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  @sophiyabineesh40848 күн бұрын

  Amazingly explained ❤

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  @sophiyabineesh40848 күн бұрын

  Great video ❤

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  @geofftaylor754120 күн бұрын

  Lizard standing still…..Awaits the taste of passing food…..Ever so quietly ……Geoff Taylor NZ

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  @sushreenandini70575 ай бұрын

  Writing it as on 24 JAN 24' Im a 15 y/o 9th grader and i started Writing poems few months back and this is the first poem that I've written in the form of sonnet:) I was looking at the ceiling Pondering if i was healing Many storms came out of the blue And i was left having no clue Life is like hills and valleys for sure Its never going to smooth and pure In the road of life,much bends are there But we must mend our garden with love, sympathy and care In the tapestry of life There's a lot ups and downs But we should always have a smile on face just like a clown In the tapestry of life,there's much to endure There's alot ups and downs but It will take sometime to cure

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  @inziati5 ай бұрын

  Thank you for explaining the tips and informing us that you have eaten 😄

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  @KamraEkke6 ай бұрын

  Sir tell us best book on poetry means tips to write poems

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  @trevorwinn35629 ай бұрын

  Very good appraisal ...I think you would enjoy portals of perception...

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  @Zanele-hf2ip9 ай бұрын

  Photo of fife electricity of poews

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  @annahWill-vy3jl10 ай бұрын

  I want to write poetry but I fine it hard to write. What can I do?

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  @Serendip9810 ай бұрын

  I'm so happy I'm not Hemingway.

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  @Serendip9810 ай бұрын

  Interesting, I copied and pasted the article in order to re-read it quietly later. I saw that the English WP has a detailed article about Armitage, while the French seem to never have heard about him. Yet the few poems of him I read pleased me. Thanks for that discovery.

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  @boxfox294511 ай бұрын

  Maybe running or guitars arn't your thing either. Perhaps try a different hobby. 🤤🔊😤

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  @DrRCStone Жыл бұрын

  Pretty sure I just streamed Sausage of Happiness 18 just last night.

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  @DammikaChandani-ib4ku Жыл бұрын

  You are a great teacher. Well explained .

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  @sebastiaan.6493 Жыл бұрын

  Tanga is more fun to wright

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  @atsukorichards16752 ай бұрын

  Tanka (短歌), you mean?

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  @breakout4347 Жыл бұрын

  Paperblanks ❤❤

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  @bleppy6264 Жыл бұрын

  So, what do you do when you write a poem and it naturally has heavy use of these devices? Should I change it so it is more focused, even if I don't think it sounds as good? (I love these three poetic devices and like the way they sound when I write them, but don't know if I'm overdoing it since it's throughout the poem. Therefore, calling attention to things I may not have intended.)

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  @helenstangret8830 Жыл бұрын

  I can’t find the link that you refer to

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  @boxfox2945 Жыл бұрын

  😂😂😂

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  @kareemmoufrige9808 Жыл бұрын

  A truck by my hill taking every time my soil seeking depth in it

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  @the.spin.doctor Жыл бұрын

  are you coming back?

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  @the.spin.doctor Жыл бұрын

  are you coming back? do some shorts!

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  @meervi77 Жыл бұрын

  under leaf litter in the empire of the ants a beam of moonlight

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  @rebeccaoliver7977 Жыл бұрын

  So glad to stumble across this video. So very helpful. This is exactly what I have an incredible desire to learn more about and begin to incorporate into my writing craft. You mentioned this is your absolute favorite area of poetry, I'm hoping to find more of your videos on the same topics. It's always helpful to hear the same topic discussed in different ways. Seeing this video is 7 years old. Hope you're still posting. I'm your newest subscriber.

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  @deborahchinn2439 Жыл бұрын

  Thank you for your integrity and commitment to artistry and beauty rather than the almighty greed of commercial gain. Kudos and blessings!

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  @rockystandingart5046 Жыл бұрын

  Thank you ❤️

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  @wyattwahlgren8883 Жыл бұрын

  I'm not normally able to comment on YT, but this gives me an opportunity to share a Haiku that I've written recently. This is "Morning on Baker" The darkness recedes And a ray of sun hits peak A fish bites the bait

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  @Serendip9810 ай бұрын

  No title for a haiku.

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  @gianimatosss Жыл бұрын

  This is such a great video thank you!

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  @eduardmanecuta5350 Жыл бұрын

  Good haiku is very hard to write. Most of the time people reduce this great poetic art to a number of syllables. This is how a good haiku should look: Unfolding a map the cherry petals connect Europe and Japan Eduard Țară (Romania)

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  @Serendip9810 ай бұрын

  True, that's a good one.

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  @eduardmanecuta5350 Жыл бұрын

  Haiku is not easy, at all.

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  @eduardmanecuta5350 Жыл бұрын

  I apreciate that you try to make new commers to poetry (or to writing in general) to not give up and try and try again till they succeed. I can confirm. My writing improve leagues upon leagues from I first start.

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  @eduardmanecuta5350 Жыл бұрын

  Well, to write is not hard. Be it poetry, prose... To write a masterpiece, now that's a difrent story.

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  @TimGreig Жыл бұрын

  Charge of the light brigade is dactylic meter: stressed, 2 unstressed which gives it the galloping feel. Anyway, proud to be a Victorian where a lot of these amazing horseman came from. BTW I have theory that the Man from Snowy River was an aboriginal, which explains his build and his lack of recognition. Back in the day, claiming that the best and most fearless horseman was aboriginal was a non starter.

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  @vishnutandon7617 Жыл бұрын

  I read today you video transcript today and like to tell you that whatever you explained coincidently match with my life experience.Great regards and thanks for such inspiring video. Long LIVE.

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  @Sila_is_ice_queen Жыл бұрын

  thnk you so so much

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  @deborahchinn2439 Жыл бұрын

  My singular complaint is that I am only now discovering your lovely, articulate and helpful channel! Thank you, sir!

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  @KuchBhi-nb6zk Жыл бұрын

  "Sausage of happiness" is an incredibly moving image

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  @nilahrios531 Жыл бұрын

  😂

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  @sjinvestors250 Жыл бұрын

  CAn you give me list of poetry books that I can read

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  @sjinvestors250 Жыл бұрын

  Nice

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  @meervi77 Жыл бұрын

  leaving my body then getting small even smaller ion glow of atoms

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  @awoman9750 Жыл бұрын

  The notion that we should scrap random association as a means of metaphor discovery is nonsense. I have never tried it but will now, since this is a technique that engages the mind instead of sensoring it, and poets I know who do use it, do so with impressive results.

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  @Feejakka Жыл бұрын

  Please don’t apologise for the depth, length and complexity of your content! It is so GOOD to listen as you elucidate more advanced poetry techniques, and it’s super helpful for those of us who have been writing poetry for a while but still want to learn & open up new ground (which means sifting through 100s of articles full of “tips for beginner poets” just to find 1 with new & helpful info 😅). So thank you!

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  @ab562 Жыл бұрын

  Thanks a lot for your videos! (Do you have a podcast too? It might make more sense than talking in front of the camera?)

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  @nononouh Жыл бұрын

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  @kavanpuranik98 Жыл бұрын

  Can you analyse the listeners by Walter de la Mare?

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  @majaraiahysael7178 Жыл бұрын

  You're so good at explaining sir, thanks the knowledge

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  @bellkelly4517 Жыл бұрын

  💌 I dared to eat anything ( edible ) with people around after listening to your sharings . I will "heck care "of what others think. I will just enjoy every bit of what I am eating no matter where I am . Thanks for " easing me off " about always being so "concerned "about what others are thinking of what I am doing. I will read up this poem , many many thanks 💝💝💝. 😋🍑🍑🍑😋. Have a happy day ahead 😘. ( 23.10.2022 )

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  @BestNoklexthepoet Жыл бұрын

  Where can post original poem and get practical input on how to improve our writing?

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  @a.f.m.4134 Жыл бұрын

  This was a lovely and helpful video! Glad I found your channel even though it seems to be closed now.