3:25- THEY but also I love how you highlighted everyones excitement for her return

1:53 GOD THE PARALLEL/TRANSITION FROM BILL TALKING ABT JACK PROTECTING HIS "MAN CHILD BROTHER" AND CRYSTAL REAPING THE CONSEQUENCES OF THAT AND HAVING TO ACCEPT THAT WHILE FIGHTING TEARS.... THAT WAS SO WELL DONE. MY HEART IS BROKE:(( AGAIN... BBY DESERVES BETTER.

i still haven’t seen the show but this is amazing and she’s so pretty 😍

3:19 "if you give me another chance, I promise I'm never gonna let you down again" "you gave me a chance" AND THE COINCIDING SHOTS WERE CRYSTAL GOING FOR THE BELT AND JACK LOOKING ON WITH A SMILE-- AND THE SONG LYRICS AS "SOMEBODY HELP ME OUT" OMF ITS THE WHOLE VID. ITS WHAT TIES IT ALL TOGETHER. I LOVE I LOVE LOVE LOVE.

2:10 "who the fck do you think you are" "I'm just a valet" THIS PARALLEL WAS SO WELL DONE AND IT TELLS SO MUCH OF CRYSTAL'S STORY IN THOSE TWO SECONDS ALONE.

0:19-0:20 I LOVE THIS SHOT WITH THE "I WANT TO TRY OUT" "CRYSTAL TYLER WANTS TO WRESTLE." IT SETS UP THE REST OF THE EDIT PERFECTLY.

1:13 I just love this shot so much and I love even more that you included it in this.

1:22- THAT SMILE SPEAKS A THOUSAND WORDS.

0:09-0:11 UGH I LOVE THE TRANSITION INTO KELLI TALKING ABOUT CRYSTAL AND HOW THE SHOT IS CRYSTAL PULLING INTO THE DWL. THE WORDS FIT SO WELL WITH THE AESTHETIC AND IT FEELS LEGITIMATELY PROFESSIONALLY DONE. I LOVE THIS.

@olivarryforce

2 жыл бұрын

she knows crystal so well I love that

3:04 "it is if you're smart. and you are" AND THAT SHOT OF HER. MAIN CHARACTER BEHAVIOR IDC IDC

0:28 "Sometimes losings the best way to win over a crowd" "A lot of folks like rooting for you" I LOVE THIS PARALLEL

@olivarryforce

2 жыл бұрын

she lost 98% of the season winning us over

I don't have enough good things to say about this edit. You have once again outdone yourself. You always manage to elevate your storytelling, your use of clips, audio, editing and clipping, in every new edit that you do and it is such an honor to have been able to watch and see your growth. I truly feel like you reached a new stratosphere with this edit. It honestly felt like a professional promotion for the show or something the show would use to highlight the journey of Crystal Tyler. You actually look us through every part of her journey. The highs, lows, what got her to finally getting that belt. You showed us her at her worst and her at her best. You highlighted everything that makes Crystal who she is-- her drive, her passion, her love for the DWL and wrestling, how smart she is, how other people recognize that she was always more than just a valet. You showed us her personal journey while also interweaving Jack's role in her getting to that belt. I love how you showed his gradual acceptance of her and how you incorporated that into the edit-- because that was such an integral part of her journey. I loved the use of Kelli's words at the beginning of the edit and how that intro's into the edit. It perfectly sets up everything that you are going to show us. It preludes an edit that highlights everything that we love about Crystal and so much of that comes from how Kelli portrays her. But also this edit was so, very clearly made by someone who loves Crystal and appreciates her as much as she deserves and Kelli clearly loves Crystal too-- so the connect between the "artist", you, and the story your art was portraying, Kelli's character, only made this edit so much more enjoyable and compelling. I truly loved everything about this edit and I would LOVE to see you do more character journey focused edits like this. It was absolutely perfect and I cannot wait to see what else you have in store for me and all of us. I loved this SOO much and I'm so sorry that it took me so long to watch-- but I'm unbelievably glad that I finally did. Thank you for sharing your work with me and with all of us. Our lives are brighter and more entertaining because of it.

3:07 "I care about the DWL... a lot" and the shot is her looking on before the state fair.... literal perfection.

@olivarryforce

2 жыл бұрын

during jack's speech no less :')

ONE MORE THING ON THAT SECTION THAT I JUST RAVED ABOUT... I LOVE HOW YOU ACTUALLY *SHOWED* JACK'S GRADUAL ACCEPTANCE. HIM FINALLY SEEING HER AS A PERSON AT 2:52. THEN THE "SHE JUST HAS IT. YOU JUST WANT TO WATCH HER." "I DONT WANNA WATCH A VALET" AND HOW THAT DIRECTLY TRANSITIONS TO "THAT WAS REALLY FKN GOOD" SO. SO GOOD.

@olivarryforce

2 жыл бұрын

:))) and interesting he says he doesn't wanna watch her, and yet when he actually does... *heart eyes* *compliments* she does just have *it* iykyk

2:40- 2:57 the way that you preluded this with Crystal excitedly asking Jack and Ace about her finisher and then started this segment out with her disappointment and the rest of it was about how she felt like she didnt have a place... How Willie said that everyone answers to Jack and how he played a role in her feeling acceptance in where her place was. I love how you showed her struggle through this and how you ended it with Jack telling her that what she did was "really fcking good." She finally got that acceptance. God. I just love how you did this part of the edit. I know that I normally will do more little shorter comments but I felt like I needed to comment on this entire section as a whole because I just love it so much. It's absolutely perfect.

@olivarryforce

2 жыл бұрын

:) and the fact they just ignored her when she asked that :( (tbf a*e changed the subject immediately and jack was sore but rlly??) but jack saying she's good, can deliver lines, is smart >>> he sees it too despite his faults & role in the negligence and disrespect she's had all season from there .

2:28 'you are not just a valet' GOD YOU CAME FULL CIRCLE TO THIS SO PERFECTLY. THE BUILD UP INTO IT AND THE WAY YOU INCORPORATED SCENES W CRYSTAL ACTUALLY WRESTLING. I LOVE THIS SM.

0:00-0:06 this gave me absolute chills oh my goodness

3:11-3:17 I love her passion so much. I love how she fights for what she wants and she KNOWS what she wants. She was absolutely ready to win that belt and she deserved it so much. You painted this so beautifully here.

0:36 shut up jack BUT I LOVE THIS SEQUENCE SM.

@olivarryforce

2 жыл бұрын

very dumb .

1:04- THE WAY THAT "I HOPE YOU'RE GOING TO BE IN THE MAIN EVENT" AND THE "I QUIT" TIES PERFECTLY TOGETHER IN SAD IRONY WITH THE BRIGHT FEEL OF THE BEGINNING THIS IS SUCH GREAT WORK BUT IT MAKES ME SO SAD:(( I know she got the belt in the end but she still had to endure a long period of having to prove her worth and being told she was nothing to get there:( no one more deserving than her to win in the end and she better start getting more respect.

2:00 'the angle is gonna be that the two of y'all are in love' ya they look so in love there lmao. ik, kayfabe, but still, the way u did it made me chuckle.

0:59, 1:00 "valets rarely get the credit" and the next shot is Crystal looking dejected and feeling useless:((((( bby deserves better

Bree Davenport has come a long way since her Young Lion Days on Disney Channel.

1:25 I DON'T KNOW IF THE "THE LINES I WROTE WILL TURN THE CROWD AGAINST HER" WAS MEANT TO PARALLEL THE LINE WHERE JACK TELLS CRYSTAL THAT AS LONG AS SHE DELIVERS LINES LIKE THAT HE'LL WRITE FOR HER..... BUT IF IT WAS *CHEFS KISS*

@olivarryforce

2 жыл бұрын

yes :)

1:39 bby is clearly trying to put up a front:( she looks heartbroken:(

What....

i still haven’t seen the show but this is amazing and she’s so pretty 😍