Liked the story. I just wish it did not rushed. Am looking forward for more.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story and look forward to hearing many more, thanks 👍🇦🇺

There it is. The jaw set with grim determination. At least they aren't zorgons.

@davidcollins2993

Ай бұрын

Not yet

@diesalowens7964

4 күн бұрын

General mata was a stand up dude. The clone I mean the real one was a shitball

Great story loved it

Small pet peeve, you can't call any other planetary system a solar system, because our sun is technically called Sol, as in The Solar System and when the guy in the book is fighting the alien the book says they were rolling around in the lunar dust! No! Only the dust on our moon,Luna, can be called Lunar dust. Andromedan system is correct term and the dust would be moon dust until named. Peace out,ya'll!😂😂

Nice story. ty

I really enjoyed this story thank you

Thank, thank you. I enjoyed that

Granted the pronunciation needs some work on certain words. However, the overall cadence is well done. Enjoyed the story.

Was rather good I enjoyed listening

Like the story well done ❤

Thanks for story!

And Hernande's mom called" dinner is ready" and Hernandes left his toys on the flore. The story feels more then rushed

Great story

Nice. Needs to be longer so you can realy connect with the characters

I like the story keep it up

Did the Edenites really make an alliance with 3 earth humans and let them almost run/control the alliance?

love the story

How many Times can you bring One person back to life.

@daleraney9456

Ай бұрын

Seems to be a recurring theme with these stories read by this AI voice. The antagonist is vaporized/atomized annnnnnd 5 minutes later they are fighting them again. And again.

@daleraney9456

Ай бұрын

Oh and regardless of who the original attackers are, it always boils down to 'The Void in one form or another that is the ultimate antagonist

@Red-Raider

Ай бұрын

Corvis is quite resilient!😂😂🤣🥲

@bobmiller7502

Ай бұрын

@@daleraney9456 the void is the arbitrator of the force (Tao/Dao) where true contentment and unconditional love lives

@davidbancroft2478

16 күн бұрын

@@daleraney9456 AI written rubbish

Decent enough story, I liked it. That being said, the author needs to work on keeping track of deaths of characters and other plot holes.

Controlled chaos? That's an oxymoron if I've ever heard one.

@bizbe4465

4 күн бұрын

It is but it does have a meaning. It's organized but just looks chaotic. With people running around. But with goals and objectives.

I liked the story.

How the Hell is Corvus still alive after the Quantum Forge atomized him?

@JackT1961

Ай бұрын

Remember Battlestar Galactica. But I don't know about you. But firing on an energy source that registers off the scale, not a bright idea

@Red-Raider

Ай бұрын

He was resurrected from a knife to the eye through the brain

@sondgerothja

6 күн бұрын

They lost me on his third death and saying how he was somehow at a camp when he’d been on the ground fighting…but also in the fleet…and atomized…again.

Wait just a few minutes back corvus was atomized how did he spring a trap

Again STOP! 500K years and just as they wake up it so happens mow the humans are noticed? Sigh...

@NoahFentz976

Ай бұрын

And the alien commander had a name tag spelled in English.

@mechag9499

Ай бұрын

And all the human tech worked normally. .. after 500K years. And the aliens who wanted to kill them boarded instead of just destroying the ship.

Good story, but it leaves some points open, what happened with Earth any ancestors left (other than from the Prometheus)? How has Corvus been revived?

It started off okay but when you got to the leviathan... nope. I'm done.

I like the story

19 minutes in and they have been attacked and found more humans also in stasis along with the ability to defeat the shields of a war class ship with a transport ship. Also the moon had no air yet the dead ship had enough air to bring people out of stasis.

So after 500000 years you can read the name Corvus on a suit ???? And he steaks english ???? Bullshit

@gravseyfam9627

23 күн бұрын

No it speaks English not sure how you would steak it

Wow this one alien just won't die. I know they killed him twice and yet he comes back again and again. In other words the book sucks.

Interesting… I’ve given this a listen.. now I’ll go back to reading Heinlein and Asimov

@DownhillAllTheWay

21 күн бұрын

Wow! Such an endorsement!

There is no continuity. The big bad warlord got vaporized and then was leading an attack 2 minutes later on new edan.... a girl who does a suicide mission and the main protagonist ran off without her suddenly had her in his arm and taking her to safety to be saved from her injuries. Out of all this the most unbeleiavble thing was that changing the fuel a machine uses suddenly gave the machine reality changing effects....... Either this is a fever dream of a 14 year old. Or some lefy leaning college student who doesn't think continuity matters as long as they can use as many words as possiable to try and sound smart.

@fookyuunsa678

Ай бұрын

It's ai written genius

@rurirotaru516

Ай бұрын

@@fookyuunsa678 and how does that change anything or that it's continuity is bad? Or that due to that the story is bad? How does your comment and attempted at an failed insult change these facts since what you said was obvious and doesn't just make you come off looking like a complete dumb ass?

@84kirbphillas

11 күн бұрын

You're possiably right.

another storie out of sequence - please fix this

The quantum forge is a behemoth yet they can move it in a shuttle

This is almost religious in nature. It's a story that gives obstacles just like the story encounters adversaries. Plot repetition, same phrases rearranged on a plane of story narrative with a smattering of bright story resolutions.

I advert started advert listening advert but advert too many advert adverts. Advert every advert 3-4 advert minutes advert.

Great story, but a million ads I mean come on bro greedy af

Wait up didn't corvis get vaporised in the forge room and then reappear later or was that just my imagination?

Ridiculous number of commercials.

Basically a Mass Effect Andromeda rehash

Some very noticeable holes in the storyline, not least the the confusing flip-flop of principal character genders and the unexplained reemergence of an atomized Corvus, Basically, there's way too many convenient discoveries and revelations used to feed continuity to the storyline.

500,000 years REALLY!

@ObesePuppies

18 күн бұрын

Would’ve been more believable if it was 499.003

Omg, slow down with all the advertising. Ridiculous.

@MISTSHIFTGaming

Ай бұрын

? I didn't have a single one here

Why is everyone named Hawkins

i lyk da story

The air erupted on an airless moon?

What's the title?

Commercial every 60 seconds

movie name please

There's some logical inconsistencies in it, and a few glaring chain-of-events mixups, but overall a decent story. If you use 1.25 playback speed, it flows better too.

@SavageMonkeyJizz

21 күн бұрын

That 1.25x..... Genius. Crazy how much of a difference it makes to how tense the story becomes.

the only thing more boring than reading an action story is listening to somebody else reading one

Too many frequent interruptions! Outta here

This needs to be a full length series of books

Please proofread. Many words sound almost alike.

Who reads it? From the outset, it sounds like an AI - in which case, I won't bother.

nice with the humans not being silly op at the start , though... last ditch hoppe for a whole civilization.. yee , that cargo hold would have hade not just purpose built hardware and heaps of compacted just ..junk.. for raw resource or 'scrap low tech improvisation' , but also what ever could been crammed in so.. nice plasma guns , here is my panther with excessive ablative heat shielding covering it and some nice uranium enhanced 'dumb' munitions , then agen the tech to make that kind of cryo tech.. the ark ship should have hade a nasty drone swarm hiding in the dark that sweep in the moment boarding ships nocked out the arks power wich actually not would have needed to been built at launch either , the ship should been told to snatch what astroids it could on the way in to enlarge material stores not to mention spending half a million years stable in system should have hade automated systems expand those basic resource redundancy and security efforts

I'm not sure where to start with this story's stupidity. Or even the shit that doesn't make sense. And don't get me started with the stupid characters making even stupider decisions...

Sorry I'm going to be a downer here, I stopped at 40 minutes. First if you go 500,000 years into the future, you are not going to run into a ship that launched 100 years before you who just so happened to also had a system failure and no one woke up for a long time. This has to be an AI base, and if you are going to do that you MUST edit it carefully. Promethius which launched 100 years before had more advanced weapons? What the hell is a colony ship doing with weapons in the first place? Fix the things that make no sense then record it using a humans voice, the AI voice is ok, but it stumbles in its pronunciation of words.

2 ADDS EVERY 6 minutes spoiled it BIG TIME for me had to keep clicking them off there's MAKING A LIVING and taking the PISH greedy greedy piggywiggy bad NO SUB from me no i don't want add blocker,,you ever read the small print,, bummer

Good grief youtube! Every two minutes an add. This sucks.

Excessive amounts of advertisements which broke up the story far more than necessary. AI voice cold and detracts from the story causing me to "zone out"

Man this is poorly written. They jump around to different setting with no explanation on how they got there, introduce equipment with no in depth description of what it is or where it came from. The story line has potential but the story has gaps bigger than the grand canyon

These ai generated stories man

I despise this thing that this author has for bring dead people back to life. It happens almost every story I read by this author it's ridiculous and asinine.

@omc2629

Ай бұрын

It's AI generated I think.

Doom and gloom tripe. The person surely is a card carrying democrat. Excessive

Utter nonsense.

Lots of diversity characters in this story. It’s kind of a turn off. I’d prefer to just hear normal names…

The battle was won... but the ....is far from over. Im done. Same story over and ever!

Tired 😢of his AI voice ruining every story.

@Lumberjack_king

Ай бұрын

It’s not that bad

@bannor_murphy369

Ай бұрын

Not ai

@richardhampshire8443

28 күн бұрын

Always one who has to moan grow up and f**k off this is a brilliant audiobook

@napster3456

28 күн бұрын

May be ai voice that's mono tone. But it's still a good listen

@bullshtman447

27 күн бұрын

I like it

I like the storie love syfi

I cannot stand AI voices... Ruins everything

This is very poorly written

Narrartor is pathetic. Mispronounces simple words. Story is dull and to mired in cliches. Gads it's bad.

How many times does Corvis have to be killed? Not to mention Zephir.

@art.is.life.eternal

26 күн бұрын

No different from every major Sci Fi franchise or movie, be it the Marvel characters, both good guys and bad guys, Star Wars, ditto, and on and on and on. It’s a holdover plot device from the early Saturday theater Movie Matinées where they showed serial Buck Rogers and many other 'cliffhanger' serial 'movie comics,' and you'd have to come to next week's matinée, to see your heroes brought back.

Far too many ads to enjoy 👎

I like the story