An Apple Sleep Experiment [MLP Fanfic Reading] (Grimdark)

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CHECK OUT THE NEW SONG BASED ON THIS STORY: • "Apple Sleep Experimen...
What would really happen if somepony didn't sleep....?
"An Apple Sleep Experiment"
Written by Magpiepony
Narrated by TheLostNarrator
With Special Guest VAs
Magpiepony as Apple Bloom and Trixie
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IMShadow007 as Twilight Sparkle
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GutiuSerenade as Filthy Rich
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Katie Patterson as Granny Smith
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FerrousPhantom VA as Big Mac and Narrator 2
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DaWillstanator as Flam
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Gina M as Lyra HeartStrings
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Agent0Fluffy as Rarity
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Lilly Leaf VA as Pinkie Pie
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  • @thelostnarrator
    @thelostnarrator7 ай бұрын

    Come check out the first part of official sequel! kzread.info/dash/bejne/d2mGpJtrhrfIXZc.html

  • @TheCreepersGood

    @TheCreepersGood

    7 ай бұрын

    WOOOOO!!

  • @UcarroPlanetball

    @UcarroPlanetball

    7 ай бұрын

    Why was this a day ago??

  • @Twinklethefox9022

    @Twinklethefox9022

    7 ай бұрын

    I wonder if Luna's magic could have prevented this.

  • @fivertherabbit7

    @fivertherabbit7

    6 ай бұрын

    YASSSS

  • @MesozoicLad

    @MesozoicLad

    6 ай бұрын

    Warning: it’s really good.

  • @SpeedyWeedyYT
    @SpeedyWeedyYT Жыл бұрын

    How this could’ve been avoided: -Apple jack organized a night harvest so people could help without getting heatstroke, or just offer a lot of water -Apple jack could’ve asked twilight for some money (she’s a Princess, she has to be rich) -Apple jack decides to cook blue meth with pony Walter white and sell them across equestria while avoiding the pony DEA

  • @frostynilla9174

    @frostynilla9174

    Жыл бұрын

    Yep

  • @tendarlee

    @tendarlee

    Жыл бұрын

    Isn't that apples desapier after midnight?

  • @punkabooiscool1111

    @punkabooiscool1111

    Жыл бұрын

    caught me in the first 2/3 not gonna lie

  • @aceflair7875

    @aceflair7875

    11 ай бұрын

    apple bloom we need to cook

  • @RYCH3

    @RYCH3

    10 ай бұрын

    i always got the impression that twilight isnt rich she just has the title as a princess but she doesnt necessarily have a lot of money

  • @celtric9023
    @celtric90236 жыл бұрын

    Moral of the story: drugs are one hell of a drugs

  • @angryputin6594

    @angryputin6594

    5 жыл бұрын

    Celtric lol, u mean crystal Meth/cocain/weed/acid/meth/etc. is one hell of a drug.

  • @totemofundrying7481

    @totemofundrying7481

    5 жыл бұрын

    Celtric like 420 😎

  • @animooredpanda7097

    @animooredpanda7097

    4 жыл бұрын

    No. It's mostly Filthy Rich can die

  • @CA-vy8et

    @CA-vy8et

    4 жыл бұрын

    @Rae Oh stfu druggie, weed is certainly a drug. So is sugar and coffee if you think about it hard enough. Stop denying what you already know...

  • @keiracopeland4721

    @keiracopeland4721

    4 жыл бұрын

    @@CA-vy8et Sugar has been proven to be the most addictive substance that we consume, but it's not considered a drug. You don't see dealers roaming the streets with it, or doctors administering it to patients. No, instead, it is packed with other ingredients to create a nice treat aimed at everyone- including children. So, yeah, sugar is addictive, but not a drug. Caffeine is the same story, second verse.

  • @Al3xanderr
    @Al3xanderr Жыл бұрын

    18:31 that “I SAID NO!” was so powerful. you could really see the first signs of madness here

  • @mushroom5209

    @mushroom5209

    9 ай бұрын

    I just got there and YES OMG it is

  • @RailfoxStudios

    @RailfoxStudios

    7 ай бұрын

    It’s one of my favorite parts. I really gotta hand it to the VA, this unhinged burst of aggression is so well done!

  • @MrJewishfox

    @MrJewishfox

    7 ай бұрын

    😢omg yes so scary better than any monster

  • @RailfoxStudios

    @RailfoxStudios

    7 ай бұрын

    The scariest monsters are never the ones with the biggest teeth or the sharpest claws. The scariest monsters are the ones that look like you or me.

  • @Tharzic

    @Tharzic

    6 ай бұрын

    I love it sm

  • @rhondahoward8025
    @rhondahoward80253 жыл бұрын

    I actually really like this because it's an escalating psychological horror instead of just the typical shock gore-fest.

  • @arrow_of_ravenclaw5155

    @arrow_of_ravenclaw5155

    2 жыл бұрын

    This is a lot more narrative than say sweet apple massacre

  • @emocrybaby

    @emocrybaby

    2 жыл бұрын

    I mean I do like gore but psychological is much better in my opinion

  • @inactiveuser7337

    @inactiveuser7337

    2 жыл бұрын

    Yeah I dont like gore creepypastas. Cupcake is an exception. because nostalgia. Phychological is less predictable, because with gore its like Yeah everyones gonna die in some creative way yaaaaay- with phycological you can do alot more then just killing everyone.

  • @troin3925

    @troin3925

    10 ай бұрын

    The original Russian Sleep Experiment creepypasta definitely focused more on the gore rather than the psychological aspect.

  • @artmoryoo

    @artmoryoo

    9 ай бұрын

    yes!! i was genuinely surprised since most of the popular horror fics, at leasf the ones i knew about, were "what if this pony was EVIL and PSYCHO and KILLED PONIES" and then that's it.

  • @dasmolpotato2793
    @dasmolpotato27936 жыл бұрын

    Moral of the story: Apple jack you should've taken coffee instead to stay awake How are people still replying it’s been 3 years 💀 PeoPle plEase I dOnt eVen rEmembEr cOmmenTing thIs

  • @dasmolpotato2793

    @dasmolpotato2793

    6 жыл бұрын

    Especially the ones with a ton of CAFFINE

  • @spiritdreamerag9976

    @spiritdreamerag9976

    4 жыл бұрын

    That is so true

  • @dinogaming5091

    @dinogaming5091

    4 жыл бұрын

    Dasmolpotato OOF so true though lol

  • @Flannel-Channel8837

    @Flannel-Channel8837

    4 жыл бұрын

    College and highschool kids can relate

  • @harneevkaurdhaliwal1723

    @harneevkaurdhaliwal1723

    4 жыл бұрын

    *TIM HORTONS AND STARBUCKS AWAKEN*

  • @laurenwilson2145
    @laurenwilson21456 жыл бұрын

    imagine if this was actually an episode oh lord the children

  • @aymanschannel

    @aymanschannel

    4 жыл бұрын

    I would actually watch that cuz then i would say " Creepy mlp yee"

  • @colors__official31

    @colors__official31

    4 жыл бұрын

    I am a child, heh

  • @crazykingofspades5101

    @crazykingofspades5101

    4 жыл бұрын

    Imagine the letters from parents.

  • @saturn5396

    @saturn5396

    4 жыл бұрын

    Yes

  • @anaisecliserio7738

    @anaisecliserio7738

    4 жыл бұрын

    Yaaaaassssssssssss Then again maybe not

  • @PDragonBaby
    @PDragonBaby3 жыл бұрын

    Lauren Faust: I’m just going to create a nice show about friendship and magic unicorns The fandom:

  • @coldhaixx1905

    @coldhaixx1905

    2 жыл бұрын

    The show:🥰💖💗💮💐🦄🔮✨😇🌺 The fandom:🩸💉💀⚰️⛓️😈👹🥀🔪

  • @emmasmith4125

    @emmasmith4125

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@coldhaixx1905 yes

  • @Gemmygod

    @Gemmygod

    2 жыл бұрын

    And even after the show has ended, the fandom shall live on forever more.

  • @emmasmith4125

    @emmasmith4125

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@Gemmygod yes

  • @emmasmith4125

    @emmasmith4125

    2 жыл бұрын

    @MEDICAL BOY yas

  • @Alexandria87
    @Alexandria877 ай бұрын

    Twilight gaslighting Applejack cost her big time in the sequel. Not going to give spoilers, but it's a good follow up.

  • @thenewadventuresofhenry6998

    @thenewadventuresofhenry6998

    2 ай бұрын

    "If I didn't hate you before, I certainly hated you then!"

  • @red.psycho02
    @red.psycho026 жыл бұрын

    The potion, the insanity, the massacre, the cure and the sadness, all of this caused by the greed of Filthy Rich.

  • @AtaMarKat

    @AtaMarKat

    4 жыл бұрын

    Red Psycho Or Granny’s financial ineptitude.

  • @hayridetoo

    @hayridetoo

    4 жыл бұрын

    Screw Filthy

  • @tomisabighomosexual697

    @tomisabighomosexual697

    4 жыл бұрын

    in conclusion eat the rich

  • @kirbystudios4127

    @kirbystudios4127

    4 жыл бұрын

    Nah it was granny’s fault

  • @fraklord7415

    @fraklord7415

    4 жыл бұрын

    Filthy Rich isn't anything anymore he's just a stain

  • @creeperawman.9399
    @creeperawman.93995 жыл бұрын

    *starts video* I'm a brave boi *gets to AppleJack in the hospital* NoT a BrAvE eNoUgH bOi FoR tHiS!!

  • @cujo1786

    @cujo1786

    5 жыл бұрын

    I'm listening to this at work... working security in a hospital.... I'm not brave anymore for Celestia's sake I'm not brave enough for this

  • @SunnyToaster6907

    @SunnyToaster6907

    5 жыл бұрын

    I know that! XD

  • @tiredashell7205

    @tiredashell7205

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@cujo1786 RIP you may you have a good life

  • @cujo1786

    @cujo1786

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@tiredashell7205 I'm alive and well... well enough to continue listening to stories read by scribbler

  • @redlightning6243

    @redlightning6243

    5 жыл бұрын

    xD😂

  • @plum.phobia
    @plum.phobia2 жыл бұрын

    1:02:56 dude this line still hits so hard, she *knows* she’s messed up in the head but she’s too far gone to even want to fix herself-because she thinks there’s nothing left to fix

  • @RitsuSakuma69

    @RitsuSakuma69

    Жыл бұрын

    *It’s not actually her line, it’s a line from one of the victims of the Russian sleeping experiment!*

  • @Ar-Arsy

    @Ar-Arsy

    11 ай бұрын

    ​@@RitsuSakuma69Oh so this story is really inspired by he russian sleeping experiment?

  • @user-jt1yf1sb5d

    @user-jt1yf1sb5d

    10 ай бұрын

    1:12:06

  • @artgirlgammer4662

    @artgirlgammer4662

    10 ай бұрын

    @@Ar-Arsy It seems to be loosely inspired by it.

  • @SCHfan-jb4zo

    @SCHfan-jb4zo

    8 ай бұрын

    I had a look myself and there is some elements of the Russian Sleep Experiment poured into this. Applejack goes crazy the same way the victims did when they had lack of sleep. But it also has its own original ideas too making it almost its own thing as well, like when Applejack broke her legs. Overall this is a pretty good MLP grim dark story. Normally, I don’t listen to grim dark stories, but this one was actually pretty interesting and kept me hooked from beginning to end. Kudo’s to the writer who wrote this

  • @gren8te319
    @gren8te3192 жыл бұрын

    i heard someone had a headcannon that the twilight that visited aj at the end of the fic was chrysalis the whole time. the fic specifically mentions twilight's headless corpse earlier, so twilight already got her karma for giving aj the potion by being murdered by her. twi being a changeling also explains how jarringly out-of-character she is in the ending because that literally wasn't twilight.

  • @ClownieFace

    @ClownieFace

    2 жыл бұрын

    Huh? When is Twilight's corpse mentioned? Particularly headless? I know she's unconscious in one scene, but what?

  • @Twinklethefox9022

    @Twinklethefox9022

    2 жыл бұрын

    My head cannon is that, because of her head injury, twilight forgot that she gave the potion in the first place.

  • @gren8te319

    @gren8te319

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@Twinklethefox9022 that actually makes sense

  • @diamondinthesky4771

    @diamondinthesky4771

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@gren8te319 I like to think that Applejack's rampage was actually largely her hallucinating the people she blamed for causing her insanity. For instance it says Filthy Rich was already dead when she killed one of the early on-screen victims, but at the same time you could very easily imagine this referred to either that victim already being dead or to the other victims she had at that point. It is hard to believe after all, that after she had already been detained for wanting to hurt him that Rich would return to where she lives. Though of course, whatever the author says would override this. What I'm saying is, in this story it could very easily be assumed she had just thought she killed Twilight when in reality it was a fully innocent pony that was actually dead before her.

  • @angel-nv7jk

    @angel-nv7jk

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@gren8te319 but her friends knew. That's the problem. There's a plot hole that's never fully explained

  • @AtaMarKat
    @AtaMarKat4 жыл бұрын

    “Where... is Applebloom? Is she safe? Is she alright?” “It seems that in your anger, you killed her.”

  • @MiraculousMayhem04

    @MiraculousMayhem04

    4 жыл бұрын

    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

  • @unknownrussian9087

    @unknownrussian9087

    3 жыл бұрын

    ;-;

  • @silverchord5790

    @silverchord5790

    3 жыл бұрын

    Nice star wars reference

  • @mrholeio3060

    @mrholeio3060

    3 жыл бұрын

    Underrated

  • @JustMe-yx1xe

    @JustMe-yx1xe

    3 жыл бұрын

    Ish dis tru- QnQ

  • @wendigostudiosLNandMlp66
    @wendigostudiosLNandMlp664 жыл бұрын

    Okay in all honesty, when Applejack said "wanna bet?" It sounded kinda badass

  • @marz4850

    @marz4850

    4 жыл бұрын

    Wendigo Studios “in all honesty” lol

  • @Purps_Pans88

    @Purps_Pans88

    4 жыл бұрын

    yeah lol

  • @trashbug.8140

    @trashbug.8140

    4 жыл бұрын

    Yea lol

  • @revaslatts8011

    @revaslatts8011

    4 жыл бұрын

    When I heard it, I felt scared.

  • @Network-yp8de

    @Network-yp8de

    4 жыл бұрын

    when?

  • @ChickChickChirp
    @ChickChickChirp2 жыл бұрын

    Looking back at this story, I made a realization...Twilight could have just quickly gathered up all the apples with magic and then this never would have happened... Then again we never would have gotten this story if that did happen.

  • @selectidiot

    @selectidiot

    Ай бұрын

    no, the zap apple episode covered that.

  • @WilToLive
    @WilToLive2 жыл бұрын

    I love this story. I haven’t watched it in a long time and coming back, I realized why I like it so much. Nobody is truly at fault here. Nobody had intentions to hurt anyone, but in the end, Twi’s betrayal of AppleJack makes her the true villain of the story

  • @DearNightlight
    @DearNightlight5 жыл бұрын

    AppleJack is inevitable. Thanos is inevitable. AppleJack = Thanos confirmed

  • @Brandon_Wade

    @Brandon_Wade

    4 жыл бұрын

    And Ah... Am Apple Bloom.

  • @tinybionic8940

    @tinybionic8940

    4 жыл бұрын

    Thapple jack

  • @idk-em2yq

    @idk-em2yq

    4 жыл бұрын

    Thanos is purple twilite is purple....THEY ARE FUSED!!!

  • @cloudymew

    @cloudymew

    4 жыл бұрын

    H A H

  • @mr.mercury3820

    @mr.mercury3820

    3 жыл бұрын

    Enter 'X-files' theme song

  • @mrx4022
    @mrx40224 жыл бұрын

    _"I'm the thing you fear. The wild beast that hides within us all, but is kept back by sleeping. I will always be in the back of your mind, I will forever be waiting for the right time. The time when you finally snap and loose all control of self."_

  • @silvanac.7626

    @silvanac.7626

    4 жыл бұрын

    :0

  • @treeborky3703

    @treeborky3703

    4 жыл бұрын

    *damn*

  • @BUNKBEDJUNCTION

    @BUNKBEDJUNCTION

    4 жыл бұрын

    i eat that

  • @peachiexoxo7171

    @peachiexoxo7171

    4 жыл бұрын

    Wait. A unicorns waiting for me. Damn. I should stop sleeping. I want to see a unicorn. (No seriously this is deep. Love the user name.)

  • @okaysomething-ef1cx

    @okaysomething-ef1cx

    4 жыл бұрын

    so EDGY

  • @415-k1ub
    @415-k1ub9 ай бұрын

    It's sadly poetic how in the beginning, Applejack mistakenly assumed that she might have kicked her older brother to death, when in actuality, she just kicked a tree a little too hard and her brother was safe at the hospital. In the ending, Applejack really did kicked her older sister to death, and is left questioning whether she is still alive. Her sleep deprived mind made up a nightmare of paranoia, and now she is left to experience it for the rest of her life, long after the effects of the potion wore off.

  • @kennedytaylor2301
    @kennedytaylor23012 жыл бұрын

    I like how applejack has like no stories about her, it’s so nice to have one especially so well written

  • @CurseWord-rc4wn
    @CurseWord-rc4wn6 жыл бұрын

    APPLEBLOOM! BRING THE SHOVEL! SO I CAN DIG THE SHIT OUT OF LYRA!!!!

  • @janinecastuera3833

    @janinecastuera3833

    6 жыл бұрын

    xP

  • @GrimmVessel5734

    @GrimmVessel5734

    6 жыл бұрын

    Yup thats Lost!😂😂😂

  • @SuperMuskett

    @SuperMuskett

    6 жыл бұрын

    dont you be talkin 'bout my mama, DONT MAKE ME GET THE SHOVEL

  • @forgottendreams6298

    @forgottendreams6298

    6 жыл бұрын

    Brony Leo what ever happened to her shovel shotgun?

  • @lemonboy5453

    @lemonboy5453

    6 жыл бұрын

    Best comment on the internet.

  • @Sashasangels
    @Sashasangels4 жыл бұрын

    coppa: confused screaming

  • @vqxxen

    @vqxxen

    3 жыл бұрын

    LMAO

  • @pastelthefoxyt4588

    @pastelthefoxyt4588

    3 жыл бұрын

    B.eαstiєωoof xD

  • @insertnamehere5961

    @insertnamehere5961

    3 жыл бұрын

    Coppa: Kid show..? HORROR?!?!?! *UNBELIEVABLE!*

  • @insertnamehere5961

    @insertnamehere5961

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 lmao

  • @insertnamehere5961

    @insertnamehere5961

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 o

  • @RomanceFreak
    @RomanceFreak2 жыл бұрын

    The Twilight I know would NEVER let Applejack take the fall, like the narrator said. This is such a creepy and sad story! Really well done!

  • @caelusprime5278
    @caelusprime52782 жыл бұрын

    Four years later, still wanting a sequel.

  • @racapinang

    @racapinang

    2 жыл бұрын

    Yep, like, Apple's Sleep Forever

  • @dragonheart4444

    @dragonheart4444

    6 ай бұрын

    there's 2 now

  • @jestrel

    @jestrel

    5 ай бұрын

    it happened

  • @TejashreeRavikumar

    @TejashreeRavikumar

    4 ай бұрын

    WE GOT IT 4 IS COMING SOON

  • @jestrel

    @jestrel

    4 ай бұрын

    @@TejashreeRavikumar YEEEEEES GRAAAAAAAGH

  • @golden2night
    @golden2night4 жыл бұрын

    Starts watching: well this doesn’t seem so bad? Applejack vomits: well this took a turn? Applejack hallucinates: uuuuuh? Lyra sees bonbons remains: Wtf TMI Applejack kills Lyra: ok I’m done

  • @bottlecappencel4826

    @bottlecappencel4826

    4 жыл бұрын

    Ah shoot. Shouldn’t have seen the comments. Luckily while writing this I forgot what Lyra was doing, so I’ll just post this and advert my gaze.

  • @sissymorning9809

    @sissymorning9809

    3 жыл бұрын

    Yeah poor ponies Lyra bon bon filthy and everypony else that potion really made aj go jackshit nuts!

  • @bungiecrimes7247

    @bungiecrimes7247

    3 жыл бұрын

    That's not: how that works BUT: OKAY

  • @hannahguitard8501

    @hannahguitard8501

    3 жыл бұрын

    I am 7 and a fan of my little pony and I think I scared

  • @Mjauritz

    @Mjauritz

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@hannahguitard8501 You shouldn't be on KZread if you're not old enough, you have to be 13 or up. And just so you know, this story isn't real, so you have nothing to worry about.

  • @weirdlookindoll
    @weirdlookindoll6 жыл бұрын

    ...she killed her... She killed her own sister... *I'M OUT*

  • @revaslatts8011

    @revaslatts8011

    5 жыл бұрын

    N-No... she would never do that... sure, she probably bucked her unconscious... but... maybe she ran into the forest... and went missing? *puts both hands over face* Nopony might know where she is. That would explain Twilight's hesitation.

  • @T_E_G

    @T_E_G

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@revaslatts8011 why would she even run? She came there to look for her sister after all

  • @chloe-8838

    @chloe-8838

    4 жыл бұрын

    Joana The Dummy she didn’t mean to.. the lack of sleep can make people do crazy things. It wasn’t her fault.....

  • @aizaha9597

    @aizaha9597

    4 жыл бұрын

    What a great spoiler 👏👏👏👏😃 ...my fault i shouldnt have read the comments.

  • @iamwoofle7480

    @iamwoofle7480

    4 жыл бұрын

    Joana The Dummy yo she dead

  • @Twistedpastell
    @Twistedpastell3 жыл бұрын

    I only now realize that she could have had a full on loop hole. ONLY make the required jars of double, saving the rest of the apples. Once Filthy Rich got the jars feel free to sit with her family and make the rest together before selling them for winter profit. If only she had seen it

  • @ReesesBees

    @ReesesBees

    3 жыл бұрын

    Filthy would’ve taken all the jars, regardless if she had doubled it.

  • @Nayas_Scattered_Mind

    @Nayas_Scattered_Mind

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@ReesesBees I’m super late to this, but I think they mean to make the usual amount of jars they would make normally in a season. Don’t make jam of the other apples, and hide them. Then once filthy is gone with those jars, make the others into jam and sell those for the winter profit.

  • @star22sally67

    @star22sally67

    Жыл бұрын

    That wouldn't have worked, she dud do this, however filthy was still going to take the rest of the jam. If they tried to sell any, he would just confiscate it.

  • @Greenrock12345

    @Greenrock12345

    Ай бұрын

    Honestly my smart ass was gonna say they should've given him the jam and kept enough apples to make jelly; Filthy Rich only asked for the jam, not everything made with zapapples, jam and jelly are close but they *are* two different things

  • @b3akine
    @b3akine10 ай бұрын

    the story is already terrifying and extremely well written but the VOICE ACTING oh my god. i had full body chills when she was killing lyra and when she gave her monologue to rainbow, this is insane and it’s a shame this is one of the most underrated mlp creepypastas because it’s psychologically one of the most messed up

  • @ryukobrazuca
    @ryukobrazuca4 жыл бұрын

    Applejack: I am the inevitable. Apple Bloom coming outta nowhere: *and I am Iron Man.*

  • @sarahvanrooyen7280

    @sarahvanrooyen7280

    4 жыл бұрын

    Nice

  • @Soniosuperstar

    @Soniosuperstar

    3 жыл бұрын

    And I am Shrode!!

  • @meeelatonin7760

    @meeelatonin7760

    3 жыл бұрын

    Actually she's apple bloom

  • @mrholeio3060

    @mrholeio3060

    3 жыл бұрын

    And I... Am... *An apple to the core*

  • @androidmcpe1plays805

    @androidmcpe1plays805

    2 жыл бұрын

    My Little Pony : Endgame

  • @jolluxsiren
    @jolluxsiren6 жыл бұрын

    " we don't take kindly to spies around here" ...Engineer?

  • @mono414

    @mono414

    4 жыл бұрын

    *SLAP MY LIKE BUTTON*

  • @puff_6925

    @puff_6925

    4 жыл бұрын

    slap my hand :3

  • @bluegloriousgames

    @bluegloriousgames

    4 жыл бұрын

    Lol yee

  • @duncanproductions2k6

    @duncanproductions2k6

    4 жыл бұрын

    oh god, your comment just made me imagine the shovel part but with spy as lyra and engie as applejack. ewww...

  • @anamericangrizzlybear8315

    @anamericangrizzlybear8315

    4 жыл бұрын

    *SEDUCE ME*

  • @darthgamer6080
    @darthgamer60803 жыл бұрын

    24:10 The combination of the sound of Filthy Rich laughing, Applejack groaning, the narrator speaking, and the tree cracking all at the same time makes this sound like a YTP 😂

  • @MintyCakes809
    @MintyCakes80911 ай бұрын

    I love how applejack is always basically described as a boring pony that dosent make mistakes,And the only time she gets a creepypasta its based on real life events and it’s extremely gruesome and this is literally like the only creepypasta she has other then apple eyes💀

  • @novapond6642

    @novapond6642

    3 ай бұрын

    What real life events- >->

  • @MintyCakes809

    @MintyCakes809

    3 ай бұрын

    @@novapond6642 Look it up👺

  • @undiademivida1448

    @undiademivida1448

    16 күн бұрын

    @@novapond6642 Yeah right, what real life events, RESPOND MINTYCAKES809! This matter is important!

  • @pinkgrenadesxx3789
    @pinkgrenadesxx37894 жыл бұрын

    When applejack was bucking a tree, my captions said “applejack was f****ing a tree” that, was freaking funny

  • @ccappa2001

    @ccappa2001

    3 жыл бұрын

    LOL

  • @electricspinel9047

    @electricspinel9047

    3 жыл бұрын

    I also listened to that part as well 😂😂😂😂😂😂

  • @user-yc8jr8qh9l

    @user-yc8jr8qh9l

    3 жыл бұрын

    LAMAKSHDSIIRHR

  • @Eal-EYE-jah

    @Eal-EYE-jah

    3 жыл бұрын

    Another funny The line was "princess's" But the caption said "parentheses" and I legit thought I was gonna die from laughing my ass off

  • @saturnzhornetz44

    @saturnzhornetz44

    3 жыл бұрын

    Same lol

  • @gabs3096
    @gabs30964 жыл бұрын

    I remember how sad it made me that apple jack didn't have her own creepypasta, this was amazing omg

  • @evandilbab7246

    @evandilbab7246

    4 жыл бұрын

    Ever heard of Bad Apples?

  • @RedactedText

    @RedactedText

    3 жыл бұрын

    Or Apple Eyes

  • @I_Eat_Lemons

    @I_Eat_Lemons

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@RedactedText I don't believe that's even an official story yet, unless the creator made it one

  • @windrunnerpaints6993

    @windrunnerpaints6993

    2 жыл бұрын

    Heard of the trotting dead?

  • @andreeahalinga8142

    @andreeahalinga8142

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@I_Eat_Lemons it is an official story-

  • @irenic_raccoon
    @irenic_raccoon Жыл бұрын

    I havent been into mlp in years and on a mlp creepypasta rabbithole out of pure boredome, but this story stands out as something truley magnificent in terms of writing. If you replaced the ponies with humans, it would be a really good horror novel and possible movie. This story sounds like a horror from the 80s or 90s that is considered a cult classic. I agree with many of the comments here that there should be a second part, but I think it should focus on Twilight and the guilt she lives with. It could be a psychological horror in its own as the guilt starts eating at her when memories from the past, before the potion, surround her. Yet she is too afraid to admit she's in the wrong because she was Celestia's star student, and she worked way to hard to become a princess to let it all fade from an honest mistake. She keeps herself sane by fully blaming Applejack because she asked for the potion, and this causes trauma for Twilight as she now begins to cope by pushing to blame onto others, her own sanity slips as the pressure of being a princess becomes too much. She goes down a similar path of Applejack's as she refuses to stop working, trying to hide her mental degradation. It could be similar to that of how Twilight went crazy in that one episode, desperate to help but a refusal to be in the wrong. One day her "help" causes a death. She didnt listen to the pony she was helping and did what she thought was right, ending their life. She freaks out, hides the body somewhere with her magic or something, and so on. Just an idea but it could be very interesting if done right.

  • @erwinsmith3006

    @erwinsmith3006

    Жыл бұрын

    Dude that such a good story to write now I'm wondering what will happen in the end of the story

  • @irenic_raccoon

    @irenic_raccoon

    Жыл бұрын

    @@erwinsmith3006 I love making silly little ideas in my silly little head

  • @erwinsmith3006

    @erwinsmith3006

    Жыл бұрын

    @@irenic_raccoon I will not call that silly little head

  • @glitch3579
    @glitch35792 жыл бұрын

    I remembered this story to be well written and the performance to be great. I am glad to come back to it and find that I was wrong. It is even better than I remembered. When AJ's insanity really starts to kick in on the hospital bed, I was in awe. Excellently done.

  • @mayatorres3635

    @mayatorres3635

    7 ай бұрын

    Especially with the glitch effects and with the narrators switching back and forth. Those were unique elements!

  • @narwhale922
    @narwhale9226 жыл бұрын

    Wait Twilight isn't to blame Applejack told twilight she WANTED to do it( drink the potion) Twilight warned her before she drank it Edit: I leave for 3 years and return to find there's now a whole moral discussion in the comment section what the heck did my younger self summon

  • @NallaFoS

    @NallaFoS

    5 жыл бұрын

    Twilight tried to act like there was no potion! She's to blame >:C

  • @amaranthdahlia

    @amaranthdahlia

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@NallaFoS its both of their faults tbh

  • @T_E_G

    @T_E_G

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@NallaFoS what if it was just her hallucinations?

  • @NallaFoS

    @NallaFoS

    5 жыл бұрын

    @@T_E_G If it was, then the writer did a poor job describing that it was. It was described in an amount of detail as if that IS what happened. It would be dumb to play it off like "lol just a dreammmm"

  • @bluedragon8762

    @bluedragon8762

    4 жыл бұрын

    Still doesn't excuse how she covered up her mistake.

  • @val_alexa
    @val_alexa4 жыл бұрын

    I think this is everyponys fault: Granny Smith for making the deal, Applejack by taking this measures and Twilight for not taking the blame for the potion. Yeah you can say Granny thinks there are no more options and Twilight advise AJ about the effects. But as for Twilight she have to act like a princess and not just let AJ without an answer about her sister and just let her like that until de day AJ dies. Twi must be joking. AJ is the element of honesty and no one can't take her place just like that. That's not how the elements of harmony works and even less how friendship works. Twilight is not worth for the element of Magic. Not anymore. As for the VA's good job. I really love it. All work very professional in my opinion.

  • @miilkyorca3213

    @miilkyorca3213

    4 жыл бұрын

    Besides, how many times have Applejack helped Twilight?

  • @fluttershy1126

    @fluttershy1126

    4 жыл бұрын

    BRUH TWILIGHT BLAMED HERSELF FOR THE GODDAMN POTION!!!!

  • @val_alexa

    @val_alexa

    4 жыл бұрын

    @Arielle Stephens ​Calm down? I'm calm, this is just my conclusion to the story xD

  • @iiartsyaestheticii5008

    @iiartsyaestheticii5008

    3 жыл бұрын

    Finn [Redacted] what i think they meant is how twilight never took the fault in the end of the story, and instead of helping applejack (albeit not many ways you can do that) she lied to applejack, locked her away, and abandoned her. Yes, she took the guilt at first, but once her own image was at stake, she pinned it onto applejack.

  • @iiartsyaestheticii5008

    @iiartsyaestheticii5008

    3 жыл бұрын

    Finn [Redacted] I understand where you’re coming from, and I’m in no way saying Applejack wasn’t at fault, the only thing that I think puts a thorn in my side is that Twilight lied to applejack in the end, expecting her to believe it. I personally do believe majority are in the wrong, but to me Twilight and Applejack are a gray area of wrongdoing.

  • @iammorpblorp4818
    @iammorpblorp48184 ай бұрын

    The fact that Filthy was dead the whole time is powerful man

  • @thenewadventuresofhenry6998
    @thenewadventuresofhenry69984 ай бұрын

    SPOILERS "Sometimes you can't have what you want, that's just how life is." Apple Bloom will remember that.

  • @demonchild__gacha9371
    @demonchild__gacha93714 жыл бұрын

    *Achievement unlocked: You have survived a video by TheLostNarrator*

  • @Twinklethefox9022

    @Twinklethefox9022

    4 жыл бұрын

    I've listened to this video I dunno how many times

  • @uncagedaura7190

    @uncagedaura7190

    4 жыл бұрын

    Who said I survived?

  • @iwanwahyudi7004

    @iwanwahyudi7004

    4 жыл бұрын

    E

  • @yes-i-am-no-longer-irl-brob

    @yes-i-am-no-longer-irl-brob

    4 жыл бұрын

    @@iwanwahyudi7004 A

  • @justafanhere7801

    @justafanhere7801

    4 жыл бұрын

    @@yes-i-am-no-longer-irl-brob S

  • @TristyEWings
    @TristyEWings5 жыл бұрын

    AppleJack: *I AM THE INEVITABLE!!!* Tony Stark: _..and i am iron man_

  • @tinybionic8940

    @tinybionic8940

    4 жыл бұрын

    *snap*

  • @okaysomething-ef1cx

    @okaysomething-ef1cx

    4 жыл бұрын

    I AM SHREK

  • @julyjade4925

    @julyjade4925

    4 жыл бұрын

    And I'm Kanye West!

  • @Twinklethefox9022

    @Twinklethefox9022

    4 жыл бұрын

    And I'm a talking Umbreon!

  • @fernandomirandilla9088

    @fernandomirandilla9088

    4 жыл бұрын

    I'M Jack Tracker the secret intelligent service 😎😎😎

  • @supergal8958
    @supergal89589 ай бұрын

    I like how you can hear the show’s Applejack and the fanfic’s Applejack. I think it’s so unsettling but verrrry fitting. It gives you that sense of “Applejack doesn’t know what’s going on and that she isn’t being told the truth.”

  • @AngelDragon448
    @AngelDragon4487 ай бұрын

    This was twilights fault. She still gave apple jack the potion knowing there was a possibility of horrid side effects and yet ended in massacre. Filthy also could have been understanding. The fact twilight lied to cover her butt and keep her reputation is horrible and wrong. Wanna say your a amazing narrator very well done and all who made the art was just pure chilling!

  • @Lulu_Loves_Sheep

    @Lulu_Loves_Sheep

    Ай бұрын

    Eh I feel like it was a mix of both Apple and Twilight. Twilight said "Use this as an absolute LAST resort." Implying, "Hey, I don't know what this will do to you." And AppleJack took it straight away. However, I think more of the blame lies on Twilight. For giving her that potion, AND THEN lying/gaslighting about it. Not owning up to her big mistake.

  • @shaylachartrand5095
    @shaylachartrand50954 жыл бұрын

    *beginning of this stuff* This isn’t to bad. *hospital part* I CAN SURVIVE I CAN SURVIVE *voice glitching* I CANT SURVIVE I CANT SURVIVE

  • @bellhop784
    @bellhop7844 жыл бұрын

    I love how they have literal gods who can raise and lower the sun and moon but can’t make rain. I find that hilarious for some reason

  • @creepyqueen2278

    @creepyqueen2278

    2 жыл бұрын

    Well, they're the princesses. Remember from the Hearth's Warming episode that the unicorns did it before they found Equestria? And rain is the pegasi's job.

  • @angel-nv7jk

    @angel-nv7jk

    2 жыл бұрын

    Did you not hear the part where the princesses had a spell to make the ocean usable

  • @inersdraco

    @inersdraco

    7 ай бұрын

    well, they don't have a Princess of Water

  • @lailarichardson2933
    @lailarichardson29332 жыл бұрын

    I can't believe Twilight decided to lie to Applejack when she got the cure at the end. What happened to feeling guilty when you gave her the potion? Now there's no potion. If there was really no potion, Applejack would of just passed out. I'm not mad, just surprised and shocked. I guess that's what makes a good story.

  • @IdentityMemes
    @IdentityMemes Жыл бұрын

    This story was amazing and it also shows how dangerous different kinds of substances can be in real life Lack of sleep is also highly dangerous and I love how it could all be portrayed in this story ! Truly an outstanding job and performance from everyone working on this 🎉👏

  • @pmdlord7237
    @pmdlord72375 жыл бұрын

    Greed, Wrath, Blood lust, gore, abuse, murder, and betrayal... Perfect story, 10/10

  • @maletealpearl8513

    @maletealpearl8513

    4 жыл бұрын

    Yep.

  • @500subswithnovideosplease2

    @500subswithnovideosplease2

    4 жыл бұрын

    Umm

  • @yjy2940

    @yjy2940

    4 жыл бұрын

    ;-;

  • @adavis3464

    @adavis3464

    4 жыл бұрын

    Friendship is Maaaagic!!

  • @urmom-os9sm

    @urmom-os9sm

    3 жыл бұрын

    mlp be like

  • @ethanharris1903
    @ethanharris19035 жыл бұрын

    This. Needs. A sequel. Although AppleJack resorted to using dangerous substances in the face of potentially losing her and her family's livelihood to an individual she despised, I find it very hard to place guilt on her. If one's well being and future, and the well being of their loved ones, were abruptly put under intense pressure by some event out of their control, it isn't a surprise that they would justify going, you could say, "the extra mile" to try what they may to help. AppleJack, from what I can deduce, is a being willing of self sacrifice and heroism. She is not swayed by the notion of bringing harm to herself to help preserve others. And in this case in particular, the fact that she took the potion just tells me the lengths she trusts Twilight's mastery in magical practices. I will say, AppleJack's refraining from seeking help when the initial effects of the potion started becoming apparent was a bit odd, but it is easily explained by the fact that it was the potion meddling with her cognitive state. She wasn't in her right mind. And then we get this ending. Twilight separates all involvement with the horror that occurred by, essentially, gutting AppleJack's utility and innocence from her, proclaiming that she herself had pushed herself into the madness that consumed her and that the fact she was an element would not save her since there was another that could fill that role. It's honestly disturbing to witness this. And that is why, there. should be. a sequel. This leaves on a such a sour note that it makes the viewer desire something to wash that away and bring levity to the tale. But then again, most horror refuses to do so, instead leaving their stories with bitter ends to make themselves more striking and, perhaps, memorable. Either way, great story.

  • @bluedragon8762

    @bluedragon8762

    4 жыл бұрын

    Why would there be a sequel? Applejack is in prison for life. Twilight isnt going to come and see her. The other mane 6 will probably be told she died or another lie since twilight is so ready to lie and place all blame off of herself.

  • @rae-rae8005

    @rae-rae8005

    4 жыл бұрын

    @@bluedragon8762 it still would be nice to see

  • @bluedragon8762

    @bluedragon8762

    4 жыл бұрын

    @@rae-rae8005 nice to see sure but would make no sense in accordance with the story

  • @rae-rae8005

    @rae-rae8005

    4 жыл бұрын

    @@bluedragon8762 hm.... Maybe so.

  • @ethanharris1903

    @ethanharris1903

    4 жыл бұрын

    @@bluedragon8762 You do have a point, yes; a realistic sequel to this probably wouldn't be as exciting. Still, just goes to show how unjust the ending is conveyed.

  • @VintageSoull
    @VintageSoull3 жыл бұрын

    This hit hard, especially the ending and ending music, i know i’m late to this but its genuinely a masterpiece, it made me think a different way about Twilight.

  • @ripperplaysclon152
    @ripperplaysclon152 Жыл бұрын

    This… I think I just got traumatized. Seriously, due to my own ADHD, I sometimes have my own sleep issues. I wake up feeling just like Applejack before she snaps: focused, full of energy, jittery and temperamental. It terrifies me to think that I could slip this low if insomnia was piled on top of this. Most of all, this stands out from other Grimdark stories. It isn’t “edge for the sake of edge” like one would expect from something like Cupcakes and its many clones. This is a well-written psychological horror that could very well happen to anybody. And for that, I thank you, Magpiepony, and everyone else who helped bring this reading to life. Please, take care of yourselves.

  • @kayooxi407
    @kayooxi4074 жыл бұрын

    Granny: ”Hold on there Apple jack” Subtext: hold on a wrinkle chick” Me: (c" ತ,_ತ) ( 3:25 )

  • @J_weew4756

    @J_weew4756

    4 жыл бұрын

    Well thats true but not true

  • @d3caying_gitch657

    @d3caying_gitch657

    4 жыл бұрын

    XD XD XD

  • @firstlast-to1mq

    @firstlast-to1mq

    4 жыл бұрын

    WELL NOW HOLD ON A MINUTE...WTF

  • @juliannavela940

    @juliannavela940

    4 жыл бұрын

    XD

  • @juliannavela940

    @juliannavela940

    4 жыл бұрын

    b u t t e r c u p XD

  • @Strawberry-td7ez
    @Strawberry-td7ez6 жыл бұрын

    Moral of the Story: GO. TO. SLEEP.

  • @musicmaiden7011

    @musicmaiden7011

    5 жыл бұрын

    Jeff? Is that you??

  • @nostalgiabender2375

    @nostalgiabender2375

    5 жыл бұрын

    NO!! GO. TO. NANDOS!!!

  • @theflamingstar-3688

    @theflamingstar-3688

    5 жыл бұрын

    hello jeff the killer

  • @cellesaur_rawr

    @cellesaur_rawr

    5 жыл бұрын

    Jeff the killer

  • @EVILDOER420

    @EVILDOER420

    5 жыл бұрын

    Did you just-

  • @Bixiartjunkie
    @Bixiartjunkie Жыл бұрын

    I see why twilight did what she did, it's true Equestria couldn't afford to lose both of them and she warned Applejack of the side effects, she was simply doing the best to help a friend during dire times, and let's be real here, even if you think you wouldn't most ppl would do the same thing, humans are inherently selfish afterall, we do what our brain decides is the best outcome for us when it comes to dire situations

  • @smartaleckk
    @smartaleckkАй бұрын

    fantastic voice acting, VAs did a great job, be it conveying the exact emotion in a moment or portraying the character right. as if this is some lost show episode, the voices are natural and actually similar to the original cast and im loving all of them

  • @whimsicalemmycorn767
    @whimsicalemmycorn7676 жыл бұрын

    FINALLY SURVIVED A LOSTNARRATOR GRIMDARK SO PROUD OF MYSELF

  • @tiredashell7205

    @tiredashell7205

    5 жыл бұрын

    *Go back I listened to more and it's too late for me but you can be saved*

  • @TheCanary.

    @TheCanary.

    4 жыл бұрын

    An person's dark corner same

  • @silvanac.7626

    @silvanac.7626

    4 жыл бұрын

    @@tiredashell7205 that's right

  • @krampus7520
    @krampus75204 жыл бұрын

    Apple Jack: *kills lyra* Me: Do ya think she killed Filthy yet? Narrator: she killed Filthy already

  • @yuyaricachimuel555

    @yuyaricachimuel555

    3 жыл бұрын

    Shame. Would’ve loved a scene where he gets what he deserves xP

  • @Twinklethefox9022

    @Twinklethefox9022

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@yuyaricachimuel555 I agree. It would have been interesting

  • @glitch3579

    @glitch3579

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@Twinklethefox9022The only difference between the other ones would be his pleas, because no matter what any of them said, she only heard her own insanity. But it would have felt slightly more fulfilling, hearing his fear.

  • @caelusprime5278

    @caelusprime5278

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@yuyaricachimuel555 Just so you know, Filthy Rich is actually quite humble in the show.

  • @yuyaricachimuel555

    @yuyaricachimuel555

    2 жыл бұрын

    @@caelusprime5278 irrelevant to this fanfic

  • @FookOffM8
    @FookOffM82 жыл бұрын

    I never read this fanfic as a kid, so i'm coming back and watching everything I missed. I still love MLP creepypastas so much, and this story holds up so well! love it!

  • @donnamonna9926
    @donnamonna9926 Жыл бұрын

    I know I'm 4 years late to this masterpiece of a story but, this was creepy, gory, and sad all at the same time. The ending made me tear up a little. It showed how AJ was worried sick about what happened to Apple Bloom. Not to mention the fact that Twilight completely denied the fact that she gave AJ the potion in order to keep her perfect reputation. I felt bad for AJ. I'm not saying it was Twilight's fault, but I'm also not saying that it's 100% AJ's fault either. They both did wrong. For me, it's hard to choose who was really "in the wrong". But Twilight denying the fact she gave AJ the potion, id say she's pushed a little more towards the wrong. (in my opinion) The art also caught my attention the most. It portrayed exactly what was happening, which, in my opinion, made everything more eerie and unsettling. The artists did amazing! The voice acting, too. They did an amazing job aswell! The narrator's monotone voice creeped me out(not in a bad way) and the way the others voiced the characters, I don't have words to describe how I feel. But in short, I LOVED it! In my opinion, this story is well-written. Maybe better than any other MLP "creepypastas" lol. But nonetheless, I enjoyed this!

  • @DaWillstanator
    @DaWillstanator6 жыл бұрын

    Moral of the story: DON’T DO STEROIDS KIDS XD Thanks for having me and Katie voice in this Lost. ‘‘Twas so much sinister & spoopy fun. ^^

  • @THE1vbLLover69_

    @THE1vbLLover69_

    6 жыл бұрын

    DaWillstanator/Thespio I'm still scared man man I'm so scared though good job

  • @THE1vbLLover69_

    @THE1vbLLover69_

    6 жыл бұрын

    Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😢😢😢😭😭😭😢😢

  • @kanebabin570

    @kanebabin570

    6 жыл бұрын

    thanks also im 10

  • @dierdrecabral3804

    @dierdrecabral3804

    6 жыл бұрын

    DaWillstanator/Thespio Moral of the story is actually: DON'T END UP LIKE APPLEJACK! MY FAVS CHARACTER!😥😥😫😫

  • @khstudios9741

    @khstudios9741

    6 жыл бұрын

    Hello DA you did good

  • @brutishjohn8549
    @brutishjohn85496 жыл бұрын

    Me: All seems fine. *Gets to the psycho part.....* Me: Well, there goes my sleep.

  • @PhoenixIsGodly

    @PhoenixIsGodly

    6 жыл бұрын

    NO GET SOME SLEEP OR YOU'LL END UP LIKE APPLEJACK... plz don't end up like Applejack, I don't want to die

  • @liptonicedtea2256

    @liptonicedtea2256

    6 жыл бұрын

    I haven't gotten any sleep since last week

  • @PezzleStick

    @PezzleStick

    6 жыл бұрын

    I fall asleep to this! (I play it every time I sleep, so about once every 3 or so days)

  • @samsamsings187

    @samsamsings187

    5 жыл бұрын

    no WaIT WHAT HAVE WE APPARENTLY *NOT* LEARNED

  • @foxheart1882

    @foxheart1882

    5 жыл бұрын

    Same..

  • @dayorsmth
    @dayorsmth2 жыл бұрын

    Twilight sure is a good friend leaving her friend in a cell even though she's pretty MUCH the reason why she got her friend there

  • @InvaderGIR98

    @InvaderGIR98

    2 ай бұрын

    It hits hard because we damn well know that the Princesses or at least just Celestia would have let her off somehow. Twilight's fear of failure really did everyone dirty

  • @junkiiramen
    @junkiiramen3 жыл бұрын

    *Applejack stabs Lyra with a shovel* “We don’t take kindly to spies around here” Why do I feel like that’s an unintentional TF2 reference

  • @MrNobody47710
    @MrNobody477104 жыл бұрын

    I like how this story is only loosely inspired by "The Russian Sleep Experiment," what with a total lack of sleep freeing some form of latent madness that supposedly lies within everyone. IMO, the effects of the madness are better demonstrated, in this story. At first, it seems as though Applejack is having a fairly straightforward break from reality that becomes more extreme as her sleep deprivation continues. That, and the focus of the story is on the consequences of the madness, instead of a "we are the madness that you kill with sleep" twist ending.

  • @fangirl3323

    @fangirl3323

    2 жыл бұрын

    I can tell from the name of this grim story

  • @troin3925

    @troin3925

    10 ай бұрын

    @@fangirl3323I think their point was that it was _loosely_ based on the creepypasta rather than a complete copy.

  • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    8 ай бұрын

    ​@@troin3925 And being its own thing too which other Creepypasta Stories should be made into an MLP version of it There's Laughing Jack with Button and I got some Twilight the Killer (Classic Jeff version I like that one) Bleeding Armor (Creepypasta Version of Shining Armor and MLP version of Homicidal Liu) Spike the Killer (Jane Arkensaw aka Jane the Killer version of Spike) Laughing Pinkie Pie (Pinkie Pie version of LJ)

  • @troin3925

    @troin3925

    8 ай бұрын

    @@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 What?

  • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376

    8 ай бұрын

    @@troin3925 I was doing my own ideas for Creepypasta MLP inspired idea stories for the characters

  • @jamiekagemori1299
    @jamiekagemori12996 жыл бұрын

    Russian sleep experiment with ponies and a more personal story. 10/10

  • @elianadunigan2915

    @elianadunigan2915

    6 жыл бұрын

    Jimmy Killeen 11/10

  • @pinkamenadianepie9864

    @pinkamenadianepie9864

    6 жыл бұрын

    Howzabout 1000/10?

  • @Sketch_E_Toons

    @Sketch_E_Toons

    5 жыл бұрын

    1,000,000/10

  • @darkermoonlightshadow2084

    @darkermoonlightshadow2084

    5 жыл бұрын

    1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000/10

  • @sarahmccarten1515

    @sarahmccarten1515

    5 жыл бұрын

    ∞/10

  • @SkyeTheFenALT
    @SkyeTheFenALT2 жыл бұрын

    I still come back to this time after time when citing my fave grimdark story's, its just to damn good, and the way lost approached this production wise makes it all the better listen. such a masterpiece, and one id recommend anyone to read/listen to if there into horror

  • @taylorhodge8041
    @taylorhodge8041 Жыл бұрын

    As a person with anger issues the part where she breaks her legs is painfully accurate she was hurting herself but felt no pain I used to punch my metal bedframe but I didn't feel anything I was to mad to rap my head around the pain of it. It's just to accurate.

  • @jjbunbun
    @jjbunbun6 жыл бұрын

    41:45 those eyes....46:36 that smile...... Applejack has reached a whole new level of crazy

  • @Jonsson7

    @Jonsson7

    6 жыл бұрын

    In deed. It was fun painting dose 2 paintings.

  • @jjbunbun

    @jjbunbun

    6 жыл бұрын

    Jonsson7 you painted it?

  • @crazycrafter9309

    @crazycrafter9309

    5 жыл бұрын

    Jonsson7 why would you make something like this?! it's terrifying!

  • @CipherKirby

    @CipherKirby

    5 жыл бұрын

    Chant with me guys: *"Sleep Is For The Weak."*

  • @StargirlShooter

    @StargirlShooter

    5 жыл бұрын

    NO JOKE SHES INSANE!!

  • @SuperBluethedog
    @SuperBluethedog6 жыл бұрын

    Am I the only one that thinks granny Smith is the most to blame?

  • @cromeforce

    @cromeforce

    5 жыл бұрын

    why

  • @T_E_G

    @T_E_G

    5 жыл бұрын

    Would make sense since she made the deal with Filthy Rich. She should've atleast helped with the zap apples and taking care of AJ

  • @cromeforce

    @cromeforce

    5 жыл бұрын

    Elemental 206411 but she´s an old mare

  • @cheesestickhathreturned6875

    @cheesestickhathreturned6875

    4 жыл бұрын

    crome force Are u dumb m8, so you’re saying is that if someone “old” committed a crime and needed to go to jail but you’d just let em go cuz their “old”?! What about. Hitler?

  • @aboredfellow1448

    @aboredfellow1448

    4 жыл бұрын

    It's Twilight. She literally could have picked of all the apples of the tree and none of this would have happened. Then she lets Applejack rot in jail just because she wanted to get off scot free.

  • @imagi_nati0n
    @imagi_nati0n6 ай бұрын

    I love how neither Applejack nor Twilight end up being villains or heros in this story- Applejack begged for the spell in spite of Twilight's warnings and Twilight gave in, knowing that there would be consequences (although I highly doubt that Twilight knew about AJ's state of mind or even thought that AJ would go on a murder spree) I'm so excited for Another Apple Sleep Experiment's final part and seeing how everything comes together 🧡 Additional note: AJ was stated to have thrown up the potion immediately after drinking it, so there's also that factor 👀

  • @415-k1ub
    @415-k1ub9 ай бұрын

    I like the grounded the beginning of the story is. The heatwaves ruining the crops and severely impacting a farmer's finances, which are barely enough to support them when harvests are fine, is pretty realistic. Applejack's descent into insanity also doesn't feel too jarring, unlike a lot of creepypastas. (Up until the mandatory quote from the original Russian Sleep Experiment, that is) Her sleep deprivation led to her becoming emotionally unstable and forgetful, and with her added stress, made her insanely paranoid.

  • @Zeruel3
    @Zeruel33 жыл бұрын

    Dear lord that was chilling to the core, Applejack going insane is far, far scarier than Cupcakes or Rainbow Factory, it feels more true to her character too, her devotion to her family costing her everything

  • @hannahmetzger4880

    @hannahmetzger4880

    2 жыл бұрын

    I still say that Rainbow Factory is way scarier than this, but other than that I agree.

  • @ghostlytavern129

    @ghostlytavern129

    Жыл бұрын

    This one and Rocket to insanity are my favorite

  • @thandizokawoloka3495

    @thandizokawoloka3495

    Жыл бұрын

    Rf has to be the scariest of all of them

  • @artgirlgammer4662

    @artgirlgammer4662

    10 ай бұрын

    @@ghostlytavern129 Rocket to insanity in my opinion took waaaaaaay too long to remain interesting. Even with everything dubbed and edited!

  • @Kingsombra21

    @Kingsombra21

    9 ай бұрын

    You’re telling me, I nearly couldn’t fathom those images when Lyra confronted her

  • @Emerald-DragonFlame
    @Emerald-DragonFlame6 жыл бұрын

    that bone crack... that, that made me sick...

  • @retro7317

    @retro7317

    4 жыл бұрын

    Same man same

  • @rainbow_gacha1236

    @rainbow_gacha1236

    4 жыл бұрын

    Same here

  • @Evelighte

    @Evelighte

    4 жыл бұрын

    wait... when? I don't remember hearing an actual crack....

  • @emzaa6683

    @emzaa6683

    4 жыл бұрын

    Jade Ocal it happened 3 times when she first breaks her back legs after bucking the tree around 20 ish minutes into the video

  • @SteampunkHorse

    @SteampunkHorse

    4 жыл бұрын

    Emerald DragonFlame time stamp?

  • @Gabbysdog
    @Gabbysdog Жыл бұрын

    26:11 this one (whitout audio) would be a perfect troll for the cloppers

  • @kostonr9583
    @kostonr9583 Жыл бұрын

    Absolutely amazing narration, it felt only a step down from a animation. The images/scenery to go along with the story, the music, the voice acting all done amazingly. I love this story it’s so captivating, sad, gruesome, disturbing and I love all of how it’s told. Felt like a different kind of movie but good, and sometimes better in that way.

  • @user-nn5my1lc5q
    @user-nn5my1lc5q5 жыл бұрын

    Twilight: Applejack, can I talk to you? Applejack: Want to go to the zoo?

  • @oceandiamond7934

    @oceandiamond7934

    4 жыл бұрын

    What drugs are in all those apples she ate?!

  • @angeldust94

    @angeldust94

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@oceandiamond7934 what r u talking about? She didn't eat any apples...

  • @melodification

    @melodification

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@angeldust94 yeah she ate the ponies

  • @nonamenoname9322

    @nonamenoname9322

    3 жыл бұрын

    I don’t get it

  • @VeraxFriends

    @VeraxFriends

    3 жыл бұрын

    ???

  • @LordOfTheEyebots
    @LordOfTheEyebots6 жыл бұрын

    Moral of the story: if twilight gives you an energy drink, do NOT drink it...

  • @dcslayer1751

    @dcslayer1751

    5 жыл бұрын

    I would. The records I could set from no sleep

  • @Steve-op9sd

    @Steve-op9sd

    5 жыл бұрын

    Lol

  • @gambler942

    @gambler942

    5 жыл бұрын

    Or better yet, don't ask for her help she might betrayed you in the end just to save herself and reputation

  • @harrisonprice9661

    @harrisonprice9661

    5 жыл бұрын

    Maybe that potion was a drug

  • @kristinwiebold2433

    @kristinwiebold2433

    5 жыл бұрын

    Apple jack shouldn't have asked for the potion. But Twilight shouldn't have forgotten that this happened because she gave that dangerous potion to Apple Jack when she knew it wasn't safe.Though I can't put all the murderers that Apple Jack did on Twilight.

  • @PrederNationteam74
    @PrederNationteam743 жыл бұрын

    *Ironically counter to this. I had taken sleeping pills to help myself sleep, spoiler they didn't work. However there was one memory I recalled, I was trying to fall asleep next to my brother, when all of a sudden something zapped me awake, and my heart skipped three beats causing me to jump and fall onto the floor. Needless to say my brother gave me a very confused expression.*

  • @MistressAudio
    @MistressAudio Жыл бұрын

    Just gotta say, the voice acting in this video is fucking phenomenal all around, I can't pick a single person who did a bad job or even alright job. Everyone did fantastic. This video, somehow, has become somewhat of a comfort video for me lol, I really love the twist this story has for the Russian Sleep Experiment and as I said, it sounds amazing. Keep up the amazing work!

  • @lady0rca
    @lady0rca6 жыл бұрын

    That one picture where Applejack tightens the rope around Lyra's will now give me nightmares.

  • @crazyserpent9347

    @crazyserpent9347

    5 жыл бұрын

    46:36 :)

  • @Abi_Purplegal

    @Abi_Purplegal

    4 жыл бұрын

    V A O I fear nothing but THAT... it scares me!

  • @creepycpjtk8532

    @creepycpjtk8532

    4 жыл бұрын

    My heart jumped when I saw it😰😱😣

  • @TheCanary.

    @TheCanary.

    4 жыл бұрын

    V A O same but when you’ve seen it more than once (I’ve watched it a few times) It’s still bad

  • @hollysandy1259
    @hollysandy12596 жыл бұрын

    *Reads the title* liiiiike "The Russian Sleep Experiment?" (If you are familiar with that creepypasta.)

  • @eeveelutionlover7301

    @eeveelutionlover7301

    6 жыл бұрын

    Holly Sandy same

  • @Crom_Apsotle

    @Crom_Apsotle

    6 жыл бұрын

    EXACTLY WHY I CAME HERE

  • @unlikeothers1133

    @unlikeothers1133

    6 жыл бұрын

    @Holly Sandy Yeeeeup

  • @vwolfgoat5476

    @vwolfgoat5476

    6 жыл бұрын

    Holly Sandy yes that is good creepypasta

  • @DuccDoesADoot

    @DuccDoesADoot

    6 жыл бұрын

    SAME! I THOUGHT OF THAT!

  • @WhirlwindStudio
    @WhirlwindStudio8 ай бұрын

    This is one of my favorite grimdarks ever. I always get livid at end hearing Twilight lie revealing her betrayal and coward behavior. So ridiculously heavy and feels real and disgusting.

  • @aarongonzalez2316
    @aarongonzalez23163 жыл бұрын

    Imagine what it's going to be like for big mac coming home to find out one of his little sisters is died and the other went insane and almost massacred all of ponyville as well as her friends and their sister.

  • @solarflarethepegasus3013
    @solarflarethepegasus30136 жыл бұрын

    Apple Jack's infamous shovel has returned

  • @BONK_BINK

    @BONK_BINK

    5 жыл бұрын

    Mhh *_Y E A B O I_*

  • @Dusk_Mightyena

    @Dusk_Mightyena

    Жыл бұрын

    She is the ancestor of Shovel Night!

  • @redlightningguy912
    @redlightningguy9125 жыл бұрын

    23:16 Applebloom is a unicorn,Sweetie Belle is an earth pony

  • @sarahlilly1745

    @sarahlilly1745

    5 жыл бұрын

    Wait what?

  • @pleaseignoremyoldcomments-2170

    @pleaseignoremyoldcomments-2170

    5 жыл бұрын

    Nani?!?!

  • @SMILE-yo1jy

    @SMILE-yo1jy

    5 жыл бұрын

    Wah-??? No it's the- opposide of it!?

  • @SMILE-yo1jy

    @SMILE-yo1jy

    5 жыл бұрын

    Wait oh yeah! Now I know

  • @jaxcorncornjax5193

    @jaxcorncornjax5193

    4 жыл бұрын

    Bro it’s true

  • @bronchh
    @bronchh10 ай бұрын

    Idk why I clicked on this thinking it'd be a commentary video or something, but the story and the narration certainly hooked me!

  • @LeafiSoft
    @LeafiSoft Жыл бұрын

    The voice acting here was so good! I honestly thought these were the real voice actors (unless they are) and the story is so good! The moral of the story is a very important one, and I’m assuming that by the name, this could’ve been an experiment that twilight set up, and that’s why she’s not admitting to giving applejack the syrum, or somehow she lost her memory such as when she was beaten by applejack

  • @cheesestickhathreturned6875
    @cheesestickhathreturned68754 жыл бұрын

    5:47 Subtitles auto generated “YOLO Granny Smith”

  • @carmenmacias1394

    @carmenmacias1394

    4 жыл бұрын

    Okay but this is basically the story summed up

  • @babyd0ll_gacha631

    @babyd0ll_gacha631

    3 жыл бұрын

    XDD

  • @progamerlad9181

    @progamerlad9181

    3 жыл бұрын

    Yo wtf facts I just checked

  • @cyber.starrr
    @cyber.starrr5 жыл бұрын

    "It's not like we haven't ran into these types of problems before!" ...why is it when I hear this, I get the feeling she's referencing almost EVERY MLP Creepypasta? Like, seriously! Listen to that part over and over and TRY to convince me it's something else.

  • @Glow_Stix139
    @Glow_Stix13911 ай бұрын

    Bruh AJ didn't remember what happened and twilight gave her the potion. AJ should get a lawyer and plead insanity THIS SHIT AIN'T FAIR! # FREE AJ 😤✊🏿

  • @kittybuns1226
    @kittybuns1226 Жыл бұрын

    I’ll say that apple bloom was killed by applejack and that made me think that twilight left because she didn’t want applejack to be traumatized.

  • @Xx-jh7iv
    @Xx-jh7iv6 жыл бұрын

    Wait.. why didn't AJ just ask twilight to use her magic to pluck all the apples off the trees like she did in applebuck season?

  • @katelynbodiford5680

    @katelynbodiford5680

    6 жыл бұрын

    Lalalover 4ever Applejack probably didn't think about that.

  • @acandybar283

    @acandybar283

    6 жыл бұрын

    Because then there wouldn't have been a grimdark!

  • @lordsimptonx7129

    @lordsimptonx7129

    6 жыл бұрын

    Lalalover 4ever Because twilight was already busy

  • @Sl33pyH3adlezzzz

    @Sl33pyH3adlezzzz

    6 жыл бұрын

    or twilight could have just talked to filthy rich because she's the princess and she had that kind of power over him.

  • @acandybar283

    @acandybar283

    6 жыл бұрын

    Agreed, ChillyWereWolf!

  • @pissapocalypse
    @pissapocalypse6 жыл бұрын

    Applejack: "WHO SENT YOU!? You're... you're a SPY!" Me: No Bon Bon is a spy lol

  • @rulerzreachf4n34

    @rulerzreachf4n34

    6 жыл бұрын

    “MY NAME ISN’T BON BON... IT’S SPECIAL AGENT SWEETIE DROPS”

  • @emmamurray5324

    @emmamurray5324

    6 жыл бұрын

    Maggatrix NOO my name is BLUEBLING

  • @AARON-BURR

    @AARON-BURR

    6 жыл бұрын

    Maggatrix WHO SENT YOU WHOOOOO

  • @Thebatcavepetfriendlybakery

    @Thebatcavepetfriendlybakery

    5 жыл бұрын

    Had a stroke after reading this, it's hilarious but I feel sick for laughing

  • @coffee-tz3lm

    @coffee-tz3lm

    5 жыл бұрын

    if there's a spy-at your apple farm WHO YOU GONNA CALL?-THE.PYRO

  • @pearldragon6508
    @pearldragon65082 жыл бұрын

    Twilight absolutely sold AJ down the river. If she was found to have enabled this then she'd be the one being stripped of Princesshood and Element. Starlight Glimmer could easy give Twilight a run for Element of Magic. Twilight would end up like Sunset - outcast from her position at Celestia's side. Far easier for Twi to have the Element of Honesty replaced by the biggest threat to her (Starlight) and hide behind 'the good of Equestria because I need to be the one with the answers'. You can tell by the way certain lines are written/phrased. Too much at stake for Twi to lose, better to offer up a scapegoat. This story was so sad yet so amazing!

  • @T.Jbracone4417
    @T.Jbracone441711 ай бұрын

    This is so good,i was gonna leave but then it was scenes kept catching my attention. Right when it began to get boring it kept showing scenes that brought my attention back. The voice acting / narroration, the art, the story itself, it's all amazing. Make a full movie, write a book.I loved this and I hope it gets the attention it deserves. True talent

  • @Starbat88
    @Starbat885 жыл бұрын

    The way Twilight handled the situation at the end is probably the darkest part of this story. It's easy to criticize her for her decision, but she would have to be quite the big person to take the fall with Applejack. It's cowardly yes, but the show has (obviously) never really put Twilight in a position like that. It's interesting to speculate how a character might actually react.

  • @Kevin-tx8et

    @Kevin-tx8et

    11 ай бұрын

    I don’t think it was the darkest part but very much mad about but again Twilight did tell AJ that she has not master it so IDK the real blame here

  • @vaporean_boylove.0w083

    @vaporean_boylove.0w083

    6 ай бұрын

    ​@@Kevin-tx8et I feel is a situation of unknowing disfortune. It starts out as a freind trying to help the other and then it starts to have shit it the fan at how fast it escalated! Twilight created the potion in a way to help Applejack, and AJ wants to help her family and save them from debt. Two innocent actions ended up in carnage!

  • @CipherKirby
    @CipherKirby5 жыл бұрын

    Body: I'm tired. Let's go to bed- Brain: *Bish Please. Sleep Is For The Weak. Now Turn On Every Light In The House!*

  • @downfallfox

    @downfallfox

    3 жыл бұрын

    Me with every light in the house off: weakling

  • @meme-lh3mk

    @meme-lh3mk

    3 жыл бұрын

    XDD body: Understandable, have a great day

  • @alienreble9426

    @alienreble9426

    2 жыл бұрын

    Be careful not sleeping or else you'll end up like Applejack

  • @ant1kq783
    @ant1kq7833 жыл бұрын

    beginning: okay okay, this is pretty easy to stand lyra dying: IM ALREADY SO SICK OF THIS, MY BODY IS LIMP- *HELP* rainbow dash getting attacked: how tf am i still here??? applejack in a cell: i lived. i just gotta go through one more.

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