is so haunting! And the way Scribbler sounded in the recording!!!

well, brony writer knows the ins and outs of a serial killer, they are mostly of high intelligence, first they experiment, for a while they are caught in conflict with their emotions until they feel the confidence to kill again and then we all know what happens from there.

Twillights voice is VERY good!

Its kind of scary how well this was done. I'm literally sitting in my room trying not to make any noise as to what I am listening too 😯 it may have been a shocking reading, but the acting and sound effects were amazing. All I can say is wow

Going on a spree of relistening to MLP fics. This one always left an impression on me.

I must say fantastic; truly one of the best readings ever. The story itself is only part of the actual emotion this fic represents, you filled the rest with an exceptionally stellar performance. You perfectly captured all that she was feeling; despair, fear & helplessness, that a killer in the shoes (or, better, hooves) of Twilight would feel if they were truly scared of themselves. I've been listening to other readings for several different grimdark/gore pony fics but by far you defiantly have done the best. Please give yourself a pat on the back, I hope you actually become a voice actor (as your channel states), I'm sure you will do a fantastic job.

Madness has made twilight fall into the darkness and sins

@maximstuckert9274

4 жыл бұрын

...perfect

Thiis fic reminds me of Edgar allen Poe's Tell Tale Heart for some reason.

@luckystar9279

9 жыл бұрын

Ooh! I've read the telltale heart. I guess their both about someone wanting to kill someone, though the tell tale heart's character was a little more specific about who the mc wanted to kill.

@merrygowrong5866

9 жыл бұрын

KZread, All I want to do is watch a video, stop making me update. I remember that Tell Tale Heart as well in my english class we read it

@Rofloflcopta

8 жыл бұрын

Yes. It is

@randominternetman8177

Жыл бұрын

holy shit you're right

Ok, it's four in the morning and I need to go watch some official MLP so I can sleep.

@unnamed1613

4 жыл бұрын

First time?

@Autistic_Changeling

4 жыл бұрын

@@unnamed1613 what do you mean?

Too bad Twilight never took into account the sheer guilt that would slowly consume her after the deed had been done.

Wow, I haven't felt disturbed like that in a REALLY long time. The screams. Oh gawd. Wow. Just. Wow. Bravo. I'm officially unnerved.

The monsters we all can be

@heiscute4207

5 ай бұрын

Including Tinky Winky Tank (Slendytubbies)

This is the best fanfic i ever listened. You put so much emotions in this, that I it just feel like Twilight was reading this.

Wish I found this channel earlier. Really solid. Really convincing VA.

her downfall was knowledge

@lpsjewel324

8 жыл бұрын

The worse version of Midnight Sparkle.

@MarMarshy2020

7 жыл бұрын

LPS Jewel shhhhh

Omg my hands are shaking why!! 😖😰Anyways great voice on twilight

@maddragon1568

8 жыл бұрын

God dammit it's 4:09!! "Crap"

I would have said to Twilight, "Well, if you're going to kill me could you be a lamb and kill me with kindness?"

best music ever to choose at the start, it really set the tone for this fanfic!

I was listening to this very early in the morning before going to bed I hope I don't develop a habit desire to kill my friends lol wow ms.emogak you bring so much emotions into Twiley it's beautiful loved it

@MakiNishiguchi

2 жыл бұрын

bruh

First guess, minute 27, she figured out why ponies kill. She's going insane.

The saddest part is at the end I asked my self what it would feel like to kill someone.

Well.... It was bound to happen eventually..

this whole thing could have been avoided had twilight just asked for the transcripts of those interviews for the sake of studying criminal psychology...

around 17:30 i took off my headphones yelling "hell to the no" while in extreme terror

Jesus! Poor Twilight! Makes u wonder how long shes had these insane thoughts in her head? Also Scribblers really good at screaming in pain and her screams legit made me feel disturbed too!

Luna must be lacking real hard cause there’s no possible way in hecc that she didn’t see twilights nightmares

@neverendinglove4473

2 жыл бұрын

The sad part is I think she did. Celestia would have never believed it.

This is definitely one of my favorites. No i am not saying why.

Awesome! We passed by this story a few times on the livestream but narrating in character is quite taxing. You did an excellent job!

Anyone found it ironic how Pinkie Pie is the first to leave Twilight considering she is the first mare Twilight meets in Ponyville?

The ending is so very saddening and poor Twilight is now a murderer?!?!?!?!

When it comes down to it I believe there is actually a theory that someone studies psychopaths they can actually Become one themselves

T: "Have you ever wondered what it's like to kill another person?" C: "Who the f*ck starts a conversation like that I just sat down."

it's like intrusive thoughts with someone who didn't know that was a thing and was just like "well OBVIOUSLY the only way to stop thinking about it to just do it!" which is like..alright...

This is brilliant!

@saigakiragami

4 жыл бұрын

@_- Dim light -_ "Insert okay face" *responds to comment from 5 years ago

Twilight's out here like: "therapy? I don't know her."

i listened to this so many times u have no idea! i love this so much ur voice is amazing and this story is just ah yes u know XD i am in love with ur twi voice its so perfect !

my all time favorite!!!! GREAT JOB you earned a subscribe

@emilylarson8480

8 жыл бұрын

this reading made me sick to my stomach

@as-yr2fk

8 жыл бұрын

+Emma Backer what happened to all time favorite...?

honestly... I didn't like this. Not because it was a bad reading, but because it was too WELL read. the recording part alone kept me up until 4 in the fucking morning, I was so disturbed! Scribbler scares me with how painfully real those screams sounded...

You should do more of these!

Twilight: 0:06 Celestia: “spit out of her drank” WHAT!?

Awesome! I loved it! Best reading of one of my stories yet.

This is one of the best readings I have heard... You just got a subscriber! :D

how come princess luna hasn't seen or got some sort of warning about twilight's dreams at the beginning.

@fatecosmic923

3 жыл бұрын

I believe this fic was made before it was revealed that Luna could traverse dreams.

@jamesallen1679

3 жыл бұрын

@Joanna Blue i don't think they found them until after she was arrested

Anyone else than me that's ALMOST as curious as twilight about how it feels to kill someone? Like seriously just think about it for a second. No-one likes to talk about it and almost everyone finds it realy disturbing that someone would even consider it, and no-one who has actouly done it has writen it down so people would atleast know what it could feel like so their curiousity wouldn't turn into NEED of killing someone just to know what it feels like. Or maybe it's just me who has been on the internet for too long and had gotten weird and half insane for the lack of sleep and the stress i'm experiencing at the moment :l

that was really awesome in the.voice reading that made my feel what the F and the FEELS also think what luna was thinking about as she is the nightime princess

Very nicely done. ^-^ *listens to it again*

Twilight you need to play any video game.

@roboticspider4554

7 жыл бұрын

Sylvia The Sylveon lol ikr?

@jennibeanthesweetsqueen5245

7 жыл бұрын

Kiernan Games would suggest minecraft. it a wonderful open word game.

@roboticspider4554

7 жыл бұрын

Sylvia The Sylveon or gmod she can kill without havin consistences

@hotsauce4792

7 жыл бұрын

Kiernan's Game's Forget that go with skyrim, the dark brotherhood would suit her well.

@jennibeanthesweetsqueen5245

7 жыл бұрын

Shitposter 4 Life Or fallout four...

I see murder like this. People are prey, like sheep. Occasionally teasing, trying to drive each other off a cliff but they never physically do it. But every once in a while, one of them gets sick of being meek and restless, or maybe just curious, perhaps something in them sees the boring pack mentality of humanity, regardless they try becoming a predator. They get a taste of being a predator and their hooked. It’s a sick primal instinct in all of us, some of us, most of us are too nice, or light hearted or something to act on it, some act on it by bullying to relieve themselves, some bully for the sheer “fun” of feeling the power, some get others to do their dirty work, and finally, some go full predator. Loosing their minds to the satisfaction of making waves in a pool of trusting foolish people. The fact is we’re all capable of loosing our minds and becoming a predator, and that instinct is writhing and wriggling inside us, the direction our life goes depends on how well we want keep it under wraps

@maximstuckert9274

4 жыл бұрын

Damn boi you sufferin' from mental problems?

@melissatheneko930

2 жыл бұрын

woah

Princess Celestia: Oh another letter about her dreams should I do something? Nah it's probably nothing. Me: You are the worst teacher ever

@101wolfanime

5 жыл бұрын

What if Twilight never sent the letters?

Why does this feel like the beginnings of Researcher Twilight?

@WriterAudios450

Жыл бұрын

This would be a good beginning for Researcher Twilight.

SHE WAS GONNA KILL DERPY -*pulls out ban hammer*

Is this some kind of sick joke? Twilight: do you see me f****** laughing my n**** I ain't f****** laughing!

Pinkie pie just walks off after seeing a dead body like "Yup. Same *shit* as always."

@maximstuckert9274

4 жыл бұрын

Exactly

for your first fanfic reading you did an awesome job

ITS THE INFLUENCE OF THE TWI-CANE ....XD

Detective Richter becomes element of friendship for now

I feel like this needs part 2.

"It's for science!" It's the same line I use when I try to pick up a lady. Never works though... :P

@sleepystarspider5217

8 жыл бұрын

+Ieatpaste23 Smart ladies...

@Ieatpaste23

8 жыл бұрын

+Sleepy Starspider Yeah, well think of the damage they are doing to the scientific community though!

@coldhaixx1905

2 жыл бұрын

Bruh I'm very Concerned for you :/

@julianab03

2 жыл бұрын

@@coldhaixx1905 Ikr, what a moron :(

I would like to thank you. I have had a dry spell for my writing for a while now and I believe it is because the stories I listen to are happy and that was not good for me to draw on. No I can honestly say I have the perfect idea for my story and this is why.Thank You Best Wishes Sea Salt

"They say... curiosity killed the cat... I killed the cat... Curiosity only brought her to me" - In sound mind

This is another one of my favorite grimdark fanfics and I have a lot XD but this is definitely in my top 10

Twi girl, you is crazy.

This isn't scary, just sad. She loses her mind, this is just like the Tell-Tale Heart by Edgar Allen Poe.