This is why you should always have a cleric or paladin in your party.

@normal_human_female

2 жыл бұрын

I always grab a cleric or a favored soul... definitely need one for spooky corpsie places

Wow, this cliff hanger just picks right back up, doesn't it? Probably one of the best stories I've heard in a while!

The moment they moved the globe and the entrance changed i thought that each golden dot was another entrance to an extra dimensional location. They are in the extra dimensional labyrinth. Play with the globe more damit. Scientific experimintation.

@joshwaggoner1301

3 жыл бұрын

You... You're smart. You pay attention. You're literally the only person to figure it out. I like you.

@anthonypecha6714

3 жыл бұрын

@@joshwaggoner1301 appreciated sir. I love the writing. So i like you too. Thank you.

@IW3527

3 жыл бұрын

@@joshwaggoner1301 I'm so glad you chimed in and I didn't look at the comments beforehand. Great work, I really like this short story, definitely one of the best I've found in a while!

@candicemonique5927

Жыл бұрын

I’m a year late. I just found Josh Waggoner’s stories this week, but yeah I thought the same this.

Oh, this is just Grandfather Nurgle. Embrace entropy, for the Grandfather!

@axelNodvon2047

3 жыл бұрын

Long live decay!!!

excellent story - as I have been to Cuzco, Peru - Sacsayhuaman, Machu Picchu and Lake Titicaca...best trip ever, planes, trains, buses...

I think They somehow connected to Atlantis. This “tomb” is some attempt at recreating the hotel. And Atlantis is where the vampires like Abigail originally came from.

Excellent story as expected from Joshua Waggoner. Although I’ve heard it before the amazing narration by NaturesTemper had me listening to it again, making it almost brand new in a way only his ability can. Awesomely done! Thank you both very much!

Yes! I listened to the first one yesterday and it was amazing. I can't wait to see how this one goes.

@socamerc420

3 жыл бұрын

Same 😁

@jonkessel1649

3 жыл бұрын

Thay never go well at the end

The Men of Letters have entered the chat...

@joshuaseidel4109

3 жыл бұрын

It’s the Foundation m8

Nice! Vampires combined with ancient technological civilizations. I would never have thought of that.

Great great story, i was onto it as soon as i knew Mr Joshua Waggoner wrote it! Man ! He writes brilliant stories Well done NT for a terrific narration.

Damn it I was really hoping the girl would survive and they would both go on to find Atlantis or something else from the globe

@greatestytcommentator

Жыл бұрын

☆☆☆SPOILER☆☆☆☆

This part of the story is emotional and intense, but awesome. My heart was racing during the entire second half. ❤️❤️❤️

Oh he's got an arm off!

Another great story.. thanks again for keeping me entertained so well brother love the narrations too .. excellent work my dude

It's not point 38 it's just a 38 and to the writter ammo can expire but say 38 rounds stored inside a house would be good for 50 years even more I've shot ammo that was several decades old

@KWJackson

3 жыл бұрын

And dynamite doesn't fracture rock unless its inside it. It was so well written that I don't care that much.

@willrichtor

3 жыл бұрын

It is "point 38," we just truncate it when we speak. Shortening things is a hallmark of American English, in both the spoken and written forms. Ammo SHOULD last quite some time but it's not unheard of for it to go bad even inside a house in a short period. Some batches just suck, whether it's problems with the brass, primers or powder. That's why it's batch numbered, so they can track down possible problems in the manufacturing process. I'm imagining the character buying an old Charter Arms .38 with a plastic bag of old tarnished ammo, in an old leather fanny pack with a broken strap.

@masterstoner666

3 жыл бұрын

@@willrichtor um not is not a point 45 point 38 IRS like hearing some one say 3.5.7. Magnum it's like no is 357 magnum it's one of those things written one way spoken another

@willrichtor

3 жыл бұрын

@@masterstoner666 Did you even read anything I wrote? It IS POINT 38, and point 45, or 38 hundredths or 45 hundredths, it's just that in America we tend to arbitrarily shorten things from their proper spelling and/or pronunciation. If it weren't point 38 there wouldn't be a point in front of it, and it's not incorrect to say point 38 - however it IS incorrect to drop the point and just say 38, but it's accepted. There's a difference between correct and acceptable in terms of language. This is one reason we have so many problems communicating with other English speaking nationalities, we all have our own ways of bastardizing things. But in the end, .38 is not 38 and .45 is not 45, you're just dropping either the point from the front or the hundredths from the rear because it's customary, not because it's correct.

@willrichtor

3 жыл бұрын

@@masterstoner666 And it wouldn't be like saying 3.5.7. where did you even jump to that? There's a point in front of .357 just like the others, it would apply the exact same way. Point three five seven. Three hundred fifty seven hundredths.

You didn't think the Incan Empire was built by people now did you?

@candicemonique5927

Жыл бұрын

Why not?

I smell a awesome new series coming our way!

@joshwaggoner1301

3 жыл бұрын

It's a Werewolves are Assholes/Worst Hotel/Worstverse side story. Same series, different characters.

@DopoOrochi

3 жыл бұрын

Sweet!

@axelNodvon2047

3 жыл бұрын

@@joshwaggoner1301 Same world/universe?

Umm, ammunition can and has lasted a century and was still good. I have fired cartridges that were 25 years old without any issues.

@joshwaggoner1301

3 жыл бұрын

Ammo that's been poorly packed, subjected to long term storage in poor conditions(such as in the cylinder of a revolver in a closet with who knows what else), subjected to rapid change in elevation (Peru is 11,000' above sea level), temperature, and humidity (Peru is an equatorial proximate country with extreme heat and humidity), and then walked unprotected through a rainforest can easily be compromised. Especially the styphnate in the primers, which is extremely susceptible to adverse conditions. I've seen whole boxes of rounds ruined from less. If you don't know anything about guns or ammo, what term would you use the describe that occurrence?

@m17x4v7

3 жыл бұрын

Depending on storage

@cjlooklin1914

3 жыл бұрын

This story is full of things that don't make sense. Not just the little details ment to misdirect you, but literal gaping plot holes. Three archeologists and not one of them know that if there's no oxygen then there's no exit? Really? They saw all that fucked up shit and didn't try turning around? If they could breathe in the upper levels then that means the entrance was still up there too. Hell, how is someone with enough discipline to get a god damn doctorate, irresponsible enough to destroy a priceless ancient artifact and NOT expect to loose all credibility in there field? One or two dumb illogical actions are fine for a horror story but this was entirely too much. I couldn't even properly enjoy it, but everyone else seems to like just fine.

@joshwaggoner1301

3 жыл бұрын

@@cjlooklin1914 First, who said Terry was an actual archeologist? Never mind a PhD. Second, between two separate narrators and literally hundreds of comments, only one person figured out the exit dilemma, and it wasn't you. So I'm pretty sure you didn't pay as much attention as you think you did to know what was there to "misdirect" you or not. Third, something isn't a plot hole just because it doesn't adhere to your own personal expectations or assumptions about what or how something or someone ought to be. It is ONLY a gap or inconsistency in the continuity of the story. You might consider learning the difference between plot hole and incredulity before entering into the professional critic job market. And fourthly, you should listen to James Randy's matchbox story if you're under the impression that having a PhD makes someone mentally infallible, especially under duress.

@axelNodvon2047

3 жыл бұрын

@@cjlooklin1914 Didn’t the author made a note about detail inconsistencies at the beginning of the first video

I remember the tool from worst hotel that means somewhere in this realm of which you are pondering around in I might get to hear some more werewolf Tales thanks man for looking out

@jackdurden466

3 жыл бұрын

I am fairly certain they all coincide at some point, but I truly cannot be absolutely sure.

Great narration! Made me feel short of breath!

Eeegads 😱!! I don't recommend eating during this. 🤢. Great story as usual Joshua and excellent narration as usual Skott. ✌️🌹

Great story and narration!!

Thx for the link to the wolf video. I watched it. Loved this one too. ❤

Good story. Can’t wait until the next one

YO!!! It’s the metal from the worst hotel isn’t it?

So the vampires are because of the people who stole the metal made Atlantis then cause they couldn't get more of it tried to make it themselves and instead made whatever infection that makes you into a vampire now this is getting to be a cool world your building

I just have to say this- Terry didn’t have to die a horrible death, she had a knife after all. Lol, sorry, I’m just being picky I guess. Love this series though. Really interesting and that pilot and his pecker was Funny AF!!😆

What's happened to my memory. I didnt realize it until I was 3/4 of the way thru part 2 that I had listened to this before. Oh well, I still enjoyed it.

THIS STORY WAS FU€KING AWESOME!!! 🤩👏👏👏 *Adding to my “Favorites” playlist”*

i’m so ready!! Let’s Go!!

Thank you once again Joshua and Skot 👏 Skot your voice acting always amazes me 🤗 I truly forget sometimes that it's just one person. I really liked the female character's voice. It was very distinct from past character's👍 And Joshua I saw what you did at the end there 😉 Everything is connected in your worlds. How you keep it all straight I don't know, but I bet you're a hell of a chess player!

@jackdurden466

3 жыл бұрын

It definitely took me a few stories to realize that! I honestly thought that he had multiple narrators come in! He could do damn well in Hollywood as a voice over and animation character/characters.

The SCP Foundation at the end

Awesome!

Your voice is wonderful as you a brother to one of my favorite narrators 😊he is new but has also such a beautiful voice like you and your stories are even better than his☺️

Timed this just about perfectly

Damn great story really well done anymore on the way?🤔🤨😳 he took some items from the dug site greatest reading and writing respect 💯👌✊

I've been looking forward to the second part after how great the first part was. Thanks NaturesTemper.

@joehough9424

3 жыл бұрын

Awwwsome 👍 👍 👍

What a great story.

Awesome

Nobody thinks about bio hazards. Was legit the first thing I thought of when they went in with them describing the dust.

Sure just go stay at the Worst Motel 🏨😁

Thank you

Again, amazing work Skott🥰🤟🤗 Have an awesome evening sweety. Love, Jess NC USA P.S. I'm happy to see you have someone you love. Congratulations to the both of you. I wish you two the very best.

@NaturesTemper

3 жыл бұрын

Can I meet her? Cause this is news to me!

@XsyCon

3 жыл бұрын

@@NaturesTemper lol

@joshwaggoner1301

3 жыл бұрын

@@NaturesTemper You cheating on me Skott? What the hell man? I thought we had something special.

You deserve much more subs 🤷‍♀️🤔

Joshua Waggoner is such a good writer, damn this is good!

Damn.... Poor Thierry and Sandy... Rip. Really liked them 😟😥

There is no expiration date on ammunition. In the army we used rounds that were manufactured before Vietnam.

@joshwaggoner1301

3 жыл бұрын

Ammo that's been poorly packed, subjected to long term storage in poor conditions(such as in the cylinder of a revolver in a closet with who knows what else), subjected to rapid change in elevation (Peru is 11,000' above sea level), temperature, and humidity (Peru is an equatorial proximate country with extreme heat and humidity), and then walked unprotected through a rainforest can easily be compromised. Especially the styphnate in the primers, which is extremely susceptible to adverse conditions. I've seen whole boxes of rounds ruined from less. If you don't know anything about guns or ammo, what term would you use the describe that occurrence?

@jakeknight8406

3 жыл бұрын

@@joshwaggoner1301 very awesome story

@andrewp4379

3 жыл бұрын

That were properly stored and packaged. I was also in the military for 9 years as a mortar man. I’ve used really old rounds from pre Vietnam era that barely got themselves out of the tube. Some didn’t even do that. And they were stored in cardboard tubes wrapped in beeswax that was also inside another metal box that was waterproof. So time does has its affect on ammunition. Just because your experience with it says otherwise doesn’t make it a fact across the board. Plus, the ammo was in a revolver that was packed around through a rainforest and who knows what else to get to where it was in the tomb

Yah get that pistol ready, might have to cap some goo!

I figured it out i heard it on dr creepens channel

Oh God yes finally

Are there more stories in this universe?

Yay!

Hmm 🤔 perhaps I should run a game where the players are tomb robbers.

Anyone else think it sounds like he was found by the SCP Foundation?

@barkingbunny2928

Жыл бұрын

It soundex more like Hotel staffnsince they were are at dimensional port..

Ammunition doesn't expire though

@joshwaggoner1301

3 жыл бұрын

Ammo that's been poorly packed, subjected to long term storage in poor conditions(such as in the cylinder of a revolver in a closet with who knows what else), subjected to rapid change in elevation (Peru is 11,000' above sea level), temperature, and humidity (Peru is an equatorial proximate country with extreme heat and humidity), and then walked unprotected through a rainforest can easily be compromised. Especially the styphnate in the primers, which is extremely susceptible to adverse conditions. I've seen whole boxes of rounds ruined from less. If you don't know anything about guns or ammo, what term would you use the describe that occurrence?

🔥🔥🔥🔥

You messed with wrong tomb foo!

👍

I love this story. Moar pls.

Why they didn't turn around and just blow the door off I don't know

@neckcutter2592

3 жыл бұрын

That's what I was wondering

@joshwaggoner1301

3 жыл бұрын

Because you didn't pay close enough attention.

@andrewp4379

3 жыл бұрын

What josh said lol. Listen to it again and ask yourself those same questions.

@danielstellmon5330

3 жыл бұрын

Hint: the globe.

@mickydmisfit1987

3 жыл бұрын

So the spinning of the globe changes the entrance? similar to the worst hotel entrance?

I'm confused as to how they got lost?

@danielstellmon5330

3 жыл бұрын

The author replied to another comment. It was when the moved the globe, the globe changed the tunnel.

It makes me crazy that they’ll totally ignore the amazing find, and not putting the relics to use. Those types of finds are possibly very very useful, for so many reasons. It’s just a story I guess.

Wich part?No you hava a new fan👍❤❤🙋‍♀️

He said to look for the details that don't add up and i don't have a good memory. The chamber should be pitch black so how could they see that well and in the end it said they took off there backpacks to fit through the tunnel so where did they get the dynamite. I know technically taking off there backpack doesnt mean they put it down but if so they didn't take the bag with dynamite.

@joshwaggoner1301

3 жыл бұрын

Lamps and flashlights were mentioned several times, along with it becoming increasingly difficult to see as the story progresses. And you're making a huge jump in logic with "They said they took off their backpacks, taking off doesn't mean putting down, therefore they must have chose to abandon the one with the explosives." The syllogism's conclusion doesn't follow its premises. You'll have to look for much smaller details before you're on the right track.

@forthehonorforge4840

3 жыл бұрын

@Josh Waggoner I'm wondering why the protagonist was friends with these folks in the first place, why they referred to "university" like they were from the UK, and if so how they got their hands on a pew pew device. Though you do mention "west coast" so that's a thing. Why so much spicy sticks (not to mention the complete lack of compression stress reflecting off the subterranean walls)? Why on earth they would even need to be smuggled in country. Who even has contacts like that in academia? ... *Looks back at 2020 and remembers a certain recent Times Magazine article* Fine. It checks out. Weirder things are real.

@joshwaggoner1301

3 жыл бұрын

@@forthehonorforge4840 The problem I see is you're looking just deep enough to find questions but not the answers. And others you can't find because you're shooting yourself in the foot with assumptions. Who said Terry himself was an academic in any formal capacity? Have you ever traveled out of country? Are you familiar with the time it takes to secure a travel visa and passport along with the necessary inoculations? A time critical factor was established. If the location was uncovered by a wild fire then human foot traffic is more likely, especially given Terry had already stumbled across it on his own once before by accident. What occupation might be assumed of someone who frequents archeologically rich areas, has a working knowledge of archeology, and has shady friends in the cargo business with secret hatches in their cargo plane? Knowing this and that museums don't exclusively procure their exhibits by entirely ethical means might give you some insight into how the protagonist might have someone like Terry in their social circle. And last, have you made the mistake of assuming that every single event occurred exactly as it was described as cautioned against in the preface? As both craftsman and an instructor I can tell you from decades of experience that you can show and explain something to someone who's paying complete and total attention in perfect detail. And by the time you ask them if they understand they've already forgotten crucial details and entire processes within that short amount of time and replaced it with something you never showed them or told them to do at all. Now account for the fact that literally every time you remember something you alter that memory to some degree. So, weeks after traumatic, inexplicable event, how reliable should it be assumed that this person's memory is concerning an area they aren't familiar with such as explosives? Then also consider your own memory in this instance concerning your statement about the UK and the procurement of the gun. In the time it took you to make this comment you've already completely forgotten about the line "after I graduated I was brought on by a museum in the US." Either your lack of attention or the fallibility of your memory raised a question that the story itself already answered. Saying "in the US" is a clear indication they were previously outside of the US. Explaining both the British vernacular "university" and the availability of pistols to them. If you think deeper, which state occupies the majority of the west cost? A particular state with extremely stringent gun and ammo laws. One that makes the second hand purchase of a sketchy revolver and badly repacked ammo that would be susceptible to compromise by adverse conditions much more likely.

@forthehonorforge4840

3 жыл бұрын

Thanks for the response and insight Josh. And you are right, memory editing is a very real problem in real life and is the reason why gaslighting and psychological abuse is so effective. (I am not accusing you of that. It's just that I have experienced it extensively throughout my life so I am familiar with the concept and effect). Next, I didn't pay close enough attention to some of the details you mentioned, so I did miss the part about the location of the museum the protagonist worked at. As for my background, I am a blacksmith and occasionally do some craft instruction as well. I am also a professional archaeologist, have years of overseas travel experience, I did some archaeological work in Peru (northern coastal side) and I do live in the particularly large west coast state you mentioned. So all those concepts you mention I am very familiar with and can confirm some of what you describe, including working in burned forests. As for adventure archaeology, maybe I'm just too experienced or jaded having done a lot and yet not shared it all in a timely manner but even the dangerous or perilous aspects usually aren't that exciting and are more frustrating or depressing than exhilarating. But that's just my experience. And I do look forward to more experience, as well as hearing more of your very well written stories. I'm binging on them today.

@joshwaggoner1301

3 жыл бұрын

@@forthehonorforge4840 I have to point out ever now and then that if it's acceptable to critique writing then it's acceptable to critique reading or listening. In this case I'd say you've missed the entire spirit of the story, as a spoof, a parody of the action archaeology genre. It very literally starts off with the protagonist inspecting an extremely old, fibrous material. If you know anything about archeology then you should understand the significance of that alone. The rest of the story follows the levels of absurdity it takes for situations like what we see in the genre to actually unfold. There's a great deal of effort poured into communicating that the protagonist is extremely unqualified for what they're doing. This continues all the way to the end, where they're facing legal recourse for having sunk into the country. It's all been about inserting reality into what can fairly be described as videogame logic. So my impression is that when you say you're jaded because of your occupation, once you heard "archeology" you immediately began looking for inaccuracies in the representation, and you missed crucial details because of it. And I say this as someone who works within the realm of archeology from time to time as a recreationist. It's important when writing a story to not just understand the expert perspective (in this case an archeologist) but also the layman's perspective. Pandering too much to the experts so it can demonstrate the wealth of knowledge the author has can harm the story overall. Just read pretty much any story written by an ex member of the military about something military related to see what I mean. The average person isn't going to know everything single bit of jargon or procedure to comprehend a conversation between specialists. There's a video on here somewhere, I can't remember the channel, but it's something like "Why swords are never accurate in historical movies" or something. And just that alone can give a lot of insight into how total accuracy and good storytelling can clash. Anyway, the point is there's a reason it's said that remaining objective is one of the hardest things to do. Training ourselves out of bias and presupposition isn't easy. Just look at how many gun nuts get worked up over a fictional character saying "expire" instead of what actually happened.

I finally got to see part 2 of this story and now that I get to the end of this story Its like it will have more sequels Oh man I have many questions

@joshwaggoner1301

Жыл бұрын

A lot of stuff gets explained collectively in Werewolves are Assholes, Worst Hotel, and I Ride for Cerber. And the book I'm writing, Magenta Valley, isn't necessarily a sequel to this story, but is based on the tool that was taken from the underground city.

Nyc still here

I love how he says anything would be helpful to know about the lost culture when there’s tons of evidence currently supporting lost cultures but sciencesBasically write them off saying their evidence doesn’t have enough evidence so they couldn’t have existed

@joshwaggoner1301

3 жыл бұрын

"Their evidence doesn't have enough evidence" I feel is a sentence that desperately needs restructuring. Evidence is just evidence. It doesn't contain denominational layers of nested evidence. Evidence is an objectively verifiable fact indicative of and/or exclusively concordant with one possibly over all others. According to Hitchens' razor, positive claims require positive evidence, extraordinary claims require extraordinary evidence, and claims made without sufficient evidence can be dismissed without evidence. We can say that there is the possibility that a lost civilization may exist without making too extraordinary of a claim. Even though the likelihood of that has diminished greatly over the years with exploration aided by better means of transportation and satellite mapping. However, there are several problems with this. First of which being that we have structures like the pyramids that were being built when mammoths were still alive. And we have nearly continuous records of the Egyptian kingdom both from the Egyptians and surrounding cultures as well as with even older civilizations like Sumeria. And civilization, by definition, is an advanced stage of development. So they would therefore be large and leave a large, detectable footprint. So it would be very, very different for a civilization of any kind that adheres to its own definition to just be "lost". And as we go there are fewer and fewer cracks for a hypothetical lost civilization to slip through. So I do have to reject your assertion that there's "tons of evidence." Now if you're strictly speaking about culture, then most of them are lost because cultures change and integrate with one another over time. The culture of the US from 1776 is lost. It no longer exists. US culture today would be unrecognizable to someone from that time and that's just within less than 300 years. So your statement that there are lost cultures are evident is only true is we use a hard definition of the word and don't use it interchangeably with "civilization", which I feel was your original intention.

@The_Custos

3 жыл бұрын

@@joshwaggoner1301 there is evidence of giants, but it's been ignored and "lost". Sepehr covers it.

@joshwaggoner1301

3 жыл бұрын

@@The_Custos No, there isn't. If there was anthropologists would be beating each other to death with sticks to get it. Evidence is an objectively verifiable fact indicative of and/or exclusively concordant with one possibility or explanation over any other. Saying "There's evidence but it's being lost and hidden" isn't a valid argument. As Hitchens said, extraordinary claims require extraordinary evidence. If you don't have it then the claim can be easily dismissed. And there's always some kind of moronic conspiracy as to why nobody can produce the hard evidence. "The government is hiding it because if the general population knew X was real then more people would believe the Bible" or something. Because that's literally the crux of the flat Earth argument. "The Bible says the earth is flat so it is definitely flat and the deep state global elites are conspiring to make everyone think the earth is spherical to turn them away from God." So to say the "evidence" is being hidden, you would have to have a motive behind way the "evidence" is being deliberately hidden, and I can't imagine it's going to make a whole lot of sense. So how do you explain why we haven't seen these "giants" represented in the hominid fossil record? Which is one of the the MOST complete fossil records that's ever been assembled. Why do we not see a preponderance of fossils and bones sizing between average human height and these "giants"?

@The_Custos

3 жыл бұрын

@@joshwaggoner1301 nope. Get digging.

@joshwaggoner1301

3 жыл бұрын

@@The_Custos Yeah, that's what I thought.

Is the writer Joshua Waggoner the one from Franklin?????? 😈😎😇

Yo scp foundation?!

@joshwaggoner1301

3 жыл бұрын

No.

@black_horse_lover2655

3 жыл бұрын

They would’ve killed her, or wiped her memory. But probably just killed her.

I'm I the only one who is HYPEDDDD

"Click. Click. Click click click" OH SHIT-

Indiana😁

Nice sequel! Also first comment

Thanks 😘 Nature Temper for part 2 I really enjoyed this Story it was incredibly Awesomelicious 🤟🏼🖤🤟🏼 I hope that you and everyone else has a Thristylicious 🍷 Thrusday Night and are safe too 🧡 much love Sexy K ✌️💋

Ya know. This is actually based off of hidden history. Do some digging and you will see what I mean Good hunting. 😊💚✨🍻

@heerosanosyuy1173

Жыл бұрын

Hemostatic medicine & other things

Will there be a next part?

I'd let you raid my tomb ♥️♥️

@tylerkirkpatrick1212

3 жыл бұрын

What in the name of reverse psychology are you doing?

@m17x4v7

3 жыл бұрын

😰

Dang it I missed part one

It takes forever for ammo to become useless. Unless you leave it out in the elements

whч ddnt thєч trч gσíng вck thє wαч thєч cαmє αnd вlσw thαt dσσr вck σpєn? (í mєαn ín thє 1ѕt σnє, cuz uh, tє currєnt rσutє dѕnt ѕєєm líkє α gσσd chσícє)

So what was all that in the beginning about paying attention cause someones memory could be unreliable? this seemed like a straightforward story. It was good, but i was expecting some mind games.

@joshwaggoner1301

3 жыл бұрын

It doesn't have anything to do with mind games. It's about scepticism. Which parts had accurate information that pointed towards truth? Which parts couldn't have happened the way they were described? Which parts were the result of misinformation or lack of understanding from the protagonist? They're hidden and subtle because they're only there for people who want to look. So if you don't then it just seems like a cut and dry story without any glaring hiccups.

@PostRequisite

3 жыл бұрын

@@joshwaggoner1301 i say this because there is nothing to counter to her memory. nothing she says contradicts itself.

@joshwaggoner1301

3 жыл бұрын

@@PostRequisite I think the word you're looking for is "compare" or "contrast", and there are. Like I always tell people, I don't do obvious. If you're looking for something glaring and painfully obvious then you're never going to find it. If I were to lie to you, and the lie doesn't contradict itself, by what means would you determine it was a lie?

@andrewp4379

3 жыл бұрын

Have you seen some of these comments though? You’d think it be that simple as to just listen. But that has thwarted many thus far it seems....lol

You read this before right

Rather anticlimactic. So... some form of Vampyre. Wish there was a bit more explanation but, authors choice.