Perfect your common app essay at the end of this video / pt 2. of writing your essay

Pt 2 of writing your common app essay tips :D; enjoy!
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► @nico.d.pie on Instagram
Disclaimer: These are only my experiences and personal suggestion, I am not a professional educator.
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Hi! My name is Shadouw and I am currently a freshmen undergrad at Northwestern University at the time of this video.
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Пікірлер: 29

  • @hannahjade4945
    @hannahjade4945 Жыл бұрын

    you are the only person getting me through the common app essay anxiety 💀💀 thank you!!

  • @vincent_yang

    @vincent_yang

    Жыл бұрын

    Glad to help :D

  • @calebsatsi

    @calebsatsi

    Жыл бұрын

    yeah me too, same here

  • @oscarcaino299
    @oscarcaino299 Жыл бұрын

    You are just godly awesome, I have never heard such advice given so smoothly and consistently! I am recommending your channel and this video to all my friends applying this and next year! Please keep it up

  • @wamyy5
    @wamyy5 Жыл бұрын

    LOL loved the pop-up animations

  • @brunodc5232
    @brunodc5232 Жыл бұрын

    lets goooo thanks for this video bro! also first

  • @vincent_yang

    @vincent_yang

    Жыл бұрын

    🥳🥳Nice to see you in the comments again!

  • @centuryfrog
    @centuryfrog Жыл бұрын

    I love nico

  • @yohi9
    @yohi9 Жыл бұрын

    please Don't be Dead😉😉 We need you! & Seriously what I wanna say is Hard work pays off so please don't stop trying your best to help others

  • @markus_park
    @markus_park Жыл бұрын

    Wow

  • @yourluckycharm
    @yourluckycharm Жыл бұрын

    love that so helpful but what if my essay is about a challenge, not an activity it's mentioned but the prompt is about my growth and self-development after a significant tough period that changed some of my perspectives and values

  • @vincent_yang

    @vincent_yang

    Жыл бұрын

    Should be relatively the same, you still need to show how you grew from the experience, so an anecdote after you describe your challenge should work.

  • @centuryfrog
    @centuryfrog Жыл бұрын

    Nico is so funny

  • @yourdailynewsguy
    @yourdailynewsguy Жыл бұрын

    Why aren’t you already famousss???

  • @vincent_yang

    @vincent_yang

    Жыл бұрын

    😂😔wish I knew

  • @yourdailynewsguy

    @yourdailynewsguy

    Жыл бұрын

    @@vincent_yang dw Ong that’s solid advice thank you!

  • @justin234
    @justin234 Жыл бұрын

    At this point, you're my mentor for writing my suicide not- i mean college essays (•‿•)

  • @yahiaosman8938
    @yahiaosman8938 Жыл бұрын

    Great vid Vincent. I hope your entrance to college has been a complete mess of work and stress lol.

  • @vincent_yang

    @vincent_yang

    Жыл бұрын

    LOL YAHIA, dw i move in this week, it has indeed been a mess around the house

  • @yahiaosman8938

    @yahiaosman8938

    Жыл бұрын

    @@vincent_yang LOL, is it just me or is time moving soo slowly, 10th grade has really put me in my place and I’m not even halfway through, what a year it’s going to be lol.

  • @vincent_yang

    @vincent_yang

    Жыл бұрын

    @@yahiaosman8938 💀 Don't remind me, this week has been slower and slower, time is not linear anymore

  • @erikalenh5
    @erikalenh5 Жыл бұрын

    Hello! Do you read over essays? If so, could i send it to you?

  • @rit6966

    @rit6966

    Жыл бұрын

    Yeah same 😭

  • @vincent_yang

    @vincent_yang

    Жыл бұрын

    You can send it to my email if you'd like!

  • @erikalenh5

    @erikalenh5

    Жыл бұрын

    Would the feedback be private ? Or posted online?

  • @vincent_yang

    @vincent_yang

    Жыл бұрын

    @@erikalenh5 Ok so just to be completely transparent I won't share the essay publicly without permission, but as since I'm doing this for free, the amount of feedback I can provide won't be as thorough due to time constraints 😓. The exception is if it's for a video, then I can spend more time with it. (if I were to review the essay on the channel, it would be next year so no worries about that as well if you're worried about direct competition with same grade level peers)

  • @rit6966

    @rit6966

    Жыл бұрын

    @@vincent_yang when you put it in a video, when will we get the feedback about it tho