Unnecessary prolonging of a story. If you don't have details to fill the story with, keep the video short. Repeating the same sentence, 10 different ways is annoying

@devhxh1558

8 күн бұрын

Its written with AI ofc its poetic

Creative writing bull

@FutureNaught

8 күн бұрын

had me going until the "icy tiles matching the atmosphere"

@MiaMaraa

7 күн бұрын

Not that creative 😌

God- It's so unnecessarily detailed that it sounds like AI

totally creative writing good lord

@matthewapril3119

8 күн бұрын

100%, but it's good creative writing

@lyraflow9154

8 күн бұрын

​@@matthewapril3119 no

Why does the volume keep changing in your videos?

@storyteller5557

8 күн бұрын

Its mostly inaudible 👎

@Osxchaos

8 күн бұрын

Seriously, I’m wearing headphones and still straining to hear, then boom full volume.

I feel like even with creative writting,they can give us a damn update.

I apparently missed how her pretending to be pregnant is going to somehow prove that her Fiance' is having an affair with her friend. All that proved is that he and her friend were on speaking terms, which OP knew.

@daniellemitchell3118

6 күн бұрын

She told her best friend since high school NOT to tell the OP's fiance. THAT was the test. To see if she was more loyal to her or more loyal to the fiance. She got her answer.

Pretty crappy creative writing exercise

I don’t even care whether or not the story is real or fake, hearing that person tell the story annoyed the shit out of me

Girl could've just set up some cameras

@brianawhittaker8152

8 күн бұрын

She really could've but she became very strategic lol. Idk how she stayed composed for so long bc I feel like most ppl their emotions would get the best of them and they would just go off and accuse them. She held it together pretty well for someone in her position.

100% just a highschool essay

"I'll love you forever PHILIP J. FRY"

OP is 100% some kind of writer

At this point, idk if this is fake, or real :’)

@peppermintie

8 күн бұрын

it’s probably fake

You know it’s fake when there’s quotes and unnecessary details

I don't if it's real or not but I want to know what happens next. I want her to be happy and his ex fiance to suffer Please make an update ❤❤

Fiction like this used to be in women’s magazines years ago but now the writers have a new outlet.

i dont understand. she said the years of marraige, then all of a sudden "i cant marry you" .

Creative writing assignment :D

Problem whis the audio, sometime wery low

Bro this is a good fiction story

Please stop using fake stories. Are there not enough real ones posted eaxh day? 🙄

@mevan883

4 күн бұрын

Some of the fake stories are better then the real stories. Cause the fake stories justice is usually granted.

Gaw-damn what a load of rambly BS.

Sheesh well that was annoying listening to

The random lowering of the audio is so god damn annoying.

Play the only one that wants to bed 50 bucks that John had a bunch of walking red flags all over him let's say if this story was real but the poster just decided to ignore every one of them

Holly yappachino

Bro there is WAY to many details and also your repeating sentences and beating around the bush and yapping and not getting to the point

This is the stupidest waste of a story. I can’t even. So ridiculous. And the cadence of the speech is all wrong and it’s the worst. Like actually nauseating. I keep trying to give this channel a chance but the choice of stories and the editing just don’t work.

Nice AI story.

7:36

@BeFreedomBusy-ub7mb

8 күн бұрын

???

The whispering fluctuations are annoying.

This is crap.

first comment plz pin

@isaacbishow

8 күн бұрын

shut up pin beggars, if you're gonna comment, comment something abt the video