How to write a Law Personal Statement (Oxbridge Personal Statement Example)

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  • @francisa7567
    @francisa75673 жыл бұрын

    This is a good personal statement but extremely unrealistic, he was always gonna get into Oxbridge regardless of what his personal statement says. He had the connections and was clearly wealthy enough to be engaged in niche sports and encouraged by his parents from a young age. Can you make something that reflects regular people, and an achievable standard because this is great but completely unrealistic.

  • @MichaelNolan2006

    @MichaelNolan2006

    2 жыл бұрын

    I don’t get how he managed engage in client meetings for work experience

  • @6.183
    @6.1832 жыл бұрын

    This was extremely helpful, though this is unrealistic to someone of low socioeconomic status coupled with the challenges of covid.

  • @nadhiraat
    @nadhiraat3 жыл бұрын

    This is superrrrrr 🔥 As a non-English speaker, it's quite hard to elaborate the words as fascinating as this 😓

  • @scotthickman1227
    @scotthickman12272 жыл бұрын

    This is just insane 😂 no regular student can possibly do all this. Another PS from a more regular law student would be great.

  • @jonnylpenman

    @jonnylpenman

    Жыл бұрын

    Nobody actually speaks like their personal statement-they are usually borrowed ideas from other people. From what I've gathered, you just need to use things that you've done to show why you are a better candidate than the rest for studying the subject-having more things to talk about in depth is better of course-and then you back it up with a powerful introduction and conclusion. You would write it pretty much in your own words, then go back through it using more advanced and obscure words to stand out and show your understanding of the subject. If your personal statement was regular, you would likely not get in.

  • @MCart1215

    @MCart1215

    9 ай бұрын

    @@jonnylpenman He's referring to the fact he's toured countries in some obscure sport that most likely a normal, working class student would have never even been exposed to.

  • @AkkuSriv
    @AkkuSriv3 жыл бұрын

    Nice editing! This channel is going to blow up one day!

  • @DoctorShaene

    @DoctorShaene

    3 жыл бұрын

    I appreciate that!

  • @shruthit9622
    @shruthit96223 жыл бұрын

    Could you talk about your Downing college experience/ the med interview? Also what do interviewers really look for?

  • @strebor1408
    @strebor14083 жыл бұрын

    Don’t know if you will see this but I recently finished my personal statement but had no work experience due to COVID. Therefore, I focused more on the academia and spent a large section creating links between my extracurricular and inter curricular activities. Is this ok.

  • @studymaterial1149
    @studymaterial11493 жыл бұрын

    But what to do if one has already lagged behind quite a lot and still has a ton of the lecture notes as screenshots? Like I have my lecture notes as screenshots and I’m yet to complete the lectures I missed at the first few classes if the semester and in a process of noting down all of it, I realized I actually don’t know and remember much of the topics and am yet to go through those chapters in the book. Solving practice problems are a far away thought at this point. What to do?

  • @cem950
    @cem9503 жыл бұрын

    Idk if you will ever read this but can you please do a video on how to obtain determination or drive to achieve your goal?I feel that I don't value those straight A's as much as I should.This makes me feel hesistant to work hard.I also feel comfortable with my current grades(below average) bc of this but i know i shouldn't.I just dont know how to stop get out of my comfort zone. I have about 2 months left before my trials and I really need advices 😭.

  • @shamranahussain5029
    @shamranahussain50293 жыл бұрын

    super helpful Thanks A TON !!!!!

  • @pradippaudel5827
    @pradippaudel58273 жыл бұрын

    Please let us know how to improve our speaking and communication skills like you

  • @aaronmbwabi
    @aaronmbwabi Жыл бұрын

    your videos are insanely gorgeous!!!

  • @Prohire22
    @Prohire223 жыл бұрын

    Great vid

  • @shruthit9622
    @shruthit96223 жыл бұрын

    Also what was your BMAT score?

  • @mrfreerunners1
    @mrfreerunners12 жыл бұрын

    I am struggling with my law personal statement, damn this is hard.

  • @ganeshmistry4458
    @ganeshmistry44583 жыл бұрын

    Do interviewers quiz you on stuff on your personal statement? (like St John's for example?) or is it simply overlooked?

  • @DoctorShaene

    @DoctorShaene

    3 жыл бұрын

    Really varies by college. But generally they don’t really quiz you but you gotta be ready for it ygm

  • @ganeshmistry4458

    @ganeshmistry4458

    3 жыл бұрын

    A random question : have you ever grown a beard?

  • @DoctorShaene

    @DoctorShaene

    3 жыл бұрын

    Lolll yeah not a great one

  • @callumchurch5184

    @callumchurch5184

    3 жыл бұрын

    I was quizzed by Downing on this personal statement. The opening section got me battered.

  • @fatimasohail1324
    @fatimasohail13242 жыл бұрын

    Hey is that possible for you to check my personal statement

  • @thelma5853
    @thelma58533 жыл бұрын

    Land Economy?

  • @elizabetholojede4128
    @elizabetholojede41282 жыл бұрын

    Please is this for masters degree? That is, Master of Law? Or J.D?

  • @freshkesh7781

    @freshkesh7781

    10 ай бұрын

    JD

  • @xo_thiv_xo
    @xo_thiv_xo3 жыл бұрын

    What part of srilanka are you from

  • @DoctorShaene

    @DoctorShaene

    3 жыл бұрын

    Colombo!

  • @mrspicyice5536
    @mrspicyice55363 жыл бұрын

    Yo this is the guy from tik tok

  • @jalley6042
    @jalley60422 жыл бұрын

    mike ross harvey specter

  • @thomism1016
    @thomism1016 Жыл бұрын

    Perhaps Calam simply just ran out of characters hence the abrupt ending 🤓

  • @RohanSingh-uu8pl
    @RohanSingh-uu8pl3 жыл бұрын

    Economics next??

  • @DoctorShaene

    @DoctorShaene

    3 жыл бұрын

    Loadinggg

  • @denisro33

    @denisro33

    3 жыл бұрын

    @@DoctorShaene in year 11 I did a Cambridge critical thinking paper and I dont think I did too well. Would this affect me applying later on?

  • @DoctorShaene

    @DoctorShaene

    3 жыл бұрын

    Wouldn’t think so!