Shits fucked was huge for you, but that was a novelty one hit wonder song. This one however has real potential to be your break out hit. It needs some good post production mixing and tweaking but this could be a chart maker. Maybe instead of just writing songs you should do the finish polish work on some of your better numbers. Sorry to say this, but maybe spending money on actual studio time or the evil Auto-Tune. You're still a better singer than I am. that's for sure. But I'm working on it. Have you thought about writing songs for other people? That's how Bowie got started. Was it you that did the deep-dive on Sinatra's My Way? That was a complete stolen rip-off of something that David Bowie wrote for someone else. Based on a French song.