Issue here is the red wedding was able to happen because Jamie was sent back to Tywin to set the plan in motion. If intercepted by Jon there is no red wedding. Frey would not have made a move without Tywins backing. Same with Roose.

@Jackthgun

2 ай бұрын

Robb also sleep with Jayne on the night he got the news of the sack of winterfall so that is too story is fun however

@user-qv4bp7vg6u

2 ай бұрын

Why do y'll think is this magnificent being? JM told jon in book 1 after he deserted that Robb has better swordsmen than him in his camp & over 20k men, do you really think his one sword can make a diff?

@georged7059

2 ай бұрын

Another issue is that snow is a bastard name if Jon were made legitimate then he wouldn’t be of house snow as the name snow is for bastards, white stark could work as there was a stark branch family named house grey stark and it isn’t hard to imagine Jon wanting ghost as his sigil

@Jackthgun

2 ай бұрын

@@georged7059 Jon Whitestark or Whirewolf although Bloodraven and Bittersteel stayed Rivers formally

Brilliant opening man, my only small criticism is that making John legitimate whilst making his house name "Snow" wouldn't stick well due to bustards still being called snow. Seen some folk use "Grey stark" but they rebelled before. Maybe House White Stark, House Ghost or something similar that could work better. 👍

@stfuioncare2520

2 ай бұрын

House Ghost is 🔥 what you think his sigil would be i think either faded direwolf or direwolf inside a skull

@rileyh520

2 ай бұрын

I was thinking House Black or Blackstark

@JennyZinaTavares

2 ай бұрын

If I recall, the new house lord chooses his own name.

@maxcritchley619

2 ай бұрын

​@@stfuioncare2520 the stark sigil is a grey direwolf on white Jon should have a white direwolf on grey like how the blackfyres inverted the targ colours.

@mattelwood980

2 ай бұрын

House Ghost

Please rename John’s house

Very interesting channel. A lot of fan fiction channels but this one feels like your listening to a audio book. Maybe it’s because I don’t like reading so I did asoiaf on audiobooks. So this is kind of like reading a book you’ve read before but experiencing it for the first time, if that makes any sense. Hope the channel does well and you keep up the interesting ideas

Great work as always Waiting for episode 2

This is really good. Keep up the great work. 👍 Can’t wait for the next part. Peace ✌🏻

Quite a good work mate. Keep it up ... Waiting for next part

Love it the red wedding was so unexpected again keep it up 👍🏽 waiting for episode 2

This is some pretty interesting fanfic you e got going here. Anxiously waiting for the next parts!

I actually really enjoyed this!

probably some of the best GoT fan fictions iv'e seen. i'd love to help out if possible

How can Jon be Robb’s heir if he now has is own house?

@Monizious

2 ай бұрын

It’s a bastard branch like the Blackfyre. Jon is legitimize which means he’s the next heir after Robb and before Bran.

@Prilliyo

15 күн бұрын

And it's cool

I,love how most people agree with Alys and Jon be ship together and looking forward to their relationship. I hope Jon house is name Whitewolf then snow.

@kittykatt7652

2 ай бұрын

I believe a house bears the family name: Baratheon, Lannister. Tully.... If Jon were to be legitimized he would be a Stark. The direwolf is already a sigil of the house. To make up some kind of wolf name would be pointless.

waiting for the second one

Can't wait for part 2

This is really good keep it up

3 minutes in and already hooked

6:30 Jon being made the Robb's heir make no sense since it was not established that Winterfal was taken by Grayjoys by that point and for all intents and purposes still has 2 brother (Bran and Rickon). I Robb decides not to kill Lord Karstark and send him home, he wouldn't send home also the Karstark army, since it represented about a 1/10 of the Northern Army and they needed "all the man they could muster". Now with Lord Karstark and a small retinue returning home with Caitlin in tow, there wouldn't be a need to sent Ramsey to take back to Winterfal (by Robb and Roose) since this could be done by a more senior member of Robb's staff and this would have be seen as a mission of great honor by Lord Karstark keeping him inline while also not allowing Roose Bolton any chance to take Winterfal... In the books, Ramsey managed to take Winterfal by Killing Ser Rodrick Cassel (who was trying to retake winterfal from Ironborn) but if Lord Karstark was in command and he had his retinue, it would have been considerably harder for the small Bolton contingent to betray the Starks, kill all commanders and sack Winterfall. And even if they did that, it would have been very likely that news of the action reached Robb and the the Red wending might not have happen since, most likely he would have killed Lord Bolton for treason...

Just subscribed this was really good

I can give you one line answer. "He will be killed at the red wedding".

Just a question Where is Ghost?

The only bad thing is he would have never gotten longclaw

Interesting idea but too rushed and as other comments already said with Jamie still being a prisoner the red wedding wouldn't accour. Also House Snow is a stupid idea, either make him a Stark or come up with a better alternative.

Hey, I love your videos and would love to discuss with you about an idea I had that may make them more unique and have more feeling through the use of a game engine to create cinematics rather than just static pictures from the show. (P.S. I know this kinda reads like a scam but I'm genuinely very enthusiastic about this)

This is fun and I loved it, A few notes: -Jeor Mormont probably wouldn’t declare the arrest of Joffrey as that is against the vows lol -House Snow might cause some confusion as all bastards are named snow -and Jon wouldn’t be the heir as at that point Rickon and Bran aren’t alive. Primogeniture would take precedent

@mattiasandersson8693

2 ай бұрын

Since robb legitimizes jon here, jon is now the second oldest legitimate stark child. So he is by default the heir until robb and jeyne produce a son

@SvenDzahov

2 ай бұрын

@@mattiasandersson8693 still due to primogeniture, it would pass it bran. Legitimate bastards would still be bastards, they can just now inherent.

@mattiasandersson8693

2 ай бұрын

@@SvenDzahov hmm. didn´t know it worked like that. you learn something new everyday I guess

@SvenDzahov

2 ай бұрын

@@mattiasandersson8693 it’s contested ofc all inheritance was lol. Uncles, cousins, aunts, sisters, all come out of the woodwork the second a title is up for contention

More!!!

Katlyn would never say its good to see you jon 😂😂😂😂😂

Didn't john already say the words before Rob marched south??

Jeor gave Longclaw to Jon after his vows were taken.

I thought the opening text said the wife comes home lol

Only Sam would be able to leave the wall with Jon those other guys were arrested and cannot leave at will

House Snow can’t happen as it’s the bastard name Jon would choose his house name or could go with Stark but have different banners like white wolf on grey field

Yooo 2nd part BUT change the jon getting his own house thing

Sam isn't the oldest son

Ser Jamie and Brienne would carve up Jon and the rest of those idiot's like walnut pie

nice job some alternative story ideas are fun to imagine...but there are major problems with the fan fic...first, since this is a jon snow focused story WHERE IS GHOST?! u pulleda david and dan and without an explanation pulled away half of jons power and what makes him unique...also ur all over the time line...jon doesnt have long claw before he takes his vows...ned isnt imprisoned for that matter...cat doesnt release jaime til after she finds out bran n rickon are dead...robb hooks up with jane westerling cuz hes upset about bran and rikon being killed and loosing winterfell...after which the freys leave robb also roose bolton accepts tywins scheme after he sees the karstarks abandon robb...before all that robb was winning and his forces were strong and single minded...if in your fan fic the only alternative story line is jon leaving the nights watch all other story lines should remain the same unless directly impacted by his being present in either winterfell with bran or up in the riverlands with robb...mishmashing stories from clash of kings and storm of swords changing up the sequence of events that are all interlinked makes no sense...but hey its fan fic so do what u want but back things up with reason...and please give jon all his power back i.e GHOST

Brienne will make short work of Jon tbh😂

@melkormorgothbauglir.4848

2 ай бұрын

Put some respect on Jons name he'd last a while but yeah he doesn't stand much of a chance.

house snow is a shitty name