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I liked the way credits were given to everyone who were a part of this short film!

Nice work Saima..! expecting more to come. All the best

6:30!!😀🤣

amazed but need more clear audio

Lovely curtains and sofa covers..good interior too🤩Handsome boy and pretty girl. Climax super!

Awesome

"Halla bol".. Kartik...

Very nice 👌 when will next one come

Very nice

👍👍👍

What a twist

I liked the concept, little different. Actores were good. Thoda Voice clarity hona chahiye tha. Nice movie

Niiccee 😊😊

Good job saima wow Fauzan is also into it that’s cool guys keep it up

@machaoentertainment9614

6 жыл бұрын

Ranjita Mandal thanks, Aditya, Dipti are also part of this, you can seek them in credits

Rajveer s voice is impressive

👍👍👍👍

By the way I'm still bachelor.

Good attempt and unexpected twist in the climax , need more intense story narration and punch dialogues in the concept. Editing ,screenplay, background score,actors expressions , punch dialogues, will enhance the concept Am not criticising or advising you , I jus expressing my opinion as writer

@machaoentertainment9614

6 жыл бұрын

Thanks for valuable comments :-)

Awesome work kartik.

Hahahaahaha money is power

who all immediately tried to check 'khwahishen.com' ;)

Bad acting by the girl ,need to improve a lot.

Girl have very attitude

ladki ko sone ki jarurat hai , lagta hai need lagi hai bura na mano holi hai....

This era N sachha pyar. Awkward.

Bhaii...Kuch improve baad me karanaa pahale voice quality improve kro.

Totally overacting Try to improve

Iss types ki ladkion ky unnesarry nakhdra bahut hota hai .. Woh kahete hain na Khaahli bartan mein awaaz bahut hota hai v.. So I think before to propose this types of girl think more than hundred times .