This Plot Twist Baffles Readers - EVERY Time!

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Readers never seem to clue onto this twist: Time Shifting! Even better? It's super easy to implement!
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This video uses clips from:
Columbo
Monk
Remington Steele

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  • @Avionne_Parris
    @Avionne_Parris Жыл бұрын

    Gosh, Jane! These murders are so intricately planned and elaborately executed! These types of villains really do like a lot of unnecessary work, dont they? Placing a body on the hand of a clock tower, moving all clocks ahead, donning a fake costume, hoisting a body into an elevator shaft... Yikes. I'm already tired and all I did was watch tv clips. I'm slowly realising I'd much rather plan a fictitious murder because I'm too lazy to commit a real one :P

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    Жыл бұрын

    Hahaha!

  • @MahlonBouldin
    @MahlonBouldin Жыл бұрын

    Awesome stuff!

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    Жыл бұрын

    Thank you!

  • @bostonhayworth1264
    @bostonhayworth1264 Жыл бұрын

    I just adore you! Please write the How To Book>

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    Жыл бұрын

    I am! you can actually follow along as I’m writing it, at janekalmes.substack.com/ Subscribe for free to get every third chapter, or for $5/month to get every chapter right in your inbox!

  • @dlamancha5697
    @dlamancha5697 Жыл бұрын

    Oh, I love this. Your tutorials are awesome Jane! And you explain them so well. I just love how you include Columbo and other classic mystery shows. There's a reason they resonate even today!

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    Жыл бұрын

    I LOVE Columbo!

  • @mattmallecoccio8378
    @mattmallecoccio8378 Жыл бұрын

    I am so grateful for your videos, Jane

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    Жыл бұрын

    Thank you!

  • @Priscilla_Bettis
    @Priscilla_Bettis Жыл бұрын

    I LOVE this idea, thank you!

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    Жыл бұрын

    You’re so welcome!

  • @genealotech
    @genealotech Жыл бұрын

    I’m so enjoying this and the class!

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    Жыл бұрын

    So glad to hear it, Dawn!

  • @hbrouib6086
    @hbrouib6086 Жыл бұрын

    Hey! I found this channel recently and found it very helpful. Thank you! Keep it up!

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    Жыл бұрын

    Thanks, will do!

  • @lilyinthewater161
    @lilyinthewater161 Жыл бұрын

    Your videos are so damn good. Watching your videos gives the same dopamine shot as if i watching my favourite series on Netflix.❤️

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    Жыл бұрын

    Thank you so much!

  • @leemcgrogan5107
    @leemcgrogan510710 ай бұрын

    Watching your videos whist writing my first novel. They are really helping me. Thank you so much. Lee in Aberdeen, Scotland.🤗

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    10 ай бұрын

    So great to hear!

  • @KimtheElder
    @KimtheElder Жыл бұрын

    another fabulous video. I learn so much from you. 😊

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    Жыл бұрын

    Awesome! Thank you!

  • @HQH420
    @HQH420 Жыл бұрын

    Classic Jane

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    Жыл бұрын

    This may be my favorite comment today. :-)

  • @letmadora28
    @letmadora28 Жыл бұрын

    4:10 I can imagine Alec Baldwin seeing this and thinking "Is overly complicated. It must be an Easy way" 😂😂🤭

  • @Heothbremel
    @Heothbremel Жыл бұрын

    ♥️❤♥️❤♥️❤♥️❤♥️❤♥️❤♥️❤♥️❤♥️

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    Жыл бұрын

    Back at ya!

  • @cookie_monster278
    @cookie_monster278 Жыл бұрын

    The video was very helpful my murder mystery was bland so I have added this to spice it up. So in my story the protag wakes up to a scream and a loud crash he runs out of his room and sees the killer ( Who he doesn't know is a killer) and another guest talking. They find out that two of the guest had got into a fight and one of them was pushed into a flower vase breaking it and letting out a scream. The murder had took place about an hour before the fight.

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    Жыл бұрын

    Cool, I’m so glad this was helpful!

  • @JonTanOsb
    @JonTanOsb Жыл бұрын

    I remember watching both the clock tower and the action hero one, and both were, "Oh, come on!" moments for me. Either the woman on the clock hand weighed nothing, so couldn't moved it down immediately from her weight or that was the sturdiest clock hand around. Also, it's a campus, who wouldn't look at the clock to see the time? I would. But then I like big clocks. And the action hero, an old fat guy wearing a costume or a slim, agile woman. The security guards must have been blind. But that's just my take. Jon in rural BC, Canada

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    Жыл бұрын

    Fair enough. I also think of Mr. Monk and the Astronaut as a “come on!” episode. No way a garage door opener has that much juice.

  • @kh2040
    @kh2040 Жыл бұрын

    In a future video I'd be interested to hear your views on self publishing versus traditional publishing. Do you have thoughts on literary agents?

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    Жыл бұрын

    Broadly, I’m a fan of self-publishing. But I don’t think of myself as an expert on this subject. Check out Bethany Atezadeh or David Gaughran for more information on this topic!

  • @lukacunningham342
    @lukacunningham342 Жыл бұрын

    Okay, Jane, I must confess, I’ve finally found the perfect plot that feels like an Agatha Christie, it is called “Jason McLee Investigates”, it’s in 1922 in the fictional village of Greenstrom, the narrator, Arthur Marbleson is hired to be the personal chauffeur at Maverick Manor by the patriarch, Sir Auguste Maverick. But his first days aren’t too peachy clean when he finds out Maverick has been getting blackmail letters and death threats. So when Maverick is found dead of a gunshot, Arthur can’t help but do nothing but read the news himself to find out who murdered his employer, luckily, the well minded Jason McLee happened to have accidentally met input to Arthur’s house

  • @janekalmes

    @janekalmes

    Жыл бұрын

    Sounds great, Luka! Love the 20’s!

  • @lukacunningham342

    @lukacunningham342

    Жыл бұрын

    @@janekalmes Well, I was thinking about setting it in the 50s but the 20s was more of a golden era: Conan Doyle wrapping up Sherlock Holmes (again), Agatha Christie inventing Poirot, Father Brown was still stepping onto the surface (I know it was first made in 1911, but that’s in the very early 20s in my book)

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