Reading My First Screenplay
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Back in 2009, I wrote my first feature-length screenplay. Thirteen years later, I'm looking through the drafts. Oof.
Read Red Formula here ►► drive.google.com/drive/folder...
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WOOOOW! This is the first time I've gotten a notification from your channel. I have been a huge fan of obituary for years and share it with people all the time.
@belatedmedia
2 жыл бұрын
Thanks so much! We really appreciate it! Webcomics (and now the comic convention scene) are a whole new space for us. We're learning a ton.
Ngl that premise is genuinely incredible. Like an alternate universe Cohen Brother’s production
What if My First Screenplay was good, like really good!!
@belatedmedia
2 жыл бұрын
Hahahah!
We need more obituary
It's always fun to revisit earlier work, especially when there's lots of drafts to analyse
Thank you for this. I love process stuff, and hearing you talk through your drafts, I think, can help others with their creative stuff.
Thanks for sharing this! Really cool to see!
Sorry, I don't know if you covered this already or mentioned it in a pervious video, but are you ever going to do a 'What if Star Wars Episode 9 Was Good'? I really want to know what kind of plot you would do for the 3 sequels
The russians actually sold some soviet submarines to pepsi-cola so I wouldn't completely write off your premising theory.
@belatedmedia
2 жыл бұрын
Whoa! "Russia sold Pepsi 17 submarines, a frigate, a cruiser, and a destroyer in 1989 to keep soda flowing into its citizens' mouths. With all this firepower, Pepsi indirectly became the sixth largest naval fleet in the world." I never would have guessed!
What if The Force Awakens was good? I mean, really good!
@memoryhead7715
2 жыл бұрын
it was incredible
@DirectionD
2 жыл бұрын
@@memoryhead7715 yeah, incredibly bad
@memoryhead7715
2 жыл бұрын
@@DirectionD it was better than the originals
nice to have a upload especially talking about your screenplay
that was really fun and insightful! thank you for sharing :)
I like this idea, sounds like it would be a really fun movie
Loved this :D
I check in on your channel once in a while to see how your beard is doing. Lookin good!
Also you're looking ripped my dude
@belatedmedia
2 жыл бұрын
*blushes*
I miss seeing you on KZread I hope you keep posting again
I hope this guy's doing ok. It's been so long so he's uploaded...
Oh my god hes alive
Sooo how long till 'What if Star Wars Sequels were good?'. Like, REALLY good?
That title tho, Red Formula, is killer!
I think you meant: "Some kids chase the CC truck, waving their arms. The trucker waves back." & "TC truck pulls out, chasing some dirty kids, and waving a gun at them. The dirty kids wave guns back."
First thing I thought was: " Why is Jens Bergensten writing screenplays all of a sudden?"
Commenting before I’m done watching: it’d be cool if they steal the formula and that leads to the development and release of New Coke 😂 EDIT: Ope just got to the park that specifies the 50’s.
If you don’t mind me asking will there ever be more obituary animations
@belatedmedia
Жыл бұрын
We would like that, but animation is very expensive. The pilot cost $30K in animation costs alone and that was only 8.5 minutes. That’s why we’ve been continuing Obituary as a comic. Zara and I can do it ourselves at minimal cost. Yes, some jokes may change a bit to better format to a page, but holistically speaking, it is a continuation of our vision.
@flaatheaad7544
Жыл бұрын
@@belatedmedia i havent even watched your videos before besides some star wars ones from 2012 im watching rn, but i hope youre doing good man and i hope you find the time to make more videos again, i can see that this is an art that you are talented in
When tf you making more obituary
@khlonoaa
Жыл бұрын
There's been a webcomic out for years now
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What if Belated Media’s script was actually good lmaooo
Wtf? You were gone for YEARS! I was pretty sure you were never coming back to KZread
Is this Obituary?
@belatedmedia
2 жыл бұрын
No, but this is: linktr.ee/thebarrytes
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It's always fun to revisit earlier work, especially when there's lots of drafts to analyse