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Tremble Enemies of Man | HFY | A Short Sci-Fi story

The following was originally posted by an anonymous author on 4chan's /tg/ board on 18-10-10.
The reddit link to this story: / tremble_enemies_of_man
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  • @jkellynewman9203
    @jkellynewman92036 ай бұрын

    'I have yet to meet one who can outsmart a bullet' Im hooked😅

  • @blackjacklives7616

    @blackjacklives7616

    6 ай бұрын

    Cry some more

  • @MrPinballWizzard

    @MrPinballWizzard

    5 ай бұрын

    literally was expecting this comment here :D :D :D :D yeaaap :D

  • @benjamingray2071
    @benjamingray20716 ай бұрын

    literally the one thing most terrifying is a human with nothing left nowhere to go nothing to lose nothing to love no reason to live no inhibitions and no limits it leaves merely a singular purpose to defy those who have wronged us until our last breath

  • @josephnolan8217
    @josephnolan82177 ай бұрын

    Tremble aliens who come with ill intent against mankind. We are a species that only needs a single reason to unite. Reading and listening to these stories makes me realise we need to orientate our thinking as a species.

  • @CarlosDiaz-om9nw
    @CarlosDiaz-om9nw7 ай бұрын

    Excellent Story! In the last couple of years Hollywood movies has been lacking good stories and performance. This story its excellent for a good movie. Instead they continue making the same crap.

  • @brokeandtired

    @brokeandtired

    7 ай бұрын

    If hollyweird made this the sarge would have tits and a penis....And the actor would have been on the Epstein Island flight logs.

  • @XpaceTrue

    @XpaceTrue

    7 ай бұрын

    I did not care for the dystopian tone of this story. And I found it to be unrealistic: If humanity was ever reduced to a mere 20,000 individuals, in all likelihood, the species would eventually go extinct due to inbreeding and a lack of genetic diversity. This would be especially true if that 20,000 was split up on, say, many colony ships and/or stations scattered across the galaxy. Our analysis of human DNA shows that we're one of the most inbred species on Earth. Most animals have *_far more_* genetic diversity. The idea of so few human remnants just throwing themselves into war is *absurd.*

  • @niukal

    @niukal

    7 ай бұрын

    ​@@XpaceTrueyes everything u said made sense but not to much to give credit to the greys to help helping humans breed and help with introducing DNA from. Samples their collection from past visits All in all its a good story if it's not for u no big It's a story some one wrote in there spare time its never going to be perfect

  • @CHMichael

    @CHMichael

    7 ай бұрын

    Wait another 2 years and ai will turn this into a TV quality movie in 24 hours.

  • @mikeschnobrich1807

    @mikeschnobrich1807

    6 ай бұрын

    That's not a mistake. Hollywood will never make movies that have family and patriotism as core themes. At best, Hollywood would rewrite this story to have a dysfunctional protagonist fighting against corrupt human leadership to seek justice against an arch- enemy leader. The only plot line today's Hollywood is interested in is the outsider against the unjust powerful society.

  • @Shadow.Dragon
    @Shadow.Dragon7 ай бұрын

    Great story! I hope this becomes a series!

  • @arcdecibel9986
    @arcdecibel99866 ай бұрын

    "I have yet to meet one who can outsmart bullet." Even with Earth destroyed, the memes just never die.

  • @darklightcyborg1105

    @darklightcyborg1105

    4 ай бұрын

    In the far future, we'll may be extinct, and machines shall own our World... But MEMES will still live on...!!! LOL

  • @Leprechaunlock
    @Leprechaunlock7 ай бұрын

    14:14 is hilarious transition from deep and dark to a more lighthearted tone.

  • @crsp76691
    @crsp766917 ай бұрын

    Why cant the movie industry come with another good sci fi series? Been really sad the last 7-10 years. The newer battlestar gallactica was the best i remember. Pandoram was pretty good.

  • @SatansOps

    @SatansOps

    7 ай бұрын

    The expanse is honestly my favorite, check it out if you haven't already.

  • @Sevarrius

    @Sevarrius

    7 ай бұрын

    I second the expanse, great story and the Newtonian physics on display in the space battles is very diferent from most Sci-fi but very realistic. The space battles in Battlestar galactica are actually probably one of the closer points of reference in other sci-fi to those of the expanse. I loved the 2004 Battlestar Galactica btw, just a pity about the rushed, underwhelming and somewhat contradictory ending.

  • @aitorbleda8267

    @aitorbleda8267

    7 ай бұрын

    They only want to do soap operas. Lazy writing.

  • @XpaceTrue

    @XpaceTrue

    7 ай бұрын

    Hollywood tends to avoid sci-fi as it's too risky and expensive to produce. Trying something new is especially risky. Studios like cheap reality TV and guaranteed hits from reputable franchises. BTW: Why mention the newer Battlestar Galactica when there are many other sci-fi shows that have bigger fan bases and received more fame? Babylon 5 and Farscape was *so much* better. I *hated* the 2004 Battlestar Galactica - bad writing with too many contradictions and plot holes. Besides, for the time in which it was produced, the original Battlestar Galactica was clearly superior.

  • @daomingjin

    @daomingjin

    7 ай бұрын

    because their purpose is to program the public to think what they want to think. They want Western Society to hate itself and become weak as possible. This is the purpose of D.E.I.

  • @jamiepatterson1214
    @jamiepatterson12147 ай бұрын

    Really good story, one that could be extended with additional chapters.

  • @woswasdenni1914

    @woswasdenni1914

    7 ай бұрын

    one captured human talked, told them about the greys and humans. aviax then hunted both species down, the end, youre welcome

  • @I98878
    @I988787 ай бұрын

    Shout out to the grays 😎

  • @Shinobubu

    @Shinobubu

    6 ай бұрын

    I'm hoping the Greys get some of that sweet sweet tech as compensation for them saving our ass.

  • @darklightcyborg1105
    @darklightcyborg11054 ай бұрын

    IF ONLY zombie, STINKY GRAY Aliens could be like that...

  • @johncunningham4820
    @johncunningham48207 ай бұрын

    EXCELLENT Story . Any more of this to come ? Sounds like it could be TOLD in about 5 Episodes .

  • @Shinobubu
    @Shinobubu6 ай бұрын

    Till this day. Aliens are still trying to outsmart a bullet.

  • @fishfightgo6559
    @fishfightgo65597 ай бұрын

    In my head I can't stop thinking about Morgan Freeman as the main character. 😂

  • @rokulus7910

    @rokulus7910

    7 ай бұрын

    I didn't think much of the Aviaks the first time I laid eyes on them. Looked like a stiff breeze would blow them over.

  • @leadingauctions8440
    @leadingauctions84407 ай бұрын

    This was a good story

  • @DavidJordan-to7sn
    @DavidJordan-to7sn7 ай бұрын

    I loved this story. 😊

  • @escobarjr6193
    @escobarjr61935 ай бұрын

    This with the new Sora ai would probably make great small movies, thanks for the story!

  • @gusgiroux2693
    @gusgiroux2693Ай бұрын

    This AI voice is amazing he sounds like Elmer Fudd. make him say im hunting rabbit's

  • @lubomirkompis9441
    @lubomirkompis94415 ай бұрын

    Sergant Blood and Thunder playing TF2 when earth was lost confirmed.

  • @fakshen1973
    @fakshen19737 ай бұрын

    Well at least we weren't zoned for demolition to put in a new space highway... by some really bad poets...

  • @zemy1313
    @zemy13137 ай бұрын

    Loved it! ❤

  • @yrham8689
    @yrham86897 ай бұрын

    Very enjoyable! More, please!

  • @deanhawk3217
    @deanhawk32177 ай бұрын

    Happy New Year I am new to your channel and I really like your story

  • @graplingurty
    @graplingurty6 ай бұрын

    Good yarn this one. Please continue.

  • @kfeltenberger
    @kfeltenberger5 ай бұрын

    No need to take ears…take beaks!

  • @SupCom78
    @SupCom787 ай бұрын

    very interesting story sadly the beginning is not there just told that earth has been destroyed but great story i wonder how it will continue thx for uploading it.

  • @guilhermearaujoandradedasi7390
    @guilhermearaujoandradedasi73907 ай бұрын

    This story resembles the movie of Titan AE.

  • @blackairforceone
    @blackairforceone7 ай бұрын

    This is an amazing story, there needs to be a proper follow up on this...

  • @martyschrader
    @martyschrader5 күн бұрын

    A solid tenth of humanity dedicated to direct military action? That takes a chunk out of the workforce. Don't forget that in a typical army there are another half dozen or more involved in the support of each of those troopers, so the bulk of humanity in this story is focused on whacking the Bad Guys. Get those machines humming, boys, because we need to direct the labor elsewhere.

  • @ireallyreallyhategoogle
    @ireallyreallyhategoogle5 ай бұрын

    Never back humanity into a corner.

  • @SageofStars
    @SageofStars7 ай бұрын

    Does this one have a sequel? Because if not, I would love to play with this particular toy a bit, as this was the sort of story that NEEDS more to it. It's like Asimov's Foundation, it ends at the half way point. We haven't died on the guns of our enemies OR crushed them under the risen human power yet. It stops just short of all that.

  • @cindaschuster6725
    @cindaschuster67257 ай бұрын

    Good story 💙👍

  • @00yiggdrasill00
    @00yiggdrasill007 ай бұрын

    Vengeance is a poor thing to chase and the protagonist here will suffer more for it eventually....but theres a point it becomes necessary. More to the point, if they have done this to a species once then they have either done it before or will do it again, and it falls to those who can stop it to stop it. And thats a different matter from vengeance entirely.

  • @dano7411

    @dano7411

    7 ай бұрын

    Vengeance is best served cold, and it is sweet... Like Ice Cream! Now who doesn't like ice cream?

  • @00yiggdrasill00

    @00yiggdrasill00

    7 ай бұрын

    @@dano7411 while I do agree ice cream is great, especially vanilla, vengeance isn't quite the same.

  • @niukal

    @niukal

    7 ай бұрын

    Rationally I agree with everything u said But I imagine if someone killed my family I would be walking the path of vengeance till the my last days Either I die trying Or after I succeed I would think if the evils I did and probably off myself

  • @00yiggdrasill00

    @00yiggdrasill00

    7 ай бұрын

    @@niukal well that's exactly my point, and why I said sometimes it's necessary, because not everything can be forgiven or dealt with through a just manner. But even if this character absolutely wipes out their enemies...there are things that will be sacrificed along the way that shouldn't be sacrificed, lines that will be crossed that shouldn't be crossed...and in the end that will only bring them more pain. Now the generations after them, that's another story.

  • @niukal

    @niukal

    7 ай бұрын

    @@00yiggdrasill00 rational thinking Is sometimes overuled by emotional thinking almost never right But it under certain situations it's can be very hard to b rational unless it's gets u closer to Ur goal I'm not condoning it just understanding it

  • @chopperchuck
    @chopperchuck7 ай бұрын

    Any chance that for this upcoming conflict we are yet to be in I can get my power armor custom-made to look like mandalorian armor just asking

  • @IaIaCthulhuFtagn
    @IaIaCthulhuFtagn7 ай бұрын

    Sounds kinda wasteful to crack a rare planet capable of supporting life when you have access to the whole of the universe and can harvest the same resources from any number of uninhabitable worlds. Wouldn't it be a nifty plot twist if it turned out that the Grays had secretly hired the Aviaks in order to gain a willing human workforce and galactic ally.

  • @michaelpettersson4919

    @michaelpettersson4919

    6 ай бұрын

    Perhaps but maybe it was an attack to remove a competitor from the same type of worlds.

  • @spencersullivan4447
    @spencersullivan44476 ай бұрын

    “Tremble enemies of man” said Kermit 😂

  • @martyschrader

    @martyschrader

    5 күн бұрын

    "It's not easy, crushing green..."

  • @Shinobubu
    @Shinobubu6 ай бұрын

    We are familiar with the Harem system. It's called Pimping.

  • @hariseldon3786
    @hariseldon37867 ай бұрын

    ... send the evidence (ship) into the sun...

  • @davidturner4824
    @davidturner48247 ай бұрын

    We should start building space destroyers to defend our planet right now. There are hundreds of different species and their probes around our planet right now. They will have to have the heaviest armor we can devise; with the most advanced weapons and engines we can create at this time. Over a few hundred years, we should be able to have some pretty decent space destroyers to defend ourselves. Especially after we develop shields.

  • @maxmoore9955
    @maxmoore99557 ай бұрын

    But who had the Aviacks .been working for .The Greys my Guess .No one would kill an enemy officer without milking him for information.

  • @gemmel3197
    @gemmel31977 ай бұрын

    All that by 20k people? I think not, 2 million maybe.

  • @Shinobubu

    @Shinobubu

    6 ай бұрын

    20K is not enough genetic diversity rendering us effectively extinct.

  • @blueeyeswhitedragon9839
    @blueeyeswhitedragon98397 ай бұрын

    Great story...suitable for enlargement into a movie or TV series. It appears that the narrator is a smoker, his voice changes in to more raspy accent after each smoke break. 😅

  • @JosephKano
    @JosephKano7 ай бұрын

    I'm not so sure the Grays are the innocent helpers they make themselves out to be.

  • @niukal

    @niukal

    7 ай бұрын

    Agree I got the feeling the greys have a long term plan involving humans Might be as simple as trying to help humans to evolve to solve their problems with DNA or making themselves as saviours so we become willing foot soldiers for them be nice to see how it unfolds

  • @mutterfudder401
    @mutterfudder4017 ай бұрын

  • @Torres001able
    @Torres001able7 ай бұрын

    So is there a part 2

  • @eagle4570
    @eagle45707 ай бұрын

    Part one ?

  • @anonygent
    @anonygent6 ай бұрын

    The constant change in pitch for no good reason was distracting.

  • @OneJazzKid
    @OneJazzKid6 ай бұрын

    Colossus time for the Aviaks. That is why xenophobe is the only way.

  • @mikeschnobrich1807

    @mikeschnobrich1807

    6 ай бұрын

    Xenophobia is the opposite of "Keep your friends close but, keep your enemies closer."

  • @woswasdenni1914
    @woswasdenni19147 ай бұрын

    the ambassador thing makes no sense. humans are supposed to be unknown. why woudl that old bird say its impossible if humans are knoown to be still around.

  • @danielh6015
    @danielh60157 ай бұрын

    Why not take the ship ?

  • @BENTLEYQUAMP
    @BENTLEYQUAMP7 ай бұрын

    I don`t quite understand. You said the human survivors existence was kept secret from the aviaks, to stop them finishing the extermination. So why would there be human ambassadors? Wouldn`t that give their existence/survival away?

  • @xirausgaming
    @xirausgaming7 ай бұрын

    I don't like the first and last AI Voice (same). This rolling in the Voice. Your other Videos had better Voices. After all nice Story

  • @chrismcfizzle
    @chrismcfizzle6 ай бұрын

    Universal advice about humans...F.A.F.O.