Short and sweet. I don't think Pat Pattison has ever had anything remotely close to a hit song. That doesn't mean it can't work, but it would be good to find out how many successful songwriters have used this technique.

This video just got into my recommended and my feed has been blessed with this great video. I play guitar in a few bands but we only do cover songs and wanted to start writing our own songs now aswell, and this really helped out alot :) Thanks so much, and you deserve much more subscirbes :)

@fleadoggreen9062

2 жыл бұрын

What’s the name of ur band ?

@clickcollective1082

2 жыл бұрын

so good to hear!! thank yooou

Your hair,accent,humor everything is perfect

Omg this is so useful new subscriber

Awesome 👏🏻🙏🏻

Thanks for this video!!! ❤

@clickcollective1082

3 жыл бұрын

Marcharie Music thanks for watching :)

great tips!

@clickcollective1082

3 жыл бұрын

thank you !!

Super Video! 😍

@clickcollective1082

3 жыл бұрын

vielen vielen dank :)

Que gran video, siento que estás técnicas hacen que las letras fluyan mejor y más natural, gracias por compartirlo :)

@clickcollective1082

2 жыл бұрын

muchas gracias :))

Great vid! I saw a couple of Pat Pattison classes online and they were very interesting and enjoyable

@clickcollective1082

3 жыл бұрын

GabrielaZapataMusic glad to hear that! 💜 I‘m still thinking bout attending at one of the online classes but it‘s quite expensive...

@hideoussails1783

3 жыл бұрын

@@clickcollective1082 how much $$$?

@clickcollective1082

3 жыл бұрын

Hideous Sails think it was a around 1.4k

@hideoussails1783

3 жыл бұрын

@@clickcollective1082 wow! pricey

@hideoussails1783

3 жыл бұрын

@@clickcollective1082 I can see paying $1,400 for in person lessons, but not for online classes.

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@ChristinaSings

3 жыл бұрын

dankee!

thank u for this tip, much love from Russia

@clickcollective1082

2 жыл бұрын

most welcome!

Thanks for this video, very interesting technique! However I couldn't find the step by step video on this exercise, could you provide a link please? :)

@clickcollective1082

3 жыл бұрын

hey juleen. I still need to upload this video. Sorry for that :D will do soon, thank you!

@clickcollective1082

3 жыл бұрын

Adriel Jameson perfect! enjoooy & let us know how it went

Nice video 👍

@clickcollective1082

3 жыл бұрын

Nadia Violin thanks so much nadia!!!

You just got a new subscriber! Love the content and your accent is ear candy! Where are you from ?

@clickcollective1082

2 жыл бұрын

oh thank you so much! I‘m from Austria hehe must sound funny to you

@CalvinRossWorld

2 жыл бұрын

@@clickcollective1082 lol yes it’s different but I love it! Do you have ig ?

Nice video

@clickcollective1082

3 жыл бұрын

thanks saso

tks

@clickcollective1082

2 жыл бұрын

haha thank u so much!

The word of the day is "Danger", but how would I do an object writing exercise about "Danger" when it's not exactly an object? ... like..where do I begin?!?

@OfficialNnoa

Жыл бұрын

Don‘t worry too much about whether it‘s an object or not. What is danger for you? How does it feel to be in danger? Can it feel good? Or bad? How do you react when you feel in danger? How to you get out of that feeling? What comes next? Start to answer some questions like those above & within writing you‘ll realize that your thoughts might lead you to a complete way of thinking about danger. or maybe you write stuff that is not related to anger at all… or maybe it is? ;)

@Tyler-ko8dp

Жыл бұрын

This is perfect! Thank you so much for your reply. So it's okay if it leads into something like, feeling danger about where a relationship is going for example? (emotional danger type of thing)

@OfficialNnoa

Жыл бұрын

@@Tyler-ko8dp that's maybe pretty unsatisfying but: everything is okay as long as it works for you! this method is a tool that could get you somewhere, but it's not necessarily bond to those rules mentioned in the video :) I e.g. prefer to write 5-10 minutes without any "rules", but when I get stuck or don't like my ideas, I try tools like object writing to enlarge my subconsciousness :)

@Tyler-ko8dp

Жыл бұрын

​@@OfficialNnoa I love your music btw, just checking it out now. The trouble I have as a writer, is I love my instrumentals, but then when it comes to lyrics and rhythm of those lyrics, I struggle so much. I always have a good "Theme" or general topic to begin with, but when I try to expand on that, I struggle with creating direction. Like the verses end up sounding like random lines thrown together, and I can never get anything catchy enough for the hook/chorus especially. When I search online, I see a lot of "come up with something simple" and "it has to be memorable" but like, I always try to do that and it just ends up sounding amateur. Maybe it's like WHERE I'm actually placing the words within the chorus, or maybe the pitches, I'm not sure

@OfficialNnoa

Жыл бұрын

@@Tyler-ko8dp ooh thanks a lot! :) i totally get that struggle. honestly, songwriting does not necessarily need to be something you do all by yourself. maybe you should try to involve another person, or even two and write together. it's so so cool to observe how others work, how others deal with these little challenges, how they inspire you and the other way round. this can be reaaally relieving. I always thought "i should be able to do all this by myself" - I'd say that's simply wrong. get out there and some inspiration :) and suddenly everything might turn out to be easier than ever thought

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@clickcollective1082

2 жыл бұрын

off-topic

@Moe-gz9nx

2 жыл бұрын

@@clickcollective1082 oh yeah and thanks for the ideas in the vid they helped alot

I like how you presented this but I don’t like this Pat’s “object writing” s senses principle. Things that move me truly are not coming from the senses: someone’s gesture of elegance, the subtle grace in someone’s attitude, the breathless selflessness of someone’s act, without mentioning affection, etc. And all these I would articulate through poetic metaphors, not through “senses”… like the afternoon sun shattering the school window to thousand pieces in a summer afternoon when all your friends were worlds away on vacations but you stood alone there where once you played…etc. Everyone sites this exercise and I find it extremely sterile because of this pretentious “senses” concept. I remember a book for lyric writing by a lady, and there she gave an example of bad lyrics and they started with exactly senses, like li was hungry, felt my stomach…bla bla…” She said, if you want strong lyric do not dwell on your physiology … How concise lol😛

@clickcollective1082

2 жыл бұрын

haha true words! everybody's got their own approach :) so as every topic, every song needs a different one...

@andrewtea

Жыл бұрын

"the afternoon sun shattering the school window" -> strong visual sense. That's were it often starts.

Pat Pattison didn't write shit sorry.. 20 bucks for advice about songwriting that even the likes of sting wonder mc cartney couldn't give.. ok :)))

@clickcollective1082

2 жыл бұрын

yess this book is amazing!!

@morepanic2289

2 жыл бұрын

@@clickcollective1082 yeah sure ahahahahahhaah