This is the kind of poetry that makes other poets jealous they didn't write it themselves ... count me among those! My favorite line - "Send me a silent stare, talk to me with a kiss, miss me when I’m still with you." Congratulations on writing the perfect, perfect poem.
@anthonyourbrother8 ай бұрын
That's a poet... dang, brutha, Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Whoever she be, for me, May a man pressed in this imprepressions current lift, of this eloquent worded gift... make a selfish request, of you,... to heal fluent as this artistry's sharpened grass blade dew as it melts, say...// For the brothers in the trenches having to let go of... [For a higher greater good...] Request, Whoever this woman is, even if ya'll ain't still able to be a thing,.. hit her up and tell her agian, how much she means, how important she be, n' let her know for me... 😊 [With sincerity...] if ya can. Thanks. Brilliant work. Cheers 🍻
@natashac81269 жыл бұрын
I love all this mans poetry!!! #talented
@attempt19812 жыл бұрын
It all goes back to "White Men Can't Jump". She doesn't want you to get her a glass of water she wants you to feel her thirst. Don't solve her problems, listen and empathize with them. Unfortunately most men (including me) aren't made that way. We want to spring into action and "fix" everything. It's really hard to come up with new, unique ways to describe what love is but this poem does it many times over. Great work.
@poeticjozie12 жыл бұрын
i love gemineye his poetry always makes me think and inspires me to pick up the pen and write again
@baddsarah12 жыл бұрын
oh wow. words so beautifully strung
@135Dude15 жыл бұрын
Amazing poetry.
@purplepenguin9111 жыл бұрын
That's the first time I cried to a poetry slam
@kuhandlee12312 жыл бұрын
It's funny , I love this poem but I think I need to apply this to my relationship on terms of my boyfriend. Guess it only shows that listening goes both ways. Once again beautiful poem!
@worldchangar12 жыл бұрын
i really felt this piece....serious
@breezybri23910 жыл бұрын
AMAZING.
@whittley8812 жыл бұрын
From one poet to another, Ur amazing and I thank God for ur skills! Wouldnt mind seeing u live!
@VexedAspects12 жыл бұрын
after he says speak me into existence 1:37 the videographer of sniffles from cryin and shit i was holdin em back too. thinkin of my girl
@Annahigh112 жыл бұрын
hooooly shiiiit. AMAZING.
@SUPAFLANDY12 жыл бұрын
I broke the repeat button..
@josefadama208710 жыл бұрын
ey wy isn't there a button that says 'This shit is amazing"
@amandaemm51408 жыл бұрын
@Angrbodia8612 жыл бұрын
@brokenxkitty me too
@ruinedatmosphere12 жыл бұрын
add you like math to the equation of life, be my quotient.
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This is the kind of poetry that makes other poets jealous they didn't write it themselves ... count me among those! My favorite line - "Send me a silent stare, talk to me with a kiss, miss me when I’m still with you." Congratulations on writing the perfect, perfect poem.
That's a poet... dang, brutha, Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Whoever she be, for me, May a man pressed in this imprepressions current lift, of this eloquent worded gift... make a selfish request, of you,... to heal fluent as this artistry's sharpened grass blade dew as it melts, say...// For the brothers in the trenches having to let go of... [For a higher greater good...] Request, Whoever this woman is, even if ya'll ain't still able to be a thing,.. hit her up and tell her agian, how much she means, how important she be, n' let her know for me... 😊 [With sincerity...] if ya can. Thanks. Brilliant work. Cheers 🍻
I love all this mans poetry!!! #talented
It all goes back to "White Men Can't Jump". She doesn't want you to get her a glass of water she wants you to feel her thirst. Don't solve her problems, listen and empathize with them. Unfortunately most men (including me) aren't made that way. We want to spring into action and "fix" everything. It's really hard to come up with new, unique ways to describe what love is but this poem does it many times over. Great work.
i love gemineye his poetry always makes me think and inspires me to pick up the pen and write again
oh wow. words so beautifully strung
Amazing poetry.
That's the first time I cried to a poetry slam
It's funny , I love this poem but I think I need to apply this to my relationship on terms of my boyfriend. Guess it only shows that listening goes both ways. Once again beautiful poem!
i really felt this piece....serious
AMAZING.
From one poet to another, Ur amazing and I thank God for ur skills! Wouldnt mind seeing u live!
after he says speak me into existence 1:37 the videographer of sniffles from cryin and shit i was holdin em back too. thinkin of my girl
hooooly shiiiit. AMAZING.
I broke the repeat button..
ey wy isn't there a button that says 'This shit is amazing"
@brokenxkitty me too
add you like math to the equation of life, be my quotient.