THE BEST PERSONAL STATEMENT CONCLUSIONS I’VE EVER READ (Cambridge University Examples)

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What's the point in starting strong, if you're just going to finish with a squeak. Over the years, I've noticed lots of students putting in hours crafting an amazing introduction, just to end their personal statement with a bland sentence. In this video, I'll teach you my most effective strategies that'll take your conclusion from average to amazing in just 3 steps. And we'll use examples from successful Oxbridge personal statements ranging across Medicine, Engineering, Economics, Maths, Languages & Geography. These examples and strategies will inspire your very own masterful conclusion. 😁
And if you’re swamped and just want a quick teaser, here are 3 things to absolutely end with:
1.Summarise key qualities
2.Show Projection about what you hope to achieve
3.Show Unwavering Passion
00:00 - Start
01:30 - Core Strategies
03:02 - Medicine Example
03:34 - Natural Sciences Example
04:13 - Geography Example
05:10 - Economics Example
05:56 - Maths Example
06:46 - Languages Example
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  • @stanleyclarke7444
    @stanleyclarke74442 жыл бұрын

    You really clutched up with the timing on this one.. thanks for the useful vid

  • @alishaneupane1692
    @alishaneupane16922 жыл бұрын

    So happy you made a video !!

  • @aawrnnc
    @aawrnnc7 ай бұрын

    Some tips here are also good to apply when you are having a job interview! This helped me in several ways! Thank you!

  • @supernana7263
    @supernana72632 жыл бұрын

    Glad you finally included excerpts from distinct separate disciplines. As someone studying Accounting (and seeking continuing scholarship for) this makes the video much more relatable. Thanks again!

  • @amiram1256
    @amiram12562 жыл бұрын

    Hey Shaene, thank u for video, I hope that u can make one about how to write a personal statement for scholarships

  • @dominique7954
    @dominique79545 ай бұрын

    bless up thank you for this

  • @nikspanodimos
    @nikspanodimos2 жыл бұрын

    Amazing video and very helpful conclusions. I am currently finishing my PS that is oriented to a degree in law and will for sure take advantage of the formulas you have provided!

  • @emilycarter8922

    @emilycarter8922

    2 жыл бұрын

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  • @AkkuSriv
    @AkkuSriv2 жыл бұрын

    Loved the editing on this video!

  • @DoctorShaene

    @DoctorShaene

    2 жыл бұрын

    Thanks bro 😅

  • @mrnauko5018
    @mrnauko50182 жыл бұрын

    Perfect 🤩🤩

  • @johnmission586
    @johnmission5862 жыл бұрын

    Recency effect is always more memorable than Primary Effect!

  • @andrewjeyarajah6722
    @andrewjeyarajah67222 жыл бұрын

    The video sound is pretty good, beyond my imagination

  • @hikmahondong8421
    @hikmahondong84212 жыл бұрын

    Thank you doctor, it's so usefully for me

  • @DoctorShaene

    @DoctorShaene

    2 жыл бұрын

    😁🤝

  • @mikewizkalifa5812
    @mikewizkalifa58122 жыл бұрын

    hi, do you have any tips for sociology personal statements?

  • @olivervincent3174
    @olivervincent3174 Жыл бұрын

    Thank you Doctor Shaene for sacrificing your time to make all these useful videos. I want to ask do we need to add our personal information (Name, Address, or contact number, etc) on the top of the personal statement? Or do you have any template of personal statement that you can recommend for Oxford grad school? Thank you 🙏

  • @olivervincent3174

    @olivervincent3174

    Жыл бұрын

    I get a like without a reply, Sir?

  • @teddy1596
    @teddy1596 Жыл бұрын

    Please tell me HOW long does ur personal state ment have to be.?

  • @smokerx6291
    @smokerx62912 жыл бұрын

    Been a while since you made a real video

  • @DoctorShaene

    @DoctorShaene

    2 жыл бұрын

    We backkk

  • @smokerx6291

    @smokerx6291

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@DoctorShaene ♥️

  • @peertasi5458
    @peertasi54582 жыл бұрын

    Hello Doctor Shaene, thank you so much for uploading these, I have just started year 12 and I am certain I will find these useful later on the year!!! I just wanted to ask you as a person who studies at Cambridge how many 9s and 8s do u think a candidate should have as my GCSE grades concern me a bit. Thank you.

  • @hamdannaeem6224

    @hamdannaeem6224

    2 жыл бұрын

    Having anything apart from perfect GCSEs (so, all 8s and 9s) might just reduce chances of admission when they look at your grades. But really, asking your teachers and admissions tutors by email is the best way to go about getting an answer to your question.

  • @zulkifal120
    @zulkifal1202 жыл бұрын

    Kind give some suggestions about MSc Education

  • @aebinrawat5087
    @aebinrawat50872 жыл бұрын

    Sir i am first can i get a heart❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥 As you are great sir

  • @fariyaart5094
    @fariyaart50942 жыл бұрын

    Amazing video! Subscribed! I have a question about Work experience. I'm applying this year for Medicine Due to COVID is wasn't able to get work experience. But I have Online virtual work experiences such as ObserveGP, BSMS Virtual Work Experience, and I'm doing volunteering in Science at school this year. I might also apply for some leadership at school this year. Could you tell me if that's enough for work experience for a competitive application? Also I have played volleyball for 2 years ( from 2016 - 2018 ), so can I also put that into my application? And one last thing is that I can speak 5 languages fluently so does that benefit me for a boost in my application and selection?

  • @hannahsandhu4520
    @hannahsandhu4520 Жыл бұрын

    Hi Doctor Shaene. I was wondering if you have receieved my email, regarding personal statements? Thanks a lot. Hannah

  • @Toshu.17
    @Toshu.172 жыл бұрын

    I was the 1000th viewer 🤣

  • @sandraorokodo7108
    @sandraorokodo71082 жыл бұрын

    Hello Doctor Shaene, are you married?

  • @hindugamermann7959
    @hindugamermann79592 жыл бұрын

    Are you Indian?

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