Tried something different this time, I hope you enjoy the edit! 🙏

I like the dialogue with the Sister, but The dialogue with Reverend I find it better because : -Although Sister seen only the good side of Arthur, she doesn't know his past and who he is, (that's why to me her line "But I know you" doesn't feel like fitting, she met Arthur like 3 times that's not enough, Reverend Swanson known Arthur for years) even if he said that he's an outlaw and talked about his son, and his parents, yes he felt more vulnerable around Sister but -The dialogue with Swanson would be for me closer because, he knows Arthur for a long time, he knows what he have done, and he concluded with the phrase "You're not a good man...but you're not all bad either" he's part of the gang and he knows Arthur better, he seen his both good and bad side and he said "You've turned into a good man" - he saw Arthur changing, thus, in my opinion the dialogue with Reverend Swanson feels more realistic to me.

@JustANoobPlayer

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Very good analysis dude, I respect this. I made sure to fit the dialogue into this type of edit, I'm glad you liked it! 🙌

I love this, also as a Christian that you included a Bible verse that relates to the video!

@JustANoobPlayer

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Thank you! I thought it fits well with Arthur, also he's trying to teach us the same thing!

Looks great!

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Jesus maybe turn the contrast up a little higher

@JustANoobPlayer

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It's the CC I used, it's meant to be like that. If you don't like it I'm sorry

How do you get the jacket?

@JustANoobPlayer

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Mods, and the hairstyle as well!