Pony Tales [MLP Fanfic] The Point of No Return (drama/tragedy - WITH SPECIAL WORD FROM THE AUTHOR)
This story is very special to me. I wrote it back in 2015 and have been working on the audio adaptation for over two years. As such, I would appreciate people listening to the Word From the Author I have included at the end and spreading the link to this reading around. Thank you. ~Scribbler
Summary: After staying away from her friends for years, Fluttershy is stunned to discover Rainbow Dash on her doorstep looking haggard and asking for sanctuary in her escape from someone she won't name.
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International Day for the Elimination of Violence Against Women
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Cast:
Illya Leonov (Narrator)
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TheLostNarrator (Rainbow Dash)
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Starryflame (Fluttershy)
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Gina M (Rarity)
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Ribon Chan (Pinkie Pie)
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Scribbler (Applejack)
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Ebony Tails (Twilight Sparkle)
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Gutiuserenade (Bertram)
/ yeahshorts
Goombasa (Messenger Pony)
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With a special appearance by Laura Rolla
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Never be afraid to reach out to someone, Never think you're not worth asking for help, Never think for a moment that no one will listen. Even if you feel there is no one you can trust, there will always be someone out there who will listen.
@operator_ace8502
6 жыл бұрын
I guess everyone is worth anyone’s time.
@s.ophiamlorincz
6 жыл бұрын
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@kjendrock1366
6 жыл бұрын
The 49th one is backwards
@josephmccarthy8413
6 жыл бұрын
starryflame01 I agree with your comment and although I’m 17 I watch mlp and I’ve been watching it for 17 months
@YoriShark
6 жыл бұрын
NNNlEtw make a word🤔
Definitely worth 2 hours. It shows how anyone could be a victim. A normal story might have Fluttershy is Rainbowdashs place, but having Rainbow the victim makes it so much more impactful. What a beautiful story. Glad to have contributed to it with some art.
@colterstien1075
4 жыл бұрын
oscardarla I agree worth it and yes this comment late lmao
@sayori7699
4 жыл бұрын
@@colterstien1075 😃😃😃
@colterstien1075
4 жыл бұрын
sunshine luna yes?
@atlas1924
4 жыл бұрын
It's always rainbow
best part was when Fluttershy said "excuse me but i don't care" epic
@nyasiawillis8604
3 жыл бұрын
Yessssssss
@iceluvndiva21
3 жыл бұрын
That whole scene was epic. I love when victims or their loved ones stand up to abusers.
@gren8te319
3 жыл бұрын
can you give a timestamp for that line please?
@iceluvndiva21
Жыл бұрын
@@gren8te319 For the entire scene? That would be 1:30:29 -> 1:38:47 For the I don't care? That's at 1:32:19
@Trixie_Lulamoon_Mlp
Жыл бұрын
1:32:15 if you wanted it.
When I first heard this fic, I thought it was just Lost giving it her all. But when I heard your note at the end and learned that it was real and she was reliving the emotions of an abusive relationship, and listened to it again, I actually broke down crying. That NEVER happens to me when listening to audio dramas. I'm actually crying while typing this, and I'd just like to say, I hope Lost is feeling better after getting help, and God bless you for helping her get through this horrible experience. You are the best, Scribbler. You really are.
I can't stop crying. I was a victim myself and for almost a year, the relationship got worse and worse and I was too scared to reach out for help until this person started harassing my family. Please reach out for help if you find yourself in this situation. You're not alone at all and nothing is not your fault and don't ever think that you deserved what was done to you because you don't
"Anyone can be a victim. Anyone can be an abuser." Powerful. So powerful. I'm so sorry that you and Lost went through such terrible things in your pasts... I went through psychological abuse and neglect by my biological father, and similar abuse from an ex-friend. I can't begin to know, nor do I want to, what physical abuse or rape are like, but I can sympathize, at least partially. I'm glad you two are doing better, and I hope you continue to do better. The stories you write and tell are phenomenal.
To everyone who liked this story: You should see the really stupid comments on fimfiction that completely missed the point. I mean they were accusing this of being an attack on the Wonderbolts and Scribbler expressing her hatred of the team. When if you knew anything about her, you can clearly tell that this isn't at all what this story is. ...some people.
@theanimeman97
6 жыл бұрын
You made this comment a while ago, so I don't need to tell you that just because it's based on personal events doesn't mean that the story should be treated any greater or lesser, right? The material is all that matters, and if we want to approach things from a realism standpoint, then sure, we can make the argument about this being based on a personal experience and how that affects the story and makes it more meaningful. However, those are two very different discussions, and only one was made by Carapace.
@ChaosServant-ll7pr
6 жыл бұрын
Well, I don't disagree with that. But quite frankly, I just wanna forget about this whole thing and work on my writing, so yeah. But, thanks for replying though.
@theanimeman97
6 жыл бұрын
You act like it was some traumatizing experience. Haha. It's really just a regular discussion that got a little out of hand, but there have been worse things that have happened. Anyway, I hope the writing goes well. Good luck! :)
@ChaosServant-ll7pr
6 жыл бұрын
Thanks a bunch, man.
@ChaosServant-ll7pr
6 жыл бұрын
To *Jonathan Lee* who's comment won't show up here for some reason: No. I just originally thought some people missed the point, that's all. Though to be honest, I'd just like to forget about this whole thing.
I cried when I got to the of the story and honestly, Lost reminded me of my boyfriend. He's step-dad is yells at him when he's drunk but, one day he text me and told me that his step-dad punch him in the face. And when I saw him at school, he had bags under his eyes like he didn't sleep and I remember running into his arms, asking him over and over if he was ok. He kept saying he's ok. And after listening to this, it give me more strength to help him. And the cast was amazing and I love this story you made for Lost. Great job Scribbler.
My mom's favorite cousin was a victim of domestic violence…her story didn't end happy…. Please find help if you're in an abusive relationship. No matter if it's mental, verbal, emotional, physical, etc. Please run. Because the more you try to stay the more they think they can control you…I'd know. I recently got out of an abusive relationship…but he made me feel like no one else would ever want me that I keep running back to him and things only get worse. My new parter has helped me overcome the horrors they put me through. But I still have anxiety and panic attack at night when the memories come flooding back. My ex still tries to contact me but my new partner chases him off real quick so I don't have to deal with him. No matter how much they try to tare you down and try to make you feel like no one will want you, trust me, there will always be someone much greater to find once you find the strength to run. Rest In Peace Kammy Mae…
@joshuahecht6866
4 жыл бұрын
Zaine McCartney Everything Is Going To Be Alright Can you taste The Ice Cream? Vanilla Ice Cream From Bojack Horseman I genuinely care about others because I honestly feel not loved from my siblings they themselves, me and each other. Constantly throughout 5 Years and I have to be The Peacemaker while My Mom Is Busy and My Babysitter is the only I can talk to since I was 12 years old at the time and still developing.
@joshuahecht6866
4 жыл бұрын
My siblings are younger and probably more violent because of their anger because of the bad treatment in my town. My Father was in jail 3 times for not paying child support and had a second wife named Heidi that he found love again in 2010 when I was 8 years old and I only have My Mother and My Babysitter for Help and I was still developing at the time so I kept my mouth shut.
The 49 people who disliked this were crying and their tears accidentally hit the dislike button Great story and amazing lesson. I hope that Lost is doing better
Bertram=MVP Everyone should talk to a friend or family member just as Rainbow Dash reached out to Fluttershy. Nobody should ever be hurt, emotionally or physically, and it resonated a little on my part, albeit distantly. Still, I doubt I experienced any of the horrors that others have felt, and I will root for them too just as I hope that they get the help from their close friends that they can reach out to. Being alone is what people of abuse will want. They WANT you to feel isolated, they WANT you to feel like nobody else will care if you should try to speak out, and they WANT you to feel powerless. I have alot of respect for the author and the characters because it felt more real because it was indeed based on real life events. So I tip my hat to all parties. This is a great investment of your time, and well worth the 2 hours.
Being a victim myself, I’m so glad you wrote this. Listening to this story was a great amount of catharsis. You’re a brilliant author, and all of you are great narrators and voice actors.
I'll never understand how someone could treat another human being like that. I mean, how does somebody sleep at night knowing that they're destroying another person?
@skullton3292
6 ай бұрын
People who are hurt, hurt others. A lot of the time they don't even realise they're doing it.
Lost did an amazing job here. Everyone did. This really does hit home for me. Being separated from those you care for most. The self blame, the anger, the self loathing. It all came flooding back at once
That was fantastic! Everyone did a wonderful job. The artists, the voice actors, especially a very strong performance by Lost herself. I'm very honored and proud to be a part of such a powerful and personal story like this.
@TheAnonyomusGuy
6 жыл бұрын
Ribonchan that's not lost, it's Morgan freepony
@MLPDethDealr32
6 жыл бұрын
She means RD's VA. That's Losty.
Omg I can’t stop crying after the realization of the abuse Rainbow Dash was actually going through it took me an hour to figure out what happened
@iceluvndiva21
4 жыл бұрын
I seriously had to filter through the comments and story to get the warning flags about abuse. I thought she was losing her mind or engaging in selfharm.
@yangki5910
4 жыл бұрын
Right😞😞😞
@angelicsakura4928
3 жыл бұрын
Who Abused Her? Was It Soarin!?!?!!?!!!
@phantom_kitsune7424
3 жыл бұрын
@@angelicsakura4928 it doesn't say but it's obviously somepony that is part of the Wonderbolts
@abegodsent4977
2 жыл бұрын
Genuinely thought she had a crash and was like mentally losing herself until the end.
I'm an hour and 5 minutes in...and i'm bawling. cause feeling you can't reach out, or find the words to ask for help...it hits home...and it hurts :(
Not gonna lie when Futtershy yelled "No!" It made me jump as well lmao, like damn girl!
Im commenting just to comment because I have no words for how amazing this was. Remeber to like.
@dragonsvendetta832
6 жыл бұрын
Also I have commented on one of losts videos that im sorry for what shes been threw but if you would tell her thats she is one of the strongest people there are for standing up for her self.
Ive never emotionally responded to any fic ever. You made me cry. You have a gift. You are both an amazing reader and author. This was astounding.
Well that hit hard. I was never in an abusive relationship, but I feel so bad for Lost. It's great that she has a better life now.
2 hours long Pony Tales Welp luckily it's my day off and i can get to hear this good tale! 1 views = 1 likes
I understand... My friend went through the same thing for 15 months... Her partner abused her physically... All the bruises i saw on her... She finally got help but she stay with them for so long.... I wasnt treated as bad as her but i did have an ex u punched me or kicked around me with so much anger... Its not easy but after a while i opened up about what her partner did to me too...they raped me too... ALWAYS get help yes its hard but it will save you... Dont be scared to reach out because people are out there to help... Dont worry about being a victim... Get help it will make life so much...
@thankunextgrande37
5 жыл бұрын
Lotta love and inspirational Ily 💕💕💕💖💕
@theundyingfighter3147
5 жыл бұрын
I just wish everyone could get help. I never got help from my problems, and I’m still suffering from all of them
This story really took by my heart Scribbs. I even cried. This was truly about friendship. Keep up the good work. I understand abuse. I had to protect my mother from my father. Till I had to fight him. He was bigger than me. But I made understand what he was doing was wrong. He became more of than less of abuser and became more of father. But we lost him(passed away) in 1987. I love him still and l will always remember the good times with him. Never the bad.
Scribbler i said it before and i'll say it again i consider any fanfiction written by you to be a blessing and or miracle and hands down this is the absolute greatest one you've ever made i swear you are a goddess when it comes to making fanfictions that's another reason why i love you and your videos and i mean that with every fiber of my being.
This story is truly amazing. I listen to your videos while I work as it helps keep me focused. It really hits home for me as well. My ex abused me and often would show up at my doorstep demanding I come outside. I never disobeyed because I was scared. Not til the end when my brother called the police. His abuse was psychological and sexual. He’d push me around a little bit but never really hit me. I was TRAUMATIZED for a long time. I have an amazing fiancé now. I’m still overcoming some of the trauma. Thank you for this Scribbler. Your stuff is always so amazing.
i can't stress about how much i love this. i cried so much, it was so heartfelt. this is beautiful.
Oh my goodness Scribbler. Of all of your stories that I've listened to, none of them made me feel like this one did. I could feel how real it was. Knowing it was in a way just reinforces those feelings. What you have done here with this story is incredible. And the message is so important, thank you soo much. This is the kind of story that makes a difference.
I thought the narrator was gonna say "you've got mail" lol
The post-credit revelation also makes me realizes TheLostNarrator's GrimDark series is similar in context and themes. There were even similar lines shared by the abuser of this story and Ink Dye.
@ScribblerProductions101
5 жыл бұрын
That's because they're based on the same person IRL.
2 hours long? Well, glad I have a day off! Heck yeah, I get to listen to this amazing story!
I hope all the mental wounds have been healed even if same will never heal in both of your hearts. You guys deserve to be happy after all the pain you guys had to suffer. *hugs*
I... I can't even properly begin to comment. I was supposed to listen to this while cleaning and doing dishes. I tend to utilize audiobooks for that; it makes a boring menial task somewhat entertaining. But, at a certain point, I just sat down and listened. The emotions conveyed here felt so authentic, and then the end blurb. I mean, how even- Look, I'm kind of speechless. The quality is through the roof. It sounds like everyone put in their all, and then some. For the story itself? I started writing a comment, then more rambles, more rambles, and to be honest, it boils down to that it touched me. I really honestly hope that the people who need, are able to find their own Fluttershy rather sooner than later. Keep on being amazing, all of you.
WOW! Ok first things first, I love everyone in this everything was put together flawlessly!! Keep it up! Second this is a real topic that should be spread around EVERYWHERE because this needs to be addressed. I have a friend going through this same type pf thing and it hurts not being able to do anything, however I will be there for her and will do whatever to keep her spirits up because it's all i can do. For the ones that haven't tried to get help, SPEAK UP! you don't have to go through it and you shouldn't have to alone.
My, never thought I'd hear a story like THIS right after Thanksgiving (at least in the states) Stories like this are why I'm apart of this fandom, and why I write my own fanfics (even if they will never be read by KZreadrs like yourself)
This was deep. Scribbles I'm so proud of you and this work and that hard work you placed in this special. I loved your story. And good job everyone you participated in this project and bringing Scribby's story to life. "Never be afraid to speak out the ones who care for you most will always be there"
@MLPDethDealr32
6 жыл бұрын
This really was wonderful on Scribbler's part, and the message. This is why i love Scribbler and her content. I can partially relate to this story to a degree.
I need someone like Fluttershy. I’ve been hiding my problems for years, and to this day, no one has helped me. This year was when it got so much worse, and I’ve been considering...ending it all. I’ve been hiding it my being more assertive, being more helpful, and being the shoulder to cry on. I would be the failure so others don’t have to be, and I would always be protective of my friends. I would also change my personality entirely to fit in with other people. I even helped people online, by staying up late, often towards midnight or even after that. But the toll it took was just extra weight on me. I ended up failing important tests, I’ve been super reluctant to do anything. From that alone, you can tell I have a few, maybe several, mental illnesses. But since these are not diagnosed, I can say that I really have them, or get any help for it. You might be thinking, “Dude, tell your parents!”, but the thing is, it’s really hard to say that I have parents. My “guardians” have been abusive to me ever since I could walk, and they would beat me, and yell, whenever I couldn’t reach their unreachable expectations. If they didn’t do that, they would call me names, and threaten me. And school wasn’t much better. I would get bullied, and singled out by teachers, being the example of a failure. I endured that for a few years. I endured all the hits. I wouldn’t feel safe anywhere, and everything just builded up till everything was unbearable. All the symptoms only became worse... Everything from constant nightmares, flashbacks, and unbearable constant chest pains, to constant dizziness, nausea, and the urge to hurt myself. I just stopped caring for everything. I would talk about it more, but this is just the comment section If you’re at the point, thank you for reading, assuming you did. And if you think I’m just an attention seeking fag, go ahead and throw me down for it. I’m used to it.
@alexandergapour1253
4 жыл бұрын
Dude just call the cops or run
@orphiticus3749
4 жыл бұрын
I genuinely hope you’re better now💕
I'm speechless the story was layed out so well seeing dash brake down tugs on the heartstrings. Fluttershy standing up to such a brute is amazing im glad you did this it was worth it. very well done. gives us alot to think of. /)(\
I was sexualy abuse for twenty years by a relative of mine. I was a shy and lonely kid. He was nice, I thought l had to do what he wanted to. I went to the police eventually. I was angry to everyone, everything. I should have talk to a friend about this way before. If something happend to you, don't wait like l did and seek help immediatly! Hope you are safe, take care.
i know this was out for a while but i after hearing it i was just in shock it was sad and it made me think a lot i dont think anyone should go thought this ever
oh i love the pictures that line up with the story.. immmage the animation that would go with this really mature... We love you Lost and there's nothing that can change that! I am glad I found you, so to speak
I've been abused physically and psychologically by a family member my whole life, had people not believe me when I tell them, had to watch them be liked so much by those around me and this... This story is very important to me. I hope I can have that... Catharsis of leaving some day.
Okay, been awhile since we’ve had any of your end blurs. Really missed them, and even if this was just a special case I really loved to have more of them ^^’ Second, I admit the start was kind of slow, and there was even a part of me knowing I may not have liked it if I didn’t know the content and your personal experience when writting it. That said, while it was a slow start, it really picked up at the end on its own. And what I may have said gave it a more pass for personal reasons if the story on its own okay, made it stand out even better and great at the end.
This was amazing enough that this reading brought me into tears .Tears from 4 years of thinking about what hapoen to me and not be scared or afraid to seek help from others and i got out before it went horrible. I love this reading thanks for sharing this story.
i took me a while to finally watch this vid, had to find the right time for it. wow just freaking wow, this was a beautiful fic, i mean i was sad but it was beautiful at the same time ( you know what i mean? ). RD has always been my favorite, she has always been so strong and brave, but its sad to see even she could be broken by an abusive partner, i almost broken down into tears when she was having her nightmare and Fluttershy helped her. ( i just wanted to give her a big hug ), she was hurting so much, i could feel it. but Fluttershy was there for her, she was truly amazing. this was truly a w great fic, you did an amazing job Scribbler. like i said it was sad but i still loved every minute of this. you wrote an amazing fic, just sad it was kinda based on true events. and Lost, if you even read this, im sorry you went through all that, no one should ever be abused, your a wonderful person, you both are, Thank You for all of your hard work. please keep it up and never stop being awesome people =)
I really could feel the emotion in this, it actually made me tear up a bit, on a happier note I liked fluttershy's voice and that narrator damn, that narrator he should voice so many things. Now, Nurse! Get me 100cc's of happy stat!
Hey Scribbler this is SupraLugia1 and I want you to know that that story was wonderful and I'm happy you shared it with everyone I am really happy that you and lost got the help you need and with better people I never been abused but I understand how this process goes through so once again I think you for sharing this story with everybody else
this is just- I have no words even almost 4 years after this is posted it hasn't gotten the recognition it deserves pls don't feel like you are useless or need to work harder or need to hide or do anything someone abusive is saying to you because most of the time it isn't true so just tell them no and go to a friend pls don't feel trapped by an abuser and as soon as you can get out of there
Wow, this was good yet very chilling story. This stuff is still so relevant to the modern world and it's sad how we have come so far as a species in technology and civilization but we can't deal with a problems like this as easily as making a law. The issue of domestic abuse is like fighting a war, it damages you physically and psychologically and there's a fair chance you might not get out of the situation alive or one piece. This is a kind of war people don't see and you could even say nobody can hear you scream. But at least we have access to groups and organizations that can help you if you go to them, many countries in the world aren't that lucky and millions more women outside the developed world are abused in every way. So I guess I can say, thank God we live in countries that will provide the help needed for these issues.
Honestly, I was really tempted to skip through your note at the end, but I listened to it anyway, and I'm so glad I did. It casts this project in a whole new light. I hope this isn't too old for you to see this, because I want you to know that you and Lost are power house people who are sending a great message into the world. You guys have inspired me to start creating in this community
My uncle mentally abused my aunt for nearly 15 years and she only just got out a few years ago today, she recently called my mom about what happened in her relationship with him and hearing all that broke me apart because up until that point I loved my uncle and hearing this about him and what he did to her made in sick, sad and angry inside and I never wanted to see or talk to him ever again. My aunt is still recovering from this and my mom is going to give her some cash to help her get by.
Truly great story that expresses the true weight of the subject matter. This is a real thing that occurs to many, many people, and shouldn't be taken lightly.
I wondered what Dash's problem was, by the end of the story I realised she had fallen afoul of a Narcissistic abuser. Well done, chilling and sad, but, well done and accurate. Poor Dash. And poor everyone in real life who provided the modle for this Rainbow.
Thank you Scribbler for seeing beyond the surface and standing up for everyone.
I still listen to this every now and then, its a comfort for me, knowing that whenever i struggle with things, I can listen to this and see the comment and know that no one is alone in this.
I haven't watched this since last month and it's still one of my favorites. You should do more things like this
@1cheezyboi31
5 жыл бұрын
Oh my God I got hearted by one of my favorite KZreadrs.
This was a really sweet and inspiring piece of work! I really enjoyed every part of it. I was confused at first, but then I noticed what was happening and I got intrigued. I really hope that this story can also help others with that have this situation as well. Nice job everyone!❤️
Christ this made me cry. Thank the gods above I've never been in a situation like this, and I feel for everyone who has been or is in a relationship like this.
This is beautiful and amazing. Just, emotion of it is incredible! Everybody did an amazing job!
props to you and lost to actually manage to do this
Thank you Scribbler and The Lost Narrator for sharing your stories. I watched this video for the first time today. It continues to touch hearts and raise awareness. Thank you.
I came because I was curious from the trailer. Now I just wanna give Lost and Scribbler big, warm hugs.
Something that is not well known about abusive relationships is that it usually starts small. If it does or not it usually the abuse will escalate. In cases of physical abuse the abuser will often kill the victim. In most cases victims will return to the abuser even after ending the relationship and moving far away. It is common for this to happen several times before the victim does not return.
I'm watching/listening to this again. It is still hard to listen to but people need to be aware of this type of situation. Thank you for this video again Scribbler. Thank you to everyone that help let this story come to life, to help us be more aware.
oh dear sweet goddess above my heart was torn asunder as I cried from both the story and the words from the Author.. You are a wonder my dear Scribbler.
Thank you so much for this story. It was so powerful. My first boyfriend was emotionally abusive to me, and you were so right. The small things don't seem to be worth thinking about. But it all adds up to something more. I still can't function in certain situations, because they bring back those feelings of worthlessness I've been trying so hard to overcome. I cried during this story for a long time. Thank you for bringing peoples' attention to the problem. Keep up the amazing work.
this very deep in emotions, and I find myself watching it over again, and I share it with all my friends and family, I wish safety for anyone in this difficult situation.
scribbler, ive never been in this kind of relationship, nor have i had the guts to listen to anything other than the note from the author part of this story. but hearing this video, and knowing about lost. it hurt me so much. your both such wonderful people and it hurts me to know that these people were able to hurt you the way they were. but it warms my heart to know that you stepped forward, you both inspire me so much. anyone can be a victim, anyone an abuser, but you two also showed me that people can still live, thank you for being the wonderful woman and wonderful youtuber you are (ps if anything in this seems stupid please forgive me i want to show support but i dont know how to say this better.
Little late to the party, but this was amazing! Music, the words, the story was amazing! It starts out so small... you don’t know... you can’t see... you don’t understand... if you don’t stand, you don’t know. It’s missed. Thank you! Amazing work like always!
This was the most beautiful story I've ever heard 😭
I ain't watched it yet but this is so long that I'll have to keep it in my watch later until I finished
Thank you both for being so brave to share your personal journies with all of us. Hopefully this can change the life of people for the better.
Thank you for wording this as you did, Miss Scribbler. I can't tell you how nice it is to hear that anyone, regardless of gender, age, or size, can be an abuser. It's often overlooked that, while many abusers are men, women can be just as awful. As a male survivor, I can tell you that there are few options to leave such a relationship and fewer people willing to help. I was lucky. A friend heard my cry and took me seriously. Without scorn or judgement, he helped me leave. Many of the authors I've read that try to tackle the subject of abuse do so poorly. Thank you for doing a proper job.
The person who did the voice for rainbow dash is spot on! They did great! Edit: Especially with her laugh!
Well that was dark. I'm glad I never let it go that far for me. I can give at least some credit to stories like this thqt I learned to recognize red flags and gotten out early.
Illya is such a good narrator. I feel like he’s definitely the kind of person who has the voice you want when you think internally 😂
So Rainbow Dash has PTSD from abuse I don't know how bad that feels but I feel terrible for anyone that has gone through it and I'm very happy that people survive it my Aunt is currently going through it and I feel awful for her she's got bruises and her stuff has been burned thankfully she's getting away from the guy but he belongs in jail and I won't be happy until he's there I just want everyone to know that things will get better and that you are strong enough to get through I know it's cliche but I genuinely hope you guys know
You definitely pulled out all the stops on this one. I would just like to thank you for all you give us and tell you how exceptional your work is; you really work hard.
Oh gosh, I didn't even remember I was a part of this! It was fun to be a part uwu Thanks for having me play the role of Twilight ^-^
This is by far the best story that I have ever heard. Thank you Scribbler for doing this, I laughed, cried, and smiled. I am sorry for what happened back then with her, but I know that you already aware of this, but we are here for you and everypony else here in the fandom no matter the circumstances. We are Bronies, we look out for each other. But again, I thank you for sharing this story with us.
Miss Scribbler you and Lost are very kind people and both of you are very strong, it takes a lot of strength for anyone to leave a toxic/abusive realtionship no matter who you are man, woman, non-binary, gay or straight anyone can be an abuser and anyone be a victim, remember don't be scared to reach out for help it does not make you weak asking for help it shows you are strong.
I have always considered myself fortunate to have lead a good happy life so far. I may only be a teen, and I know this is still something that may yet happen, but I have always considered myself lucky nonetheless. To find that so many people I know have been through this, especially those I look up to, often makes me feel like my good fortune may have been better for someone else...
I’m genuinely sorry to hear about your friend. I hope things are better for them, now.
Thank you for talking about this serious topic. As someone who was in a psychological/emotional abuse from an ex for five years, I thank you for talking about this. I’m much happier now thanks to the support of my loved ones/therapists.
I have too much to say to this video. I LOVED it and I left a like, and it might be one of my favorite KZread videos I've seen, and by far your best reading. And by the way, not only did I listen despite it being 2 hours long, which is longer than most videos I've seen, by I rarely checked the timer to see how much left the video had. I was too invested in the story and thought it was respectful just to listen. Great job as always and I'm glad you two survived. I love you both and I hope you have a good night. You may not get this message but I thought it was worth a type.
damn this story hit so hard abuse no matter how "small" or big can completely destroy a person of who they are, and sometimes it takes years for that person to ever be themselves again speaking as a survivor (not physical, but mental/emotional abuse), this entire story (at the time of writing I'm only half way in) just... hits differently
@Ange1_333
Жыл бұрын
I honestly hope your okay now! mental and emotional abuse is the worst, I really do hope your doing better
@Xand3rCha0s360
Жыл бұрын
@@Ange1_333 oh yeah I'm okay now lol therapy and medicine works wonders
The voice acting is so good! I really like the voice actor for Rainbow Dash! They did an amazing job!
That was a tough and touching story there, Scribbler. Cudos to you all! Kinda wanna hear the aftermath when they go talk to their friends, and if Twilight will take matter into her own hooves or leave it to Celestia to maybe disband the Wonderbolts (if they were all in on it). I mean, yeah, Celestia started the EUP guard as protection, but these past 7 years I have yet to see them save Equestria. (listens to end blurb) Ok, forget what I said there... This just brought a new sting to my heart, knowing that it was based on Rainbow Dash's Fan Favorite Voice Actor's Real Life, as well as yours. I think I heard something about Lost's troubled life a while back. Can't remember the details, but this sounds very familiar. Here I am, a guy in Sweden which is pretty remote from anything Brony, wanting to hug you guys for all your hard work in FimFiction Narrations and your efforts in preventing bullying in schools (among other places), but now I want to give you a hug for each and every event that has happened in your lives. The phrase "Be lovely to each other" has gotten a whole new meaning...
Wow. I kinda want a sequel
@queenperrytheplatypus458
5 жыл бұрын
holozlaer 235 Same
The thing that people forget about abuse is that is more psychological than physical, if a domestic abuser tried to attack a random person on the street they would probably get pummeled. What I seen in cases of domestic abuse is that the abuser always has that level of control, it has too, otherwise the victim would stood up and either fight back or walk away from the relationship. That’s why I think it was genius to put RAINBOW DASH as the one abused instead of fluttershy, because everyone takes her as the little girl that needs to be protected, so she being the abused one in the story would had undermined the message. Instead, with rainbow dash it’s clear that she could probably overpower the abuser, but she can’t. Because the abuser trap her so she can’t find it in her to defend herself and simply running away really took her a lot of effort. That’s something people really needs to get nailed on the head, because when I see cases of cases of domestic abuse where the victim is male… people react with laughter. because most people are under the impression that it’s all physical, they don’t take into consideration the physiological aspect, they think that being physically stronger that the abuser is enough. People who complain about this story with “rainbow dash would defend herself” pretty much proves my point. As a personal note: i didn’t deal personally with any case of domestic violence, I studied many criminal cases so I notice some patterns, but at the end of the day I’m not really qualified to really give assessments or evaluations. But, in my family there was a domestic abuser, an uncle who died in a car crash decades ago. According to my father, his wife nowadays drives a hummer… who do people use a car like that? To feel safe. I think that says a lot about how the abuse affected her.
I wanna cry this is truly so sweet and sad to listen to, hearing rainbows voice when explaining hurt to a surprising amount
Just finally finish this today after starting this yesterday and this is honestly my favorite thing that I think you’ve ever uploaded. It’s really close to home with a lot of stuff that myself and my friends who are like my family have been through, and I’m really glad that everything worked out in the end for you guys.
Now we're gonna actually have a MLP Season 9 episode (5th one) that is named just like this fanfiction. XDXD
After all these years. Still one your most powerful audios Lady Scribbler. Thank you so much.❤
@ScribblerProductions101
11 күн бұрын
Thank you!
*hugs for everyone especially Lost and Scribbler * You and Lost are very brave to come forward and for a good cause there are plenty of people in the world who would listen and help just reach out it is not okay that they abuse you, love isn't supposed to feel like chains and shackles or control ,love is having a strong foundation healthy boundaries being loved and safe both partners being supportive and understanding each other I also forgot to mention respect and trust as well in any relationship, abusers aren't just partners like Scribbler said it could be anyone,
HELLO TEARS NICE TO SEE YOU FALL BY AGAIN! ;-; Good job, sad but awesome.
I came for the story and left with feels, this hit home. I was the friend that had to help with what was going on.
I love the story and the meaning behind it! It made me feel both sad and happy! Sad because people don't know how to ask for help or is too scared to do so! Happy because this story might help people find courage that they didn't know they had and that they know that their not alone and they can reach out for help and find others who can help them through what they are going though! I hope that they find happiest in a world that they didn't know they could be in!
I cannot thank you enough for sharing this with us Scribbler. I don’t know if I would’ve understood the magnitude or context of this problem otherwise.
Omg u did such a great job on this worth 2 hours of listening to,I literally almost cried.