How To Write A Better True Crime Story - Jennifer Dornbush
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Jennifer Dornbush is a screenwriter, author, speaker, consultant, and forensic science specialist. Jennifer grew up around the forensic world as the daughter of a medical examiner whose office was located in her home.
She has been teaching and script consulting since 1997 and regularly leads seminars and workshops on screenwriting basics, writing for Hollywood, crime fiction, forensics, death investigation, and the creative life.
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I love creating physical case files, reports and evidence. It allows the story to swallow me so I can write without interfering with my characters.
I’m glad I listened to this. My own brother’s murder in 2009 was never solved. I will contact the Cold Case Foundation. Thanks a million. x
just a couple of days ago, I was pondering the evolution of CSI, the TV show, over the years. first to third or fourth season was always about Grissom analyzing the "Why". As there are always 6 questions to ask: who, where, when, why, how and what, Grissom always dealt with the "Why" by studying the psychology of the suspect. the sequence was always "Location: Here be murder" (Where), "Here lies corpse" (later, forensics, for When or What), "This be suspect" (Who), and there was always the question of "Why". That, we got via a confession or an interrogation to breaking point. and that was the great era of CSI: dig into the missing part, whichever it might be.... sometimes you'd get all answers, but no murder weapon (the famous ice bullet episode, for example), or no body, or no suspect (Agatha Christie's train, anyone?). That's how you write good mystery.... keep the spectator guessing. you can close the case by answering all questions, but never let the case round up 100%... always leave an element out for the surprise factor, like, yes, the victim was clearly shot, but where's the bullet? or, yes, the suspect couldn't have gotten away, they're still here, but where could they possibly be hiding? unless, it's all of them at the same time!
First you have to conceptualize the crime and the criminal, then lay that out, because the crime is what happens first. Then once that is done, you lay out the investigation and the investigator. Not simultaneously.
@johnstrawb3521
Жыл бұрын
Well, that's one way to do it.
@igug5268
Жыл бұрын
That's not the only way to do it
@bcn1gh7h4wk
Жыл бұрын
unless the story is about a crime that exists only to target a certain investigator, BECAUSE the investigator did exist prior to the crime (in question). I mean, of course that investigator comes to be after they work _the first_ case that made them be, _which_ could be the trigger for the main case proper, as a classic revenge plot by the criminal, but that can be all trivial when shaping the main story. cop, reputation, grudge, psycho who targets the cop specifically. as opposed to psycho, mobile, crime, cop who catches them, and *then* we know about the mobile.
Not really the type of writing that I am interested in, but Jennifer was a really compelling speaker and I got more and more interested in the discussion as it went on. Well done!
What is the best crime story you have seen this year?
@scifirealism5943
Жыл бұрын
It's a tv series but Blindspot.
@chasehedges6775
Жыл бұрын
@@scifirealism5943 Love that show. Jaime Alexander is fantastic as the Protagonist.
@scifirealism5943
Жыл бұрын
@@chasehedges6775 YES!!! I'VE REWATCHED IT THREE TIMES.
@ianhtexas
Жыл бұрын
Idk, I did just binge 4 seasons of In The Dark lol
@The-Secret-Door
Жыл бұрын
Better Call Saul
One of my favourite recent interviews 😁
ohhh i love this.
@filmcourage
Жыл бұрын
More to come!
What did you like about this video?
@jimwoodswrites
Жыл бұрын
The focus on crime was amazing
@filmcourage
Жыл бұрын
Thanks Jim! Much more to come from this interview. It is all about crime writing.
Can you have more than one scene on a page? As in can I finish scene 1 half way down a page, then start scene 2 on the same page. Or should I start a fresh page for every scene? Example: scene 1- someone comes home from a night shift. Does a few odds and ends, drinks a beer and we stay with him all the way till he goes to sleep. Scene 2 starts with him waking up with his alarm to something very unpleasant. Can scene 2 start on the same page scene 1 ended?
@ianhtexas
Жыл бұрын
Yes. Scenes are location based. Your example might have three scenes. Even though it’s all in INT. SOMEONE’S HOME - NIGHT (primary scene heading), you might have secondary scene headings like SOMEONE’S KITCHEN or SOMEONE’S BEDROOM, depending on the layout like a house or apartment. Each new location is a new scene and it’s perfectly fine to start a new scene mid-page. Whatever scenes you write may be changed by the director or producer. They may want SOMEONE to live in a studio apartment, to save the budget, where everything would be in one scene except maybe the bathroom.
@eddiebear34
Жыл бұрын
@@ianhtexas very helpful Ian. Thanks very much. I can finally get my character out of bed. He's been in there for 2 weeks haha
@ianhtexas
Жыл бұрын
And lol you don’t necessarily have to write the sub headings. You could write, Someone dashes into the kitchen. Then start a new line and write, they snatch a whiskey bottle off the counter and down a few gulps. Or don’t start a new line and Someone dashes to the kitchen, grabs a whiskey bottle, and chugs down a few gulps. The way you write it affects pacing and flow, and budget lol, but be consistent in whichever way yo go for the story you’re writing.
@ianhtexas
Жыл бұрын
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@claudeyaz
Жыл бұрын
If you put them on separate pages..there are blank places to write notes on your drafts and ask for input
Se7en(1995) is the BEST crime film/story ever made.
@jimwoodswrites
Жыл бұрын
The novel is great too
@johnstrawb3521
Жыл бұрын
Se7en is nowhere close to Memento.
@cothinker680
Жыл бұрын
@@jimwoodswrites yeah
@cothinker680
Жыл бұрын
@@johnstrawb3521 yes but memento is more like psychological thriller/mystery
@cothinker680
Жыл бұрын
Agreed se7en is the best detective film ever made
15:49 "Oh, really? I didn't read about that!" ... I'm pretty sure she killed him.