In space no one can hear a Zanzi ship explode.

This is a rewrite of a story told from the Galactic Council's perspective . The Council sat on its hands and watched humanity take in the refugees and swat the invaders into submission. This version is told from the human's perspective.

@Shadowkey392

2 ай бұрын

What’s the original one?

@grivolas2144

2 ай бұрын

Except the humans​@@Shadowkey392

@17mindgate

2 ай бұрын

Seconded.

@BgStalker

2 ай бұрын

And is poorly writen one. I lost count of how many times was " if someone can do it, it's You Marko", its such a narcisistic aprouch of that strory that this "Marko" have to be the greates scientist an Lider ever born, smh. It's just degrading the original story.

Great story start

i like the story but typically i enjoy the ones that focus on humanity as a whole with no main character just memorable heroes and figure heads. i feel like they focus on the world building more when they do that.

They love the word "palpable" don't they? 😊😊

@mattryan7124

2 ай бұрын

And “inexorably”

@belelokai3328

2 ай бұрын

They also say, "the," way too much.

@SolTerran5050

2 ай бұрын

@@belelokai3328 true that my friend 😊😊

@deepdragon2

2 ай бұрын

That is a palpable statement...

What allied world's inside the solar system? Mars venus???? World's dying under ion blasts? It's like they combined a fight in the solar system with a battle across several systems and got the worst combination.

Stop using the phrase Inter-galactic. These are not stories about travelling from one galaxy to another. If the author means travel between all solar systems within a galaxy, the that is Intra-galactic. Also, humans and Dannik capture a huge Xanzi ship, which must have been automated because there's no mention of a crew or what the Xanzi looked like, something the humans would have been excited to see. More holes than a Gruyere cheese 🙁

@Nuggetsjourney44

2 ай бұрын

lol you have issues

@AlphaGeminorum1

2 ай бұрын

Thank you. That's been my pet peeve for DECADES. That phrase is not to be used unless we're actually talking about a different galaxy. I demand that everyone step back and look at the word 'interstellar'. It's far more accurate.

@malcolmwilson4894

2 ай бұрын

@@AlphaGeminorum1 totally agree!

@ragedmayhem1

2 ай бұрын

Poor Karen 😂

@privateperson5054

2 ай бұрын

​@@Nuggetsjourney44 Its a very important distinction nugetsfieldtrip44

why the stupid pulsing voice spike at the bottom, very annoying

I thought in space no one could hear you scream. So how was it that the zanzi ship disintegration created a thunderous noise?

@omutsukimi

2 ай бұрын

People tend to forget that there is no sound in space aside from the noise of one's own ship.

@mattryan7124

2 ай бұрын

The story described the rematerilization of the ship before it disintegrated, so possibly a massive shockwave that warped the surrounding reality (leap of logic, I know)

@MrAranton

2 ай бұрын

"In space no one can hear you scream" is a bit of a simplification, based on the idea that space has no medium for sound to travel in. Which is true for sound we humans can hear. But while the particle density in space is very low, it is not zero. Which means: That medium can have pressure differentials - and thus "sound". Now: If pressure differentials travelling through a low density medium hit a higher density medium, they get dampened and distorted. Imagine yourself in a bath tub or pool, your ears under water. Now imagine someone outside the water yelling at you. They scream their lungs out, but you will barely hear them. That's because the sound waves in the air don't have enough power to generate waves of the same amplitude in the water. The inverse happens, when sound waves pass from a high density medium into a lower density medium: The amplitude in the lower density medium is much larger than the amplitude in the dense medium was. That's why bells are loud. Now the density difference between air and water is much smaller than the density difference between space and the interior of a space ship. Which means: A sound wave in the stellar medium needs to be VERY powerful to generate even a whisper inside the ship. And I'm talking several orders of magnitude beyond anything we can unleash (which includes hydrogen bombs - and they're loud enough to vaporize pretty much anything at close range). But an alien space-ship that generates enough power to blow up a moon with a single shot? If one of those blows up, the energy it unleashes might be enough to cause a shock-wave that compresses the stellar medium to the point its density is no longer "almost zero". If your space ship gets hit by a compressed pocket of gas moving at relativistic speeds, that's definitely going to make an audible noise inside the ship - provided there still is an "inside of the ship" that can be differentiated from the outside.

@happychappy492

2 ай бұрын

@@MrAranton Great explanation appreciated that

This feels like a checklist of popular concepts and once again leaves me wondering if this is a product of Chat GPT.

@UnknownZone.

2 ай бұрын

😢

@happychappy492

2 ай бұрын

@@UnknownZone. is it?

@endtimesasmr2590

2 ай бұрын

@@happychappy492 It's not, to the best of my knowledge. I think it's in the same story universe as "The Nature of Predators"

Rocky Mountains of Portugal?

@ferdinandhumperdinck165

2 ай бұрын

SMALL R THEN? ^^ OR TRANSLATION EFFECT; ITS TTS AA: SORRY FOR CAPSING

32:16: Casually beds a "young (Lyruvian) anthropologist named Solara."

Give us a break, can't believe the breeding bit,,wondered when stupid entered the scene

Great story idea, but I am not sure about the writing.

@UnknownZone.

2 ай бұрын

Thanks for the feedback!

I enjoyed the story and it was well laid out

@UnknownZone.

2 ай бұрын

👊🏻

Yea, destroy a moon on a single shot is a bit too much... also is the enemy using sub-light?

There is no atmosphere or air in space, so why do the ships need to be aerodynamic?

@ferdinandhumperdinck165

2 ай бұрын

lOVE FOR CERTAIN FORMS (eLDAR AND ARTSY TYPES); NOT BEING /having been HAVING BEEN A PURE STELLAR NAVE FOR LONG ENOUGH TO STOP EMERGENCY aERODYNAMICS 8NEW IN THE sPACEHOOD9; OR SIMPLY THE tYRANT COMMANDING WHAT SHAPES THEY WANT: cANT THINK OF ANOTHER REASON MYSELF: aS FOR THE SOUND. aRTISTIC LICENSE or THE DESINTEGRATING effect MAKES THE HIT SHIPS VIBRATE; HENCE THUNDER: bLAME THE CAPS TO MY DYING KEYBOARD PLEASE: HOPE I COUL D HELP: WILL EDIT WITH NEW KEYBOARD IIR

@mattryan7124

2 ай бұрын

If they regularly enter a planet’s atmosphere?

@brianhunt8273

2 ай бұрын

Cause they look cool?

So the Bad Guy's made it to Mar's with Very Little Work yes ok , slowly other Plantets came to hour side BUT the bad guy's got to mar's how much longer to get to Earth and in that Brief time we got Help from How many other world's ALL of these other world had Starship's ready to go YES so they where all waiting for some~one else to stand up ! ?

So patch work a story. It's like a movie where there's no consistency in continuity, and the descriptions in galaxy and solar system measurement are not well understood.

Childish writing. I figure about 14. Got to have more plot, more characters. Tired of one person who leads a massive research effort and commands all forces. Childish. Stop and grow up.

This is sooooo bad it defies words.

Too woke. Sounds like it came from ChatGPT

@UnknownZone.

2 ай бұрын

😢

@omutsukimi

2 ай бұрын

Agree about the ChatGPT but how is it "woke"?

@WilhelmEley

2 ай бұрын

Some of the speech patterns typical ChatGPT thing, emphasizing "good" lessons, about cooperation bla bla bla, not actually showing how they are lived just saying they are good. That sort of shit. Pure posturing like the woke types. Good storywriting entails not saying how you should feel about things and not saying what you should learn from it, but setting an example by the actions in the story. This in your face moralizing is typical of woke media like 2020ies Hollywood.

@mattryan7124

2 ай бұрын

Seriously, what was “woke” at all about this story?