Proper enjoyed it. Thank you. Sinuous imagery; early on the mice motif is fantastic. Some constructive criticism: a slower spoken delivery would help us absorb the tenor of the piece. The prose is thick and slick so it takes time to absorb. You're on the right track for sure. Well done.

Great voice acting tbh. Very exciting to hear more Trench Crusade lore and stories.

This was... really good

That was such an amazing and great story! The imagery and description of each line was quite vivid and wild, especially with your voice! ^^ That was quite fun to listen

Dude that was dope, when's the next one coming?

Buddy, THIS is what we crave. More stories to spread, more love to the trenches.

Amazing and brutal story. Really great reading and love your voice :D

@HoundsongGames

13 күн бұрын

Wow, thanks so much! I'm pretty self conscious about it haha

Subscribed!!!! What an amazing narration. I felt so immersed listening

Epic!

Dang this was awesome

Great story Great reading Thanks from Ireland!

We need a part two or at the very least another story, had to go back and listen to this twice because I enjoyed it so much

@HoundsongGames

4 күн бұрын

Working on it! Been tied up with novel and game stuff but planning to circle back for sure 😊

That was excellent! Especially well done with the depiction of the Observer

@HoundsongGames

4 күн бұрын

Thank you very much!

7.5 out of 10, you should go to the trench crusade creators and ask if you can make novels for them.