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" Read a thousand books and your words will flow like a river " - Virginia Woolf

@sunintheeast3881

9 ай бұрын

Can u suggest me anything which I cn read

@iiuxxcv

8 ай бұрын

i aint doing allat

@flowerrr3333

7 ай бұрын

@@iiuxxcv lol same

@visible2927

6 ай бұрын

If you are worried about words , when poem is about expressing , it is probably not for you , don’t worry about words , express what you’re feeling, it will turn into art itself

@douvknock2287

5 ай бұрын

Thx

First poem I’ve ever written 👉👈 _“Shadows chase her_ _Her beauty unhazed_ _Does dark retract_ _When she lets the sun beam her rays?_ _Or does she follow_ _behind trees, clouds and lamps_ _Hiding in the hollow_ _Waiting for the day_ _The day the sun rewinds_ _The moment she goes no further_ _When she smiles at the darkness_ _And no longer tries to disperse her”_ It’s about hope and unrequited love in the personification of the sun and the shadows.

@ChocolateIsMyRevenge

8 ай бұрын

It’s really nice and creative!

@reapingbennefits

8 ай бұрын

@@ChocolateIsMyRevenge thank you!!

@GinaVolkov

8 ай бұрын

What does unhazed means?

@reapingbennefits

8 ай бұрын

@@GinaVolkov Unhazed: Not hazed, not visually obscured. Haze: traditionally an atmospheric phenomenon in which dust, smoke and other dry particulates suspended in air obscures visibility and clarity of the sky.

@shiya7

7 ай бұрын

It's hella beautiful.. your first try is nice keep doing it ..

- be in the mood - write in book & practice - maybe try to use random word and go off of ur thoughts on it - rhymezone for song writing for poetry - read poem aloud or sing - title poem

@Hazeleyes_JJs

7 ай бұрын

Rhymezone you have to pay for

@avijames57

4 ай бұрын

Idk about rhymezone but rhymers block suggests rhymes and I’ve found it really helpful❤️❤️(and it’s great even if u don’t get the membership or whatever)

I fell in love with him everyday, A little more than yesterday Until the day I realised My love for him knew has No boundaries, No limits It was Infinite!

@IlhanyWani

6 ай бұрын

@Sun-123-e9j

4 ай бұрын

Gosh ❤ superb 👏 love it 😀

@aesthetic_alyssa

3 күн бұрын

@@singhd2336 woww

Ooooooh, you should publish a book with your poems!

the poem i wrote immediately after watching this video: I try to stay motivated, but they keep me in the chains. I attempt not to get deflated, but I end up using a cane. What should I do? Find and answer on my own? All those who’ve come before me have always forfeit the throne. It could use some work, but anyway, thanks ana!

@islemdoudou372

9 ай бұрын

I love it so much

@morphoanddunce

9 ай бұрын

Aw thanks :)

@ishathiru3516

8 ай бұрын

Wtf, that’s awesome! You just wrote this!😮😊❤

@alisa0459

7 ай бұрын

Whoa I loved the ending it just struck me yk

@morphoanddunce

7 ай бұрын

@@alisa0459 thank you

The most important thing for good poetry is to have a message and convey that message clearly with passion.

Cause you never really care if I was there, or crying somewhere. You turned away didn't see the pain I bear, I was just a shadow fading into thin air This is my first stanza

@B.l.i.n.k

21 күн бұрын

Damn!❤

@aesthetic_alyssa

3 күн бұрын

dayummmm😭😭😭❤️❤️❤️

This is my first poem and my english is not as good as be able to write, because I speak English as a foreign language. This is it : I used to be a thing Now I'm just a remain I pretended being an ocean And denied the little stain I hated being that man I wish I didn't complain I thought my soul was worthless So I threw it in the drain My life had past so fast Faster than a train I would to start over And have a chance again Unhappily life is not a tree And I am not a grain I call it a letter from a dead man. Tell me what do you think about it '

@shiya7

7 ай бұрын

I didn't understand what the poem is all about

@rim.j0b_mach1n3x_x

7 ай бұрын

i think it was really good! i loved it! if ur comfortable i would love to read more of your poems!!

@Nidal___

7 ай бұрын

@@shiya7 it's a message for those people who want to give up on their souls

@aesthetic_alyssa

3 күн бұрын

@@Nidal___ aka it's a poem for me

*I wrote this poem after watching this video!* In between the unpredictions, a meeting unfolds, Refills fragrance to the garden of life. Unscripted,unplanned,yet perfectly timed, Drives life to a graceful ride. Enters our orbit like a shooting star Leaving the trail that brightens our path Like a firefly they give hope in the dark Leaving an undelible mark The stars illumiante the sky But these fireflies ornament our life on earth. The kaleidoscope of moments with colors so bright They paint our life with hues of delight.

@lluv_kuro

3 ай бұрын

THATS SO MAGICAL OH MY GOD

@aasthawankhede1682

3 ай бұрын

​@@lluv_kuroThanksssss❤

I wrote a small piece: Strength of the moon, alignment of the stars Makes the nights look pretty, hiding all the scars. Glowing softly in the dark Whispers of the night A canvas of dreams unfold Painting stories in moonlight Beneath the cosmic canvas Where dreams and Stardust blend, The moon guards our secrets A celestial timeless friend

@_snow_-

5 ай бұрын

Im literally in love with it 😭⭐️

@aesthetic_alyssa

5 ай бұрын

​@@_snow_- omg! thank you! ilysm!

@_snow_-

5 ай бұрын

@@aesthetic_alyssa ilyt 😍 and I love the way you also continued it! It’s like so nice!

@aesthetic_alyssa

5 ай бұрын

@@_snow_- thank you!💘

@theprehistoricpoet

5 күн бұрын

@@aesthetic_alyssa As a poet myself I think this is beautifully written! Congratulations! David 🦖

Behold, I stand, a monument of grace, In realms where excellence finds its space. My brilliance, a beacon, unmatched, supreme, A testament to greatness in every dream.

"don't say the cat sat on the mat because... it doesn't work like that" - ana neu 2023 8:05

I went into this video expecting a really tedious step-by-step process that would generalise the art of writing poems, but finished it completely agreeing with everything you said- The advice you give really hones in with what I think poetry should be about: emotion. Telling people to write poetry within their comfort and leasure is how the best poetry is created, because it directly leads to genuine poetry, in which genuine emotions are established and communicated. When I write poetry, I make myself go through a really specific structure of finding out how the poem will be formatted, how many syllables per line, whether it's iambic (although, I never stick with that idea-) and how I can subvert it to create meaning. However, this is *always* after I have an idea that makes me want to write. I think that over anything, the emotion that goes into poetry is far more important than the quanity or images or language it has, for emotions in poetry (or any artistic form) eatablish quality. Personally, I think your poetry guide really promotes this idea about people's interests being put over the idea that 'good' and 'bad' poetry exists, which encourages everyone to be included within writing poetry. Whether it is something that a child wrote in ten minutes or Percy Shelly's 'Ozymandias,' they cannot be compared due to how human emotions are the priority of poetry. That's why I love this guide- it doesnt make people feel like there is one way to learn poetry or forges them into sonnets or odes, it simply encourages them to *do* poetry. That is what poetry is all about, after all.

This is THE video I've been waiting for!!!

@ananeu

Жыл бұрын

aww bestiee! can’t wait for you to see it!!🤍🌸

You are my motivation for writing

Hey i tried writing one too I miss him.. His stupid smile And his mesmerizing eyes I love him Those silly late night calls During the late autumn fall I despise him For faking everything in our relationship For not truly loving me But what can I say? My heart still beats for that man I once called mine

@huntercoleman460

2 ай бұрын

Very good. Got any other poems?

@Ayzalse

2 ай бұрын

@@huntercoleman460 this was the first ever poem I wrote so sorry no 😭

@huntercoleman460

2 ай бұрын

@@Ayzalse I’ve written quite a few poems myself. This is my favorite one called Letters of Love. What do you think? He had to leave me to fight in this cruel war. He gave me a kiss and his hat to remember him by. He wrote to me every week with words of hope and promises. He sent letters of love talking about our future family and house together. He talked about how he misses my smile and laugh. He then stopped writing and came home in a wooden box. He and I won’t have our future family together and house. He stopped sending me letters of love.

@aesthetic_alyssa

5 күн бұрын

so good!! relating this w my friendship!

Ahhh so aesthetically pleasing! I also do poems 😂 but I'm more of a narrative descriptive writer ... nearly self publishing!!!! I'm so happy yay❤🎉

@writer_surabhi_singh

Жыл бұрын

I hope you self publish one day!!!

This is so helpful! I have been wanting to start writing poetry for a while now. Originally its bc i really Like to sketchbook and i think poems would be a great addition to my sketchbook❤️ and also i think its a good way to get words or feelings down on a paper without it being to detailed like a diary, if that makes sense❤️❤️ so thank you!

Sometimes I challenge myself to write when I’m not in the mood to write. For example, maybe I would try to write a poem about not being in the mood to write poetry lol or a poem about silence, blank space, etc. doesn’t have to be a poem or song though, it can just be a journal entry and doing that sometimes helps.

@Hazeleyes_JJs

7 ай бұрын

Like a deep thought

Nice to see ppl who love to write poetry. It's true that you have to be in the mood some of my best poems I'd say were written during very dark times

@nini.1744

3 ай бұрын

Yess so true i thinks its because when you feel strong emotions its easy to find a lot to say about it

I NEED THIS VIDEO (also thumbnail is stunning)🤍

@C.DWoods

Жыл бұрын

Hi, I follow you, I hope you have a blessed day.

@ananeu

Жыл бұрын

awww hehe 🤍📖tysm veee😭

You are so talented! I love the second poem you read. I want to write poems for songs and as a begginer poet this is very helpful thanks so much, ana!

The comment section has become a collection of beautiful poems❤

@theprehistoricpoet

21 күн бұрын

Agreed, I can't believe the high standard of writing! Thank you to everyone for sharing!❤

1st poem In the light of the shining moon, You sought a rose too soon, . ... ..... Leaving the moon that glows, I sprint into the darkened woods, Discover a radiant rose, Return to you, with blood upon my hand, I find the moon is hiding, at your command, The wind inquired, "Why is there blood upon your hand?" I replied softly, "Pain in love, thorns in the Rose, I understand." The aura of your presence Vanishes from this space, Can you also fade from the heart? I plead for grace. ...... In the end, the moon emerged laughing, I shouted, "Cease it!" ...... ...... ...... Then I questioned, The reason for your laughter and glee, Moon replied, "And where is the person you used to compare with me?" ..... ... .

@theprehistoricpoet

20 сағат бұрын

Nice poem!

OMG I AM JUST GOING TO DO A POETRY COMPETITION AND THIS IS WHAT I NEEDED

10:21 that makes so much sense, I identify so much with this, thanks for taking the words from my mouth

Yay I love writing poetry thank you a lot for this video 😊

BEST POEM IN THE WORLD -------------------------------------------- In the realm of words, where verses dance, I shall endeavor to take a chance, To craft a poem, a masterpiece divine, A tapestry of words, where meanings intertwine. Behold, the canvas, blank and pure, Where dreams and musings shall endure, With ink as my brush, and thoughts as my ink, I shall paint a portrait that makes hearts sink. I'll weave a tale of love's sweet embrace, Of whispered promises and tender grace, Where souls entwine in eternal flame, Bound by the echoes of a lover's name. I'll wander through nature, the poet's muse, Where melodies of birdsong softly infuse, The rustling leaves and babbling streams, A symphony of life, where beauty gleams. I'll venture to realms of sorrow and pain, Where tears fall freely like droplets of rain, To paint the resilience of the human soul, Amidst adversity, it finds its role. I'll soar through the cosmos, to stars untold, Where mysteries lie, waiting to unfold, In celestial tapestries, a story untamed, Of wonder and awe, forever unnamed. I'll delve into history's intricate lore, Unearth forgotten tales, forevermore, From ancient civilizations, rise and fall, Legends and heroes, captivating all. I'll celebrate laughter, joy, and delight, The moments that make our spirits take flight, In the tender embrace of friendship's embrace, In shared laughter, we find solace and grace. And as I conclude this grand design, This poem, the best in the world, I opine, I offer it humbly, with love and with art, A piece of my soul, a gift from the heart. For poetry knows no bounds or borders, It connects us all, believers and non-believers, So cherish its power, let your spirit unfurl, In the beauty and wonder of the best poem in the world. Writer Ryan K Pendley

@AhhhAh-qv6rc

4 ай бұрын

I absolutely love it! You are incredibly talented, would buy a book full of these poems, no joke.

@dejayarkkk4552

Ай бұрын

This is amazing

@erratic_quaint

19 күн бұрын

I know it’s chatgpt 😂but don’t worry!!!!

This is my first ever poetry: Thought this was a normal connection with you, Until I shared my deepest and darkest secrets with you, Thought you were a wall that couldn't speak much, But you were the one who listened to me the most, Though distance can separate us apart, An intertwined connection that cannot. I wrote this for a person who lives in a different country but they are the closest to my heart.

@theprehistoricpoet

5 күн бұрын

Very good first poem, it is clearly written so the reader can also understand and share the emotions you were feeling when you wrote it! Regards David 🦖

I love this video 💕 would be great if you made some more poetry videos !

i’m representing my class in spoken poetry in english fest next month, were going to write it on the spot. wish me luck 😭

@yep8259

4 ай бұрын

Omg I could never 😭 best of luck lol

@sohee5714

3 ай бұрын

I WON CHAMPION 😭😭

@cathulucraftian

2 ай бұрын

Which of your poetry did you use?

I was kinda sad today so I just wrote a poem about loneliness lol I wish to be alone and enjoy things one day, But then realise how lonely I get the other day. I wish to express my feelings with someone I can trust, But I have to search for that someone with whom I can trust. These thoughts keep me awake at night, Forcing me to deal with the overthinking and anxiety tonight. I wish I had someone whom I could rely on, But then I think to myself, "is this how I will be moving on?"

@theprehistoricpoet

22 күн бұрын

An interesting poem about loneliness! Sometimes it is good to write about the subject or the emotion that you are currently feeling! I too, write about sadness when I'm sad, and loneliness, when I'm feeling lonely! I try not to write poetry for the sake of writing it! I prefer to feel it , then write down my feelings! I currently narrate all of my poetry on my yt channel, including several on loneliness!! David 🦖

@aesthetic_alyssa

3 күн бұрын

my friend this is so cool

Literally, u have an aesthetic writer life. And, love your videos so much. ❤

Hi again ❤😊 Thank you a million times for this vlog. 😎 I have been patiently waiting for this vlog. And time to rewatch this vlog for my new werewolf story, since one of my characters does poetry. And my main goal is to write a poem about a character in the beginning of each chapter. As for creating a poem book, I need time to figure that out. Plus, I created another poetry book on Wattpad 🙂 since I was also using the A I. Program mainly for rhyming words for some creative boosts. Keep up your inspiration vlogs flowing smoothly each week. 💯🔥💐

i'm gonna use this to help with my songwriting journey :3

lovee this !!! as an over thinker and perfectionist this has helped ease my mentality about writing poetry !!! THANK YOU

@theprehistoricpoet

28 күн бұрын

I agree I also find my poetry helps with my mental health! David 🦖

I love this video! This is my first poem (It's a really specific topic) When I told you I didn't place at the competition, you laughed and said it was okay. That it didn't matter too much. Obviously you laughed...I was laughing too. I was laughing not because it was funny, but because I could not allow myself to cry. My thoughts were running around with needles, and I knew that if a tear slipped, the waterfall would never end. One breath in, one breath out. Words created a blockage in my throat. Two breaths in, two breaths out. I gulped on my saliva to repress the words. It wasn't even the stupid competition. Twice before I didn't place, so what does that mean? Am I not improving? Am I not growing? Am I stuck in the same, lost place I was two years ago? I keep trying to blame everything and everyone. Maybe my judge was biased. Maybe my partner screwed up. Maybe the entire competition was just rigged. I guess I'll never know. I'm done with this rat race. Let others fight till the end for a title of a string of letters. I'm paving my own path. Can someone please give me tips?

@muskantomar2004

3 ай бұрын

I love this ❣️ Your first attempt is too good I understand and somehow relate to the specific topic you wrote of

@haveyufoundjoy.

2 ай бұрын

This is amazing!! I somehow relate to this, which is the amazing thing about poetry. If you’re looking for tips, I can try my best, though I won’t act like i’m an expert because i’m really not, haha. Metaphors and personification are my best friend, if you know what they are. They make poetry come to life, if you know what I mean, but I don’t use them in all of my poems, as proof they can still be written without!

@musictherapy961

2 ай бұрын

@@muskantomar2004 Thank you!

@musictherapy961

2 ай бұрын

@@haveyufoundjoy. Oooh thanks for the tips, I'll try using them!

@haveyufoundjoy.

2 ай бұрын

@@musictherapy961 of course!!

Your poems are fire

Poem or Notebooks never worked for me. I like to use poetizer or google docs to write on. I agree, yes rhymezone is great resource, as well as synonymns. You had a great note on rhymes, near rhymes are much more enjoyable to read than exact rhymes which can feel forced. I totally get the whole not knowing what something means. The poem is kind of a way to understand how you're feeling, but also a poem is not a puzzle.

Yh, that's true (paraphrased): poetry has a way of expressing something you know but can't explain. I get that feeling all the time. I think pretty much every one too

@yawatuahene5588

7 ай бұрын

Thanks for the ❤ @ana nue

I loved that first poem.

Yay a new video also the thumbnail❤ and ana❤

So in my English class, we get to choose something to improve ourselves, something that shows progress. I decided to start writing poetry, this was one of my first poems and I would love to know how you think I can improve. Of course kind words are always appreciated, but I would love to know how I can diversify my poem structures and word usages! Thank you for taking the time to read this, here is my poem: ------------------------------------------------------ I bled out in the palm of your hand Something so visceral that I couldn't comprehend The merciful way you love, it's lust and the disillusion of this relation, it rusts Like a folk forsaken prophecy Like the past prerequisites were lost on me Watch my feelings ebb and flow onto your hand and onto the floor

This is really helpful because my school was gonna compete me to write a tula/poetry.

while this is an older video, i hope this’ll get me into writing songs.

Thank you for making this, I personally really want to get into writing poetry, so this was really helpful.

@Jaydenneedssleep

7 ай бұрын

was just reading some other comments and I decided to put in my first poem. Here it goes! "In the late winters night I somehow caught sight of a crow made of ink and I never saw it blink. When the crow made of ink landed on my shoulder I flt the weight of the world come off of me like letting go of a boulder." honestly this is kind of abstract ig, I tried lol.

ana im so sorry for missing the premiere on this vid :(( I'm so sorry!! but I really loved the video! do you have any music playlists to recommend when to write?? ty ❤❤❤

Just started writing officially. Wrote tons of poems for my ex but I never did it for myself so now I am! This is one of the ones I posted on my new IG Pretty chains All over my body They hold me even if it hurts I cant remember who put them on me to begin with I can’t imagine them off So I leave them as they are I guess that’s why they’re pretty Knowing I can’t be hurt more than I already am

@AhhhAh-qv6rc

4 ай бұрын

I love the idea of "Pretty chains", it sounds so visceral and yet stunning at the same time. Truly brilliant!

@imnotalfiya

17 күн бұрын

Wait thus was written by me in some other video I was watchingg

Feeling motivated to write more after watching this video

Dreaming It's funny how much your life is filled with such a beautiful word, with so many meanings, and you most of the time don't even realize. Dreaming while you sleep. Daydreaming. Dreaming. Wishing for something to happen. Things you do daily. But after I met you.. It's like every way the word dreaming can be used, it was about you. My dreams where flooded by you. Daydreaming of what it would be like if you and I where a thing. Dreaming. Wishing you'd like me like I like you. But they where just dreams. Sometimes, dreams can be a good things. magical. But sometimes it can leave you shattered. (I watched a video that said make a story with one word and the word was dream. This is my first poem 😁, and I'm considering making more and not even two days later I found out you made a video on poetry! So thank you for this amazing video 😁. You've been a very big inspiration for my writing ❤.)

@_snow_-

Жыл бұрын

That was your first? THAT IS LITERALLY SO GOOD IN MY OPINIONNNN!

Yours are not simple, they are absolute masterpieces. Mine are simple.

One tip I learned is to write the idea of your poem and stories, what tone you want your poem to have, and/or who your poem is talking about.

(My first poem written because of your encourage ); /Topic: Enter by the portal/ By breakdown the wall of limiting being captured to the space of creating And we are dive to the ocean of exploring We see things incredible from our eyes Keep the indelible through thou hearts Search the most indomitable by all our minds. How far we have to learn ? Was concerned as the deepest cliff Below the hell. In which the corner couldn't be seen And dug up in an Immeasurable manner . How far we have to apply ,what we have learned ? Was considered as the longest sky Above the hill. In which the premises couldn't be lean And extend even at the very last point In an uncountable distance .

@theprehistoricpoet

19 күн бұрын

Your first attempt! Congratulations!! The first of many poems to come from you!! A little poem by me! THE SEA & ITS FAMILY Surging Undulating Seas Majestic Tempestuous Ocean Nature's Very Own Perpetual Motion. The Seven Seas, The Seven Siblings Of Father & Mother Ocean, Brothers Artic, North & Caspian Vying For Right Of Succession Relentlessly Pushing & Pulling Their Briny Load Across Global Expanse & Way Beyond Competing, Quibbling As Only Brothers Can The First To Deposit Their Spume Topped Swell. Whispering Waves, A Task To Complete Loudly Rushing In, A Noiseless Retreat Teasingly, Caressing The Shoreline Like A Thirsty Cat Lapping Milk! Regards David 🦖

@nilusha93croos

18 күн бұрын

I love it keep it up ❤

excited

thank you! this really helps I'm trying to make a poem abt this girl.. yeahhahdh:)

So i decide to rewatch again because I too immerse with chat and your beauty 😍😍😍 Btw, I see your hand writing and it's so pretty. Definitely far more better than mine 😂😂😂 By the way Ana, I hope you put a little "watermark" to your poem post at Instagram. Because you know, stealing content, repost and boom, the stealer get all the love and attention for something doesn't belong to that person. From what you give us a glimpse of your poetry, I dunno why I sense someone will do steal it 😭😭😭 I hope you have a great day. Don't skip eating and keep hydrated, Ana 🥰🥰🥰

I just decided to write a poem bc I do love writing cant wait to learn more about it!

don’t know why inspiration suddenly hit while playing this as a background video (while having writers block for almost a week), but here is my poem

@huntercoleman460

6 ай бұрын

Pretty good.

@applesandhoney27

6 ай бұрын

@@huntercoleman460 thanks

@huntercoleman460

6 ай бұрын

@@applesandhoney27 I’ve written a few poems myself. This is my latest one called Letters of Love. What do you think? He had to leave me to fight in this cruel war. He gave me a kiss and his hat to remember him by. He wrote to me every week with words of hope and promises. He sent letters of love talking about our future family together and house. He talked about how he misses my smile and laugh. He then stopped writing and came home in a wooden box. He and I won’t have our future family together and house. He has stopped sending me letters of love.

@applesandhoney27

6 ай бұрын

@@huntercoleman460 that is so amazing. shivers actually went down my spine. you have talent! you definitely need to keep going.

@huntercoleman460

6 ай бұрын

@@applesandhoney27 thank you. I’ve been writing since I was a boy and I’ve only been writing poetry for a few months now. The woman talks about how her husband has been writing to her while he’s in Vietnam then he gets killed and of course stops writing to her. Think I did great writing from a female perspective?

THANK YOU THANK YOU THAK YOUUUUU

I love writing poems, as they help share my feelings and emotions. But i manly write short poems, I would like to be able to write larger poems

Hey, I really like your poems,Ty for this video. Months ago I decided to try poetry, but ended up being very stuck and not finishing any. Appreciate your advice for writers. ❤

more poetry content please :)

This video helped me a lot!! Tysm! Also new subscriber

@ananeu

Жыл бұрын

‘make me cry like the water in the ocean’ - THIS IS BEAUTIFUL

@_snow_-

Жыл бұрын

@@ananeu thank you smm!😭😁

So I wrote a poem last night, inspired by (and co written by) my friend, about struggling mentally, depression and recovery (of several things). This is it. *The Swing Set* Every year, winter comes and all the plants die, but their roots stay in the ground and they grow back in the spring. There will always be a winter, but that means spring will always be coming. You just need to make it through the winter so your plants can grow again. Some years, permafrost infects the ground, only thawing a couple times and then freezing back up again. But the grass always grows back again even if it takes longer. Sometimes, it feels like the grass won’t grow. And it doesn’t for a long time. But it does eventually. No matter how long it takes, it always grows back. And while you’re waiting, you can put down some wood chips and set up a swing set to help cope without the presence of the grass. “I don’t have the materials or tools to build the swing set. There aren’t any stores I know of close by.” I have a few pieces you can have, the swing might be rickety or kinda rusty but it’ll be a swing. Or, you could borrow mine for a bit it’s kinda messed up, but it swings sometimes. “I don’t wanna take away from your swing set though.” I can manage for a while i’m quite good at being without a swing because mine falls apart a lot because I don’t know much about building swing sets. Though my swing is rusted, and it’s ropes frayed, a knotted on a good day where it’s not falling from the tree as a result of a squirrel chewing the rope, or maybe shoddy craftsmanship, I will let you have a go and swing as high as you can, and if the rope breaks, I’ll catch you and simply put it back together again.

They stare through the window Time goes on the grass grows I can't get with the flow Going down the river as i row Today is just another day but their rays Beam into my head then i feel red Im led to tears as all of my fears Creep in i end up sleeping they're reaping I know they're going slow down The progress i cant stress i must rest

I like to doodle with my pen, in poetry book. I also write other people’s poems. I obviously credit them!

I realized I have alot of creativity, I just started getting into poetry.

@theprehistoricpoet

28 күн бұрын

I can't wait to read your first poem!! Please notify me once you have posted it Regards David 🦖

she loved sunsets and he was the sun waking up to his warm embrace she would be sunny but then the moon came in darkened and made everything foggy the sun rised again let out his fictitious shadow but she had started to love the moon held it in her tender heart and bloomed like a moonflower ✨️ It's about toxic relationships and self love ❤

@theprehistoricpoet

21 күн бұрын

Loved this!

Yay! The poetry video. Can't wait to write some poems.

What did you use to record this video ?

To the ones who don't know the unlimited sky, know that you still have spirits to make yourself fly.

@theprehistoricpoet

28 күн бұрын

I like this!! You are creative! Split it over two lines to make sure the two rhyming words line up with each other! Also read it out loud to yourself to ensure that each line balances with the other! David 🦖

SUNSET ---------- Upon the vast and endless sky, A canvas broad, a palette high, Emerges an artist unseen, benign, Painting a spectacle truly divine. The color of a ripened fruit, Orangest sunset in pursuit, Bathing the world in tangerine glow, A radiant spectacle, a perfect show. The sun, a fiery orb, descends, As light and darkness blend and blend, Casting hues of marmalade, Across the sky, a spectacle made. Reflections dance on tranquil sea, Mirroring the sky's decree, Of pumpkin hues and apricot glow, In the gentle waves, they ebb and flow. The clouds, like cotton, kissed by flame, In the orangest light, they stake their claim, Their edges glow, in the twilight’s hold, In shades of amber, and marigold. The trees stand tall, their shadows cast, In the orange light, a contrast vast, Silhouettes against the flaming sky, As the sun prepares its gentle goodbye. A symphony of color, a visual song, A moment fleeting, it won't last long, Yet in that instance, time seems still, In the orangest sunset, we find our fill. A spectacle of nature, a radiant sight, A testament to the day's last light, The orangest sunset, a memory made, Under its glow, our worries fade. So here we stand, beneath the sky, Watching as the day waves goodbye, Bathed in the orangest light, so bright, A farewell kiss, to the departing light. WRITER RYAN K PENDLEY

@ananeu

10 ай бұрын

this.

What does "the mist and all" means if I want to write a poem?

I think I’m in love 🤓.

i find it easier writing poems about love/heartbreak but its my goal to be able to write about things outside of romance but its so hard for me idk why😭

@huntercoleman460

9 ай бұрын

What do you think of this poem I wrote? It’s called The Man and the Girl. The man gives me roses to love. The man gives me gifts to have. The man gives me to money to spend. Then he met the girl and left me. The man gives her roses to love. The man gives her gifts to have. The man gives her to money to spend. Then the man and the girl got married and not me.

@DawnDivine

9 ай бұрын

@@huntercoleman460 love it🤍a sad twist!

Hi guys! So I've been looking for nice backgrounds to write on, and ive been pretty much unsuccessful in that aspect. I love blank backgrounds, and backgrounds that i can add pictures to and then write undernesth it.

After watching this video I made my first poem! Running away Would be so easy But I must wait til day Yelling, screaming Too loud for ears to hear So hot its cold Life has lost all meaning Run, run as far as My legs can take me Please, something Nothing Next best escape Is running away But my mouth is taped So my sorrows Will never be heard Till tomorrow, Day

@huntercoleman460

2 ай бұрын

It’s great.

My first love poem (written this at 4am and used tools to make it better..) Relationship is like a rollercoaster, the thrill grows calm. I wonder why we seek more when the charm is gone. Do the tracks become milder, made for children's delight? Lost in thought, I yearned for the old days, wild and bright. Amidst the twists and turns, I looked around to see, The tracks remained the same, a familiar journey for me. Then it struck me, the wildest rides I've known, Are the ones I'm on now, not too wild, not too prone. Nestled in my seat, hand and handle, gently entwined, I find comfort and security, a love that feels kind. No need for extremes, this ride feels just right, Safe and content, as we hold each other tight. I slowly opened my mouth and said, I love this ride.

@littlemiss_nobody

11 ай бұрын

Damn ! Girl this doesn't look like first poem at all ! It's a ✨ masterpiece✨

@koralie179

11 ай бұрын

Omg this is sooooo good! Hit me up when you publish your first poetry collection because I am gonna need it!!!

@cococadieux9911

11 ай бұрын

WoAh

My poem- I sat down and wondered, Wandered about Sun and stars. Behold the beauty of misty landscapes. And admire you from afar. You looked like a dream, a mesmerizing one. You Remind me of calmness of an ethereal evening sun.. Your amile reminds of sky, a sky in lighter shade. I love you so much and now im no longer afraid. I was afraid of unknowns, afraid of heartbreaks. But if its about my heart now no longer aches.. in your eyes, i find peace, a gentle embrace A love so pure,l that it transcends time and space. Your eyes, like galaxies, mysterious and deep. Captivating you in my eyes, i always go to sleep. With hope that my love goves you strength, i end my lines. May these cool breeze carry my love to you, so does these warm sunshines. I wrote this poem for my first love...❤😅

i wish i was eating cherries because that would explain the red drops on my fingers

2:53 AB AA? is it Shakespearean writing? Sonnets i forgot

my first poem, i didn't feel like rhyming as it was a quick one. I tried reading it, but i ended up almost crying. An Angel For A Mother Her arms, a sweet sense of comfort, A warm place to call home, A place to burry my sorrows Unconditional love that will forever flourish Whether she is by my side or in my heart She will always be home

@theprehistoricpoet

28 күн бұрын

No need for rhyming on this beautiful poem! The emotion that you put into this poem says it's all! Regards David🦖

unrelated but you're so pretty

I think my problem is not knowing which words to chose and in what order, where to pause, etc. I'm writing my first poem and I don't know how to make it good 😅 it kind of looks more like a story and not a poem, even tho it's not that long.

@theprehistoricpoet

22 күн бұрын

I do hope you won't mind me answering your question? I also remember writing my first poem, yes it's a frightening experience! If you were writing for an exam, then obviously there are strict rules to follow, I believe that there are in excess of over 70 different styles of poetry? But I'm guessing, that like me, you are writing for pleasure? So you have already written something? And no doubt have written it from your heart ❤! Therefore, it's now your poem!! I would be excited to read it, if you are happy to share it! Becoming to clinical and over editing, take the heart out of a poem! You have done well to get this far! Regards David 🦖

@indy2l

22 күн бұрын

@@theprehistoricpoet Hi, of course I don't mind it! Yeah I write for pleasure and I guess I can share with you one of my first poems I made recently. Here it is: A Void I see pure nothingness, Hear a silent whispering, Feel the promise of eternal sleep, An easy escape from reality. The void attracts me, But I repel from it, Saying no, I've been warned. A void I'm avoiding, Is avoiding me back. Enough to not want it, It will cause you to elapse. I have no idea what style it is, but I guess you could say that every poet has their own style, so yeah. Thanks for your comment!

@theprehistoricpoet

22 күн бұрын

@@indy2l Thank you for sharing your first poem with me! If you hadn't have mentioned that it was your first attempt, I would have guessed that you are a seasoned poet! Much of your style and layout, is similar to what I have used in the number of my poems ! Both you and I write I for fun and enjoyment, and to share with others! My style varies from poem to poem! I write on different subjects , love, loneliness, heartbreak, depression & social issues! I cannot just sit down and write, I need to be inspired by my own feelings, or something that is happening around me! I try not to overthink! Poems will write themselves! Layout and structure will come to you naturally and will change from poem to poem! I posted all my poems on a poetry writing site, I also store them on yt in the comments section in one of my shorts! Never seen anyone else do this on😂 I have also started to narrate my poems on my channel. The best test of seeing if a poem is structured correctly is to read it out in front of a mirror !, if it flows ok, then it is ok!! Take care David 🦖

@indy2l

22 күн бұрын

@@theprehistoricpoet Thanks for these kind words :) I wish you good luck, and I'll also check out your work if you don't mind!

@theprehistoricpoet

22 күн бұрын

@@indy2l It was my pleasure! My narrated poems are obvious, my written poems,, my part written poems, My thoughts, are actually on a short that has a picture of Buddha's and fairy lights, the poems are hidden in the comments!!! Would love to see more of your work, when you have written some! David 🦖

I ended up writing a poem while watching this. It's my first ever poem and pretty bad but I like it. "i am drawn to you your black eyes that trace the fallen leaves masked with dew the way snow lands delicately on your face i miss you i miss the race when you and i would run to each other and embrace"

What pen do u use? 🤔

Hey i wanna ask some questions as i do poetry it's too long is it ok and ya they are free verses plz some one help me are they poetry or not can a poetry can be lengthy??

@cathulucraftian

2 ай бұрын

Yesss

@ParkMin-suh

2 ай бұрын

@@cathulucraftian thanks sweetheart

Don't tell me your name, no not yet I'm lost in your eyes, look at you, ethereal sight Don't tell me your name, no I know it's Mr. I should stay away Don't tell me your name, no, not before hindsight Don't tell me your name, no, even though I'm sure it'll serve me more gratification still what about the aftermath's medication Don't tell me your name, even though I want to know it so bad, Mr. All that I want But what if You're like the others, the one who breaks my heart.

please do more poem vids

You search for the lost times Of things that shattered from heart Into pieces you shall find the mist memories But still you hope yet again For the memories which reminds you The gain and the lost Making you falling into tears Frozen air making my blood turn into cold like moon freezing my tears Feeling empty in the darkest moments of my soul Trying to light the light But the tears drown from your eyes doesn't allows; Still searching for a light like searching for a diamond in the sea The darkest memories ante deeper than anything else;hoping for light

I had a question are these considered as poetry ie If i dont laugh i will cry -Frawley If i were to kiss you and go to hell , i would , so that i can brag to the devils i saw heaven without ever entering - William Shakespeare I wished for long the love lasted , but the lover left - Mehmood darwish All roads lead to you, even those i took to forget you - Mehmood darwish So much of what we learn about love is taught by people who never really loved us - R.H sin Do you love her to death they asked Speak of her over my grave and watch how she brings me back to life

Hi guys I challenge you all to write a poem with the theme 'this is home'. It has to be 30 lines or more.

2:34 Video starts

I love all the poetry in these comments! I’m working on getting my poetry book published right now, I have one of my poems on my channel if anyone wants to check it out, I’ll be posting more of them soon 😊

@theprehistoricpoet

28 күн бұрын

Just read your poem! I loved it! Your presentation was so confident! Regards David 🦖

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Once we were like two peas in a pod. Her voice, an enchanting Nightingale's song, Compelled me to nod. Her laughter and cheerful, vivid memory were so strong, They eroded life's pains and discord. But in a moment, everything was gone, And I'm still waiting like a moron. Without you, nothing feels like home. The joyfulness from her presence has gone. But I'm still waiting like a moron

Hi, this is my very first attempt at writing something !! I wanted to give it to my boyfriend as a gift for his birthday. He likes writing poetry a lot and has written many for me and others. I wanna write one for him this time. I feel very lost because I'm more familiar with drawing. May my tears ever be wiped away With your fingers and your kisses May my arms ever be a sanctuary For all your sorrows and your blisses May my hand ever be held by yours Just like when we're at the altar May my legs ever lead to you Wherever you are and never falter May my lips ever be pressed against yours As they were meant to be from the start May I bleed dry of all the love, for you And never feel love again for another.

@theprehistoricpoet

28 күн бұрын

Wow!! I love this beautiful and romantic poem! I'm sure your boyfriend will as well! As a finishing touch when you print this out as a hard copy, why not add some little illustrations around the border? Regards David 🦖

@lil1264

26 күн бұрын

​@@theprehistoricpoet Thank you for the idea! I might do that ^•^ I hope he likes it

@theprehistoricpoet

26 күн бұрын

@@lil1264 A gift direct from your heart ❤️ there could be no better gift on his special day! Wishing you good luck! David 🦖

Ah poetry, its like a fountain in my soul. Now I am beginning, where would this go? Would it go to my past, where love faded painful and fast? Would it turn to the trees, where peace showers with the music of leaves? It might turn out lacking and little in depth, and so I must be aware that it's just one attempt, to capture beauty in a spontaneous way, to feel an essence like a soft bed of hay, the horses like hay, and so do the flies, that's why I'm ending this poem and it should sound like it rhymes.