Ay, glad to see others also making Hotline achievement hunting!! I like your flow of telling the story of the game. Lovely video!! ^w^ -Fellow hotline content creator lul

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This needs more views

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Great video

that was hard enough, now try to 100% the second game (I'm still trying to beat hardmode and get A+ in all levels

Do the HLM2: WN (You gonna hate the Genocide one)

Great job now do the second game

Great vid man. The voice clarity is very good although sometimes the game was a bit too loud compared to the voice but I know its just something that with more vids will be better and better as well as the editing. In this case although I'm not a big fan of it the "frame" was a really good choice since you're presenting the clips of the achievements and it makes a great boundary between the parts where you explain with full screen and the parts where we need to focus on the game. I know that with practice everything will get even better and so far you're doing great for 25 subs i'd even go as far as to say amazing. The only suggestions I have are as follows 1:it would be great to have the talk sections a bit longer(I know its hard to say anything more) now they feel a bit too jumpy as if they're just cuts in the achievement montage, making them longer wold make them stand out more and feel like they're their own part of the vid, 2:love the oc but for now it feels a bit plain have you considered adding a screen or perhaps a whole body with it, I think pairing the display with a body would be great maybe you could make the display a mask for a human or make a tv that has a body of a human(don't take this seriously I'm basically pulling this out of my ass I can barely draw a stickman), 3: End card maybe? At this point you really don't have to think about it but it would be nice if the video immediately didn't cut after you've spoken, 4: When you've already made a couple(I mean like 10-20) vids throw in a recommendation at the end of your video like "if you liked this I really recommend X since its similar to this one" or "if you liked this video you might also enjoy X" this drives more traffic from other vids to previous ones (also if you are making a video you can promote it by "My new video about X will be coming out next Saturday so be on the lookout for that". Well that's all for now I'm glad to be a part of this channel now and i'd love to see it grow and thrive and I know it will. Final rating based on the channel size, view amount and the video quality: 8,5/10. Hope to see you more and more on the fyp man.

@sowdyplays

7 күн бұрын

Thanks for this comment, I’ve only recently got into content creation so stuff like this is really helpful to read Also this model is an ‘alpha’ and your actual really close to its next design with your guesses

@dawidgryger8914

7 күн бұрын

@@sowdyplays ooohhhh interesting would you care to share for some outside input in exchange (as mentioned previously im not good at drawing so ill say what i can)? If not dw i'll be waiting for the next time i see you on the fyp.

Do HM2

Do the second one.

@alper_tr3852

7 күн бұрын

Yeah he should do the second one