I liked it, especially when it went "du dum dum dee"

@averynhiell

6 ай бұрын

Thank you! That’s a surprisingly good verbalisation of the head of the subject. xD

Bach would have been proud of you !

@averynhiell

6 ай бұрын

Thanks a lot! ^^

This is probably my favorite of your compositions. good work

@averynhiell

3 ай бұрын

Thank you a lot! ^^

very captivating and energetic, lively and fresh.

@averynhiell

3 ай бұрын

Thank you so much! (=

That was beautiful, elegant, and pleasing to hear. I hope you are encouraged to continue writing

@averynhiell

6 ай бұрын

Thank you so much! I definitely will continue writing fugues. ^^

Very captivating Bachian fugue subject. Captures the ear right off the bat! Can't help thinking that this subject would have been ideal for an inverted entry, though. The very distinctive rhythm would stand out right away and be immediately recognizable, and the inverted pitches would add a lot of freshness to the music, and perhaps let you expand it a little more. The conclusion could then feature both the original right-side-up subject in stretto with its inverse for a nice contrapuntal climax.

@averynhiell

5 ай бұрын

Thank you! (= There are actually two instances of an inversion of parts of the subject: a sequence with the inverted head of the subject starting at 1:29, making up the episode that leads to the stretto section, and an inverted entry in stretto at 2:07. ^^

@user-gp1ou7fd2g

5 ай бұрын

@@averynhiell Very nice. I thought you could have done more with it towards the end, like give it its own mini-exposition and play around with it, then bring in the original and have them play together to tie up the end. Just a random idea, of course.

@averynhiell

5 ай бұрын

@@user-gp1ou7fd2g Totally, I’ll consider the idea for future compositions. ^^

Nice job! Catchy subject! I have to be careful saying this, but it is vaguely reminiscent of the F minor fugue in Book II of Bach's Well-Tempered Clavier, which is also in 2/4 in F minor. But you introduce a few touches that Bach didn't think of. For instance that 16th-note anacrusis at the beginning of the subject is really pretty catchy, and it works every time you bring the subject back. I thought it was interesting that in this one you stay pretty close in the orbit of F minor and nearly related keys. (I was just listening to your D minor fugue again and you went pretty far afield in that one--from D minor to E minor and B minor). I guess the more active material in this fugue doesn't let you range quite so far afield. Not meant as a criticism, though--I think it goes right whenre you need it to go. Nice job, once again!

@averynhiell

5 ай бұрын

Thank you so much! (= Yeah, some people have already noticed the similarity to BWV 881. First, it was unintentional, and once I realised it myself during composition, I let myself be a bit more inspired by it. Unfortunately, the anacrusis doesn’t work every time: in the entry at 0:45, I had to lower it to avoid parallels. As for the keys: I felt like this fugue was a bit more “well-behaced” in terms of material etc., it didn’t seem to fit to explore too distant keys. But in the Fugue II in D-Minor, everything is a bit more experimental. ^^

Very elegant fugue, i enjoyed it very much :)

@averynhiell

6 ай бұрын

Thank you so much! ^^

Bravo !

@averynhiell

3 ай бұрын

Thanks! ^^

I like what I hear, keep going! My fugues are getting better but not at your level yet

@averynhiell

5 ай бұрын

Thanks a lot! I will try and remember to check some of your fugues out as well. (:

i like this. youre good at writing fugues did you know?

@averynhiell

6 ай бұрын

Thank you so much! (=

Excellent fugue. However, I don't want to be annoying, but I found the similarity with the Fugue in F Minor from the Second Volume of the Well-Tempered Clavier very evident. The subject of this sounds almost like a variation of that to me. I know this was probably unintentional, it happens by chance or unconsciously, I have been victim of things like that myself. Perhaps you should mention this similarity in the identification of this fugue to avoid criticism.

@averynhiell

6 ай бұрын

Thank you! The similarity is semi-intentional. That is, I did not plan for it to be similar from the beginning, but while constructing the exposition, I noticed it and let it inspire me more consciously. I’ll mention it in the video description, thank you for your thoughts on that. (:

@joeldepadua

6 ай бұрын

@@averynhiell👍

If you are to write this for different instruments, what would they be?

@averynhiell

Ай бұрын

Interesting question! I don’t have much experience in instrumentation, but a reed trio might fit. What do you think? (:

@Nozomi_kun

Ай бұрын

@@averynhiell I think the same too. A trio of woodwinds might fit well to most of your fugues. In fact I did actually try transcribing one of your fugues to woodwinds, and I'd love to share it with you if you like!

@averynhiell

Ай бұрын

@@Nozomi_kun I would love to hear it! However, sending a link via a comment might not work, so feel free to use the e-mail address in my channel description. (:

@Nozomi_kun

Ай бұрын

@@averynhiell I have send it to you. Hope you like it!

@averynhiell

Ай бұрын

@@Nozomi_kun Thank you, I received it. You will hear from me. ^^

Amici della musica ,questa fuga non si capisce chi la composta ,ma francamente non mi ci metto e la trovo scontata ovvia e noiosa .quella dopo ,spero non siano di Bach ma di anonimo ,quella dopo sarà , personalmente non mi dice granché .

@averynhiell

25 күн бұрын

Ho composto questa fuga e tutte le altre fughe del mio canale. Capisco cosa intendi, è una fuga piuttosto semplice. (:

Too close to 48 Book One fugue to be more than a poor pastiche.

@averynhiell

5 ай бұрын

I assume you are referring to BWV 881? Well, the subject is similar, but apart from that, I think the two fugues are rather different. I don’t think it’s fair to call it a “poor pastiche”.

@user-gp1ou7fd2g

5 ай бұрын

@@averynhiell IMO it doesn't sound like BWV 881 at all. There are some similarities in the shape of the subject, but tonally the two are quite distinct, and any similarities are likely mere coincidence.

@sergiocattapan1192

5 ай бұрын

​​@@averynhiellcontinua a comporre, la tua musica è semplicemente attraente.😊

@averynhiell

5 ай бұрын

@@user-gp1ou7fd2g Thank you, I agree. (:

@averynhiell

5 ай бұрын

@@sergiocattapan1192 Grazie di cuore! ^^