Do what if Palpatine didn't exist part 2

Part one was really good I liked it a lot, and I do think you should make a part two. I think other people would like it as well.

Mace Windu went for the glory. When Anakin told him he did not hesitate to move on him... he should have waited and planned it better, he could have waited and let Palpatine think Anakin did not tell the jedi with the Jedi council and the end of grievous the Jedi and the republic could have removed him. They were impatient and should have not been.

Ok, a couple things... 1. A career politician isn't going to be so blatant as to loudly announce the idea of profiting off the spoils of war. They'd probably say something more along the lines of "The Trade Federation has crossed a line and committed an act of war! We must respond in kind, and show them what happens when they mess with the Galactic Republic!" 2. The Trade Federation was coerced to attack Naboo by Palpatine, under the pretense of protest against the increasing trade tariffs, which were also put into place by Palpatine. Plageuis had come up with most of the plan, but without his man on the inside it wouldn't come to fruition. 3. Dooku didn't fall until just after the events of TPM. Qui-Gon Jin was the last thing anchoring him in the light side, and his death (and the death of Sifo-Dyas) was the catalyst for Dooku's fall. He wouldn't have been Plageuis's apprentice at the time. The most likely pick for Plageuis's apprentice would be Maul, however Maul's lack of recognized status and preference to combat over diplomacy would make him a poor choice for the kind of manipulations Plageuis would have had in mind. And Jar Jar wouldn't work even if you were willing to work that fan theory in, because it's far more likely that Darth Gallows would be non-Banite or from a diverging line. So in all likelihood you'd have to make an OC for this, or have Plageuis wait on taking an apprentice until he can scoop up Anakin (which would be a lot more likely with Palpatine not in the picture).

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Hey, thanks for the feedback! I can only get better through you guys

Y’all are the best!! Thank you 🙏 your comments make me extremely motivated

Bro made his thesis paper about Star Wars

Maybe hold back the use of the thesaurus a little. But very good

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Thanks for the feedback!

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@@StarWarsKingdom please don't take it the wrong way I'm not suggesting anything is wrong with the story but if English isn't your 1st language it maybe hard to understand some of the words. And like I said good story well done 👍👍

On this alternate timeline history how did Dooku get the sand people to kill Aniken’s mom and then kill them afterwards? This almost sounds like the story of how Tarkan became evil and saying after Vader killed Tarkan son with the force and then staged it to make it look like the rebels did it under the Command of Emperor Palpatine, Due to the fact that Tarkan was refusing the emperor orders to commit genocide on the rebel planets At first+ Tarkan son defected from the empire and Palpatine was able to take advantage of the rumor that rebels and kidnapped his son

the chosen one was to bring balance , those who are in balance with the force are able to sense everything that why the Jedi failed in their role they were not in balance

Will they be a part 2

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I don’t mind continuing the story if y’all want me to!

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@@StarWarsKingdom yes please

Bro was gripping the thesaurus with "grandiloquence". Cool story tho. Hope for part 2

The clone wars would still happen because of Plagues it was his plan originally but the war would be very different

Still waiting for part 2 :')

If palpatine never existed Anakin would become the greatest Jedi to exist.

This is the most yappy AI I've ever heard. They're pulling out all the big boy words.

great story but why does it feel like it was written by chat gpt lmao. Waaay too many 'strong' words used for no reason to the point where it gets annoying

My dude, did you buttfuck a thesaurus to write this script? I appreciated good word choice but the story got bogged down in the performative vocab. Avarice, enigma, insidious started hitting the ear wrong after the 6th-7th time. Other than that, well done!

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