I will admit that i thought it was a decent story but oh my goodness does it Jump around. There is no straight line in this story. Not even in The Last 10 or so minutes. This person that wrote the story really really need to learn how to edit. But most importantly how to keep his story straight so it's not jumping all the time.

@dave928

28 күн бұрын

is it me, or was the basic story repeated 3 times in the first 15 minutes? maybe it was me, the story was making me sleepy. 🥱😴

@jackluka773

27 күн бұрын

It looks like sticked together different stories. Like the original story was rewritten by AI with different ends and middle and at the end with different beginning as well and all put together…

@Steve9312028

24 күн бұрын

@@dave928 It’s not you! I was wondering how many times they were going to tell variations of the main story, again and again and again! I stoped after 20 minutes.

@alganhar1

17 күн бұрын

It was not a person. This is a classic AI written story that was poorly edited afterwards, then read by an AI voice. THAT is why it jumps around so much, repeats ad nauseum, and basically makes even a crap human writer look like Hemmingway! In short, its fucking garbage.

@EnigmaPrime1

4 күн бұрын

This is A.I. generated.

the story is good but its so choppy and confusing. like one moment theyre talking about the past then alarms and realization there under attack now then abruptly poof their talking calmy again like it never happened, like they dont have a hostile armada approaching them. and there was at least once or twice that i thought youtube had glitched and replayed a portion but its just a repeat in the story

To all those who find the plot hard to follow: I picture this as one story being told in different parallel universes. In the first part the initial contact between the aliens and the humans is most recent and we see them about to have another encounter. At this point, we see the story being told in a second universe where the second encounter was also in the past, etc. This shows how these aliens and humans are fated to have the same string of encounters in whatever parallel universe they both appear.

Indus finished his drink twice.

I liked the story but it needs to be edited so it is not repeating the same topic but a different version.

@alganhar1

17 күн бұрын

AI generated story that was poorly edited. Channels like this are almost entirely AI generated stories now. Its why they are so crap. Its about pushing out quantity so they do not bother editing and polishing the Ai generated stories so they are not, you know, confused, repeating jumbled messes.

Ok, the sob just took a sip of the he finished twice.

Maybe this is why we don't get communications from alien species. Maybe some people were able to end up off-planet somehow and they kicked ass so hard that nobody wants to contact us anymore 🤷‍♂️

Story has potential but it needs help. It jumps around too much and also has parts that don't make sense such as the humans being unheard of at the present time even though they had not only defeated them but had even formed an alliance with them and then were forgotten about yet the leadership continues to avoid all contact with the humans. This story needs to be rewritten with the corrections made

That is because of the people who make the rules of engagement, Do not want you to win the war. They wanted the others to win, Because they walk in spiritual darkness.

There is more truth to this story than you may think

This is a piecemeal story multiple different stories that were pasted together like it was holding together with duct tape

They way the story jumps back and changes is quite annoying. Learn consistency and how to write a story

@alganhar1

17 күн бұрын

That would require them to actually properly edit the AI story generator they used to write the story in the first place... Heavens help them if they actually have to WORK on a story!!!

@jimmac69

15 күн бұрын

@@alganhar1 right?

"AI" written. Well, while the words follow each other, plot development, continuity, and internal logic are all lost. Worth it as a yard stick to how far Elisa has progressed since it was a few dozen lines of basic. Also quite reassuring to realize James T Kirk logic traps would crash this stuff.

Stand up and don't automatically subscribe to the majority of these stories or watch the advertisers videos. Review of this publisher and this story: The repetition seems to be there just to increase the length of the 47 minute story. Over a full third (or perhaps more) is repetition. Poorly edited (if it was edited at all). I have noticed that in far too many of these AI stories that it seriously appears that someone just filled our a very short synopsis, clicked a button, generated the story, pushed it through a poor speech to text engine, generated the images that are barely story related, and then combined them. Then these stories seem to be uploaded without anyone checking the text generation or even listening to the story. I've been reading scifi since the mid 60s and always I am always on the hunt for good scifi with original storylines. I HATE to be so negative but this looks like just another way to push out a story to hopefully gain subscribers to get monetization turned on. For goodness sake, dont subscribe to these "publishers" to push out more of their lacklustre videos. There are multiple publishers doing this in the scifi genre. Possibly the majority are from one publisher. Ive never seen any of these publishers reply to the comments. Only 2 or so of these publishers make anything worth listening to. We can't call them creators because the AI is the creator of all of the content. Do yourself and this genre a favor. Don't subscribe unless the publisher makes a decent congruent story. So far, most of these AI channel's names start with HFY.

I'd really like to hear what Happened to Zordax and the Unity.

Aty Ate Great story thanks. Alf😂😂😂

I like to see movies made out of these stories.

Resolve, Indomitable Reckoned Can one of these stories be written without these words being used like punctuation? Christ.

Repeated paragraphs jump in the story. Did you listen before publishing. Good try do better next time

Deep..

Yeah, can't do it. Needs too much editing.

Very anthropochavanistic stories. Suitable for insecure victims.

Please, go rewrite and fine tune this story. It's tiring

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This story is incomplete and disorganized.

trash AI story

Wow.....well at least you gave it a go I suppose well at least you gave it a go I suppose well at least you gave it a go I suppose,....😐