Rewriting the Buu Saga | The Anatomy of Anime

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I love Dragon Ball Z and have fond memories of the Buu saga but in recent years I've come to the conclusion that I think it could be made shorter and have a few moments changed up here and there. Like Giving Gohan a leading role and making fusion actually matter!
So I thought I'd try my hand at it. It might end up being closer to Dragon Ball Heroes than Dragon Ball Z but at least I gave it a go!
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  • @TotallyNotMark
    @TotallyNotMark5 жыл бұрын

    Don't forget to leave a like or dislike! OH ALSO... what would you change about the Buu saga?

  • @MrTorsation476858

    @MrTorsation476858

    5 жыл бұрын

    Totally Not Mark Have all the characters fight Buu and when they realize they can’t win against him...they wish goku back towards the VERY absolute end to finally beat Buu

  • @EdibleBacon

    @EdibleBacon

    5 жыл бұрын

    Perhaps have Gohan still attain the Ultimate form, but making it more effective.

  • @FTWDKSSB

    @FTWDKSSB

    5 жыл бұрын

    If u can get part 2 out like monday or tuesday

  • @jimmyg8100

    @jimmyg8100

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@MrTorsation476858 That undermines all the characters

  • @fleeboysauce6211

    @fleeboysauce6211

    5 жыл бұрын

    Totally Not Mark I’m sorry but your take on the Buu Saga sounds like a cringy fanfic Naruto side plot. 😂😂😂😂 you don’t understand Dragon Ball at all

  • @nicholasburch3100
    @nicholasburch31005 жыл бұрын

    "Gohan needs to be the main character" *silence* Gohan fans: Don't do that, don't give me hope .

  • @mastersama9782

    @mastersama9782

    5 жыл бұрын

    Lmaaaoo

  • @cdr.bigboicitrus4933

    @cdr.bigboicitrus4933

    5 жыл бұрын

    That's how I feel

  • @Dragonds53

    @Dragonds53

    5 жыл бұрын

    When he says it and you truly have a pause in your heart

  • @AnonJax777

    @AnonJax777

    5 жыл бұрын

    I wasn't expecting to tear up when I clicked this video..

  • @averagejoe112

    @averagejoe112

    5 жыл бұрын

    His use of Gohan having PTS is immensely satisfying. It gives me goosebumps and makes the character feel real. He was fucking 11 and watched his dad die and his friends beaten nearly to death.

  • @Abdullahxvii
    @Abdullahxvii4 жыл бұрын

    Gohan wakes up from being unconscious, and suddenly falls to the ground, unconscious.

  • @sandk7969

    @sandk7969

    4 жыл бұрын

    Kono bangumi wa.....

  • @DanielFernandes-nn8fn

    @DanielFernandes-nn8fn

    4 жыл бұрын

    Me waking up tire then falling asleep again after 9 hours of sleep

  • @EVERYTHING-dc2od

    @EVERYTHING-dc2od

    4 жыл бұрын

    😂😂😂

  • @shinoxknown502

    @shinoxknown502

    4 жыл бұрын

    @@EVERYTHING-dc2od #ßäčá

  • @jasong4460

    @jasong4460

    3 жыл бұрын

    Waking up is exhausting. I'm gonna take a nap.

  • @honkeykong4049
    @honkeykong40494 жыл бұрын

    "This is Gohan's story" *Gohan proceeds to spend most of his own story unconscious.*

  • @axelvaughn9625

    @axelvaughn9625

    4 жыл бұрын

    Goku spent most of the Buu saga dead tbf

  • @Xeno455

    @Xeno455

    4 жыл бұрын

    On Namek Goku showed up just to be put in a healing pod for days.

  • @Applepoop69

    @Applepoop69

    4 жыл бұрын

    Like father, like son

  • @cloudman8911

    @cloudman8911

    4 жыл бұрын

    Exactly. Gohan is a garbage character. He shouldn t even exist.

  • @ricoco7891

    @ricoco7891

    4 жыл бұрын

    scalping forever fuck you, your favourite character shouldn't exist

  • @mrawesomeface4174
    @mrawesomeface41743 жыл бұрын

    "Everything goes black. Gohan imagines a KZread premium ad where he learns that he can watch his favorite videos ad free and uninterrupted."

  • @mr.preston1632

    @mr.preston1632

    3 жыл бұрын

    With the addition of of more downloads which removes the ability for bad internet to possibly happen the Internet being Gohan becoming Vegeta when turning SSJ2

  • @mateuszjokiel2813

    @mateuszjokiel2813

    2 жыл бұрын

    Except... It's not actually free. Gohan wakes up from the nightmare to a sudden and powerful panic attack. He then falls to the ground, unconscious.

  • @theofficialbruhfish8094

    @theofficialbruhfish8094

    Жыл бұрын

    Want a break from the ads?

  • @CerealExperimentsMizuki

    @CerealExperimentsMizuki

    Жыл бұрын

    I love KZread Premium

  • @marvelsandals4228

    @marvelsandals4228

    11 ай бұрын

    Gohan has a vision of Raid Shadow Legends

  • @silverwheelchairiot6525
    @silverwheelchairiot65255 жыл бұрын

    Gohan is Unconscious: The Movie

  • @iiclyde_nodes174

    @iiclyde_nodes174

    4 жыл бұрын

    Gohan is in a coma

  • @tbhon

    @tbhon

    4 жыл бұрын

    Gohan in a Coma is my favorite Smiths song

  • @thepopemichael

    @thepopemichael

    4 жыл бұрын

    Ironically, DBZ: Kackarot had a tiny amount of gameplay with the titular character. It was pretty much a "Gohan Ball Z Kai" as that was who was mandatory to play as in the story most of the time.

  • @MarouaneTF

    @MarouaneTF

    4 жыл бұрын

    Gohan gets 1 million panic attack: remastared 4k

  • @zaedin1

    @zaedin1

    4 жыл бұрын

    Nines A man of culture I see

  • @kierannagano4789
    @kierannagano47895 жыл бұрын

    One problem, you can’t cut out the scene where vegeta embraces trunks. It was some major character development for vegeta and makes his sacrifice even more emotional. Edit: Also piccolo saying that he won’t end up in heaven adds to the sacrifice

  • @jrand2148

    @jrand2148

    5 жыл бұрын

    Agreed. I understand why he made the change to fit his story, but that scene is perfection.

  • @bobnt

    @bobnt

    5 жыл бұрын

    I agree, keep the sacrifice. Could use the following approach to fit in with the proposed story. Vegeta should have told Trunks and Goten to take Gohan into the time chamber to save him, whilst having the humility to say that Gohan was Earth's only hope. *echoes of cell saga* Vegeta does this whilst fighting buu single-handed, in order to buy them time to get into the chamber. As Trunks stands at the door, Vegeta says something to Trunks about how proud he is of him and how he is going to miss seeing him grow up. Then Vegeta blows up the door before finally sacrificing himself up on the lookout.

  • @justawarlord

    @justawarlord

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@jrand2148 that scene brings tears to my eyes

  • @Synaux

    @Synaux

    5 жыл бұрын

    I think he could easily tweak the fight on the lookout to accommodate this.

  • @hihi-nm3uy

    @hihi-nm3uy

    5 жыл бұрын

    Don’t worry; he left it untouched and didn’t mention it.

  • @adumsundler4397
    @adumsundler43974 жыл бұрын

    I actually really like the part where Gohan went to highschool. It was really fun and I liked seeing Gohan just be himself.

  • @99Gara99

    @99Gara99

    Жыл бұрын

    That's my favorite part in the saga by far It's the drop of slice of life that the story never really had

  • @theradionicrevival8068

    @theradionicrevival8068

    Жыл бұрын

    @@99Gara99 stealing a page from plague of gripes But I deadass feel like half the reason the fans hate it, is because it’s one of the first and only times we see Gohan be himself, so now chuds that projected themself onto him can’t relate anymore because he’s not crushing skulls and getting 20 hoes 💀

  • @GenoRL_

    @GenoRL_

    Жыл бұрын

    I was gonna say like this is a series. It's not inherently a bad thing that some of the stuff we see isn't always directly contributing to the plot.

  • @dankerbell

    @dankerbell

    11 ай бұрын

    real

  • @Wizofmincraft

    @Wizofmincraft

    11 ай бұрын

    @@99Gara99wdym never had? Have you never watched Og dragonball at all?

  • @justyouraveragegamer8733
    @justyouraveragegamer87334 жыл бұрын

    90 percent of gohan’s story is him being unconscious

  • @JoesAnimationHub

    @JoesAnimationHub

    4 жыл бұрын

    I guess the Kanassans were right... "GOHAN IS THE STRONGEST IN THE UNIVERSE BUT STILL CAN'T DO CRAAAAAAAP"

  • @jacobg6628

    @jacobg6628

    4 жыл бұрын

    So... he's just like Goku? The protagonist in DBZ who was dead for the majority of the Saiyan arc (but active in other world granted), traveling or healing for most of namek, and in bed for 90% of the android arc until Cell showed up. Seems thematically appropriate to me.

  • @navonmyhand7999

    @navonmyhand7999

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@jacobg6628 Honestly I just think that because the story is being said out loud in general instead of shown over multiple hours, people finally realize this. Goku isn't present for 98% of DBZ, more like 54% or less, and the rest has him commonly off-planet, dead or sick; if not someone else is the main character for plot purposes anyways.

  • @justyouraveragegamer8733

    @justyouraveragegamer8733

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@jacobg6628 yeah pretty much

  • @GarrettSzilard
    @GarrettSzilard5 жыл бұрын

    Gohan's Great Sayiaman idea came from childhood trauma related to his encounter with the Ginyu Force. Fight me. Lol

  • @BomberDX97

    @BomberDX97

    5 жыл бұрын

    I think one of the DBZ games says that Gohan got the idea from reading superhero comics

  • @niivektv

    @niivektv

    5 жыл бұрын

    Holy Dragon Balls, this makes sense!

  • @ajax5467

    @ajax5467

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@BomberDX97 Yea Krillin said it in Fighter Z, makes sense

  • @uchihaedgelord5589

    @uchihaedgelord5589

    5 жыл бұрын

    [hilarious and original]

  • @cholkymilkmirage4984

    @cholkymilkmirage4984

    5 жыл бұрын

    omfg it all makes sense now

  • @randomrom747
    @randomrom7475 жыл бұрын

    Gohan not becoming the main character after Goku died was SO trash plotting

  • @superexclusive452

    @superexclusive452

    5 жыл бұрын

    Internet Police it’s cause Toriyama didn’t know how to implement Gohan as the protagonist

  • @tanyaharmon6739

    @tanyaharmon6739

    5 жыл бұрын

    @Darren Krone that's a myth

  • @pguy334

    @pguy334

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@superexclusive452 And even if he did, he doesn't have the same appeal as a protagonist as goku does. At least not long term

  • @dragonbird1283

    @dragonbird1283

    5 жыл бұрын

    I think DBZ should have been ended at the Cell saga.

  • @jimmyg8100

    @jimmyg8100

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@pguy334 Yeah he does. They just handled him and many other supporting characters wrong after the Cell series. Making only Vegeta and Goku (really just Goku) important.

  • @magicarff8892
    @magicarff88924 жыл бұрын

    The school arc needs to happen. All of dragon ball z has been "let's save earth", but we never cared about earth. We only cared about the group. Gohan needs to make friends with a few normal humans. I'd have gohan face a low level enemy at school. A place where you're constantly on edge thinking that the classmates could get killed. I'd have the friends join gohan to meet the Z fighters and seeing all these amazing things that have just become normal to us. Kamis lookout. Energy blasts. Friends that can fly and punch a mountain away. I'd put more attention to how surreal it is. We've watched the journey. Gohan became so strong that he could beat cell. We want him to get recognised for it. We want the classmates to know he's the equivalent of superman. Having these outsiders be part of it would also subconsciously make you think that all the other humans aren't just extras, but people with their own lives and struggles. Especially if the classmates has families in a city that the enemy destroys. It just makes "fighting for earth" more real.

  • @JinlongTheGoldenDragon

    @JinlongTheGoldenDragon

    4 жыл бұрын

    yeah you're absolutely right. The characters were fighting to "save earth" all the time but there was nothing on earth that compelled us emotionally to care about it, aside from it being the group's home. I would still like to keep Gohan hiding his identity as the one who defeated Cell for a couple reasons. 1, his character wouldn't appreciate receiving glory and fame the way Mr. Satan does. He's polite, calm and a bit socially akward and cares more about doing what's right than receiving glory for it. 2, him wanting his family to have a normal life instead of surrounded by paparazzi is totally justified. And 3, especially after getting to know Videl, he empathizes with Mr. Satan and realizes Satan needs that glory a lot more than he does. I hate the "great saiyaman" and think it's cringeworthy even though it's supposed to be ridiculous on purpose, and that's because it's completely out of Gohan's character. Since his identity would have to remain hidden I can see why it's necessary, but Gohan should be a lot more serious and in-character about this whole super hero business. Struggling with responsibilities and doing what's right and all. Much like spider man, as Mark made an extremely good comparison in Gohan's video. Plus that damn outfit needs a re-design. Still, it would be a lot more effective if just his group of friends discovered the truth. Videl and his classmates come to realize it was Gohan that beat Cell and decide to keep his secret between them, that way he gets recognized for his achievement instead of just a pat on the back and a "bye son". I mean Gohan was supposed to be Goku's successor. Everything in the Cell arc pointed to that, and then in the Buu arc they just said sike and made Gohan fade into obscurity because they didn't know what to do with him. They stuck with Goku because it was comfortable. I'm more than eager to rewrite this entire saga and even toward Super. Gohan is my absolute favourite character and it killed me seeing him obliterated to uselessness the way he was.

  • @jantheking7028

    @jantheking7028

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@JinlongTheGoldenDragon They never wanted to save Earth, they only wanted to save themselves, their family, and to keep fighting.

  • @LuisGustavoSO

    @LuisGustavoSO

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@jantheking7028 lmao

  • @TheProxy2

    @TheProxy2

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@jantheking7028 it looks like that because they had dragonballs. so death is taken very very lightly

  • @carlosavalos6468

    @carlosavalos6468

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@jantheking7028 if they did not wanted to protect Earth, they wouldn't bother fighting in crowded places but z warriors always tried to take enemies to lonely places to fight. The thing is that we are talking about an adventure/action manga and anime so characters tend to be more selfish and "human" than a regular marvel comic heroe that thinks of saving the city 24/7

  • @Romer318
    @Romer3184 жыл бұрын

    If Gohan would have continued to train like his father after the cell saga, he would have sneezed on Buu and killed him.

  • @aTristicionAXA

    @aTristicionAXA

    4 жыл бұрын

    Nah bro he would at least be ss3 level

  • @thechild7355

    @thechild7355

    3 жыл бұрын

    I disagree. Gohan always needed someone to train him to reach new heights. A good example is how Future Gohan trained for years and still lost to the androids.

  • @joaocabo07

    @joaocabo07

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@thechild7355 that's just shitty writing imo. Future Gohan should be able to kill those androids easily after getting beaten a few times. So much potential wasted.

  • @Marwan-oh4tk

    @Marwan-oh4tk

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@joaocabo07 agreed

  • @PupusaJrYT

    @PupusaJrYT

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@aTristicionAXA He was stronger than SSJ3 when fighting Super Buu, Gohan training would've made him much stronger.

  • @mazinlaw132
    @mazinlaw1325 жыл бұрын

    Gohan awakens from being unconscious.... *Gohan is then knocked out....*

  • @xerogamer7110

    @xerogamer7110

    5 жыл бұрын

    Outstanding move

  • @blackkyurem720

    @blackkyurem720

    5 жыл бұрын

    Ikr I'm like what?

  • @Ostentatiousnessness

    @Ostentatiousnessness

    5 жыл бұрын

    Flawless Victory!

  • @mourossonero

    @mourossonero

    5 жыл бұрын

    Worst writting in the entire video, he must have his reasons let's hope what follows is good

  • @nickkorkodylas5005

    @nickkorkodylas5005

    5 жыл бұрын

    *DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODGE!*

  • @Jmpaul02
    @Jmpaul025 жыл бұрын

    Gohan as main character: Knocked out or unconscious for 50% of plot

  • @theamazingmaymay123

    @theamazingmaymay123

    5 жыл бұрын

    He did say it would be hard lol

  • @Shadic6098

    @Shadic6098

    5 жыл бұрын

    Jon Paul Just like Goku when he was the MC.

  • @edwardluigi1894

    @edwardluigi1894

    5 жыл бұрын

    I mean, like father like son

  • @Sun-cg6lv

    @Sun-cg6lv

    5 жыл бұрын

    Sounds about Goku to me. Goku was dead in the Saiyan arc, away or knocked out in the Frieza arc, in a coma in The cell arc and dead in the Buu arc.

  • @omnipotiscience7251

    @omnipotiscience7251

    5 жыл бұрын

    DBS Goku cannot even stay dead for one episode.

  • @culex2513
    @culex25133 жыл бұрын

    I love that you made Gohan mentally scarred. I mean it makes sense that he would develop war like flashbacks, considering he has been fighting since he was five. I think it's perfect for making his struggle seem more realistic. Good job!

  • @atharv4403

    @atharv4403

    3 жыл бұрын

    I love the scene where goten ask what to say to his dad

  • @drew1132
    @drew11324 жыл бұрын

    5:18 "Alive or dead, dad *lives* for that stuff" hmmm

  • @MugiMikey
    @MugiMikey5 жыл бұрын

    My favorite part was when Goku ran out of time at the worst possible moment. Good job, man.

  • @CombatSportsNerd

    @CombatSportsNerd

    5 жыл бұрын

    That was both a hilarious and an amazing way to pile on the tension

  • @sparkist95

    @sparkist95

    5 жыл бұрын

    Thanks for spoiling.

  • @anothermark2082

    @anothermark2082

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@sparkist95 Your fault tbh

  • @infinitekakashi1234

    @infinitekakashi1234

    5 жыл бұрын

    Sparkist why would you read the comments before watching the video lol

  • @sparkist95

    @sparkist95

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@infinitekakashi1234 Because why wouldn't you

  • @JaxBlade
    @JaxBlade5 жыл бұрын

    If I was Bill Gates Rich I'd fund this entire thing with MadHouse/Bones style animation and choreography! Outstanding work *chefs Kiss*

  • @superexclusive452

    @superexclusive452

    5 жыл бұрын

    JaxBlade crazy you say that cause Toei right now could do better with the right scheduling

  • @jackthegreek6092

    @jackthegreek6092

    5 жыл бұрын

    Mad house just woudlnt work for Dragon Ball.

  • @infinitedeathloop5517

    @infinitedeathloop5517

    5 жыл бұрын

    shintani's designs are perfect, we wont get Shida working for madhouse though

  • @BlackPanther008

    @BlackPanther008

    5 жыл бұрын

    Notice me, Jax-senpai!

  • @superexclusive452

    @superexclusive452

    5 жыл бұрын

    America Eagle That too

  • @PeteTemplar101
    @PeteTemplar1014 жыл бұрын

    "Rule Number 3! Gohan needs to be the main character." You had my curiosity, now you have my attention

  • @GiomDe
    @GiomDe4 жыл бұрын

    "he clenches his fist and lanches towards Cell inches before he makes contact everything goes black" byyyyyyyeee soooooooon

  • @mony6847
    @mony68475 жыл бұрын

    "Gohan needs to be the main character" "This is going to be difficult"

  • @andinapangestu659

    @andinapangestu659

    5 жыл бұрын

    And...... Toriyama won't never create him as a MC. EVER!

  • @Odinsday

    @Odinsday

    5 жыл бұрын

    Gohan had so much potential and Toriyama just kept jerking off Goku.

  • @gamephreak5

    @gamephreak5

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@Odinsday I honestly believe that Gohan was planned to be the main character after Goku died in the Cell Saga. Everything lead up to that moment so well for Gohan to take over. Seeing how in Japan everyone loves and clamors for more Goku (no matter what), Toriyama most likely had little choice when his editor/publisher pushed him to bring back Goku. It made business sense: customers wanted more Goku, and Goku brings the money. This is the guy who absolutely hated Vegeta as a character. When he was killed off, his role in the Saiyan and Freeza sagas were done as far as Toriyama was concerned, but Vegeta was such a huge fan favorite and begged for Vegeta to return, so Toriyama bent to the will of his customers. It's all about money in the end.

  • @BlackWingedSeraphX

    @BlackWingedSeraphX

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@Odinsday Agreed. He doesn't understand character development.

  • @scoredfranklive337

    @scoredfranklive337

    5 жыл бұрын

    He was the best as a kid but as adult I’m mad

  • @Shaymin0
    @Shaymin05 жыл бұрын

    Goten: what do you think dad will say to me? Gohan's mind: Byeee sonnnnnn Gohan: Lets not think about that until later...

  • @33GLOCK

    @33GLOCK

    4 жыл бұрын

    HA

  • @jacksoncallanan8517

    @jacksoncallanan8517

    4 жыл бұрын

    Tfs reference

  • @jacksoncallanan8517

    @jacksoncallanan8517

    4 жыл бұрын

    Lalogue not every one watches dbz abridged

  • @WhiskeyTango84

    @WhiskeyTango84

    4 жыл бұрын

    @@jacksoncallanan8517 No shit! Really??

  • @GODOFAWSOMENESS1

    @GODOFAWSOMENESS1

    4 жыл бұрын

    Mohamed Mowlid 9000!!!!!!!

  • @azofeclipse
    @azofeclipse4 жыл бұрын

    Gohan pretending to be normal at school was some of my favorite bits of Dragonball. It does have an epilogue-ish feeling, though, the, whatchamacallit, coming home with gifts part of hero's journey.

  • @jojotsi8
    @jojotsi85 жыл бұрын

    6:15 SO YOUR TELLING ME THAT TRUNKS DOESNT GO TO THE PARK????

  • @nikakupreishvili7

    @nikakupreishvili7

    4 жыл бұрын

    No Trunks starts crying and Vegeta still takes him to park

  • @PalmdalesAdonis

    @PalmdalesAdonis

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@nikakupreishvili7 no actually trunks asks gohan to take him to the park, remember gohan is the main character. Gohan then has a talk with trunks at the park about vegeta that was very deep

  • @TheAmazingMusicMan
    @TheAmazingMusicMan5 жыл бұрын

    “Gohan needs to be the main character.... this is gonna be difficult...” -Mark/Toriyama

  • @bryce7289
    @bryce72895 жыл бұрын

    Everything goes black: Ad plays* Perfect timing lmfao

  • @kaoset1237

    @kaoset1237

    5 жыл бұрын

    They need to do that in dbz abridge. have a character talk about the ad as what they saw while blacked out.

  • @Samos900

    @Samos900

    5 жыл бұрын

    Damn, that’s weird. I watched it uninterrupted

  • @azureangel8217

    @azureangel8217

    5 жыл бұрын

    That happened to me lmfao

  • @UrbanRiotProductions

    @UrbanRiotProductions

    5 жыл бұрын

    Right!? I was thinking the same thing.

  • @AizakkuFu

    @AizakkuFu

    5 жыл бұрын

    YTPremium Members: "Is this some kind of peasant joke I'm to rich to understand?"

  • @darkguardian2567
    @darkguardian25673 жыл бұрын

    Gohan : The Unconscious Coming to cinemas near you

  • @krischioney
    @krischioney4 жыл бұрын

    Totally Not Mark: Now, the Goku and Vegeta fight I WILL NOT TOUCH. Me: Oh, well at least that doesn't change at al- Totally Not Mark: But they will finish on the Lookout. Me again: YOU LIED TO MEEE!!! **Initiates Final Explosion**

  • @DragonballBlack
    @DragonballBlack5 жыл бұрын

    Gohan needed to be the main hero of the Buu Saga.

  • @chubbs6135

    @chubbs6135

    5 жыл бұрын

    Ayy BlackScape, nice to see you herr

  • @jyogin4079

    @jyogin4079

    5 жыл бұрын

    BlackScape true

  • @UnifiedEntity

    @UnifiedEntity

    5 жыл бұрын

    He didnt deserve it. Sits around for hours to get a power up meanwhile Goku and Vegeta work their asses off. And Vegeta actually getting his full circle development. Nah. If Gohan worked for it and kept training then maybe.

  • @corrputgamer

    @corrputgamer

    5 жыл бұрын

    RaginDXDemon he did train with the Z sword for a bit and was able to handle it well, while Goku himself sort of struggled to hold it

  • @irish_starfish

    @irish_starfish

    5 жыл бұрын

    Agreed

  • @SUPERRRSAIYANNNNN
    @SUPERRRSAIYANNNNN5 жыл бұрын

    The only think I disliked here was Vegeta not being able to tell Trunks he’s proud of him. And Piccolo telling him that he’ll end up in hell regardless. That is pivotal to Vegeta’s Sacrifice.

  • @redhunter8731

    @redhunter8731

    5 жыл бұрын

    I agree because Vegeta has a choice at that moment and he makes the right one. It marks him as a good guy for the first time. At that point in my eyes Vegeta became a Z-fighter instead of just someone who was sometimes allied with them.

  • @ManniLive

    @ManniLive

    5 жыл бұрын

    Piccolo telling him he will be in hell regardless made it even better. Vegeta was still fearless knowing that even tho he was going to sacrifice himself he was going to hell. He never did anything for anyone before but finally had reason Todo so knowing he wouldn't be rewarded for it.

  • @SUPERRRSAIYANNNNN

    @SUPERRRSAIYANNNNN

    5 жыл бұрын

    Manni Live Exactly. And what Piccolo said as he was flying off with Krillin _“For the first time, Vegeta is fighting for someone other than himself.”_

  • @ItzzN8

    @ItzzN8

    5 жыл бұрын

    Yeah

  • @lmlopez6155

    @lmlopez6155

    5 жыл бұрын

    Everything in that scene perfectly tied up Vegeta's character arc. He knew there was no reward or way out if he choose to sacrifice himself and ensured not only the safety of his own son but also the safety of Goten. Then, before being, as far as he knee, being wiped from existence, he though of his family and Goku.

  • @MiaowGaiGar
    @MiaowGaiGar4 жыл бұрын

    You put effort into it, and you do a good job of theming without the viewer needing to know what came before it, but you make the same mistake most people do when they go at this subject: you don't get how Dragon Ball works. The themes are too mature, the storylines are too complex, and overall you're just projecting what you wish it were from the perspective of an adult, missing what you and other people liked about it in the first place. There's no light-heartedness, there's no quick and easy-to-get-into thread, and there's overall a lack of the simplicity and "digestability" the series generally has and originally makes the series so appealing in the first place; it's *not* complicated, and it's *not* complex. This is one of the reasons the recent Broly movie was so well-received by fans, but was also a solid production on its own merits; it did what Dragon Ball does well, while minimizing what it isn't great at, producing a satisfying and fun experience with just enough heart and charm to make you smile along the way. This doesn't do that; it's an almost totally different entity wearing the skin of the series. For better or worse, you can't "fix" most of Dragon Ball without making it not Dragon Ball anymore. The common gripes most people have with it -- that it's inconsistent, makes shit up as it goes along, constantly breaks its own rules, and needlessly marginalizes potential clever use of characters in favor of just raising the bar -- are all generally addressable without losing the spirit of the series, but this ultimately doesn't tackle any of those issues, bar the touching-upon of the latter. Ultimately, a swing and a miss, because you tried using a golf club to hit the baseball.

  • @bullet5760

    @bullet5760

    4 жыл бұрын

    Crazy thing is the inconsistent making sht up not following it's own rules are for those who need to revisit the material because they didn't comprehend what they originally saw or read. Those same individuals fail to recognize that the story expands and we get a much longer world building so some facts of it turnout to be just theories such as the potara fusion as an example. Never had non gods used them prior to goku and vegeta so no one would know that after an hour or with extra exertion the fusion would end. In the buu saga we all assume it was because of being inside buu that the fusion ended it's never stated buu was the cause. As goku and frieza holds the record for the longest 5mins, buu and vegito can hold the record for the shortest hour. Only thing I would change about dragonball in recent years is then animation studio. When madhouse a1 whitefox and a couple others really wanna flex there animation raises the bar.

  • @purerage7963

    @purerage7963

    4 жыл бұрын

    MiaowGaiGar Fantastic points. I feel like *everyone* misses the essence of Dragon Ball when trying to address its flaws, and they generally don't look back to check their work to see what they added in the end compared to what was lost.

  • @MiaowGaiGar

    @MiaowGaiGar

    4 жыл бұрын

    Sometimes you can have a better thought-out product and still come out with a worse end result, eh?

  • @_WanderYT

    @_WanderYT

    4 жыл бұрын

    MiaowGaiGar You summed up everything I was thinking about PERFECTLY, I really hope he notices your comment so he can draw inspiration and improve on these missteps

  • @TheSearchForTruth88

    @TheSearchForTruth88

    4 жыл бұрын

    You people hate it because it introduces adult and mature themes LMAO so dumb, absolutely no brains in any of you

  • @theegg2997
    @theegg29973 жыл бұрын

    one thing that should’ve been included was vegetas speech to trunks, probably one of the most heart wrenching and well deserved moments in the series. Vegeta could’ve called trunks over to him to tell him to bring gohan into the chamber, he does the whole “ive never hugged you thing” and then it continues as you described

  • @XBLspartanx170
    @XBLspartanx1705 жыл бұрын

    Gohan having PTSD from the cell saga.... hooo boy thats a bit too real for a shonen anime.

  • @keno4770

    @keno4770

    5 жыл бұрын

    Naruto and mha kinda touched in subjects similar to it. And I think even the original dragon Ball would’ve done something like that near its end. But now in this super era, they wouldn’t even try to do anything as real as this.

  • @babarshah6479

    @babarshah6479

    5 жыл бұрын

    XBLspartanx170 In Naruto there has been a few characters who had intense PTSD like Kakashi, Itachi and a few others. Also shown a few times in MHA with Todoroki and at times Midoriya Fairy Tail with examples such as Gray, Erza, Jellal and Kagura HunterXHunter with Gon and Killiua during the entire Chinera Arc And many others I can’t think of at the moment

  • @federicoarmada8775

    @federicoarmada8775

    5 жыл бұрын

    Goku had nightmares about having his family killed in front of him while dealing with his heart disease, Gohan had to remember those killed by Freezer to turn into Super Saiyan, this wouldn’t seem that far off if done properly.

  • @CombatSportsNerd

    @CombatSportsNerd

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@federicoarmada8775 and done more consistently

  • @CombatSportsNerd

    @CombatSportsNerd

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@keno4770 wait a minute when did my hero Academia touch on PTSD?

  • @gingie7995
    @gingie79955 жыл бұрын

    "Everything goes black" *Cut to ad* Nice

  • @Jam-bh2fp

    @Jam-bh2fp

    5 жыл бұрын

    Same thing happened

  • @OffGridHacks

    @OffGridHacks

    5 жыл бұрын

    Yeah I got the same

  • @bagofcrime1772

    @bagofcrime1772

    5 жыл бұрын

    Gingie because cars and dragon ball go hand and hand

  • @delinseurn

    @delinseurn

    4 жыл бұрын

    Lol you don't have KZread Premium ? Fucking plebs

  • @hibikiverney4146

    @hibikiverney4146

    4 жыл бұрын

    Same

  • @javieralfredoparedes3781
    @javieralfredoparedes37813 жыл бұрын

    Gohan going to school is the best piece of anime/manga ever created and definitely the best DBZ arc ever. No, you can't change my mind.

  • @bread6975
    @bread69754 жыл бұрын

    Gohan: Dont worry about me Videl, I've got plot armor. Videl: *laughs in anime*

  • @SmartAlec1
    @SmartAlec15 жыл бұрын

    "I hate to leave thinga on a cliffhanger-" That seems less like a cliffhanger and more like a great ending

  • @maxbearington7565

    @maxbearington7565

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@KimiOmega Gohan is trapped in the Room of Spirit and Time, not dead.

  • @shoOoterlegend

    @shoOoterlegend

    5 жыл бұрын

    That's what toriyama said about the end of the frieza saga

  • @adolfodef

    @adolfodef

    5 жыл бұрын

    It actually would LOOK like a bitterseet ending if you are not aware of Majin Buu´s contractual inmortality (no individual entity can ever kill him). Assume that Vegeta knows his self-sacrifice would completely destroy Kami´s lookout (plus Karin´s Tower and Cloud´s Village below, but he has never met them anyways); so he had to wait for Trunks to get to that "safety bunker" that is the time/dimension room [so if he fails to Kill Majin Buu, at least the monster would not be able to follow them inside]. -> Even if they can never get out, his only son will have at least enough food and water to live for a few years with a friend and a mentor.

  • @SmartAlec1

    @SmartAlec1

    5 жыл бұрын

    Jokes aside: Everyone saves the day in the saiyan saga, Goku does in the Frieza saga, Gohan does in the Cell saga and Vegeta does in the Buu saga.

  • @adriannaranjo4397
    @adriannaranjo43975 жыл бұрын

    _Now in the time chamber Gohan, Goten and Trunks are safe, but will they be able to find a way out of the endless void? Can Goku find a way back to his friends in time to save the world from Majin Buu? Find out next time_ on Dragon Ball Z! *Next episode card: Majin Buu defeated!*

  • @TotallyNotMark

    @TotallyNotMark

    5 жыл бұрын

    This is the best best comment. You get a gold star.

  • @MrMereum

    @MrMereum

    5 жыл бұрын

    the dbz narrator died he was the best

  • @Maximus4587

    @Maximus4587

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@MrMereum I'm assuming that you're talking about the late Jose Lavat (the narrator for DBZ's Latin-American Spanish dub), aren't you?

  • @TwistedChungus

    @TwistedChungus

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@MrMereum Uh... Which narrator? Because I know that the one for the FuniMation dub, at least, is still alive.

  • @bakercat2845

    @bakercat2845

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@TwistedChungus Funimation's was Kyle Herbert, same voice actor as Adult Gohan.

  • @rishabhranjan7687
    @rishabhranjan76874 жыл бұрын

    I like how you used Tapion's theme. Fits perfectly in that moment.

  • @Gilbert_Dice_Gottfried
    @Gilbert_Dice_Gottfried2 жыл бұрын

    Videl and Mr. Satan are such amazingly written characters in the original Buu saga if you think about it. Toriyama knew what he was doing with human characters. I even liked tien’s minor role in the buu and android’s sagas. The other human characters were written well too, if you enjoy yamcha’s comedic role and krillins character development in early z. In my opinion they’re all supporting characters written perfectly. Just wish tiencha from budokai 2 was an actual thing in the original buu arc lol. Maybe a buu absorption form?

  • @sporeceress1465

    @sporeceress1465

    Жыл бұрын

    This is why I love Abridged. TFS adore Tenshinhan and take every opportunity to give him his moments.

  • @Kathelina
    @Kathelina5 жыл бұрын

    I love how you gave Gohan PTSD (or at least something similar) I've always thought that it didn't make sense for him to move on so easily.

  • @PrinceSilvermane

    @PrinceSilvermane

    5 жыл бұрын

    It makes sense he'd develop some form of complex after he'd been the only one to survive so many times.

  • @xXHappymanXx1

    @xXHappymanXx1

    5 жыл бұрын

    It sounds to me like suvivors guilt

  • @BigDerp21

    @BigDerp21

    5 жыл бұрын

    dragonballs... nuff said

  • @kurgan668

    @kurgan668

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@PrinceSilvermane and regardless of Dragonballs, he'd seen his dads corpse at age 4, seeing anybody dead at that young age would traumatise you, and doubly so if it was the father you idolised. then, add into that his being Kidnapped by Piccolo, regardless of how, in later life, he looked up to Piccolo, that would just add to the mess. then, add to that watching Yamcha, Tien and Chaotzu get murdered by Nappa (Yamchas death probably being the most traumatic, because, after thinking he'd won, Yamcha got blindsided), and then, Piccolo sacrificing himself to save Gohan, and, once again, somebody he is close to dying right in front of him. then add him having his neck broken by Recoome on Namek, on top of watching an entire species getting murdered by the space mafia, then Krillin dying in front of him. then you get the androids, who are hunting down his seriously ill father, to kill him, in Gohans mind, just because, and made even worse by him being surrounded by death at every turn as Cell wipes out entire citys, men, women and children, hundreds of thousands of them. then Vegeta letting Cell reach his perfect form, and, after that, his father, the man who is supposed to protect him, not only making him fight cell, but, giving Cell a senzu bean just before they fight. and then, his dad dies, again, and, this time, refuses to be wished back how in the hell is Gohan not a gibbering wreck by the start of the Buu saga? or a sociopath, who has been desensitised to death and suffering, who, after seeing so much death, feels that there is so little point in anybody being alive that he thinks that peoples lives are meaningless (frightening when you consider that, just a few days before his father comes back, he is literally the single most powerful creature on the planet) after all of that, Gohan having PTSD would be Gohan being a well rounded, happy go lucky individual

  • @andyknightwarden9746

    @andyknightwarden9746

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@xXHappymanXx1 Oftentimes they go hand in hand.

  • @mushroomdude123
    @mushroomdude1235 жыл бұрын

    This is a good rewrite! The confusion from everyone during the last few minutes of this really amplified the intensity. My only tiny nitpick is that by removing Trunks from the situation _before_ Vegeta sacrifices himself also removes the hug they shared, which I feel weakens his realization that he needs to be a better father.

  • @nineteenct

    @nineteenct

    5 жыл бұрын

    Also why would Trunks ignore Vegeta getting shot by Gohan completely? Shouldn’t he at least be conflicted? To virtually not acknowledge his father, and help Gohan without hesitation is questionable

  • @TheMrjay95

    @TheMrjay95

    5 жыл бұрын

    nineteenct he saw what his father did at the tournament

  • @Grey0618

    @Grey0618

    5 жыл бұрын

    Fair point

  • @treythomas7193

    @treythomas7193

    5 жыл бұрын

    But if he was conflicted about vegeta at the tournament he should still be conflicted at the lookout. Not flip a full 180 "oh my dad us evil now"

  • @nineteenct

    @nineteenct

    5 жыл бұрын

    trey thomas Exactly. Like I’m sure Mark himself knows he could flesh out Trunks more. This was just 15 mins after all

  • @benjaminvonstein
    @benjaminvonstein4 жыл бұрын

    The episodes with Gohan going to High School might not matter, but they are some of the most fun ones in all of DBZ. 8:36 A gritty reboot in a universe where death is just an annoyance just doesn't work. Videl's pleas for Gohan to stay can be put to rest with a simple title-drop.

  • @avez
    @avez4 жыл бұрын

    I like the idea of Gohan having to take Goku's place as Earth's guarding, but giving him mental issues as a poor shot at depth in the character is unnecessary. Your entire story is just random interactions that don't stay true to the actual DBZ characters. Piccolo yells at Gohan, then he's suddenly depending on him, Goku yells at Gohan, Gohan yells at videl... At this point the story just sounds Grimm and edgy/dark. This isn't DBZ, this feels more like future saga than the happy, light-hearted DBZ.

  • @dmas7749

    @dmas7749

    4 жыл бұрын

    i mean dbz is more edgy/grim than db anyway, the future saga IS still a part of it, i don't think it needs to go to 11 in that, but i think it could be made to work

  • @JinlongTheGoldenDragon

    @JinlongTheGoldenDragon

    4 жыл бұрын

    Idk why so many people are finding Gohan having mental issues so absurd. It should be surprising he lasted without any visible damage to his mind at all. This boy had barely begun to live, been kidnapped and forced to fend for himself in order to fight alien invaders, watched his father, master and friends die before his eyes multiple times, and had his own father throw him under the bus to fight a bio android, giving him a fucking senzu bean, and had to pull off the impossible by running on pure emotional adrenaline to save the earth and all living things. And all of that before he hit puberty. I think you'd have some PTSD too if you had your neck snapped by an alien cheerleader at the tender age of 5.

  • @MAR10WORLD

    @MAR10WORLD

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@dmas7749 Plus he fucks up the Goku/Vegeta fight. Completely missing the point. Bad fan fic

  • @arbetor12

    @arbetor12

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@MAR10WORLD and it's only the first draft Talk about harsh when you fail to try and improve it Beside gohan have some mental health problems makes perfect sense given everything that's happened to him through his life

  • @OnTheJordanBone
    @OnTheJordanBone5 жыл бұрын

    1. Gohan kills Super Buu. 2. Goku and Vegeta stay dead. 3. Fusion Reborn happens. 4. Janemba is canon.

  • @YEOsCanal

    @YEOsCanal

    5 жыл бұрын

    Love it 🥰 You just made my day.

  • @stillfrost578

    @stillfrost578

    5 жыл бұрын

    Beautiful

  • @theguy4319

    @theguy4319

    5 жыл бұрын

    You mean Kid Buu #2?

  • @BigPapaShane

    @BigPapaShane

    5 жыл бұрын

    Points 3 & 4 conflict with one of the rules, which is no movie details

  • @dylancrick

    @dylancrick

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@BigPapaShane but buu dieing ends the buu saga so kinda yes and no

  • @flowerprower
    @flowerprower5 жыл бұрын

    *Sees title* Please Fix Goten Please Fix Goten Please Fix Goten Please Fix Goten Please Fix Goten Please Fix Goten. He deserves SOOOO Much More, PLEASE FIX GOTEN.

  • @estefanolivares4159

    @estefanolivares4159

    5 жыл бұрын

    Sounds like part 2 may give you your wish

  • @sloppyranger7679

    @sloppyranger7679

    5 жыл бұрын

    FINALLY SOMEONE WHO FEELS THE SAME WAY I FEEL. GOTEN DESERVES IS OWN ARC SAME WAY GOHAN HAD WITH CELL

  • @DontCallMeAaron

    @DontCallMeAaron

    5 жыл бұрын

    I don’t see what needs to be fixed. He was a child. His impact wasn’t much more than Gohan when frieza showed up

  • @BlindBandit1x

    @BlindBandit1x

    5 жыл бұрын

    WHAT ABOUT MY BOI TRUNKS

  • @radicallaruby

    @radicallaruby

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@DontCallMeAaron I must say that at least with Gohan in the Freeza arc, it played into how Gohan would later develop as a character especially in the Cell arc. Goten still, even in Super, has done nothing of significance. He's nearly on par with Chiaotzu in terms of relevance. Even kid Trunks had a moment in knocking some sense into his future self when it came to protecting Mai. Goten needs much more than he's been getting since his intro.

  • @CommandGrabEnthusiast
    @CommandGrabEnthusiast4 жыл бұрын

    Gohans flashback: gets last resorted after using his lvl 3 in fighterz.

  • @spider59er35
    @spider59er354 жыл бұрын

    Know what I realized with Gohan’s original Anger scene at the Tournament..... Gohan just had PTSD from Cell doing the same thing to #16, and now another evil is crushing the head of the innocent And during that moment he _is_ 16, wearing his color scheme, watching the innocent get hurt, he doesn’t want the same mistake to happen again, so he lunged in without hesitation, unlike the time in the Cell games

  • @MyManJFKTV
    @MyManJFKTV5 жыл бұрын

    Gohan sayin' "I always come back" is pretty deep. He's watched everyone else die, but he's always there to live another day. I soooo wish Gohan would have been the main character to end DBZ. It was set up perfectly. I can't wait for the next video. One thing tho, I'd hope the slice of life episodes aren't rushed.

  • @ms7live488
    @ms7live4885 жыл бұрын

    You know, I love the entire thing, but I feel like characters pop in and out of consciousness way to much. Feels like a plot device. Other then that, it was amazing! Keep up the great work!!!

  • @appledough3843

    @appledough3843

    5 жыл бұрын

    GlitchyGohan 4000 Only Gohan does that and it only happens twice.

  • @peynnep6483

    @peynnep6483

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@appledough3843 3 :D

  • @Igneeka

    @Igneeka

    5 жыл бұрын

    Gohan being unconscious, waking up to sucker blast Vegeta just to yet again fall unconscious to a ki-blast was pretty funny to me

  • @lfestevao

    @lfestevao

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@appledough3843 also Goku. Thanks to Vegeta that sneaky backstabbing son of a gun.

  • @parthasarathipanda4571

    @parthasarathipanda4571

    5 жыл бұрын

    I think with a good screenplay it can work...

  • @DigitalBe4r
    @DigitalBe4r4 жыл бұрын

    The first time I watched this video, I was excited to see some good starting materials Team Four Star could use to rewrite and do the Buu Arc in DBZA. And now I know they finally ended the project with Cell arc, I am a little sad to see that video again, thinking we were that close to finally have a GOOD buu arc.

  • @phantomx3902
    @phantomx39024 жыл бұрын

    3:40 'everything goes black' literally ads play gg

  • @TypetwoAbsolute
    @TypetwoAbsolute5 жыл бұрын

    Did.. Did you just stealth remove Krillin from the Buu Saga?

  • @SuccessfulSuperstar

    @SuccessfulSuperstar

    5 жыл бұрын

    Lmao

  • @goncaloferreira6429

    @goncaloferreira6429

    5 жыл бұрын

    characters like krilling and yamcha that are not strong enough to face enemies like buu could still be used evacuating people, or raising energy shields around common people that were in the way of stray energy beams

  • @imperialsarcasm

    @imperialsarcasm

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@goncaloferreira6429 For real, stop sending them into the heart of the battle as fodder (or in Goku's case a transformation key, Yamcha is just fodder)

  • @worthyedge9307

    @worthyedge9307

    5 жыл бұрын

    Oh lord I didn't even notice

  • @j19aiden91

    @j19aiden91

    5 жыл бұрын

    If you hadn't brought it up, I wouldn't have noticed. Good catch

  • @kdtheii
    @kdtheii Жыл бұрын

    I like this but I would change one thing. I'd make Goku's appearance in the world tournament a secret, like when Goku fought his Grandpa Gohan. The difference is that Goku's energy has been shielded musically by Supreme Kai because Goku is actually there on a mission from the Kai's to help locate and possibly stop Buu if worse came to worse. It would make the tournament so much fun like original Dragonball. You get to see match ups you wouldn't normally see like Krillin vs Vegeta (2nd round match) , Gohan vs 18, Piccolo vs. Goku in disguise (he realizes it's Goku when he recognizes Goku's fighting style and keeps the secret) and Yamcha vs Vegeta (1st round match - Yamcha loses but he kind of gets Vegeta's respect). Then in the final fight have it be between Gohan and Goku. Goku gets Gohan to push past his limits again purposely and that's when the Majin's attack and Goku lets it happen warning everyone who wants to help to stay back and trust in Goku. Then everything unfolds from there.

  • @wesleyb_92
    @wesleyb_92 Жыл бұрын

    Gohan comforting goten about meeting their father gets me right in the feels

  • @kairowkuroshi1371
    @kairowkuroshi13715 жыл бұрын

    With Each "Rule number" I hear Robin Williams as Genie

  • @giorno6997

    @giorno6997

    5 жыл бұрын

    Kairow Kuroshi wame

  • @giorno6997

    @giorno6997

    5 жыл бұрын

    Same

  • @MarkerMurker

    @MarkerMurker

    5 жыл бұрын

    That was the point, I'd say. He did it exactly right

  • @andyknightwarden9746

    @andyknightwarden9746

    5 жыл бұрын

    I believe that was intentional.

  • @goncaloferreira6429
    @goncaloferreira64295 жыл бұрын

    positives 1- not making going super saying trivial( gotenks and trunks) 2- the conversation between Gohan and picollo, reinforcing their strong connection, something that is often forgoten and not used 3- Gohan losing it and not catching up to the others plan at the tournament reinforces the idea that he is less experienced and actually still just a kid/ teenager with lots of room to grow. Even if he already saved the planet once 4- great ending Negatives 1- perhaps too much of people passing out? 2- Gohan blasting vegeta is ok but not making a hole in his chest Bonus round 1- making use of kami´s lookout is nice but not believable. we all know Mr. POPO would put an end to Buu`s threat in an instant :)

  • @whiteichigozangetsu4441

    @whiteichigozangetsu4441

    5 жыл бұрын

    Gonçalo Ferreira buu: (see’s mister popo) Mister popo: Bye

  • @winfieldtrail8956

    @winfieldtrail8956

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@whiteichigozangetsu4441 Pecking order.

  • @willjace789

    @willjace789

    5 жыл бұрын

    So,2 full-saiyins and 3 half-saiyins getting crudded on in a good way?

  • @itachisusanoo3689

    @itachisusanoo3689

    5 жыл бұрын

    personally think gokus transformation into super saiyan 3 is one of the single most greatest moments in all of anime (only matched by teen gohan super saiyan 2), so Id very, very much like to keep the transformation.

  • @xangods

    @xangods

    5 жыл бұрын

    Nah, Popo wouldn't. He'd be too busy making toasts. And when kid Buu emerged, it would be time to butter the toasts.

  • @paeratatahuriorangi498
    @paeratatahuriorangi4984 жыл бұрын

    I’m gonna do what 15 year old girls do to bnha yaoi. *”this is canon to me”*

  • @emiliianoportillo1311

    @emiliianoportillo1311

    3 жыл бұрын

    "Had us in the first half not gonna lie."

  • @Keegstar
    @Keegstar4 жыл бұрын

    7:50 "something's not right!" *gets up and looks at hands* "OH GOD IM A LOW POLY VIDEO GAME CHARACTER!!!"

  • @arklaw8306
    @arklaw83065 жыл бұрын

    "Gohan needs to be the main character." Oh dear... *Instant transmits to the kitchen and grabs a Sayan-size portion of pop-corn.*

  • @RealdealismDev

    @RealdealismDev

    5 жыл бұрын

    Arklaw Hilarious ahaha.

  • @Optimaloptimus

    @Optimaloptimus

    5 жыл бұрын

    Would do the same lol.

  • @Catzillator
    @Catzillator5 жыл бұрын

    Thank you I always dream that Gohan can be main character too. I am also glad that Chichi is more supportive about fighting.

  • @CombatSportsNerd

    @CombatSportsNerd

    5 жыл бұрын

    @Luis Suazo do you have any proof to support this?

  • @gohanmoreno7

    @gohanmoreno7

    5 жыл бұрын

    Well, in the original Buu saga she is more supportive about fighting too, remember that she trained Goten, the death of Goku hits her hard.

  • @CombatSportsNerd

    @CombatSportsNerd

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@gohanmoreno7 and then proceeds to call Goten a monster when he transforms. . . . .

  • @nasferg6698

    @nasferg6698

    5 жыл бұрын

    The Otaku Dragon Slayer to me chichi isnt bad she actually realistic and cae for her kid she just want her kids to be great and not be like their father. Goku is only a genius in fighting pretty dull in everything else

  • @CombatSportsNerd

    @CombatSportsNerd

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@nasferg6698 I would agree, if she didn't say dumb shit like *_this_* i.imgur.com/PCy7cnJ.jpg

  • @darksoul5248
    @darksoul52484 жыл бұрын

    That part when gohan heard about the fusion dance I was like NO WAY this story is amazing how did you come up with this story

  • @AtomicQBomb
    @AtomicQBomb3 жыл бұрын

    “Gohan shot a blast straight through Vegeta’s sternum.” Vegeta gets back up and does his final explosion. Sorry, but do you know where the sternum is mark lol

  • @Rairyuujin
    @Rairyuujin5 жыл бұрын

    Making Go-Chan the main character?! Piccolo: YES! YES! YES! He can fight! He Can Win! He Can Do This! Lmao 😂

  • @Koorosm

    @Koorosm

    5 жыл бұрын

    I understood that reference

  • @SoraRue19

    @SoraRue19

    5 жыл бұрын

    I feel so much joy in my cold heart

  • @unknownmystery4579

    @unknownmystery4579

    5 жыл бұрын

    yes

  • @ChuckyBeingChucky

    @ChuckyBeingChucky

    5 жыл бұрын

    You must be so proud

  • @Asura743

    @Asura743

    5 жыл бұрын

    Did our heart just skip beat That is precious

  • @RayRayDontPlayPlay
    @RayRayDontPlayPlay5 жыл бұрын

    I like it... but removing that Vegeta and Trunks moment before he kills himself hurt me...

  • @JCotto739

    @JCotto739

    5 жыл бұрын

    Raymond Garcia sacrifices himself* Dont disrespect the prince of all saiyans like that.

  • @bbriefs8689

    @bbriefs8689

    5 жыл бұрын

    do you want a powerful moment, or a powerful story?

  • @thetribalist6923

    @thetribalist6923

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@bbriefs8689 I think both could be had if Vegeta were the hero of this arc. Gohan just had his with Cell. Goku had plenty. For Vegeta's redemption to truly come full circle, he should have been the one to save the day. Besides that moment was one of, if not the best in the series and isn't worth trading.

  • @bbriefs8689

    @bbriefs8689

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@thetribalist6923 you're right. it was a beautiful moment. maybe if they saved it for the very end. i think it would have been more meaningful if it had actually worked tho.

  • @senyu_lolz4202

    @senyu_lolz4202

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@thetribalist6923 bruh this arc isnt revolving around gohan tho and vegeta is actually more useful in this arc

  • @FourZ4
    @FourZ42 жыл бұрын

    gonna keep going thru all this mans videos til they are all back

  • @JinlongTheGoldenDragon
    @JinlongTheGoldenDragon4 жыл бұрын

    Idk why so many people are finding Gohan having mental issues so absurd. It should be surprising he lasted without any visible damage to his mind at all. This boy had barely begun to live, been kidnapped and forced to fend for himself in order to fight alien invaders, watched his father, master and friends die before his eyes multiple times, and had his own father throw him under the bus to fight a bio android, giving him a fucking senzu bean, and had to pull off the impossible by running on pure emotional adrenaline to save the earth and all living things. And all of that before he hit puberty. I think you'd have some PTSD too if you had your neck snapped by an alien cheerleader at the tender age of 5.

  • @HeroesHoshi
    @HeroesHoshi5 жыл бұрын

    I see you're playing out the Traumatic experience, but Gohan getting knocked unconscious again and again was pretty conflicting.

  • @gyroscopesrcool

    @gyroscopesrcool

    5 жыл бұрын

    True... but if you think about it, that's literally what happened to Goku in the Saiyan/Freiza arc. Raditz shows up, Goku dies. Vegeta/Nappa show up, Goku is hospitalized. Goku fights the Ginyus, he's in the healing tank. Fights Frieza, gone for years. Same shit, just over a shorter time frame IMO. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

  • @ogo5516

    @ogo5516

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@gyroscopesrcool yeah but those were different arcs. This all happened in one. Which makes it seem more obnoxious

  • @blackkyurem720

    @blackkyurem720

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@gyroscopesrcool Gohan was knocked back out less than a minute from when he regained consciousness tho in this video.

  • @damienward2899

    @damienward2899

    5 жыл бұрын

    When a saiyan survives being beaten down, they come back stronger. Knocking Gohan unconscious twice would probably give him a massive power boost once he recovers. This was actually Vegetas strategy in the Frieza saga.

  • @shadowblitzo123

    @shadowblitzo123

    5 жыл бұрын

    that's why it'll make gohan more of a badass when he powers up and his resolve is back

  • @takisvidalis4883
    @takisvidalis48834 жыл бұрын

    Videl might not be important in DBZ but if gohan never had a kid with her Super Saiyan God wasn't gonna be a thing.

  • @arkarc8735
    @arkarc87354 жыл бұрын

    If you ever decide to make a fan animation of this story, I'd be cool with auditioning for super buu

  • @aceofspades472
    @aceofspades4725 жыл бұрын

    I'll be honest, I was a bit skeptical when you said that Gohan would be the main character of this arc. But after seeing this video, I actually really like it. Great job!

  • @theoriginofsound3437

    @theoriginofsound3437

    5 жыл бұрын

    I feel like there are people who don't realize that Gohan being the main character was originally the intention, but because people really didn't like it, Toriyama changed the focus back to Goku. It's kind of interesting honestly.

  • @Sun-cg6lv

    @Sun-cg6lv

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@theoriginofsound3437 no Toryama himself didn't like it no one changed his opinion on that

  • @f19ure

    @f19ure

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@Sun-cg6lv Toriyama is a dumb ass. That's why Dragonball ended w/ the Cell Games saga for me.

  • @theoriginofsound3437

    @theoriginofsound3437

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@Sun-cg6lv Dragonball Z did try to change the main character to Gohan, though. Intentionally or not, or through Shonen Jump's editors, Gohan was portrayed as the main character throughout Z.

  • @Sun-cg6lv

    @Sun-cg6lv

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@theoriginofsound3437 yes I know DBZ was Gohan's story though disguised as Goku's but Gohan getting a main villain win was set up since the beginning. After the Cell arc Toryama found Gohan as difficult to be the main character and he thought it didn't work which imo in the Buu saga it could have but not in super.

  • @goldenapple1754
    @goldenapple17545 жыл бұрын

    What would you change about the Boo Saga ? Mark:Yes

  • @jesusvalidozafra723
    @jesusvalidozafra7234 жыл бұрын

    Oh my fucking god this is a masterpiece. The duel inside Gohan's mind almost made me cry, it's so emotional...

  • @3bay
    @3bay3 жыл бұрын

    Vegeta could project his issues of strength onto Goku and be like “Why can’t I be stronger than you kakarot” And that would finally reveal his main issues with his downfalls being his own

  • @modernwarrior24
    @modernwarrior245 жыл бұрын

    I liked the saiyaman arc. After hundreds of episodes of death, Armageddon, friends dying. Having a arc just chilling, connecting with the old and new cast of characters was so fun. Kyle Herbert's said it was his favorite arc. Back to dragon balls roots. Oh well.

  • @angelotorres1

    @angelotorres1

    5 жыл бұрын

    not everything needs to be life or death situation

  • @innegativeion

    @innegativeion

    5 жыл бұрын

    Agreed. We have here, effectively, cut all of gohan's 'normal life' from the story, including all of videl's dialogue and fight scenes.

  • @Cam10_84

    @Cam10_84

    5 жыл бұрын

    Dragon Ball honestly needs more Slice of Life stuff like the Yamcha baseball episode

  • @titanfruits1845

    @titanfruits1845

    5 жыл бұрын

    And even then the baseball one was a little extra

  • @qpSubZeroqp

    @qpSubZeroqp

    5 жыл бұрын

    Why do so many people agree with this? I personally quite dislike the Saiyaman Saga

  • @TheParadoxCreator
    @TheParadoxCreator5 жыл бұрын

    How to fix the ending of the Goku Black Arc: Let Vegito stay fused for longer, and let him be what prompts Trunks to find this new technique and finish off Zamasu. You simultaneously get more action scenes with Vegito so he won’t feel shoehorned in or cheated, while also making Trunks’ attack not seem entirely unmerited. *Vegito is kicking around Zamasu similar to how he did with Buuhan, being sure to get in plenty of quips in the process. He lets out one more massive attack, similar in scale to the Final Kamehameha. He then breaks away from the fight after sending Zamasu flying and stands next to Trunks, powering down as he does so* Trunks: Wow! You two are amazing! He doesn’t stand a chance anymore! You can finish him off right now! Vegito: No, I can’t. You’re going to have to finish this Trunks. Trunks, confused: What? I don’t understand. He can barely touch you and you’re wiping the floor with him! What do you mean? Vegito: It’s that immortal body of his. It’s the real deal. He’s not nearly as powerful as I am, you’re right, but he doesn’t have to be. He continues to survive the onslaught time after time, I’ve thrown everything I have at him twice now. And like the Kai said, I’m going to defuse soon. Trunks: Oh no! Are you sure?! Vegito: I am. And when I do, those two are going to be out of commission. So this is up to you Trunks. Trunks: Me? What can I do here... you two have been out of my league for a while n- Vegito: Enough of that! Trunks: Huh? Vegito: You’re a Saiyan, right? And on top of that you protect these people. Do you really think you have an excuse to fail? Trunks: But I- *The young boy and girl from earlier interject* Boy: Trunks won’t fail! He always takes care of us! Girl: Yeah! No matter what or who it is, Trunks will win! *The onlookers all start agreeing and cheering Trunks on* Trunks: You guys... Vegito, smiling: See that? I don’t see how you can doubt yourself when these people behind you believe in you so much. *Stepping to leave* I’ll buy you as much time as I can, get prepared. Trunks, snapping around after looking to the crowd: Oh! Right. Vegito: I believe in you too, you know. *Trunks looks at Vegito, eyes wide* Vegito: I’ve seen how you’ve grown during this whole mess, how you’ve stayed in the fight despite how much more powerful your foes were up til now. You’re more than capable of sealing the deal here, probably in a way I never could. Trunks: Wh- Vegito, laughing: Don’t overthink it. *Vegito then powers back up to Blue and rushes toward Zamasu, who picks himself up off the ground just in time to be punched in the face* Zamasu: Graaaaah! You insolent, feeble-minded being! Vegito: Now that’s not very nice! What’s the matter, big guy? Immortality not seem all that grand anymore? Zamasu: What are you talking about? My immortal form is divine perfection! Vegito: If you ask me, all your “immortal form” has done is let you be a wonderful punching bag for me for the last few minutes. Zamasu: Why you- Vegito: Now hey, that’s quite a feat! No one I’ve ever faced before has been able to withstand me going all out against them. But you can take it, can’t you your holiness? Zamasu, powering up: The only thing I’ll be taking is your head! Vegito: Feel free to try! *Vegito and Zamasu resume fighting, and Trunks is left alone to think* Trunks, internally: What does he mean? What can I do that he can’t? What do I have that he doesn’t? *Trunks then flashes back to his memories of saving the people of this timeline, remembering all the times they thanked him. Their appreciation and trust makes Trunks realize something* Trunks, internally: That must be it! These people believe that I can win, they’ve always had my back no matter the odds! Such a powerful trust, how do I tap into that? *Trunks then looks back at the fight unfolding in front of him* Trunks, internally: However I have to do it, I need to figure it out fast. Father and Goku don’t have much time left. *Vegito and Zamasu clash fists one last time, and then Vegito spins around and kicks him away only to immediately defuse after* Goku: Aw crap! This is really bad! Vegeta: Damn it all, how can he not be showing any signs of being beaten to a bloody pulp just now? *Zamasu raises out of the rubble of a destroyed building to see Goku and Vegeta, and immediately laughs hysterically* Zamasu: What did I tell you, filthy Saiyans?! Your attempts to imitate the gods will always result in utter failure. Maybe this time that lesson will sink in. After all, you’ll have an eternity in oblivion to think about it! *Zamasu then rushes at the two. Goku and Vegeta muster up the strength to go Super Saiyan, and brace for him. The two get swatted around effortlessly* Zamasu: What’s wrong, mortals? No more divine energy to call on for your constant mockery of the gods?! Will the proud warrior race of the Saiyans truly go out with a whimper?! *Goku and Vegeta pick themselves up and nod at each other, rushing at Zamasu and latching on to him in an attempt to hold him back* Zamasu: What is this?! Vegeta: Trunks! Son! I believe in you! Show everyone that you carry within you the pride of a Saiyan and defeat this loon! *Trunks is taken aback immediately* Goku: Trunks! All these people believe in you for a reason! So do we! Call out to them for power and end this thing! *Zamasu starts thrashing the two around, but they hang on and steady themselves to keep him from moving* Zamasu: Indignant whelps! Release me! Trunks, internally: They really do think I can do this. Goku’s right, I have to reach out to that and take hold of it! Now! *As Zamasu finally rids himself of Goku and Vegeta, power starts flowing from the crowd to Trunks, creating a unique aura. As the people notice it, they stretch their hands out to Trunks and give all that they can.* Zamasu, visibly confused: What is this? *Goku and Vegeta nod to each other and give their energy as well. Trunks receives this energy and takes his sword in hand, channeling it all to recreate the shattered blade* Trunks, internally: This is it, this is what father and Goku meant! I can feel it! I can do this! *Trunks then yells out and rushes Zamasu, finishing him similarly to how it occurs in the show proper. The crowd cheers in an uproar as Trunks stands victorious. Goku and Vegeta walk up to Trunks smiling* Vegeta: Good job, son. I’m proud of you. Trunks: Dad... Vegeta: See that, Kakarot? I bet neither of your brats could pull that off. Goku, laughing: Maybe not, only time will tell, right? But yeah, that was amazing Trunks! It was a lot like a Spirit Bomb, but I guess that makes sense. We knew you could do it! *The three stand together as the crowd makes their way to Trunks, but before they can start celebrating, Zamasu spreads into the sky and begins endlessly expanding* Trunks: Seriously?! Even now you won’t quit?! Vegeta: This is bad, we need to to do something quickly. Goku: Aw man, if only I had another senzu bean, maybe I could do something. *Reaching into his gi, Goku feels the small button that Zeno gave him* Goku: Oh? *Pulling out the button, Goku sees that it has been smashed and no longer works* Goku: I forgot I even had this. Man, that would’ve been nice. Vegeta: I don’t know what you’re on about, but we need to act now! Goku: Wait! Where’s Bulma? Vegeta: Why? Goku: Do you think she’s done with the time machine? Trunks: Probably at this point, but why? What will that do? Vegeta: Just spit it out Kakarot! Goku: No time! I’ll be back, keep everyone safe! *Goku then rushes off to Bulma and fades from sight. Left there to deal with Zamasu for the time being, Vegeta and Trunks deflect random bolts of lightning falling from Zamasu’s gaseous form. After a while, Goku then returns with the pot and seal for the Mafuba technique* Goku: Quick, Trunks! Help me out here! Trunks, realizing Goku’s plan: I see! Alright! *The two of them, through a massive effort, use the technique and seal Zamasu in the small pot, nullifying the threat* Goku: Phew! We pulled it off! Good job, Trunks! Trunks: I should be thanking you, Goku. You were the one that thought of the Mafuba. Goku, patting Trunks on the back: Oh trust me, today is all yours, Trunks. *Goku then holds up the pot Zamasu is sealed in* Goku: Now then, what to do with this? Trunks: It’s far too dangerous to keep around anywhere. Vegeta: Oh don’t worry, I know what to do. *Goku and Trunks look at Vegeta puzzled* *Back in the main timeline, Vegeta marches the pot up to Beerus* Beerus: And this is supposed to be...? Vegeta: Would you mind destroying this for me, Lord Beerus? Beerus: The destructive power of a destroyer god is not something to call upon lightly, Vegeta. Vegeta: Would it change anything if I told you that Zamasu was inside it? Beerus: That arrogant little snot is in this thing? Vegeta: He is indeed. Beerus, smiling widely: I think I can do that for you after all *After Beerus destroys the pot, and as a result Zamasu, Trunks departs in similar fashion to the show proper but now returns to his own timeline with Mai. Zeno, now wanting to check up on Goku because he hasn’t seen the Saiyan in a while, visits earth directly to talk, nearly giving Beerus a heart attack. Zeno asks if Goku will come visit him soon so they can talk about something fun the Omniking has planned as he replaces Goku’s Zeno button.* FIN

  • @MegaGamerman16

    @MegaGamerman16

    5 жыл бұрын

    If only this was the canon ending...

  • @Odinsday

    @Odinsday

    5 жыл бұрын

    You need to write some fanfiction cuz this shit is good.

  • @twobrosgamers8426

    @twobrosgamers8426

    5 жыл бұрын

    Shit this thing is good like REALLY GOOD

  • @Jaykurosakii

    @Jaykurosakii

    5 жыл бұрын

    Damn nigga you got a whole script 🤣

  • @basilalli1732

    @basilalli1732

    5 жыл бұрын

    I'm subbing to you RIGHT NOW!!!

  • @Jreft
    @Jreft3 жыл бұрын

    "I always come back" Gohan == Springtrap *CONFIRMED!*

  • @mag1cally569
    @mag1cally5694 жыл бұрын

    I think your intro would make Gohan someone he really wasn't. He doesn't just nervously or shyly become Earth's defender. He adamantly shirks that role until his father comes back to reclaim it. He doesn't want to be a defender in any sense besides his loved ones.

  • @thehopeofeden597
    @thehopeofeden5975 жыл бұрын

    Goku, Gohan, Goten Bonding? Did...did Shenron really grant my wish???

  • @serpant333

    @serpant333

    4 жыл бұрын

    they bonded plenty of times

  • @christopherfleetwood5252

    @christopherfleetwood5252

    4 жыл бұрын

    Leo/Nox no, Goku and ChiChi bonded plenty of times.

  • @serpant333

    @serpant333

    4 жыл бұрын

    @@christopherfleetwood5252 and gohan a goten

  • @mandalorianhunter1
    @mandalorianhunter15 жыл бұрын

    I love the Buu saga, flaws and all. However, I see the points and thought about how to fix it. I love Gohan, adult and all.

  • @diobuthesconfused7507

    @diobuthesconfused7507

    5 жыл бұрын

    i like gohan but they destroyed his badass side

  • @mandalorianhunter1

    @mandalorianhunter1

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@diobuthesconfused7507 No I think his badass side was always intact. Most of the time he is passive, but piss him off and prepare for an ass whooping. We see this in his Ultimate form, where he beats Buu senseless. He was cold, sadistic and cocky because he had everything under control. Well almost.

  • @erikmartinez8814

    @erikmartinez8814

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@mandalorianhunter1 yeah but it just sucks that he gained it by sitting still instead of training with elder kai, elder kai should have reformed the z sword making it heavier and empowering it with magic that gohan could absorb while training

  • @mandalorianhunter1

    @mandalorianhunter1

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@erikmartinez8814 Then it would have something elses power and kinda an ass pull like the magic water was for Goku during The King Piccolo arc. That would defeat the purpose of his untapped power that we have been seeing throughout his history. I can why having his power be unlocked by sitting can seem boring, but its interesting seeing his limitors be removed. His training should have had him go Super Saiyan 3 to his Ultimate form.

  • @OriginalTheUsername

    @OriginalTheUsername

    5 жыл бұрын

    Adult Gohan was bad

  • @zack95
    @zack954 жыл бұрын

    Toriyama was completely improvising his entire manga. I liked it when I was younger but now I don't understand how it could have been so successful...

  • @YugiSyta
    @YugiSyta Жыл бұрын

    That "I always come back" line may be the most brilliant writing for a post Cell Gohan that I have ever heard.

  • @RocArio

    @RocArio

    10 ай бұрын

    Afton enters the chat

  • @Shizilol
    @Shizilol5 жыл бұрын

    Buu saga isn’t great But If Buu saga didn’t exist I don’t think that Dragon ball would be like it was today. GT, Super, Heroes, Xenoverse, etc.

  • @ripper3052

    @ripper3052

    5 жыл бұрын

    Ok clown

  • @GoddessOfWhim2003

    @GoddessOfWhim2003

    5 жыл бұрын

    the less said about GT the better

  • @malcolmxraw1342

    @malcolmxraw1342

    5 жыл бұрын

    Gt super heroes and xenoverse would be better

  • @valentds

    @valentds

    5 жыл бұрын

    soooo... buu saga was worst on all senses xd

  • @Chris-yp6zm

    @Chris-yp6zm

    5 жыл бұрын

    All those spin offs are trash though so your point doesnt really make sense.

  • @peternguyen6343
    @peternguyen63435 жыл бұрын

    Don’t break popo’s stuff Don’t break popo’s stuff Don’t break popo’s stuff Don’t break popo’s stuff DON’T BREAK POPO’S STUFF

  • @Alex_Rodd1526

    @Alex_Rodd1526

    5 жыл бұрын

    You know Vegeta, he has to learn the hard way.

  • @Nate-qf5zp

    @Nate-qf5zp

    5 жыл бұрын

    Isn't that right blackman

  • 5 жыл бұрын

    6TH RULE OF POPO'S TRAINING!

  • @boonraksaboonparn4988
    @boonraksaboonparn49882 жыл бұрын

    oh my kami I missed this so much, I tried to search for it after the incident but it, along with your other greatest works, are gone. Glad everything turn out quite alright for you for now, I believe we as a community, and youtube can prevent this from ever happen again.

  • @leviadams8777
    @leviadams87773 жыл бұрын

    This video is incredible. Thank you for your amazing work, Mark. I really appreciate all of your videos. As a more recent fan of the channel it has been a delight to catch up on your content. Keep being incredible.

  • @jacobkakyoin6882
    @jacobkakyoin68825 жыл бұрын

    Much as it was just a lot of stuff, I really strongly disagree with cutting out high school arc. It sets up a lot of teenaged Gohan’s character and struggles to fit in, on top of being an honest to god high point of the manga. Toriyama’s comedy writing skills with a socially awkward superman against normal people, in crime and at school, are on full display, and it’s legitimately my favorite part of the Buu saga. The school arc makes Gohan into a lovable goof in a way distinct from his father, and could probably even work well with the trauma stuff if leaned into as a coping mechanism; this is his way of trying to emulate his father while making Earth’s heroism his own. Goku wouldn’t go around stopping petty crimes and robberies and non world level threats that aren’t a challenge for him, but Gohan feels a responsibility to the earth he inherited the mantle of guardian of. Goku never felt such obligation, just fighting for the thrill of each challenge and adventure and to protect and avenge the people he cares about, and just sorta happened into the part of earth’s guardian. Other than that, just the standard comments about how Vegeta could’ve stood to have a moment with Trunks, known in no uncertain terms he was going to hell, so on so forth. All in all, this is the part of the Buu saga that needed the least fixing, so interested in seeing your ideas for when it actually starts getting messy.

  • @Trxpamvs

    @Trxpamvs

    5 жыл бұрын

    Jacob Scouten highly agree with ur opinion!! Would like to see how you would handle the boo arc

  • @jacobkakyoin6882

    @jacobkakyoin6882

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@Trxpamvs There isn't really much that needs changing with this first part, which kinda reflects on the video. Most of the changes here are ultimately not all that big game-changers until the end part with the time chamber. Probably gonna wait for part 2 to drop and then see what I think. Things I very much hope Mark doesn't try to say should be dropped, though: -Mr. Satan and Buu's friendship/what results of it -Vegito (I know ultimately he really isn't all that important to the story at all, but neither are a lot of Buu saga's absolute high points. He's way too good to just waste) -That one last time Tien is strong enough to momentarily be a nuisance to Buu -Mr. Satan being the savior of the universe for real Just realized now though that there's no room for Goten and Trunks to have their whole misadventure with entering the tournament in disguise, though, so that's a bummer. Hope we at least keep 18 extorting the big man.

  • @Trxpamvs

    @Trxpamvs

    5 жыл бұрын

    Jacob Scouten well I got to be honest I never really liked mister Satan. If I would change anything it would be making goten & trunks more relevant in the story & give Piccolo more to do.

  • @LordProteus
    @LordProteus5 жыл бұрын

    Piccolo getting a huge power-up and Gohan and Piccolo taking down Gotenks-Buu as a Master and Pupil duo.

  • @ShadeSlayer1911

    @ShadeSlayer1911

    5 жыл бұрын

    Teacher-Student Masenko blast to finish him off.

  • @Ostentatiousnessness

    @Ostentatiousnessness

    5 жыл бұрын

    Don’t you mean *FATHER-SON* Duo?

  • @braks_
    @braks_3 жыл бұрын

    bruh that beginning gohan and goten interaction gave me legitemate goosebumps

  • @Cipher71
    @Cipher714 жыл бұрын

    If I may humbly suggest one minor rewrite: All that talk about Goten meeting his dad, then they get to the tournament and it's Piccolo he's meeting for the first time.

  • @JinlongTheGoldenDragon

    @JinlongTheGoldenDragon

    4 жыл бұрын

    perfect

  • @MetalGamer978

    @MetalGamer978

    3 жыл бұрын

    No

  • @AntonioRodriguez-fh1ll
    @AntonioRodriguez-fh1ll5 жыл бұрын

    Gohan in the time chamber is going to teach Goten and Trunks the fusion dance from the bits he heard from Goku while he was in a daze. Calling it now. Goku can speak to him through king kai and explain what he has to tell them.

  • @Whodascrahd

    @Whodascrahd

    5 жыл бұрын

    would Goku be able to talk to Gohan in the time chamber? it was stated that the time chamber was a different reality during the Z era, and why time moved faster there.

  • @mada1082

    @mada1082

    5 жыл бұрын

    That first bits pretty obvious imo.

  • @piotrkarp9562

    @piotrkarp9562

    5 жыл бұрын

    Uhhh, I sense really bad fanfick of Gohan fan here... I mean video, not your comment.

  • @OmarRodriguez-pj3qy

    @OmarRodriguez-pj3qy

    5 жыл бұрын

    Gotenks was able to go Super Saiyan 3 by observing the transformation demonstrated by Goku when they were apart and the fact that he’s a fusion who naturally has more power then the sum of the two. I predict that in Not Mark’s rewrite, Gotenks won’t go Super Saiyan 3 but with Trunks already having the experience of a Super Saiyan when confronting his father, Gotenks will also be able to as well. Whether with ease or not, I suppose is up to him. I like this version of the story. Gohan will have to demonstrate the fusion dance that he’s only basically dreamed, and maybe even the details of what it means to become a Super Saiyan to Goten as Goku did for him while in critical condition along with the guilt of attacking Vegeta who was fighting with them in a fit of traumatic rage. His hands are well BEYOND full. This is some great writing.

  • @spidershinobi9530

    @spidershinobi9530

    5 жыл бұрын

    I don't think it being in a different time space makes a difference but its better than Gohan just going hey guys do this dance because I heard it while half unconscious. ._.

  • @Pinkcrystals91
    @Pinkcrystals915 жыл бұрын

    I loved when Gohan attended school and meet people his own age. I wish they gave Sharpner and Erasa more friendship with Gohan and kept in touch with Vidal and not just forget about them. Gohan suffering from PSTD was a good move. I like the rest of your explaining on what if's instead of Goku coming back from the dead stealing the spotlight from the new generation defender of the world.

  • @mikhailstewart
    @mikhailstewart4 жыл бұрын

    I didnt like how you changed Vegeta's anointment. When he knocks out Trunks and Goten to make that sacrifice is one of the most touching moments in anime history.

  • @wurtknurte7283
    @wurtknurte72833 жыл бұрын

    5:08 Gohan: "Besides, you two have a lot in common." Goten: "...In what regard?"

  • @infernate4067
    @infernate40675 жыл бұрын

    I'm gonna be the only person but I personally like the change of pace at the beginning of the buu saga. Probably because gohan is my favorite character

  • @RingoGs

    @RingoGs

    5 жыл бұрын

    Infernate I thought the beginning was great too. Videl and gohan was cute to watch them fall in love and it had a lot of shout outs to the original dragon ball. The only thing that needs to be cut even slightly is the dragged out fight with buu

  • @Linkzx007

    @Linkzx007

    5 жыл бұрын

    I think the beginning of Buu Saga is very good, the Great Saiyaman seems to me like a great tribute to comic book heroes like Spider-Man, besides being very good to help the development of Gohan as a character.

  • @RingoGs

    @RingoGs

    5 жыл бұрын

    Kaisenjin yeah exactly. It’s comic relief which they hardly ever use even though they’re fun to watch

  • @randjan8592
    @randjan85925 жыл бұрын

    At the beginning of the video, I could only hear Piccolo saying "ALL OF THEM?!"

  • @rayb2623
    @rayb26232 жыл бұрын

    Making a point to go back and rewatch all your content (priority to Dragon Ball) again. Sucks to see what happened over the holidays and sucks to not see as many videos come from your channel. With that, I know I a lot of us are waiting to hear more of your thoughts on the upcoming movie this April. You’re one of the biggest voices to a lot of folks on DB character progression and story/narrative arcs. Too understandable that you’re probably still apprehensive over the whole ordeal I’m sure you’re still battling. Regardless, have to let you know, the viewers still love you Mark. You’re a talented dude and we haven’t forgotten… Haven’t forgotten your talent, the joy you bring folks through your content, the knowledge or the deeper inter workings of plot that you impart, and your genuinely positive and hopeful spirit. Again man, looking forward to the next projects. Gonna keep supporting and running up the numbers on what you still have on the platform. Take care of yourself! Very Respectfully, Ken Recurrent Viewer

  • @LevonELee
    @LevonELee4 жыл бұрын

    Yo, you sid an AMAZING job at recreating the buu saga. You have made it MUCH better. I wish i could see it animated fr. Keep up the great work my G

  • @EdibleBacon
    @EdibleBacon5 жыл бұрын

    This is exactly what I've wanted to see for this saga. Thank you for renewing it to something that's so much more enjoyable!

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