Hello friends! Please don't hesitate to leave your thoughts, I'm here to learn! What did you like? What do you think can be improved for the next videos? Let me know! Thank you very much for your feedback!
@scottmclaughlin88002 жыл бұрын
Appreciate your creativity and passion you bring to the speech. Cal to action at the end - Good. May have missed it, but state your preferred language. Gestures, props for level one , new member some pretty advanced skills. For the individual examples I would work on them just a little. All in all an awesome speech.
@pattypatsspeakingjourney
2 жыл бұрын
Great feedback Scott! I did not state my preferred language, I didn't think it was relevant or interesting to the audience, I was just trying to focus on getting them to do the quiz and find out theirs! Haha. Thank you for taking the time to respond! 🙏🏽
@pattypatsspeakingjourney
2 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for the document on getting my ideas across by Brian Tracy. The timing couldn't be better. I just finished reading it and you prevented me from making a huge mistake in delivery in a recording I will be doing later today. You're great Scott!! 🙌🏾🙌🏾
@pattypatsspeakingjourney
2 жыл бұрын
Good morning Scott!! I know I'm a month late! But I finally get what you were saying! It doesn't matter if I'm sharing info to inform an audience, I should always find a way to make it relatable to my story. It would've been very easy to say: "I'm bilingual with quality time and physical touch." It would've built more connection! Anyhow, thank you for your valuable feedback! 😁
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Hello friends! Please don't hesitate to leave your thoughts, I'm here to learn! What did you like? What do you think can be improved for the next videos? Let me know! Thank you very much for your feedback!
Appreciate your creativity and passion you bring to the speech. Cal to action at the end - Good. May have missed it, but state your preferred language. Gestures, props for level one , new member some pretty advanced skills. For the individual examples I would work on them just a little. All in all an awesome speech.
@pattypatsspeakingjourney
2 жыл бұрын
Great feedback Scott! I did not state my preferred language, I didn't think it was relevant or interesting to the audience, I was just trying to focus on getting them to do the quiz and find out theirs! Haha. Thank you for taking the time to respond! 🙏🏽
@pattypatsspeakingjourney
2 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for the document on getting my ideas across by Brian Tracy. The timing couldn't be better. I just finished reading it and you prevented me from making a huge mistake in delivery in a recording I will be doing later today. You're great Scott!! 🙌🏾🙌🏾
@pattypatsspeakingjourney
2 жыл бұрын
Good morning Scott!! I know I'm a month late! But I finally get what you were saying! It doesn't matter if I'm sharing info to inform an audience, I should always find a way to make it relatable to my story. It would've been very easy to say: "I'm bilingual with quality time and physical touch." It would've built more connection! Anyhow, thank you for your valuable feedback! 😁