I'll be honest. I came here for Barton. I'll never knock anyone's craft so keep it up. We all have to start somewhere!❣️

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5 жыл бұрын

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@secondhandguru3558

4 жыл бұрын

Agree

@dw.baltimore

4 жыл бұрын

Stephanie Evans 💯

@tenaboutang5078

4 жыл бұрын

i agree.... honestly im only 6 min in and i find the acting not as bad as everyone is saying.... shame on the haters

@sophial.6633

3 жыл бұрын

You are so right! The dialogue is only part of what acting is all about anyways. Their movements and expressions say a lot too and they did well.

"She checked into this hotel ... but she never checked out." It wouldn't have been the Hotel California, would it ... ? :D

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5 жыл бұрын

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@DocBree13

5 жыл бұрын

lol!

@mnirwin5112

4 жыл бұрын

@@Directorraul Just got back here ... I did like it, by the way. I felt badly for that cop at the end; you know that wasn't going to end well... and he DID warn them.

@ 3:28 "Let's get the team together". I swear all I can see is Scooby & Shaggy getting the rest of the gang and hopping into the Mystery Machine! LMAO!

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5 жыл бұрын

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@EmsLionheart

4 жыл бұрын

OMG I THOUGHT SAME THING! But didn’t take time to write it 😂

@MissTique247

4 жыл бұрын

@@EmsLionheart Geeat minds think alike, yes know! 😷✌

@MissTique247

4 жыл бұрын

@Delta Lima Bravo 😷👍🏻

@roseroycegold7115

3 жыл бұрын

Don't talk about people .. So much.. gee wiz.. All were Pop in.. With The . Doo Wops.👅

I see a lot of critical comments, too bad they could not get beyond some of the minor stuff and just enjoy, the movie was free, thank you for the download.

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4 жыл бұрын

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@cellophaneman2127

25 күн бұрын

I know this comment is four years old. But I have to put my 2 cents in anyway. Criticism is how we learn and grow in all ways. Especially in making stuff like this. Minor stuff can break a production. I know that from experience. That said, this was a pretty fun ride of a proof of concept. I hope these guys and gals keep going

I understand the acting isn’t gonna be top notch with these short films but that doesn’t stop me from enjoying the film , I honestly love the cheesiness of some of these films , I actually enjoy it more than most new horror films that come out . Great job keep it up and you will all only get better in time

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4 жыл бұрын

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@justkeepswimming8335

Ай бұрын

I have seen some amazing acting in other short films.

@jakeskatesbro

Ай бұрын

@@justkeepswimming8335 I have too forsure, I’m not gonna rewatch to remember why I commented this but I’m assuming this one had some sort of charm even without amazing acting though

"You hear me boy" lol

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5 жыл бұрын

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Just a quick thought: Film students who didn't have a camera? Or do interviews?

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5 жыл бұрын

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@sarapatrick4027

5 жыл бұрын

longtall2010 That was my exact criticism.

@billyandrew

5 жыл бұрын

Damn, you beat me to it!

@willarcher2356

3 жыл бұрын

This is a low budget movie, bruh. Use your damn imagination!

The beginning looks professionally filmed!!

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4 жыл бұрын

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All that to pass a class?? Man, fk school.

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5 жыл бұрын

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@writer46m72

21 күн бұрын

Old post, I know. But man, I was thinking the same thing. I felt bad for that guy who was working hard. Most professors don't fail students unless they do nothing at all. But he did try.

Everyones a gangster until "BASED ON A TRUE STORY" enters the chat :))

Right up to the gas station part was basically 50 other horror flicks in a nutshell lol

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5 жыл бұрын

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@LLStark

3 жыл бұрын

Sure was now that u mentioned it. Plus i really didn't like the way the attendant kept calling the young man "Boy"...he just kept calling him that like with a capital 'B'...yeah i noticed it. The movie wasn't all that bad...acting coulda been better but I've seen worse.

Should call this movie “Don’t Split Up” - rule 1 of horror movies man, don’t go off alone! Some really nice cinematography, lighting and sound. The editing was really nice towards the end. You got all the technical skills down, you need to get a better script thats on par with your tech skills. The plot was just too cliche and predictable. The acting was so-so but did seem to get much better as the film progressed - maybe everyone settled down and got more comfortable in front of the camera. Maybe next time try shooting some of the action stuff first because there’s less talking and trying to act natural. Use their adrenaline for the high adrenaline scenes. Then once the actors get comfortable, do the ‘boring’ talking scenes, they may be more relaxed and natural at this point. I do appreciate this wasn’t a ‘found footage’ film too so thanks for that - nice job. Thanks for posting.

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5 жыл бұрын

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@neverthesame7887

4 жыл бұрын

@@Directorraul Raul--- When people take the time, especially w4shep to review in a generous and tactful way about areas she/he thought need work, you should really reply with a comment that shows appreciation other than the "form letter" consisting of 7 words you use for everyone! Please take this as just constructive criticism. BTW you really are a talented person, the actors and story line just need work.

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4 жыл бұрын

@@neverthesame7887 thank you!

The introduction looked really professionally and beautifully shot...and then we get a load of unprofessional over acting, shame.

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5 жыл бұрын

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@FIONA21ful

2 жыл бұрын

@@Directorraul Some of the actors were better than others , and after watching it a second time I enjoyed the story more . 💚

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2 жыл бұрын

@@FIONA21ful thank you so much it was one of my first films I did so it's was more of Practice and giving actors some time to shoulder talents

@FIONA21ful

2 жыл бұрын

@@Directorraul Theres a lot for you to be very proud of, and Im sure the actors have improved with experience . Its a wonderful first film in every way for you. Iv subbed so il be watching. 💚☘

The coolest black dude ever. Got called "boy" twice and no response. Yep! That seems legit.

Everyone involved in this movie did a great job. We all learn something new everyday. The scenic parts of the movie were fantastic. Hopefully you'll be putting out a new short movie soon

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4 жыл бұрын

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Brilliant short movie, I cannot understand the negative feedback, love the documentary style movies, keep up the good work, thanks for sharing.💚

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4 жыл бұрын

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Even though it was kind of low-budget it was really scary and the characters were really good when you get warnings to stay away from a certain place it's best to do what I was scared watching this

Omg...”we’ve never taken a road trip AND filmed a documentary before guys” haha haha

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4 жыл бұрын

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Then this movie the scenery is so beautiful that's why I would like to be anywhere a place like this will be better than cities

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5 жыл бұрын

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so they go in and come to this door they were trying to open and...oh....now its 12am.....

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5 жыл бұрын

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@DocBree13

5 жыл бұрын

yeah - I’m sure the cop wouldn’t have left them if it were close to 12 when they got there - not realistic to believe they worked on the lock for hours

@billyandrew

5 жыл бұрын

@@DocBree13 Psychic lockpickers are usually so good. Lol.

He paid for petrol and went without it lol x

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5 жыл бұрын

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Those actors need a lot of work on their acting skills.

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5 жыл бұрын

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@kirtywright1974

5 жыл бұрын

sheryl BUTLER THANK YOU!! Someone else noticed, other than me! I thought, ok maybe it’s a first for them. But acting, has to come natural, and you act as natural as you can, to play a character. But the whole time I was watching this, 1. All I could focus on, were that dudes tribal tattoos, thinking 🤔 are they the real thing, or just for the camera... either one, they’re shocking! Just like his poor acting 🤦🏻‍♀️ 2. They start off with him, having a major sook, about having to pass his grades, and I’m thinking 🤔 again... Bro! You need to man up, and act like a man! Even the dude, who’s playing a homosexual guy, is acting more manly than this dude! Whimpering, like a sick puppy. Honestly made me want to puke 🤢 🤮 But. On a serious note. I wanted to stop, no sooner had I started. But, you know when the acting is that forced, and false, you begin to watch. I’m only in 5 minutes. I reckon I’ll be out, looking for another good short, in about, another three minutes. Shorts, just like any major film, has to grab your full attention. Mines very limited. So. It’s got to be a good one, from the get go, or, I’m outski! I’m just glad someone else noticed 💯🤞🏻🙏🏼

@annt.7785

5 жыл бұрын

Look at the bright side, at least they're all really good looking 😂😂😂.

@secondhandguru3558

5 жыл бұрын

Every body gotta start somewherd

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5 жыл бұрын

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7:57 Sling Blade

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5 жыл бұрын

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Something happened here, I can tell!! Brilliant.

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5 жыл бұрын

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@martinmalone9181

5 жыл бұрын

I was being facetious!

@billyandrew

5 жыл бұрын

Her lockpicking skills weren't much better either. Lol.

I liked it!! As long as you have a good story, and you tell it well that is really all that counts! I liked this video, you kids did good! Where is part 2??

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5 жыл бұрын

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23:29: We have this song too, in Greenland! During the 1950s, we had a lot of American soldiers, who made military bases, and the y both brought country music and Hawaiian music with them! We Greenlanders heard it, and kept the melodies, and added Greenlandic verses to them! :-D

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5 жыл бұрын

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@davogifman542

4 жыл бұрын

That's one of the many things I love about music. You can change it up a little an make your own, make it unique. Along with numbers I think music can be a universal language. Perhaps one day even a intergalactic language. LoL Perhaps...

Out of all the comments I read no one addresses the "boy" comment. Why in almost every horror movie when someone stops at the gas station the attendant always has to be racist or use racist comments? Why does that even have to be included in this short and every other movie over and over again? We need to get past this.... But I digress 🤐

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4 жыл бұрын

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Good production values. BUT:- They looked too old to be students. He wanted to film a documentary, so why did they conduct a seance instead? It’s always “after midnight”, at any time of day. They didn’t need to unlock the chain to enter the room, they could just have stepped over it. A hotel bedroom with a glass panelled door - really? Why did they go there at night anyway?

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5 жыл бұрын

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@k-p1425

5 жыл бұрын

GradKat I mean it’s not like they’re students in high school lmao

@billyandrew

5 жыл бұрын

@@k-p1425 It's not like they will have successful acting careers either. Lol.

@k-p1425

4 жыл бұрын

Billy Andrew lol

@rebeccamcinroy6042

4 жыл бұрын

I don't think so

I thoght it was very original, and creepy. Hope you continue making films. Don't pay any kind to all the haters, they sure as hell aren't making movies. Good luck!!

@Directorraul

5 жыл бұрын

I really appreciate the love and support Bonnie we are just trying to have fun a film. Making opportunities for ours selfs you know who are talents.

@sagittariusVA

4 жыл бұрын

@@Directorraul hi there, i wouldnt be so upset if i were you if you have negative commnets, thata just how people are.

@moviereviews541

4 жыл бұрын

@@Directorraul I agree with Bonnie 😊 great job! Good story, great scenery, and me as a new subscriber!

@lindaoglesby4489

3 жыл бұрын

Agreed Bonnie, great show of encouragement 🤗🤗🤗🤗

@lindaoglesby4489

3 жыл бұрын

Linda Oglesby@Raul Colon, I noticed that some remarks were from a year ago. Guess what, it's a year later and I'm watching you today, right NOW!!! Thank YOU for THIS MOVIE and I REALLY LIKE IT!👍🤩⭐🤗

Ok that was pretty good! Thanks for sharing 😊

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4 жыл бұрын

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Barton and the actress who plays Judy are so natural with their acting. The other ones, it seems more forced. But I'm sure or at least I have hope that because this is almost 2 years old that they're acting has improved a lot more. Great short film though, really helpful for someone like myself studying film and acting.

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5 жыл бұрын

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I enjoyed that - thank you very much. Good luck with all your future projects. Best wishes from Louise. 🎥🎭🎬👍

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5 жыл бұрын

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" Thanks for watching and for your feedback." Write a movie about revenge on bad commenters, because your simple reply over and over starts to get scary

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4 жыл бұрын

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Barton Fitzpatrick! #TheChi #Reggie! :) he's certainly moving up

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5 жыл бұрын

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In Greenland, this song is known by the name of Kipisarnarlunga Asasannut, which means To My Dear Missed Ones. It is about somebody, who had to leave his hometown for education. Greenland is a very big place, and back then, only a few folks left their safe environment for a higher education. In the 1950s, almost ALL folks went to Denmark to study. We are the former colony of Denmark.

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5 жыл бұрын

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Sooo many scenes of the van pulling into the gas station lol also I like how at 7:10 you see the van pass both gas tanks and then at 7:12 see it pull up to the first one

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5 жыл бұрын

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@lillysco8799

5 жыл бұрын

That's an directing style.

I thought it was a pretty good movie. Watched it all the way through which usually means it's not too ridiculous, at least to me. Thanks for posting.

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5 жыл бұрын

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I'm only 5 minutes in, and just had to pause to comment that your actresses are winning Hair. Everyone else in the world can just go home, the race is over and those two ladies won. Just gorgeous. (Observed and commented from a place of "I want to ask one of them to do mine!" sisterhood, and not of "hur hur hur hur, pretty lady" creeping.)

@Directorraul

5 жыл бұрын

P. Strange Hello I appreciate the feedback and always looking to learn more and more this was my 2nd film with no budget just having fun and getting experience in directing.

@mysterylovescompany2657

5 жыл бұрын

@@Directorraul I think you did great! :-D

When you were given rules that will save your life? Listen!

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5 жыл бұрын

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THIS IS WHY I LOVE HORRORRRR! Want to see more.

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5 жыл бұрын

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It’s so well shot!

“my friends man they fucking dead” 😂😂😂💀💀💀 i am in love with the lady’s and there naturalness 😍 glad to see some diversity

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5 жыл бұрын

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Bravo!! 👏🏻 I really enjoyed this!! ❤

The creepy Sound in the beginning of the movie background

OMG! Terrifying! They were warned but wouldn't listen. Shocking and mysterious ending! Great job, guys. Kudos to everybody. Shows what you can do when you have a vision and A GREAT IDEA! This could easily be made into a full length movie. Awesome! 👍👍👹

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4 жыл бұрын

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Just like every other horror movie where they split up & get picked off one at a time while shouting "This isn't funny!"

😍.... With all my compliments👏!! The level of this movie is very very hight and this movie is wonderful as much as the greatest horror films which were famous in the history of the cinema. Great actors, great the cameraman and his ideas, and great the choose of the song on the end of the movie! I wish I watched another ones!

Cinematography and sound was 💯

Ok, so I'm not the only one who thought the acting needed a lot of improvement. It was hard to watch because of that.

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4 жыл бұрын

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Why all those negative comments? Is it just to say something negative 😂 ? I like the light and the sound, and how the tension is building. Actors performance is convincing and the whole project is promising, with strong grasp of horror fundamentals. I enjoyed Babysitter and this is the second movie that I watched. And yes, I would like it to be full length too

Good horror Excellent

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5 жыл бұрын

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Why was the chain lock such an issue if the door is open

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5 жыл бұрын

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@billyandrew

5 жыл бұрын

To hightlight her lack of ability as a psychic lockpocker? Lol.

I don't understand why they didn't just hide behind the chain saws....🙃

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5 жыл бұрын

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I thought this was shot and done professionally. Yes the acting could be better but you did I great job . The effects and mood were great . Keep on making movies and improving your craft .

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5 жыл бұрын

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I saw every scary movie combined here. 1. Creepy gas station guy. 2. Warning sheriff. 3. "I feel evil" girl. 4. Typical zombie ghost? 5. Children singing? Why? 6. Room 13! Oooh!*Yawn* Okay, doing a documentary. Give plain detail. Simple, 1943 Girl dies at Chesterfield Hotel body never found. 1942. Lily Mason, Singer traveling with troupe. no criminal behavior just a nice girl in show circuit. Go to town and talk about the story. A waitress says Lily's sister lives in town. Part of same trope. 97yr old Judy Mason. She tells you she never looked for her sister. Didn't care after she stole her fiance. Both actually vanished! Good riddance. Investigation leads to cottage after info found at hotel from friend with psychic abilities finds a letter behind a painting. Go to with old music: "Don't sit under the apple tree" (*related to that era.) Kids find Lily and Jonathan at the cottage... mummified. Fragile Judy meets them there. She tells her story. Then tells grand son to take them to the pond. Get rid of them. But, the ghost of Lily and Johnathan kills Judy.

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4 жыл бұрын

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Just watched again and this short video is one of the best I've ever seen !! Thanks again Raul . Plz plz do a full length film . I know it will be awesome also ! I'm waiting 😀👏🙌

Guys. Can you just at least not say mean things?, like ik its your opinion but say it to yourself because it can hurt the person's feelings.

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4 жыл бұрын

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The mailbox at the beginning gets my vote for best actor or actress

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That's so sad, but they knew better.

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3 жыл бұрын

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Not only did I enjoy, I loved the rich amount of diversity. Look forward to viewing more of your work. Thank you

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5 жыл бұрын

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@raylady0

2 жыл бұрын

That's what made it BS but I'm glad you're happy

@cadillacdevile

2 жыл бұрын

@@raylady0 😊 be well

Overall a great job, but there were some details that had me cackling - like the lock just being stuck through a random link in the middle of a single chain! That's not doing a damn thing

Enjoyed 👊🔥

I guess people in Wyoming are used to being called boy. Dude didn't even blink.

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4 жыл бұрын

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So the women packed the car while the men stood around? Yeah right 😜😂

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5 жыл бұрын

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Ok, not bad at all. At least i stayed awake to watch it all, it's a 10 out of 10 for me!

Is that House @5:54 located in Bloomington Illinois. It looks very familiar

Well done. Suspenseful. Too much on front end, compared to back end.

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5 жыл бұрын

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@billyandrew

5 жыл бұрын

*Carlos Idelone* Yeah, I don't like that build on a woman either. Lol.

You've got something here, I like your style

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4 жыл бұрын

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Something happened right here I can feel it..... Room 13 where we found the burned body.

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4 жыл бұрын

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Lovely visuals

Had to give it a thumbs up because making movies is hard and they gave I a shot.

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4 жыл бұрын

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don't understand how the loose chain would prevent them to enter the room?!

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3 жыл бұрын

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I called BS from the gate first of all you would have got his teeth knocked out for calling him a boy twice and second of all you ain't got to tell black people twice not to go somewhere we ain't that damn thirsty so I give this movie a d minus

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2 жыл бұрын

Calm down it’s just a movie, happy it got you thinking I did my job boy!!!!! Relax and enjoy it dude.

Good one💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

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5 жыл бұрын

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i have seen a lot of KZread shorts and do not agree with most of the comments... For a short film oi found the acting very refreshing.... im not a pro. but i m 6 min in and although is a slow start it is entertaining to me.... thank you

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4 жыл бұрын

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Cinematography at the start with credits was awesome only good thing about this movie, actors seemed like they were acting in a porn movie(some even looked like them too) but not in a good way.

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5 жыл бұрын

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I think the ambiance was good. The hotel looked authentic. The acting was way better than some shorts i have seen trust me. It doesnt always come naturally thats why actors take classes to work on their craft. I did notice a few mess ups in the dialogue but meh. The ghost i wouldnt have gone for the typical nightgown messy blonde. I would have had her in clothes from the time period she died but yes disheveled ,more dark eyes and smudged lipstick,bloody etc like she put up a fight before she was killed. The lighting was decent in the hotel. But watch transitioning from scene to scene it was abit too choppy. But hey i liked it i think there should be a part two.

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4 жыл бұрын

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Am I the only one that was glad that Ed...hmm, went first?

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@8:55 lol he tried to insult him and save his life at the same time.

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Totally cool!!!!

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Creepy and scary. Good old fashioned bloody horror! It is awful to know it is based on a true story😱😢

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4 жыл бұрын

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I need to be blazed to watch this

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"Based on a true story", only not.

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5 жыл бұрын

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@billyandrew

5 жыл бұрын

Yeah, about a psychic lockpicker. You never saw the original? Lol.

I watched because I love Bart!!!!!!!♥️♥️♥️ anything he in I’m watching🥰

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4 жыл бұрын

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@davogifman542

4 жыл бұрын

Bart...Simpson? I didn't see him. lol jk

@lockandloadlikehell

2 жыл бұрын

Who ls BART

One of the creepiest movies I've ever watch, I prefer this type of movie than all teenage urban legends.

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5 жыл бұрын

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The shorter white guy reminds me of Supreme Patty without the acne scars! He and the guy with the dark hair need some acting lessons. Badly. But otherwise, not so bad.

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5 жыл бұрын

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What’s the music? Please please

Anyone else yell at the screen and get passed when they don't listen?

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4 жыл бұрын

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Wow they using old gas pumps like antiques at that station.

Good film! Thanks Raul Colon!

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5 жыл бұрын

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5 жыл бұрын

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I thought it was a very good short and the time was great It was longer then most. It it keep u at the edge of ur seat

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5 жыл бұрын

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Another great short vid Raul . More plz 👏💗

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5 жыл бұрын

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The opening scenes were simply amazing! I've only watched the beginning so far but it impressed me so much I had to comment before finishing the film lol. Well done!

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5 жыл бұрын

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@embryonic7692

5 жыл бұрын

@@Directorraul dude, so personal responses. I feel ya brah. Just kidding, only not!

Well I’m gonna be honest I did not find their acting awful I Personally thought they were really good.. it’s not a Hollywood movie at the end of the day, Maybe one day they will be or producers etc! Fabulous effect for novices, it’s a Yes off me 😁

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4 жыл бұрын

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Surprisingly watchable addition to the genre. It manages to include almost every cliché in the book. The course of the story, predictable. The goals set by the filmmaker are basic scare stuff, achieved with little effort or originality. It produces easily attained jolts such as the basic jump shot and the standard creepy kids flash. And yet I watch it and embrace and enjoy the predictability, The acting was not as bad as others have made it out to be, more like method acting on a very relaxed scale .

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5 жыл бұрын

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So this is how college students look like?

@Directorraul

3 жыл бұрын

Hey Janani thanks for your feedback we shots this short film almost 4 years now I was still learning on outing together a cast and crew myself. We shot this in a day with zero money for noting.

OK acting, but waaay too dark, even for mood. Plus, the gas station scene was not good. It was immediately recognizable as an historic prop (with the push button for history next to the door and the scenic attraction sign above it). Otherwise, ok

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5 жыл бұрын

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I liked it. Great job

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4 жыл бұрын

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Excellent movie! I love horror movies!

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4 жыл бұрын

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so many issues: why was the electricity still on? why was it so damn dark you could hardly see anything even in the hallway with the overhead light? how did the cop get there so quickly? why did the guy who called the cop say they were in the woods/he didn’t know where they were? why did the cop say they wanted fresh eyes to get clues but to stay out of room 13 (presumably where the clues would be)? I could go on and on... the premise could potentially be promising, especially since it was based on a true story (I doubt anything to do with the Scooby Doo crew was true), but it needs a lot of work

@Directorraul

5 жыл бұрын

Hey, thanks for watching and for your feedback we are still Learning and will get better. Thanks for the view.

@DocBree13

5 жыл бұрын

Raul Colon you are welcome - I didn’t expect you to read that or i would have been less of an ass about it. you are definitely talented and most of what i listed was just nit-picking; I do think this is a good basis for a movie. I, too, believe you will keep getting better - and your positive response to a critique is a big reason why. I’m looking forward to seeing even bigger and better things from you! ❤️