I am presently drafting my personal statement for a postgraduate degree course, very helpful information throughout!!! Thank you very much.

This video and your content in general has helped me so much during this stressful time of writing my own personal statement! Thank you so much, keep it up Doctor Shaene

@DoctorShaene

3 жыл бұрын

You're so welcome!

I've been writing my ps now and ur videos are a blessing in disguise

Waoh!!! Waoh!!! Writing a personal statement for Human Resources Management and this guidelines really are helpful. Thank you ❤️

You have incredible content! It inspire me and if I successfully getting LoA, it is because of you. I will work hard for it and I will tell you once I did it 💪💪

rewatched this at minimum 10 times and i'm not even writing a medicine personal statement (yet included a medical work experience in my statement loool)

@DoctorShaene

4 жыл бұрын

haha thanks 🙏

currently watching and writing my personal statement. Helpful infomations

The quality just keeps getting better!!! Great tips and editing👌🏽

@DoctorShaene

4 жыл бұрын

Thanks so much 🙌

For applicants in 2022, we do not have the abundance and variety of work experiences that previous medical students may have possessed. Virtual work experiences, online courses are at least what we have, so how do we incorporate it in a way that still gives the message that we have learnt something valuable from it (like a real experience)?

@WriteYourAcceptance

3 жыл бұрын

This is definitely an issue for this cycle’s applicants and you’ll have a COVID box to explain your challenges probably like last year. The DO app has it alt least for sure this cycle. For the ps I would definitely still Showcase foundational/ formative moments that offered you varied lessons along the way so not quantity there as much as quality. Good luck!

@romeoalaric4946

2 жыл бұрын

You all probably dont care but does anyone know of a way to log back into an instagram account..? I somehow lost my login password. I would appreciate any assistance you can give me

@avagrace747

2 жыл бұрын

@@romeoalaric4946 You can log in through your fb account. Hope this helps.

very helpful and clear thank you very much

Editing on point with this one!

@DoctorShaene

4 жыл бұрын

Thanks bro 🙌

Brilliant !

Introduction 1 motivation 2 engagement

Thank you very very much!

VERY HELPFUL VIDEO!!! Thanks a lot :)

I'm going to apply this year ❤

Is it cool if I use the joke about starting with “ever since I’ve been a child”

@DoctorShaene

3 жыл бұрын

BOLD but tbh I'd try to keep it a bit more pro than a bit too jokey if ygm

@mistermandem5530

8 ай бұрын

Maybe if your applying for clown school

@zariaf-b7423

5 ай бұрын

@@mistermandem5530HELP

@AL-jt6hv

4 ай бұрын

I think your beggining is more natural and has more appealing to someone reading it.Ghis guy academic and boring statement will not get a pass.Be yourself and be natural.Copying some academics models is a no no for me.start with your sentence.

Thank you

Thanks bro this helped a lot.

@DoctorShaene

3 жыл бұрын

Gotchu 💕

Hi, great video thank you. Do you have any tips for including a bit about the gap year (what i plan to do as its only just started lol) :)

I am using tips from your videos for my personal statement, even tho im year 11 going to sixth form, it still helps.

@DoctorShaene

3 жыл бұрын

Best of luck for the future!

@-jaan6943

3 жыл бұрын

@@DoctorShaene thx

Can u do a sop for mba students or marketing based courses

What would you say the personal statement should be structured? So a paragraph for intro, motivation, engagement and suitability aswell as showing passion throughout?

@DoctorShaene

4 жыл бұрын

Checkout the previous video!

how do i write one personal statement for two courses if I chose two different courses in my application? I chose business administration as my first priority and I chose global studies as my second priority.

Great video. 3:08 Not sure about this example as it is missing punctuation. If you run out of breath, the sentence is too long.

hi, how would you get around adapting work experience/engagement paragraph for non-clinical experiences (i.e.online)? I'm struggling to phrase my engagement in such a way that allows for things you would usually learn on a work experience placement!

@ailsacameron6116

3 жыл бұрын

also (sorry!!), how would you go about including engagement within times of covid-19, or the topic in general, as I don't want to exclude it nor waste space on mentioning something worthless either!

hey thanks a lot of this video , its quite helpful but what if I don't have any work experience or volunteering related to my field?

I want to study accounting and finance but didn't had this sub in my A'levels how should I write it?

Greatttt

i was about to start mine with ever since i was a child The way you started made me feel guilty😂

great

Hi, I would like to know , if you've chosen two different courses (computer science and electronic engineering). How would you go about blending your personal statement and talking about each one? PS: Thank you for this video

@DML686

3 жыл бұрын

I have a similar question. I just finish my first degree in electrical engineering and I'm now planning to study computer science. Any advice on how to approach my introduction? Thanks for your videos!

@mbalingcobo5795

2 жыл бұрын

@@DML686 hii mind me asking how electrical engineering is, what does it mostly consist of? Is it nice

Hi bro, this is Sandra from Egypt. I am writing my personal statement to apply for masters program in economic development in the UK. Would really appreciate it if you could read my personal statement. Let me know if I can send it to you. Cheers

Just Incase the school didn't state the number of words for personal statement ,what should then be the word limit?

Do you have tips for what to change for a secondary boarding school application personal statement?

@DoctorShaene

3 жыл бұрын

Honestly, the core components are all the same!

Hey bro, I want to make a personal statement as an undergraduate student. What aspect should I insert to replace the work experience?

@jacobkenney5646

3 жыл бұрын

maybe part time work ?

Will you check my personal statement..i have written it for a program??how I send u

Can you please review my personal statement?

Could you please make a video on making a personal statement for a levels (for medicine subjects)

@DoctorShaene

4 жыл бұрын

Not sure what you mean?

@haydenforbes2966

4 жыл бұрын

Doctor Shaene Like a video for GCSE students on a good personal statement/CV for trying to get into a good sixth form to study medicine based lessons; I am trying to get into Hills Road in Cambridge.

@DoctorShaene

4 жыл бұрын

Ah I see - Yh absolutely all the principles that work for uni personal Statements will work for anything, I recommend checking out the Skillshare class when it’s out 🙌

@haydenforbes2966

4 жыл бұрын

Doctor Shaene Okay thank you will do - once I have completed it would it be okay to send it to you for just some feedback? This will probably be a while away but it would be helpful.

@DoctorShaene

4 жыл бұрын

Sure email me doctorshaene@askcamdoc.com

I need some help with my personal statement, help somebody anybody or just a body lol.seriously help please

I have written my personal statement but I need someone who has done medicine to check it? No one in my school has gone to medicine so I don’t know what to do

I’m so scared because I didn’t have much work experience except online because of covid :/

@christophwaltz4793

2 жыл бұрын

Uh lucky I literally have no work experience not even online

can someone help me re-estate the first sentence but for computer since field instead of Medicine?

@DoctorShaene

3 жыл бұрын

replace medical stuff with computer stuff!

@noemiolti3621

3 жыл бұрын

@@DoctorShaene would that be enough for it to not count as plagiarism?

Great tips but I think this approach is a little reductive. The statements you highlight do indeed show motivation and engagement, but additionally relay emotional intelligence, empathy and get-go to do something original. If you're going to be accepting students for medicine, you want them to talk about more than just what they themselves get out of it. You want them to show that they are interested in other people - what they want to contribute - and the statements you highlight show this very ably.

Does this apply to masters applications as well?

@WriteYourAcceptance

3 жыл бұрын

If you don’t have like a why us essay for them, I would consider ending with how you see yourself fitting at that program. Be specific about their resources, a class even a research initiative you could see yourself in or something you’d focus on. Good luck!

What could i write in the engagement section if I havent done work experience?

@juansebastianperilla1819

3 жыл бұрын

Man, this is the ENORMOUS issue that I've come across at the moment to write this statement, and It makes me upset not having all those experiences and learnings that they all have :''''(, Do not know what to do

@juansebastianperilla1819

3 жыл бұрын

@Faith Hill Yes man, I have thought about it, but I don't know how to related to those academics subjects. I mean, I don't know how "being in a group of music" "being on a band" or "playing volleyball" will help me to show how I am looking forward to entering into the pharmaceutical faculty of some university. HAHA any piece of advice :D? thanks

@guganesan.ilavarasan

3 жыл бұрын

@Faith Hill LOL same here mate, writing an SOP to Oxbridge, and still don't know what to fill up in the work experience section.

Kya hal hen bhai

I have submitted my personal statement, and I just watched this video and realised I did this lol.

@shanna853

2 жыл бұрын

Please keep us updated!

@gordonbrown1773

2 жыл бұрын

@@shanna853 I got accepted into University of Stirling (last choice) and now waiting on Warwick, Exeter, Sheffield and RHUL. My course is PPE.

@gordonbrown1773

2 жыл бұрын

@@shanna853 Got accepted everywhere I applied except Warwick, still waiting on them!

@shanna853

2 жыл бұрын

@@gordonbrown1773 Wow, good for you? Did you also have an interview? If so, how did it go?

@gordonbrown1773

2 жыл бұрын

@@shanna853 no interview

How would you advise getting medical work experience in lock down. I've already done the virtual work experience but I'm looking for more hands on work experience in a hospital or care home. How would you advise I go about this in these circumstances?

@DoctorShaene

4 жыл бұрын

Hmm no way currently I know off. The best options are the virtual experiences and joining these: 1. BSMS Virtual work Experience - Brighton and Sussex medical school has put together an incredible online package giving to an insight into the NHS which walks you through different medical specialities. 2. Observe GP - interactive video platform has been put together by the Royal College of GPs designed to give medical school applicants an insight into General Practice and primary care. 3. The NHS Explained Online Course - a free 8 hour online course by the King’s Fund giving you an insight into the structure of the NHS and challenges of working in the NHS. 1.Re-engage - a charity looking for volunteers to join their call companion service to provide some friendship to lonely and isolated older people 2.Covid-19 Mutual Aid - a service connecting people in the local area to help others who are more vulnerable or self-isolating. 3.The Sliver Line - a confidential helpline that provides advice, friendship and information to older people. They currently have an emergency appeal for volunteers. 4.Age UK - lots of different opportunities to volunteer to become a digital buddy, a campaigner or fundraiser for the Age UK charity.

@ganeshmistry4458

4 жыл бұрын

Woah this is the best - I'm telling my whole school about you now!!!!

@DoctorShaene

4 жыл бұрын

Haha legend 🙏🏽🙌 Best of luck!

I was thinking that my personal statement is great since I watched this video; now my personal statement looks like trash

@DoctorShaene

2 жыл бұрын

Still time to make it even better!!

How can I contact you through the social media.?

im 14 and i have to write a personal statement for a school for some reason i literally have no idea where to start i dont know how much to include the instructions they gave me are so vague can anyone help???

@haneopi

2 жыл бұрын

tbh 14 is a bit young to be writing a personal statement, is this for an assignment or do you need it to apply for a certain secondary level institution?

@LilKenuthia

2 жыл бұрын

@@haneopi yea, i needed it to apply for a secondary level instituation, exactly. but it's alright i've already done it 👍. thank you though

4:17 wouldnt the place you are applying to already know this information?? How would you saying this make you different to anybody else?

Can I use acronyms or abbreviations in my personal statement?

@mywaterfountain

Жыл бұрын

Avoid if possible

What type of doctor are u

@DoctorShaene

4 жыл бұрын

Medical junior doc

@tfg_fareed8660

4 жыл бұрын

Thanks

wonderful structure. no soul. robotic and antiseptic.

nice kitchen

Do you check personal statements ?

@DoctorShaene

4 жыл бұрын

Send it to me doctorshaene@askcamdoc.com and I’ll have a look when I get the time 😊

Fuck I said “as a child”

Yo

@DoctorShaene

3 жыл бұрын

wag1

are you from leicester?

@ganeshmistry4458

4 жыл бұрын

i subbed

@DoctorShaene

4 жыл бұрын

Derby haha

Thank you. You need to articulate more clearly and slow the speed of talk.

What if I have no experience?😂

He is the guy the example every parent gives while torturing their kids😅 just kidding. Great work