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@MrBuketman

6 ай бұрын

Hate repeat myself from a previous video, but what ever happens between the various live action series and the sequel trilogy doesn’t quite promise th at our characters do anything to prevent the awful story writing in the sequels.

@Last-Scar-5675

6 ай бұрын

@@MrBuketmanthe story writing in the sequels was great not awful

@holemajora598

6 ай бұрын

🤔Interesting, I’m going to listen to this again tomorrow 🧐

@MrBuketman

6 ай бұрын

@@holemajora598 Just seemed to drop the ball on Luke, the Emperor was brought back as damage control, Snoke amounted to nothing, the Asian chic was useless for seeming diversity reasons, and where are the characters and/or their impact from the live action series? Luke’s lack of appearance, and his death ruined it. They wanted to reboot with a female while ditching Luke and his dad. The centers of the other movies. Expect the next movie to be more damage control.

@Julian.noa21

6 ай бұрын

can you do a rewrite of the flash or a prewrite of superman legacy

Never thought I'd see a re-write from you guys! You'll have to do an Easter Eggs video on your own fanfiction 😂

@RandomResearch57

6 ай бұрын

They’ve done plenty of them

@vadershorrorfilms8889

4 ай бұрын

Check out my sequel rewrite on my channel, I think everyone will thoroughly enjoy it

Finn being Gideon's son is SO good. Amazing depth and potential for unique character arcs. Why Disney, why...

@splashnskillz37

6 ай бұрын

Guideon wasn't created till after TROS dude chill

@mikedamico8902

6 ай бұрын

in the video Ryan says what you said, and then explains his character would be based on Gideon, not actually Gideon himself. Chill dude. @@splashnskillz37

@splashnskillz37

6 ай бұрын

@@mikedamico8902 im chill from the begining dude, i just misread your comment a bit that's all

@eliezerrodriguez5863

6 ай бұрын

Why? Because of fanboy tears!! Their so delicious!!!

@zaab-yaoh9302

6 ай бұрын

Why? Because Hollywood is owned by a certain group of people that pushes a certain agenda no matter if it loses money or not.

That Leia-slap on Poe’s “return” comment was brilliant. Hope we see it used more in the future.

@hanlee3345

6 ай бұрын

i fkin died at that bit XD

@daddydojang

6 ай бұрын

That is the best part of this video

@vadershorrorfilms8889

4 ай бұрын

Check out my sequel rewrite on my channel, I think everyone will thoroughly enjoy it

I wish that the next movie would have a scene where someone wakes Rey or any Star Wars character up from a dream/nightmare, and he/she replies that the whole sequel was just a dream... Therefore it never happened. They can have a fresh start with the sequel.

@edwarddemesaify

6 ай бұрын

@@DanaWhites_CocaineDealer lol. You're probably right and good point. I hope that there is a clever writer out there who can undo the sequel...

@stephenwatkins7592

6 ай бұрын

Renslayer timepads in and deletes Rey from the timeline. Turns out Palpatine was a Kang variant

@edwarddemesaify

6 ай бұрын

@@stephenwatkins7592 Kang is Marvel though....

@stephenwatkins7592

6 ай бұрын

In an infinity of multiverses surely there are a few where Marvel and Star Wars coexist. Anyway there is nothing in the canon that would prevent Star Wars and the MCU from existing in the same universe@@edwarddemesaify

@edwarddemesaify

6 ай бұрын

@@MaxxadTVit’s two separate universes though and two different story lines. Marvel I should be marvel and Star Wars are should be Star Wars.

I think your story line makes a lot more sense than what we got in the sequels.

@vadershorrorfilms8889

4 ай бұрын

Check out my sequel rewrite on my channel, I think everyone will thoroughly enjoy it

It’s actually a brilliant concept. The idea of a protagonist having an arc that’s not ‘forced’ or being a ‘Mary Sue’ would be amazing. Just a frustration that we had to see what was wrong before we can understand what’s right

The Ben Skywalker comment really hit me. That would’ve worked so well. Love this dude as an actor, he would have been great in that role

I haven't rewatched the sequels since theatrical release. This version will exist as the sequels in my head now.

As an avid Star Wars enthusiast and ScreenCrush viewer, i politely request for a sequel to this video. That is a full plot

KEEP DOING REWRITES! I know it's fan fiction, but it scratches the itch of actually having a good story! The more you do, and other content creators do, maybe, just maybe with your collective reach, we may finally get back to solid story telling.

@vadershorrorfilms8889

4 ай бұрын

Check out my sequel rewrite on my channel, I think everyone will thoroughly enjoy it

What did you think of our plan?

@luquepierce

6 ай бұрын

Hi Ryan

@MJC1891

6 ай бұрын

Thank you Doug for your hard work

@gabrielj5343

6 ай бұрын

Loved it. Please let us know more about this story.

@writingref

6 ай бұрын

Not bad. I do not think this pitch quite ties the prequels together all the way to the sequels In order to explain the balance of the force - you have to go super cosmic - you have to have a battle on the spiritual plane like Lucas talked about Ahsoka was around in 2015 She is a good window into the cosmic side of the force, but you can also use Rey. In order to tie it all together- i feel you MUST address the relationship between the midichlorians and the whils You have to show this relationship- and not tell about it The best way to accomplish this is to use reincarnation mythology Very similar to the Avatar of Avatar the Last air bender Where Rey = Anakin as chosen one Different individuals in a series of connected souls Through the Whils and concieved of midichlorians

@rayman17420

6 ай бұрын

Ngl I like the idea that George Lucas had for the final trilogy but the one you presented was well done and thought out. It's crazy that I've watched or read so many other ideas just random people came uo with for the last trilogy and 95% of the ideas were way better than what Disney churned out. It all just sucks because we could have had decades of new stories and characters for Star Wars but instead Disney drove the franchise into the ground. Disney was literally handed a money printer with decades of already written a d even storyboarded stories that could have been used for movies or streaming series but instead we got a bunch of unoriginal fan fiction passed off as star Wars canon.

I don’t think the problem with the sequels was that they went the wrong direction. The problem was they failed to go ANY direction. Finn being a former stormtrooper, Luke a broken cynical man, Rey and Kylo swapping stereotypes (a mentally weak villain struggling with the pull to the light side against a seemingly invincible hero), all of that could have been awesome if followed through.

You put more thought into the sequels than JJ Abram’s did.

@BP-dn9nv

5 ай бұрын

That's not a high bar to pass. JJ's entire writing process is the definition of style over substance

@vadershorrorfilms8889

4 ай бұрын

check out mine

This is so much better than what we got. I love the twist of Finn being Moff Gideons son.

Please do a full rewrite! I love people's takes on the trilogy, especially like yours where it works with the characters you've got but changes things to make more sense/flow better

@vadershorrorfilms8889

4 ай бұрын

Check out my sequel rewrite on my channel, I think everyone will thoroughly enjoy it

I really like the rewrite that Ryan envisions. The sequels need A LOT of help and Ray's background is so confusing. And Ben/Kylo deserved better. And Pow and Finn get pushed to the background as characters after being a huge part of The Force Awakens

@vadershorrorfilms8889

4 ай бұрын

Check out my sequel rewrite on my channel, I think everyone will thoroughly enjoy it

you know what just came to me? i think it would've been cool if he actually survived the battle of exegol & went on to start a new jedi academy as penance for his actions (& in memory of luke)

This was very good Ryan. I would have loved to see the story you would have told. Please let us know how it ends.

Loving this. The Force is strong with Ryan Please please continue this 🙏

As Palpatine so bluntly said, “Do it!”

That honestly sounds like an incredible idea for an episode 7 remake.

@jadoyon

6 ай бұрын

I think that overall story would be a 3 movie trilogy. There was a lot there.

I would love to see a full plot for this sequel trilogy! I wish this plot included The Clone Wars and Rebels shows, but I get that would be ungodly complicated.

What you have put forward is so, so, so much better than what we got. Unfortunately, we needed the sequels to exist to get there. Admittedly, the bar was set extremely low, but this would make a great trilogy, and might even have people actually care about the new characters from the sequels. Fantastic ideas. You and your team should write it up, and make some fan films (or perhaps collaborate with some other KZreadrs who already make them?). It could even be marketed to Lucasfilm as an “Elseworlds”-type of sequel trilogy. It could be produced on a (Star Wars) TV budget, and would make them a small fortune in the cinemas. Heck, I would even accept it as novels, audio, or comic. I would pay good money to see this, and it would be my “canon” for the entire Skywalker saga. Just because something players out in an alternate universe, doesn’t mean it isn’t real for the inhabitants of that universe… :) Cheers,

@vadershorrorfilms8889

4 ай бұрын

Check out my sequel rewrite on my channel, I think everyone will thoroughly enjoy it

It all sounds a whole lot better than what Disney came up with 🤦🏽‍♀️😂 you’re great!!

@vadershorrorfilms8889

4 ай бұрын

Check out my sequel rewrite on my channel, I think everyone will thoroughly enjoy it

They should have had a unified story for the sequels.

Yes, please make the plot summaries of the hypothetical sequels! Wish this was what Disney went with instead of the plot-by-committee randomness we got

Please, go over the full plot to this terrific rewrite of the sequels. It's literally everything I personally wanted in the sequels but unfortunately didn't get.

Please, after hearing the amazing concept for your Sequel Trilogy, I need to hear them all and how they interconnect and how it ends.

My favorite part of your treatment, is to explore the gray areas of the force. Rey in the middle representing balance, and a Baylon-like character as the darker reflection of that same gray.

Someone get this man a movie deal!

I want this... Please write the damn thing. Like now, do you need anything, like paper, pens? I do want some romance though, more than just Han and Leia. Maybe, we could have Rey and Ben as a romantic relationship this way, and not have people threaten others with their deaths because they like the possibility. Adam and Daisy had such amazing chemistry. I really think that could work. Such excellent work with Canon and Legends. This would have crushed. Love this!!

Amazing. This version will be the sequels for me from now on. Great job, well thought, true to the characters, bringing new things, refreshing.

@Xeta_

6 ай бұрын

Nah it still sucks. Luke/leia should’ve been the protagonist

Having Luke's New Jedi Order in the movies is something we should have gotten, along with more of the New Republic.

If they did this I might forgive them

So far so good - I'm sold on your overarching plan for the sequels. I'd love to see you continue this and give greater detail to the remaining movies in your sequel trilogy.

Once again it shows how even a guy that works on a video shop can do a better starwars script for a better trilogy than the crap that it was done. Thanks Ryan, and you should give us all the plot and keep with it this sounds great!

I think you are definitely off to a good start. I think Finn definitely deserves some good story.

This would have been epic to see. It brings in everyone, new and old, and it actually adds to the confidence of the overall arcs. It really is a shame there wasn't a consistent visionary driving the sequels.

@vadershorrorfilms8889

4 ай бұрын

Check out my sequel rewrite on my channel, I think everyone will thoroughly enjoy it

The Rise Of Skywalker could have fixed the issues of the Force Awakens and The Last Jedi but they screwed the pooch as soon as "Somehow Palpatine returned" 🤦🏾‍♂️🤣

@Madillusionist

6 ай бұрын

Nothing could have fixed the hot garbage fire that is TLJ.

@brendanmcmahon9971

6 ай бұрын

I think they had to figure out a way to deal with the problems created by the Last Jedi and that was never going to be an easy workaround.

This definitely sounds better than the sequels we have now

This is already so much better. I want MORE!!!!

I find your ideas intriguing and would be delighted to hear more in the future.

This video is the prime example of why it's important to have your own ideas if you're going to criticize something, i see people doing 5 hour essays and naming problems here, problems there but never using their creativity to prove that they can do better. Well done Ryan.

This sounds 100% better than what we got.

That’s was fun and your edit comedy is gold! You all have been doing some great work!

Hated the sequels 😢

@rashadlewis8345

6 ай бұрын

Haters gonna hate

@danimal2659

6 ай бұрын

Since Emperor Palpatine wasn’t destroyed at the end of Episode VI it’s obvious that he used his dark force powers to create the next trilogy of movies. This gives us all the chance to practice not succumbing to hatred or fear. But yeah, those movies suck something spectacular. Awful!

@adamoore

6 ай бұрын

7 wasn’t that bad tbh but 8 & 9 almost ruined Star Wars for me

@YoyomanMichael

6 ай бұрын

@@rashadlewis8345 nah, not that kind of hate. More sadness over what could have been.

@xXScissorHandsXx

6 ай бұрын

All of them? Force Awakens, I remember feeling a bit of the buzz of things good on the horizon and then utterly shafted by the next two...

I like the idea. there's a little muddling that I think might be too convoluted for a sequel trilogy, mostly around the back and forth of motives. to springboard off of this, I would put Ep VII as establishing the characters and the premise, Ep VIII would put things into action in the first half then face turn for Finn and Ben in the second half, Ep IX would be obvious climax and wrapping up the entire ennealogy (I had to look that word up for trilogy x 3 lol)

I love your concept. I definitely want to dive into the details of this story. I'll start it for you. "A long time ago, In a Galaxy far, far away..."

That was awesome and would have been SOOOOO much better than what we got.

I think that's Dave is attempting with the shows. He even introduced an aspect that could cause the sequels to be retconned. Ray Stevenson dying may have put that plan on hold unfortunately. He was the best original character they've had in quite a while.

@vadershorrorfilms8889

4 ай бұрын

Check out my sequel rewrite on my channel, I think everyone will thoroughly enjoy it

Cade was my favorite character in the legacy run, love that he gettin some recognition

Great stuff! Bring on the full plot breakdown. I can do concept art panels for you guys!

I absolutely love this screen write.

This was a really great concept. I'm actually doing a version of the sequel trilogies Myself, And I really enjoyed the way you had found the concept for the whole trilogy altogether instead of how Disney did it when they just piece movies together without really connecting them and making it scrambled. For mine, I'm going to start in the middle between. Return of the jedi, and the force awakens and set up everything for my trilogy before making the triolgy is there. Until then, I enjoyed what you put out there. And I really hope you guys put more of this into the future. Because the concept was really really cool

@vadershorrorfilms8889

4 ай бұрын

Check out my sequel rewrite on my channel, I think everyone will thoroughly enjoy it

@vadershorrorfilms8889

4 ай бұрын

dont steal cause this sounds stupid similar to mine

@yinpayofficial1063

4 ай бұрын

@vadershorrorfilms8889 I don't even know what yours is, lol. I know how mines will be, since I don't know yours I think your safe lol

@gregrobinette8620

4 ай бұрын

Same, I am actually making a scifi inspired story, mainly inspired by Star Wars, & I was going to combine Legends & Lucas' original plan, but instead of Japanese, US, Vietnam, & Iraq inspirations, mine is inspired by native American ones. But I am also going to make a Star Wars sequel trilogy video by using LEGO Skywalker Saga & Battlefront 2, which is what I'm doing here now lol, the Bullets & Blockbusters what-couldve-been Sequel trilogy mentioned Darth Talon seducing Leia & Han's son Skylar, I invision him to be directly like Jacen Solo/Darth Cadeus. Sorry for the lomg comment, god bless & have a good night/day. 🙏🏽🪶

@vadershorrorfilms8889

4 ай бұрын

@@gregrobinette8620 im doing the lego/battlefront idea for my thing so im not stealing that either

I need more of what I was missing all these years!

Nice take, it will be great to hear the conclusion!!

Dude, love this story so far! Love fan-fiction, everyone can have fun. Give us more!

I’d love to see a full version.

Sounds really great! I would love to hear more of your ideas.

I welcome this head canon. Would be entertained and refreshed to hear a scene by scene telling of this trilogy.

Great video. Please make more like this

I can't get enough of these videos. Bravo to you all

*grabs popcorn* I'm in...can't wait for the full plot breakdown!

On paper the idea the sequels had weren’t that bad. Luke training palpatines granddaughter to ultimately defeat palpatine himself isn’t a bad idea. Rey should of been revealed to be palps granddaughter when she was in the darkside cave in last Jedi. Palpatine should of just been an evil force ghost to stubborn to die corrupting Ben solo

Do it! Fan fiction can be great fun if done with care of the original IP, and I see you ay SC as potentially good stewards.

Full rewrite fo the entire trilogy, yes please.

Every single rewrite ive seen you do has been amazing. Plz keep it up

What did you think of the Star wars sequels?

@master-of-many-fandoms2020

6 ай бұрын

The thing is, while they aren’t perfect, they do have their moments that are good

@Oleus

6 ай бұрын

They were awful. 😅

@dragonnet289

6 ай бұрын

I worst movie trilogy ever made!!!!

@gabrielj5343

6 ай бұрын

Great promise, but poor execution.

@christianschmidt8476

6 ай бұрын

Sequels >>>>>>>>>> prequels

This sounds at least 100 times better than what we got. New ideas that are actually interesting, new characters that expand the story... What a revolutionary concept. 😉

I really like this! The story feels very star wars, you expand on pre-established lore and ideas, there are some fun twists like people being afraid of force users, which really makes sense, the redesigns are amazing... Yeah, this is great

Just rewatched this and have to leave another comment - please, please do the full plot. This has made me so hopeful for the sequels. And I liked the original characters (Rey, Finn, Poe and Ben), so seeing them in the right form and shape and involved in an intriguing and well thought-out story is amazing. Thanks!!

I cant believe a KZreadr wrote a better screen play, than Disney

That was pretty cool. The Idea of bringing the legacy of the prequels and originals makes sense since it builds from them. The backround add up to each character, Ben and Fin their family and Rey having no one to follow or drift away. I am actually quite inspired and exited if you decide to move foward. A book or Audio would be great. Well, 3 books.

This is 1000× better than what we actually got in the sequels. If only disney would just dump what was and run with this.

Piss off ghost is one of the best lines in a movie ever

I believe this is one of your BEST PRESENTATIONS since I have been subscribed. Keep it up. That Lucas Film phone call cannot be too far far away!! 😂❤❤❤

16:05 this is the best part of the video 😂😂😂😂 Great job a reimagining the sequels, I’d totally rewatch them over and over.

The Post ROTJ animated aeries should be about Luke and the New Republic and Finn with the New Order as a Baby... To When he left

It sounds great! Far far better than what we actually got. Luke's journey is really important and seeing him become the Grand Master is something fans have dreamt of for forty years....hope we can have justice for Luke

For Ben Skywalker to have the last name Skywalker, Han could mention that he doesn't have a real last name. Solo is just a nickname that stuck so Leia suggests "How about Ben Organa Skywalker"

OMG!! Far better version than we got to see in movies, with every character having different arc, challenges to face with, truly brilliant. I bet this would be awesome that could have last many years in forms of movies, series and spin-offs.

Much better than what we got! Definitely want more!

Definitely want to hear the full plot with key scenes! 🙏🏼🙏🏼

Great ideas. I'd love to hear more about it.

I would absolutely love this sequel trilogy concept to be fully fleshed out in a future video, great work as always SC.

I think it would be really interesting to have the resistance fracture into different factions once they have created the New Republic. We already saw how they all had different ideas on how to conduct the rebellion, so it makes sense they would govern differently too. You can explore how people who were once united for a cause break apart because of differences of opinion, fight and then reconcile. The Jedi would also have a similar plot of trying to figure out what to do or how to rebuild after the latest destruction of the Sith. You could have Jedi that survived Order 66 want to rebuild the way it was vs Jedi or force users that want something different. Maybe the force users can figure it out by exploring the Whills and being educated by Force ghost Anakin, Yoda, Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon and then get the Republic factions back together.

"Somehow💥🫲🏽!!!" made me laugh out loud! 🤣🤣🤣

This is a great fan-fiction/sequel re-write that is way better than what Disney put out. I’d love to hear more of the story you envision, though I’d love to have you include a Aang-Zuko relationship like in Avatar: The Last Airbender with Finn and Ben

I remember drafting up of sequel rewrites. The easiest version ended up mirroring the prequels instead of the originals: First Order behaving like the Separatist Crisis and the New Republic was alive with a new Jedi Order. George Lucas seemed to lean toward that way of doing the sequels while JJ Abrams wanted Ep 7 to be so anti-prequel that the lifecycle of the New Repubic and its senate was moved to backstory (TV shows, video games and novels). Another version I had was close to Nartuo Shippuden's finale (Infinite Tsukuyomi except with the Force + extra-galactic invaders). For sequel rewrite inspirations from mecha anime, look at: Code Geass sequel film, Universal Century Gundam, and Gundam 00

This sounds incredibly promising! If you do end up going more in depth on this, it'd be epic if you commissioned some official--looking concept art to go alongside the standard edited scenes schtick

@vadershorrorfilms8889

4 ай бұрын

check out mine

before the events of VII-IX begin to unfold. A lost but not forgotten Jedi Master returns to stop thwart the Return of Sidious before he has a chance in Shatter Point: The Return of Mace Windu

This is a fascinating concept for a trilogy! Would like to hear where these plot lines eventually end up because this idea is shaping out so well

Can we please push for a new series called Mothers of the Republic. Protagonists being Leia and Mon Mothma? We already have SO much complexity to both characters. One has that socio-political factor we loved in Andor, and one has strong links to the mysterious Force aspects we have just seen in Ahsoka. Fan fiction aside, this could actually work in canon.

I liked this! Would love to hear the whole plot

Good movie concept. I think the Ben Skywalker having a bounty hunter crew, fighting injustice in the outer rim, would have been a good streaming show. It could have lead up to one of the sequel movies. People love the adventures of a rag tag crew fighting injustice. btw: Never watched the actual sequels, and don't think I ever will. I'm just pretending they don't even exist.

I love this! Sort of a Cobra Kai-esq Star Wars. You should do a pitch of each individual movie in the trilogy. Also, your version of Finn is perfect.

Really interesting how there's so much justification for Sabine having the force, but everyone has a phobia towards Finn being force-sensitive.

Great story. Would love to hear more

I love this! Both the story, and the editing.