"Writing Better Lyrics" is a great book.. Thanks for the awesome video!

@SarahCrookall

6 жыл бұрын

Hey, Tj Herrington! Great to hear that you also enjoy this book. Pattison really has some great suggestions and exercises. Object writing is one of my favourite exercises that's really helped me personally. If you try it - I hope it goes well.

@kevinjoseph517

Жыл бұрын

I have it and dont like it..tiny font and older style of what a song should be like.

Very good tips. Thank you. I like how you touch all the senses. I hope to try some of them out. Best regards.

@SarahCrookall

7 жыл бұрын

The senses are such a fantastic avenue to engaging writing.

dropping gems

Great

What should be included if i were given to write a technical description of an hat (any object as an example)? I have a class test on Thursday please help :)

@SarahCrookall

5 жыл бұрын

Hi Happy Patel. Thanks for your question. I'm not sure if you'll be asked to provide a technical explanation of a hat, which may be a bit different than a descriptive explanation. So, I suppose, I'd first get clear on what you're being asked to describe. But if you were to describe a hat. Ask: how does it look, smell, taste?, feel, sound (like if you were to drop it, or scratch it)? then ask how does it make you feel? Are there any actions you can perform with a hat? what is that like? A technical description, though, may be asking you to describe what a hat does - or something along those lines. Best of luck!

@HP-pn8jr

5 жыл бұрын

Sarah Crookall thank you Sarah

Thank you!

@SarahCrookall

7 жыл бұрын

Thanks a lot for watching, Anna. Very much appreciated. Hope your plans for your channel are going well!

@AnnaKra

7 жыл бұрын

Your welcome!

Great video very informative and a interesting subject

@SarahCrookall

4 жыл бұрын

Hi E.A.W Tzipporah. Glad you enjoyed this video and hope you find it useful!

Thanks for the video 😊

@SarahCrookall

6 жыл бұрын

Thanks for watching, love :)

@CreativeQueenx

6 жыл бұрын

Sarah Crookall 😊😘

Really great exercise

@SarahCrookall

7 жыл бұрын

Thank you very much for watching, Erin!

I have read the same book. Which has lead me to looking deeper into the subject. Hi

@SarahCrookall

3 жыл бұрын

It has some great information, doesn't it?

@kanokiljoy5582

3 жыл бұрын

@@SarahCrookall yes it does. With different approaches to creating metaphors. This book was everything i need to unlock my creative endeavor s

Thank u🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

@jimmyboko1560

3 жыл бұрын

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@SarahCrookall

3 жыл бұрын

Of course! :) happy writing

Enjoyed this review, makes me want to go back to object writing

@SarahCrookall

6 жыл бұрын

Hey Ron! I hope that if you do it helps ! If you ever want to share your writing here, feel free!

@happyron

6 жыл бұрын

Cold Stranger by HappyRon Cold stranger, don’t leave me alone Cold stranger, come be my home. Warm me with your hidden heart. It must be there - the cold an art. Cold stranger, don't leave me alone Cold stranger, is that a smile? Cold strange, that's not your style Did you make a kindly good turn Or was it Slyly meant to burn Cold stranger, I saw a smile. Cold stranger, am I naive? Cold stranger, I don't want to leave My body tells my brain To make me go back again Cold stranger, I want to believe Cold stranger, I head for the door Cold stranger, say you want more Your lizard skin scrapes my soul I only came to rock and roll Cold stranger, I'm closing the door Cold stranger, the warmth has left me. Cold stranger, I don't like what I see I've never felt so aloof Or convinced myself that I'm bulletproof Cold stranger, you took it from me Cold stranger, I feel so alone This is the first draft so would Be interested in your honest thoughts as this is the first time I've used Object Writing in a poem and the firs time I've done a song that is more of Cohen-Poem song then a standard song: kzread.info/dash/bejne/gpiLsrKqg8axj6Q.html

@SarahCrookall

6 жыл бұрын

Thanks for sharing, Ron. I really enoy the line "Cold stranger, I saw a smile." It makes me think of however cold this person is, there is some joy there to be expressed. You do a good job of expressing your emotional experience. If you're interested in advancing it I would try to pull out more tangible observations. What was this cold stranger wearing? Did that lend to the sense of coldness you got from them? Was there a certain mannerism that stuck out? Where where you, and what did it look like in there? Some additional things to explore to make it more vivid! :)

The word of the day is "Danger", but how would I do an object writing exercise about "Danger" when it's not exactly an object? ... like..where do I begin?!?

@thewizrdofoz1

Жыл бұрын

Feelings… Danger makes you feel.. tense. scared. nervous. etc Hear Gunshots… screams…. Loud noises etc I’m actually busy while typing this so I can’t think too deep but this is just a few

Have you tried object writing? How did it work out for you? Leave your experiences here in the comments.

@AnthonyMetivierMMM

7 жыл бұрын

Yes, this is a great exercise. I would suggest that cognition is also a sense to add here, i.e. the sensation of thought. Like this off the top of my head, direct into YT: Title: No Cinnamon Either My wife bakes them for me, you know Because the chemicals ... They don't like me much Even though I like them Hours in the childhood orchard Pockets bursting ... Mouth too oft, offended by the tourist worm Bad behavior on all sides It's just the chemicals Doing their duty in the membrane ... Justice stems the gavel of nature Working worms into the brain Kindred by choice, Elective Affinities in trace amounts ... Traced against glass When she bakes them.

@SarahCrookall

7 жыл бұрын

Great piece! And you have an excellent point. Inner thought is a good one to explore because it helps connect other ideas, as well as bring them back. It can add a lot of flexibility. Thanks a lot for checking this out and sharing your work.

@ZenGuitarStudios

6 жыл бұрын

Sarah Crookall are you a published author? Aren't you merely parroting what another author has said?

@thepadenshow1945

5 жыл бұрын

Be really cool to have more videos about the book

Kinesthetic confused me for years

@SarahCrookall

Жыл бұрын

Not something that's always brought up!

U should be talking slow

Is she a published author? She is merely parroting what another author has said.

@SarahCrookall

6 жыл бұрын

Hi Zen Guitar Studio. The creator of the video is offering advice found in a book she read! What could be viewed as parroting may alternatively be viewed as passing on knowledge.