every one of these tales need a good editor to get rid of the conflicts and repeated words.

Good story. I liked how there were no weird alternate repeats. Well done.

The admiral has a Super Scotty😅

A good story at terrible cost as all violence is against us.

Thank you for the story. I enjoyed it. I would like to know more of the progenitors and the protagonists. I need to see them in my mind.

It was a well written and structured.

Great story, thanks 😊

Absolutely enjoyed this❤

Pertty good.

I loved the story ❤

Sounds like an AI wrote at least part of this. I did enjoy it though despite the continuity mistakes

@ZargothraxAC5

21 күн бұрын

All of these are generated by gpt-4.

I liked the story

I really like the story

I like the story

I like this story

I like the story... But it's so long! Is there anything I can knock out on my lunch break? LOL

Really seems like every small thing is a "threat to the entire galaxy" 😂

Glad the aliens were defeated easily?

It's Dove like in Dover not the bird. Now you know how we feel when you butcher Aluminum 😂

How many times is Dr Hoffman going to... nvm.

I liked the story 😊

I did like the story. If only today we could all work together but we are too much full of ME, ME,ME. 🇺🇸🔥👍

@donkdat

17 күн бұрын

Too much money in conflict that's why we will never unite as a species. Too much greed and corruption

12:34 8.minutes into this story. I bet, based on previous narrations, there are characters whose names starts with Z, an antagonist race that starts with Z, a major singular antagonist gets killed, brought back to life within a couple minutes, gets killed again, brought back to life, becomes the hero's best friend, there is an even greater threat that either starts with a Z or is a Void something or other. The author or AI really likes the letter Z and continuity? Right out the window. Dead, alive, dead, alive, dead, alive. How many times does one character get revived like nothing happened? As in the previous battle, where the bad guy was atomized beyond saving, is in a different scene battling like their total destruction never happened? Oh and "For everyone that falls on battle, two more of the enemy takes their place". And weapons cur through shields like "a hot knife through butter ".

@donkdat

17 күн бұрын

It sliced through their energy fields like a hot spoon through ice cream

"Easily" *scoff*

At the 25 minute mark, the admiral’s ship has main propulsion down, then, right away the fleet is forming up on them to go after the “harbinger”. What, they suddenly had main engines back? I’m confused….

❤

One minute the enemy couldn’t be stopped next fighting back. Rubbish

First she's knocked out, then not, then she's dead, then helping Jason. Very confusing. Great story, but it's not told right 😕

Waited is the wrong word it should be weighted.

this seems AI written... the statement "Wrote myself" is really interesting here... I wish I could block that waste of time as it seems a lot of AI stuff is showing up as of late...

The story is mostly good, but the continuity breaks ruin the story. These stories need better editing to remove those problem.

I thought the story was very good

Ugh...story took to many repeats

This is Ridiculous first a person is alive then they're dead then they're alive then they're dead then they're alive, make up your mind. People are in One location next Second there another and they're back to the first location then they're at a third location then their are at a fourth location and then they're back to their original location. Plus battles aren't fought just once they're fought two sometimes three Times. With slightly or totally different scenarios. This author is so scatterbrained that's it's a Wonder he can dress himself, If he can. And it's like this with almost every story he writes. Some are better than others but most have some kind of screwy thing going on. I wish he would stop writing three to 10 different stories in One.😡😡😡👎👎👎

@Perurikun

Ай бұрын

and at the end there when Raleigh, who suddenly became ambassador, when he was talking about the sacrifice of Mike, he was talking about him like he forgot that Mike was his brother earlier in the story! 🤣👊🖖

@johnjacob-si3vc

Ай бұрын

this is why proof reading an editing is important. there was several times where i was going wth is this writer doing? even at the end the writer gets Mike and Jason switched up then back to Jason, I wonder if the writer is using a badly programmed AI???

@robertmccracken6930

Ай бұрын

​@@johnjacob-si3vcThat is exactly what is going on here, then it's just put into an AI reader. There is no checking or editing, just tell AI to write a story and put it straight into the reader

More AI written trash.

Why use the stupid word " dove" instead of dived it is stupid and not correct evenif you americans use it. It makes me so cranky to see the name of a small pigeon like this.

I liked the story

Ugh...story took to many repeats