"BROKEN CHAINS" - A WARHAMMER 40K STORY - FEATURING

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"Broken Chains" by Neal Litherland
Neal Litherland is an author, freelance blogger, and RPG designer. A regular on the Chicago convention circuit, he works in a variety of genres.
This story is a sequel to Waking Dogs.
• "WAKING DOGS" || UNOFF...
Read Along here! vocal.media/fiction/broken-ch...
Produced and narrated by A Vox in the Void
A HUGE shout out to the featured voice actors:‪@WarriorTier‬ , ‪@alice-the-author‬ and Hannah Elizabeth
INCREDIBLE cover art used with permission by the talented Brushray
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Inspired by the custom war-band "THE IRON BUTCHERS"
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  • @ishiwatari8327
    @ishiwatari8327 Жыл бұрын

    jesus christ if anybody on this earth has the astartes voice down to pinpoint accuracy it is you! your voice just... carries the extra bit of violence... i'm not 100% sure how to say it correctly (english being my 2nd language). much respect as it is your voice that is in my head whenever i read a novel and an astartes is talking. imho your talent / channel is criminally underrated but i am happy to see your subscribtions have almost doubled since the last time i left a comment. fingers crossed for a second night lords halloween song haha please keep it up my friend, because not doing so would be such a waste of talent. i'm always looking forward to more A Vox in the Void content :)

  • @AVoxintheVoid

    @AVoxintheVoid

    Жыл бұрын

    Thankyou so much! I have alot of inner rage. Thankyou for listening and letting me have an avenue to purge my demons 😎

  • @bruderfaust5021

    @bruderfaust5021

    Жыл бұрын

    His astartes voice has a coarse guttural brutality that is unmatched by any other voice actor

  • @proudsaiyanprince2651

    @proudsaiyanprince2651

    11 ай бұрын

    Honestly Vox IS Konrad Curze as far as I’m concerned. Some prefer an Eastern European accent but Vox is so resonant and the way he says “Tsagualsa” is bone chilling.

  • @AVoxintheVoid

    @AVoxintheVoid

    11 ай бұрын

    Might be hearing me voice the night haunter again soon....

  • @proudsaiyanprince2651

    @proudsaiyanprince2651

    11 ай бұрын

    @@AVoxintheVoid Your work on The Amber King’s videos as well as Preysight is impeccable and I find myself revisiting them. It’s rare when a voice actor can capture the size and scope of a Primarch and you knock it out of the park every. Single. Time. Cheers.

  • @benrichardson5662
    @benrichardson566211 ай бұрын

    "You DARE?!" I imagine him going utterly incandescent with rage when he realized the witch was messing with what is probably a precious memory.

  • @diegogisbertllorens7416
    @diegogisbertllorens7416 Жыл бұрын

    Stories of loyalist from the traitor legions always have something special about them. They are an echo, a hint, of what those legions should have been, or once were. And, in this case, it has the ever-satisfying flavour of violent, bloody, entirely justified retribution. Amazing work, as always!

  • @AliThaDude

    @AliThaDude

    Жыл бұрын

    Huge fan of your art!

  • @diegogisbertllorens7416

    @diegogisbertllorens7416

    Жыл бұрын

    @@AliThaDude Thank you!

  • @AVoxintheVoid

    @AVoxintheVoid

    Жыл бұрын

    You are superb my friend. One of the very best

  • @RocketHarry865

    @RocketHarry865

    Жыл бұрын

    I wonder if we should have stories of chaos marines who are from Loyalist genestock and are hints of what depths of darkness the Astartes we normally see as heroes could have fallen to had the loyalist legions were the ones who fell to Chaos instead of the traitor legions.

  • @kostakatsoulis2922

    @kostakatsoulis2922

    10 ай бұрын

    ​@@RocketHarry865we do have those, like the actually chaos-corrupted part of the Fallen, plus plenty of single Marines turning on their own from various chapters

  • @doubledeputyd4242
    @doubledeputyd4242 Жыл бұрын

    Those guardsman are gonna be super confused when they see Crixus jumping over them just to fight more World Eaters lol

  • @BaldPolishBiotechnol

    @BaldPolishBiotechnol

    Жыл бұрын

    And praise the Emperor for that miracle, no doubt!

  • @Stahlvanten

    @Stahlvanten

    Жыл бұрын

    "Traitor Astartes six o 'clock!" Soliders clench their teeth and try to bring their guns towards the newly arrived threat. Knowing well this is their last moments alive. *Crixus leaps over them and sprints away* "What the..."

  • @BaldPolishBiotechnol

    @BaldPolishBiotechnol

    Жыл бұрын

    @@Stahlvanten The field day for the Inquisition and Commissariat! Wait, that would be tomorrow, for the unlucky survivors...

  • @brianpj5860

    @brianpj5860

    Жыл бұрын

    Why would he jump over them?? He is a world eater, he isnt going there to save them, he is running there because that is where the battle is. If they arent already dead by the time he gets there, he will just trample over them for being in the way.

  • @doubledeputyd4242

    @doubledeputyd4242

    Жыл бұрын

    @@brianpj5860 He is a Warhound, not a World Eater.

  • @informationyes
    @informationyes Жыл бұрын

    Imagine the imperial gaurd commander when a khornate berserker legitamatly turns up to help

  • @BaldPolishBiotechnol

    @BaldPolishBiotechnol

    Жыл бұрын

    A bone chilling terror meets jizzing his pants in gratitude to the Emperor...?

  • @samaeldrakul4191

    @samaeldrakul4191

    Жыл бұрын

    😂

  • @adamhebert5365

    @adamhebert5365

    Жыл бұрын

    Likely relieved and possibly even pleased until one of the guardsmen’s stories of an unmarked chaos marine assisting them makes it back to a specific Ordo

  • @samaeldrakul4191

    @samaeldrakul4191

    Жыл бұрын

    @@adamhebert5365 hopefully video is edited so cheering guardsmen signing the aquila shouting "Crixus!" loses its sound and the official story is of a group of deathwatch space marines on a covert mission joined the frey without alerting the imperial guard to their presence, the video shows thankful guardsman cheering a member of the deathwatch vid quality is poor, hopefully the guardsmen are told to keep quiet on opperation crixus and not mind wiped or silenced by other means

  • @BaldPolishBiotechnol

    @BaldPolishBiotechnol

    Жыл бұрын

    @@adamhebert5365 Aaaaand a new batch of Combat Servitors arrive at the front!

  • @Tarik360
    @Tarik360 Жыл бұрын

    Stories involving world eaters become particularly immersive when you are nursing a kind of headache.

  • @BaldPolishBiotechnol

    @BaldPolishBiotechnol

    Жыл бұрын

    Imagine having Butchers Nails in there... I got a taste while I was grading my student's exams last week... I think Khorne would have brought their skulls back to me and demanded a refund...

  • @Tarik360

    @Tarik360

    Жыл бұрын

    @@BaldPolishBiotechnol The teacher, BaldPolish glared at the children on the other side of his desk, asking him a question he has heard a hundred times already. Veins were pulsating on the sides of his forehead as the nails bit into the back of his shining dome of a head as he finished burying his pen and drawing the last insignia on the last test of the day. Once more and finally a large red F. The classroom was silent, the nails sung and the rage were taking hold of the teacher, gritting his teeth and tightening every muscle in his body to maintain his sanity and coherency under the barrage of pain he shouted to the whole class, as calmly as he could. "YOUR INABILITY TO ANSWER CORRECTLY THE QUESTIONS ON THE PAPER BETRAYS LACK OF DISCIPLINE TO STUDY. HOW LOUD AND CLEARLY MUST I LECTURE YOU VILE MINIATURE CRETINS IN ORDER FOR YOUR EARS TO HEAR ME? IF IT WEREN'T FOR MY DISCIPLINE, YOUR SKULLS WOULD HAVE MADE A POULTRY OFFERING TO THE LORD OF WAR AND BLOOD." The children cried, not caring that he'll receive complaints from parents who will understandably respond in anger back, good, Khorne welcomes it for now something more unforgivable has to be rectified, failure. But learning will come, he'll see to it. (I don't know how to continue this lmfao, just some silly scene I pictured in my head.)

  • @AVoxintheVoid

    @AVoxintheVoid

    Жыл бұрын

    This is legendary!

  • @Tarik360

    @Tarik360

    Жыл бұрын

    Haha, TY Vox 😂

  • @BaldPolishBiotechnol

    @BaldPolishBiotechnol

    Жыл бұрын

    @@Tarik360 This is gold...! I teach at the Uni, and most of my fury and crippling depression occurs in the laboratory, but still... Yeah... I definitely understand that Schola Progenium principal who simply had a mutinous class tossed into a vat of ferrocrate and after it set, blocks were used to decorate the refectory... Bones sticking out... My students were sent by Lord of Schemes, and left Nurgle's rot in my in vitro cultures... At least none tried to pass the semester the Slaaneshi way this year...

  • @therocketeer3622
    @therocketeer3622 Жыл бұрын

    I don't even know how many times I've listened to this, but "She had reminded him of who he had once been: when mankind had pulled itself from the bloody dirt and dared any who thought themselves strong enough to step into the pit to test their mettle." still gives me goosebumps

  • @punec

    @punec

    4 ай бұрын

    That part is just perfect man. Especially with the soundtrack. Honestly this man nails the World Eaters so much with his voiceover renditions and music. Damn

  • @havoc1134
    @havoc1134 Жыл бұрын

    That ending…THAT ENDING! “All of it!” Easier to shove the World Eaters aside as mindless butchers. Their true story is found in how they got there, and it’s really heart wrenching.

  • @Jaro426
    @Jaro426 Жыл бұрын

    The old hound has found his path again.

  • @jamon9507
    @jamon9507 Жыл бұрын

    29:34 "The old war hound" That hits different. Even tugged on my heart strings a little.

  • @BaldPolishBiotechnol

    @BaldPolishBiotechnol

    Жыл бұрын

    Imagine this sort of story with an Loyalist or repentant Dusk Rider or Alpha Legionnaire...

  • @evannlorman7926

    @evannlorman7926

    Жыл бұрын

    ​​@@BaldPolishBiotechnol no. Alpha Legion maybe. But then again a loyalist(or even traitor) alpha lehionaire is a loaded term. But no. Death Guard get thier dicks road 24/ with GW catering to all the nurgel band waganers all the time just looking for toughness boost, a loyalist Word Bearer would be more interesting. Something like an Iron Warrior or a Night Lord loyalist even a Thousand Son would be better. Just anything than DG.

  • @BaldPolishBiotechnol

    @BaldPolishBiotechnol

    Жыл бұрын

    @@evannlorman7926 I see your point. It makes me sad though, I love the pre Heresy Death Guard...

  • @erdtreeheresey4120

    @erdtreeheresey4120

    Жыл бұрын

    ​@@BaldPolishBiotechnol pre heresy death guard were pretty awesome

  • @BaldPolishBiotechnol

    @BaldPolishBiotechnol

    Жыл бұрын

    @@erdtreeheresey4120 Yeah. It is a shame, really. They not so much chosen to follow Nurgle, but were handed over by Mortarion. Dusk Raiders were so based... Mortarion was really shittier dad than even Angron.

  • @alice-the-author
    @alice-the-author Жыл бұрын

    I'm so glad I got to be a part of this fantastic story! Thank you so much!

  • @ChillAssTurtle

    @ChillAssTurtle

    Жыл бұрын

    Righteous.

  • @borisdorofeev5602

    @borisdorofeev5602

    Жыл бұрын

    Well done. Hope we can hear more from you and Vox in the future.

  • @adams5613

    @adams5613

    Жыл бұрын

    Wonderful job!

  • @AVoxintheVoid

    @AVoxintheVoid

    Жыл бұрын

    Thankyou for being a part of this production Alice! Fantastic job!

  • @emmanueltrejo4226

    @emmanueltrejo4226

    Жыл бұрын

    Nice! Welcome 🥳

  • @thedustybeagle9712
    @thedustybeagle9712 Жыл бұрын

    Amazing- love the idea of World Eaters being a nightmare for psykers to mind-meld with

  • @borisdorofeev5602
    @borisdorofeev5602 Жыл бұрын

    A 40k story which utilizes the use of the Betchers gland in an awesome way. I remember being apprehensive about fan written stories and now I enjoy them more than the official stuff.

  • @theliterarymercenary1699

    @theliterarymercenary1699

    Жыл бұрын

    I will take that as a particularly high complement!

  • @borisdorofeev5602

    @borisdorofeev5602

    Жыл бұрын

    @@theliterarymercenary1699 if you are Neal Litherland, the author of this story, then thank you. I've really enjoyed your stories in the Warhammer 40k setting. You have combat down very well and your humor is on point. Really look forward to hearing more. I wonder if you do any writing for SCP or a similar kind of setting?

  • @theliterarymercenary1699

    @theliterarymercenary1699

    Жыл бұрын

    @@borisdorofeev5602 I am he, and I thank you again. It's sometimes tough getting up the wherewithal to put together new stuff for the grim darkness of the far future, but knowing there are folks out there who really enjoy my tales makes it easier to find the motivation.

  • @MandoMTL

    @MandoMTL

    Жыл бұрын

    I had all but forgotten about it tbh.

  • @dukedevlan5457

    @dukedevlan5457

    Жыл бұрын

    ​@The Literary Mercenary your story is amazing. im making a chaos marine model based on him

  • @inwit594
    @inwit594 Жыл бұрын

    The ending is surprisingly hopeful. An old war hound, having been on the brink of blind madness from the nails, managing to withstand them in their most brutal moments, remembering his distant past and being reinvigorated. He runs to the aid of the mortals he once turned his back upon, if not to redeem himself, to take as many of those who led him into damnation with him to his eventual destination: Oblivion.

  • @benrichardson5662
    @benrichardson566211 ай бұрын

    I did not expect a touching, tender flashback from a World Eater, even a repentant one, but that's what I got. Marvelously done 👍

  • @mr.spuddling4187
    @mr.spuddling4187 Жыл бұрын

    Sybil experiencing Crixsus’ life…goosebumps

  • @AVoxintheVoid

    @AVoxintheVoid

    Жыл бұрын

    My favourite part 🙂

  • @stanir01

    @stanir01

    Жыл бұрын

    “Allllll offf ittt!”

  • @theliterarymercenary1699

    @theliterarymercenary1699

    Жыл бұрын

    I was particularly proud of that... and the performance just made it hit hard!

  • @josedeltoro5288

    @josedeltoro5288

    Жыл бұрын

    @@theliterarymercenary1699 the part with his mom, absolutely wonderful

  • @theliterarymercenary1699

    @theliterarymercenary1699

    Жыл бұрын

    @@josedeltoro5288 Won't lie, made me tear up a bit hearing it brought to life.

  • @doom1609
    @doom1609 Жыл бұрын

    Crixus is my new favorite Space Marine because of the amazing work you’ve put in to spread these stories. May he, who searches for blood and vengeance, find it. ❤️‍🔥

  • @theliterarymercenary1699

    @theliterarymercenary1699

    Жыл бұрын

    A righteous Doom was foretold, and lo, here it be!

  • @doom1609

    @doom1609

    Жыл бұрын

    @@theliterarymercenary1699 Let us embrace Doom with a raging fervor and combative zeal!

  • @Malkav
    @Malkav Жыл бұрын

    THE VOX'S NAILS IN MY HEAD DEMAND MORE! MORE!!! THERE CAN BE NO END TO IT!!!

  • @doctorfunk7959
    @doctorfunk7959 Жыл бұрын

    This has to be the best Choas-themed narration you’ve uploaded, well, apart from the Night Lord’s one. That one was also fantastic. Regardless, keep doing what you’re doing, Vox, cause your work is beyond excellent!

  • @AVoxintheVoid

    @AVoxintheVoid

    Жыл бұрын

    Thankyou so much brother! The Preysight series holds a special place in my heart!

  • @theglowballs4211

    @theglowballs4211

    Жыл бұрын

    100% agree he's like a bedtime story reader for adults. Also: R E M O V E

  • @bobv6583

    @bobv6583

    2 ай бұрын

    It’s great no doubt, but my favorite is “the chosen of Khorne” with the K the betrayer

  • @connorriggs1518
    @connorriggs1518 Жыл бұрын

    Gods I love the waking dogs stories they are so good and really serve well to humanizes the world eaters for me

  • @AVoxintheVoid

    @AVoxintheVoid

    Жыл бұрын

    They are incredible pieces of writing

  • @theliterarymercenary1699

    @theliterarymercenary1699

    Жыл бұрын

    @@AVoxintheVoid It gives me particularly strong waves of positive emotions knowing so many folks are enjoying Crixus. Thanks to all for your eyes and ears!

  • @Orbotus

    @Orbotus

    Жыл бұрын

    @@theliterarymercenary1699 I love this guy!

  • @dub4sam95
    @dub4sam95 Жыл бұрын

    I'm sitting in work, feeling like I want to join Crixus on his one man crusade against his fallen brothers, amazing as always. The dialogue, description of the pass experiences, the fact he moves on with a helmet as a trophy of necessity to aid the guard and cut down more of his warband. Then leave one to spread the word that 40K batman is coming for them. Superb work!

  • @Horrorclause00
    @Horrorclause00 Жыл бұрын

    Im not a fan of audio books at all, even the other 40k ones, but your audio production quality really draws the listener into the story and thats what makes the difference for me. Keep up the great quality, its only a matter of time before you become very successful

  • @AVoxintheVoid

    @AVoxintheVoid

    Жыл бұрын

    Thankyou for sticking with it my friend!

  • @adams5613

    @adams5613

    Жыл бұрын

    I would have to agree with you. 😁

  • @informationyes

    @informationyes

    Жыл бұрын

    Ive never heard an audio book ive thought was neccesarily bad?

  • @Horrorclause00

    @Horrorclause00

    Жыл бұрын

    @@informationyes Congrats

  • @adams5613

    @adams5613

    Жыл бұрын

    @@informationyes not bad per say, though the wrong narrator can make it DRY as hell. Then I won't remember any of it as it just becomes back ground noise.

  • @MR.LMR1996
    @MR.LMR1996 Жыл бұрын

    I for one cannot wait to see where this'll go if we get a sequel to this story. Imagine the shock, confusion and awe of an overrun group of Guardsmen as they watch a World Eater going out of his way to slaughter his own brothers whilst ignoring them in what should've been the final few moments of their lives of this war.

  • @BaldPolishBiotechnol

    @BaldPolishBiotechnol

    Жыл бұрын

    My thoughts exactly...

  • @DenzeMist
    @DenzeMist Жыл бұрын

    Vox I keep listening to Crixu's flashback over and over. "Fight in your head and kill with your heart". So inspirational, thank you again.

  • @dhandogoldogol
    @dhandogoldogol Жыл бұрын

    I got literal goosebumps from when they flashed back to his mom and the conversation held between them. Something about that scene struck a chord with me, then when he snapped back to reality gave me a sense of realize. Satisfaction, for him. He didn’t fall victim to the dogma of his chapter like everyone else. He followed what his mother told him and it carried him through his life. I stand with full confidence that this channel is truly a gem in the mess that is KZread.

  • @AVoxintheVoid

    @AVoxintheVoid

    Жыл бұрын

    Thankyou so much for the amazing message. This was one of my favourite scenes too, wonderfully written by Neal.

  • @northernsupernova1
    @northernsupernova1 Жыл бұрын

    The War Hounds were a noble warrior legion, with marial honour (Kharn being a prime example of this mentality) they preferred close combat so that they would lower the chances of collateral damage and bystander kills. Angron was borken, and broke his legion with the nails

  • @Damien_N

    @Damien_N

    9 ай бұрын

    Like the Revenants, the War Hounds are their dark twins. Only instead of a golden angel to lead them into casting off their savagery and that name, they met a red angel who seared it into their very souls. Blood Angels, and World Eaters. Two kindred legions

  • @northernsupernova1

    @northernsupernova1

    9 ай бұрын

    @@Damien_N I really like this suality in the lore. Many legions have their shadows.. like Raven guard and Night Lords, Imperial fists and Iron Warriors etc.. (Spacw Wolves and Dark Angels hehe)

  • @alannatherson7721
    @alannatherson7721 Жыл бұрын

    Glad to hear there's a continuation to Crixsus's story.

  • @noahdavis7570
    @noahdavis7570 Жыл бұрын

    I love the way you used their acid spit in the story, most people forget about it but it’s such a neat feature.

  • @AVoxintheVoid

    @AVoxintheVoid

    Жыл бұрын

    You're not wrong! Thankyou to Neal for giving me the chance to narrate phlegm 😎

  • @sleeplesslunatic2627
    @sleeplesslunatic2627 Жыл бұрын

    OH DAMN, ANOTHER BANGER :D Edit - "IF YOU WOULD SEE, THEN SEE!". That line, and everything that came after it, GOOSEBUMPS. ABSOLUTELY EPIC.

  • @theliterarymercenary1699

    @theliterarymercenary1699

    Жыл бұрын

    You and me both... and I knew the line was coming, lol

  • @sleeplesslunatic2627

    @sleeplesslunatic2627

    Жыл бұрын

    Phenomenal piece of writing and narration. But of course, I would expect nothing less from Vox ;)

  • @ReasonableSwampMonster
    @ReasonableSwampMonster Жыл бұрын

    13:23 Khornite space marine hesitated executing his homie because of the light skin stare 💀

  • @davebowman9000
    @davebowman9000 Жыл бұрын

    This was awesome!! Kind of wanted Crixus to keep the pysker alive so she'd become part of his retinue as he kept killing the other World Eaters, but it was an interesting kill. Very beautiful scene with his mom. I like that sort of detail. Another astonishing work voice-wise. Hope they all come back for other stories!

  • @BaldPolishBiotechnol

    @BaldPolishBiotechnol

    Жыл бұрын

    She got much more than she could have chew...

  • @emmanueltrejo4226
    @emmanueltrejo4226 Жыл бұрын

    Finally you get a female voice for the female voice lines. Love it. I want more lore

  • @AVoxintheVoid

    @AVoxintheVoid

    Жыл бұрын

    I did for the Christmas video 'silent Night' as well. I totally understand that it's better for immersion to have female actors!

  • @ChillAssTurtle
    @ChillAssTurtle Жыл бұрын

    Turn notifications on and strip/clean/bless your las rifles brothers.

  • @PayYourTick
    @PayYourTick Жыл бұрын

    Gather round brothers, The Remembrancer speaks!

  • @samaeldrakul4191

    @samaeldrakul4191

    Жыл бұрын

    ✊️

  • @mehdiz805
    @mehdiz805 Жыл бұрын

    When sorrow turn to hate, Even the brightest star weep for the chaos that come, For in that darkness there is no evil nor good, Only madness.

  • @TMEAN037
    @TMEAN037 Жыл бұрын

    Blood was drawn and with its vivid hues a story painted and hammered home with rage. For such a story written and told, little more could be asked.

  • @MrRolax1234
    @MrRolax1234 Жыл бұрын

    The Emperor has blessed us with a story shaming the black library 🔥. The part where Crixsus had the long lost memories of his mother broke me…. ONLY FOR MY BLOOD TO BOIL WHEN HE ROSE ABOVE THE FALSE SENSE OF PEACE AND SHOWED THE PSYKER THE TRUE REALITY OF HIS ACCESSION AND DOWNFALL OF GODHOOD. By far my favorite audio story in WH40k ever done. Thank you for this🙏🏽

  • @Primal2229
    @Primal2229 Жыл бұрын

    As if the stories and narrations weren't great already, the music choices for some of these are so damn perfect. I was already a World Eaters fan pre and post heresy and stories like this really nail it down. The raging berserker is fun and all, but the fallen warrior trying for some sort of blood and shit soaked redemption? That just makes it even better.

  • @isaacibbotson4632
    @isaacibbotson46322 ай бұрын

    Crixus fulfilled Angron's desires perfectly. He broke his chains from the legion and chose his own path. He died free.

  • @donovanstrydom4448
    @donovanstrydom4448 Жыл бұрын

    I did not know I needed a vigilante punisher esq world eater in my life till know, you and you readings and single handedly turned the world eaters into my favorite traitor legion! I also love that fact you made him refer to himself as a warhound the untainted men that carved a bloody path across the galaxy. The ones who were killed among the other loyalist during the purge

  • @ChapterMasterAres
    @ChapterMasterAres Жыл бұрын

    This is amazing. I wish this series would never end. A slightly sane world eater is one of the most fascinating mindsets in 40k

  • @theliterarymercenary1699

    @theliterarymercenary1699

    Жыл бұрын

    I won't say never... but I do have at least a few more stories in the saga up my sleeve, if folks really want them.

  • @ChapterMasterAres

    @ChapterMasterAres

    Жыл бұрын

    @@theliterarymercenary1699 I want it like a fat kid wants cake.

  • @theliterarymercenary1699

    @theliterarymercenary1699

    Жыл бұрын

    @@ChapterMasterAres So noted!

  • @kostakatsoulis2922

    @kostakatsoulis2922

    10 ай бұрын

    Nah. He's earned the title of Warhound.

  • @kostakatsoulis2922

    @kostakatsoulis2922

    10 ай бұрын

    ​@@theliterarymercenary1699me too, Crixus deserves more lore!

  • @ianharrison5758
    @ianharrison5758 Жыл бұрын

    This channel has done more to improve my opinion on the world eaters than any official lore I’ve ever read. I’m still not entirely sure how much of this channel is fan made Vs official, or if it’s all fan made but the few I know for sure were written by fans have been amazing and the narration of it is just amazing

  • @theogrist2348
    @theogrist2348 Жыл бұрын

    I love stories about the world eaters, because they are the most tragic legion to fall to chaos, being forced to have the nails due to their father's suffering and his unbound anger

  • @kayvaanmcsharrowkyn6901
    @kayvaanmcsharrowkyn6901 Жыл бұрын

    DAMN VOX.....THIS WAS JUST PURE SAVAGERY AT IT'S BEST. I FREAKING LOVED IT. SOOO BADASS TO HEAR THE MUSIC BLENDED WITH "THE OLD.WAR HOUND PICKED UP HIS SWORD AND HEADED OFF IN THE DIRECTION OF THE CALL".... THE IMAGE OF AN OLD WARRIOR...WHO STILL HAS HONOR...GOING INTO BATTLE AGAINST HIS OLD BROTHERS.. JUST SHEER BRUTAL

  • @isaiahd5396
    @isaiahd5396 Жыл бұрын

    Dam they dont even have a word for how badass this is

  • @frediwanga7572
    @frediwanga7572 Жыл бұрын

    This is a peace of art. I have rarely heard a story that complete. The end was terrific. Great story Man 👏👏👏

  • @AVoxintheVoid

    @AVoxintheVoid

    Жыл бұрын

    Neal did such a good job with the writing. I can't thank him enough for supplying me with such an incredible tale to read 💪💪

  • @theliterarymercenary1699

    @theliterarymercenary1699

    Жыл бұрын

    @@AVoxintheVoid Hard at work on the next as we speak! And if folks really want more, I have plans for Crixus... and perhaps some of his wayward brothers, as well.

  • @samaeldrakul4191

    @samaeldrakul4191

    Жыл бұрын

    ​​@@theliterarymercenary1699 fantastic! you birthed a terifying and compelling character there, loved the depth of the tale and the narration my god i was there 💥✊️💥 id love more adventures of Crixus. "IF YOU WOULD SEE.... THEN SEE!!" 🤟

  • @samaeldrakul4191

    @samaeldrakul4191

    Жыл бұрын

    ​@@AVoxintheVoid "ALL OF IT!!" Beautifully narrated sir, all of it

  • @theliterarymercenary1699

    @theliterarymercenary1699

    Жыл бұрын

    @@samaeldrakul4191 Does my heart good to hear it! If folks stay this enthusiastic, I might not be able to say no, lol

  • @williamjohnson7342
    @williamjohnson7342 Жыл бұрын

    I’d buy a book from this guys pov, and pay happily for it. Love the concept and both stories where amazing

  • @theliterarymercenary1699

    @theliterarymercenary1699

    Жыл бұрын

    If the Black Library comes a'calling, you'll be able to hear my squee from most continents.

  • @joshuablackmon3109
    @joshuablackmon3109 Жыл бұрын

    Two of my favorite creators in this genre in the same title my heart is overjoyed brothers

  • @ginkohana6635
    @ginkohana66352 күн бұрын

    holy....this Story...this ending...the composition of the music paired with the spot on voice-acting....im in love!

  • @user-gq6dq3ld7m
    @user-gq6dq3ld7m9 ай бұрын

    The old soldier... Perfect story. Perfect Narration!

  • @adio.5189
    @adio.5189 Жыл бұрын

    I love stories about War Hounds. Those that were true legionaries, who threw off the spell of obedience gene crafted into all astartes for their primarchs. That threw aside their kinship with their brothers because their brothers were all mad and as good as dead. Because it is right, even millennia after the fact.

  • @tebusan6217
    @tebusan6217 Жыл бұрын

    Damn this audio makes me wanna flip my truck due to the Adrenalin these vid3os on world eaters….the anticipation of a war hounds video pre angron makes me quiver hahhahaha

  • @maximus8671
    @maximus8671 Жыл бұрын

    Make this a show today. Right now. I would watch it in a heartbeat. This was soo good I had to listen to it twice to make sure I did not miss any details. Fantastic writing, sound, etc. Moar plz.

  • @djanfila7857

    @djanfila7857

    Жыл бұрын

    im a show writer very nice very serius. u pay me i write as u direct

  • @highchaplain0786
    @highchaplain0786 Жыл бұрын

    Cannot wait for this one! I love the sound effect in part 1 when he stomped his head in like a grape! Skulls! More skulls!

  • @AVoxintheVoid

    @AVoxintheVoid

    Жыл бұрын

    Yeah I was proud of that effect! 😎

  • @highchaplain0786

    @highchaplain0786

    Жыл бұрын

    @@AVoxintheVoid Perfection Vox 🤌👏

  • @RegularDude00
    @RegularDude003 ай бұрын

    A world eater being reminded of his humanity. She dared to poke around in his memories and he showed her more than she bargained for. He showed her all of it. Such a tragic chapter.

  • @ValhallasCalling84
    @ValhallasCalling84 Жыл бұрын

    This has to be the best one yet what a collab. You and warrior tier are the best when it comes to audio quality. I absolutely loved every second and every pitch and baritone on this one. Literally blood pumping 💀🖤

  • @nonnyjones8217
    @nonnyjones8217 Жыл бұрын

    I absolutely love it please Mr. VOX make it longer…at least an hour ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

  • @AVoxintheVoid

    @AVoxintheVoid

    Жыл бұрын

    If this was my full time job I could happily make lengthier narrations, maybe one day soon!

  • @amosanon3274
    @amosanon3274 Жыл бұрын

    ok immediately know i have to run to my car for the bluetooth, laptop speakers will not do this justice. the first 3 syllables are drugs. im hooked.

  • @devilonyourshoulder4732
    @devilonyourshoulder4732 Жыл бұрын

    This story actually made me tear up a little. Excellent job by everyone involved.

  • @microwavegommmm916
    @microwavegommmm916 Жыл бұрын

    Saving this for later lads, already know it will be great

  • @luxordeathbed
    @luxordeathbed Жыл бұрын

    Also, please, a narration of the guardsmen seeing Crix come as an avenging angel. A legend of a red angel or something. Maybe he dies and saint hood? OHH so many things that could come from this...

  • @SEMPlTERNAL
    @SEMPlTERNAL Жыл бұрын

    Only stumbled upon your channel last week, listened to probably a dozen of your previous works, absolutely amazing. Keep it up.

  • @AVoxintheVoid

    @AVoxintheVoid

    Жыл бұрын

    Fellow BMTH fan?

  • @dustinrogers6360
    @dustinrogers63602 ай бұрын

    The ending... Goddamn tears and goosebumps... When crixus yells ALL OF IT! i felt his mixture of pure rage and sadness almost like as he made that witch look into his mind he was so enraged he teared up

  • @ASingleChimera
    @ASingleChimera5 ай бұрын

    "They saw arenas of blood where children killed one another for the privilege of dying on a surgeon's table, trying to become gods." What a line, holy shit.

  • @Trollioli
    @Trollioli Жыл бұрын

    A Vox World Eaters story? Truly it is Christmas in February.

  • @dauphinkivol5555
    @dauphinkivol55552 ай бұрын

    I hope the "Waking dogs" serie continues. This is fantastic

  • @dbayles3677
    @dbayles3677 Жыл бұрын

    Knocked another one out of the park mate. Waking dogs, Preysight and all the gods are dead are my favourite series. Your work is a solid motivator for hobbying after a crappy day.

  • @nealbryner9181
    @nealbryner9181 Жыл бұрын

    The performances on this one are absolutely outstanding! It really adds so much to the story. I really liked the music for the finale as well. The triumphant tone of that track really painted a picture.

  • @H_Eli
    @H_Eli Жыл бұрын

    oh boy

  • @taylortetra1781
    @taylortetra1781 Жыл бұрын

    That soundtrack hits hard. Imagine if every black library book had a break down when they charged

  • @andrewwoodham5497
    @andrewwoodham5497 Жыл бұрын

    25 years of warhammer. i literally have a library. thank you for this. its amazing

  • @aceriverpirate9795
    @aceriverpirate9795 Жыл бұрын

    Any day is a good day when Vox uploads stuff like this.

  • @sendapez
    @sendapez Жыл бұрын

    I like going on drives because I get to immerse myself in Vox’s stories. (Safely of course)

  • @williamp3591
    @williamp35919 ай бұрын

    I HAVE NEVER EVER BEEN PULLED INTO A STORY THE WAY I WAS WITH THIS ONE!!! Both the narration and selection of music had me experiencing emotions as if this story was my personal biography!!! I experienced anger, bitterness, longing, frustration, hurt, resolve, and a cold contentment that has me ready to punch my computer screen and enlist in a war! …I’m too old for this lol!!! Now, off to go find my heart medication and Bolter.

  • @AVoxintheVoid

    @AVoxintheVoid

    9 ай бұрын

    Thankyou for the support William!!

  • @Martin-jo9hv
    @Martin-jo9hv Жыл бұрын

    I rarely comment but here I am. So glad that I found your channel. And how more and more people also find it and love it. Incredible work every video is a piece of art.This became one of my favorit .The voice acting is top level and the music fit so well.The listener can feel the story and the characters. You thought about making a patreon? I'm sure people would support you.

  • @AVoxintheVoid

    @AVoxintheVoid

    Жыл бұрын

    Thankyou for the support! I might be tempted to start a patreon this year but don't know how the big wigs at gw would think about it...

  • @thesonofmalice1999
    @thesonofmalice1999 Жыл бұрын

    Is that... what I think it is? KHORNE!? F××K YEAH! KHOOOOOORRRRNE!

  • @ScooBdont
    @ScooBdont Жыл бұрын

    Didn’t realize till the end this was connected with the other story of Crixus. Well done sir 👍

  • @carminedesanto6746
    @carminedesanto6746 Жыл бұрын

    World Eaters ..tough mo’fos!

  • @saraphimfalls5000
    @saraphimfalls5000Ай бұрын

    Return of a War Hound against his former brothers...idk man, this whole story just had my whole self swell with such pride i couldnt help but smile.

  • @bittersaint8831
    @bittersaint8831 Жыл бұрын

    Oh my fucking god, yaaaaasss!

  • @cottermcg123
    @cottermcg123 Жыл бұрын

    So a traitor bezerker going only for his brothers from the world eaters instead of the imperium? Badass

  • @thewayfarer8849
    @thewayfarer8849 Жыл бұрын

    WarriorTier is a great collab choice, in fact, the addition of a cast is a nice mix up (although I do enjoy the singular narration as well)

  • @freekill1018
    @freekill1018 Жыл бұрын

    Now that's what I'm talking about! I came to 40k as a star wars fan and now I'm pretty solidly a Warhammer fan I'm even reading every book of lore from the heresy series and I intend to read everything I can

  • @AVoxintheVoid

    @AVoxintheVoid

    Жыл бұрын

    I have a few star wars narrations if you're interested!

  • @freekill1018

    @freekill1018

    Жыл бұрын

    @@AVoxintheVoid without a doubt I most firmly am

  • @ghostkid2131
    @ghostkid2131 Жыл бұрын

    Excellent story telling better then any game workshop Novel I've read

  • @theliterarymercenary1699

    @theliterarymercenary1699

    Жыл бұрын

    High praise indeed!

  • @oc8473
    @oc847310 ай бұрын

    The pacing of the background music is a great addition

  • @mykelengieza7057
    @mykelengieza7057 Жыл бұрын

    it's my birthday so i'll pretend this is a gift for me lol

  • @sleeplesslunatic2627

    @sleeplesslunatic2627

    Жыл бұрын

    Happy Birthday! :D

  • @AVoxintheVoid

    @AVoxintheVoid

    Жыл бұрын

    Happy birthday Myke! 🎂

  • @mykelengieza7057

    @mykelengieza7057

    Жыл бұрын

    thanks!!!

  • @partyshoes2917
    @partyshoes2917 Жыл бұрын

    I love how the acid gland is used and mentioned

  • @RakkasanRakkasan
    @RakkasanRakkasan Жыл бұрын

    Awesome story thank you. Power without reason is chaos.

  • @TheGuarddogjr
    @TheGuarddogjr Жыл бұрын

    Absolutely amazing chills ran down my spine at the end.

  • @WorldEaterTaz
    @WorldEaterTaz Жыл бұрын

    All of the World Eaters stories are so enjoyable to listen to. Thank you for another wonderful story. (Hugs and Kisses)

  • @grinningdragondren
    @grinningdragondren Жыл бұрын

    BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!!!!!

  • @AVoxintheVoid

    @AVoxintheVoid

    Жыл бұрын

    Skulls for the...

  • @thesmilinggun-knight9646

    @thesmilinggun-knight9646

    Жыл бұрын

    SKULL THORNE!

  • @TheProtronic
    @TheProtronic9 ай бұрын

    "We never needed these; we should have died without them."

  • @MrGravylegs
    @MrGravylegs6 ай бұрын

    I’ve listened to this a few times through, with each listening the imagery becoming clearer through this awesome narration.. Amazing work Vox!! Love these stories, you’re able to so accurately mimic what these chaos maniacs would sound like!! Thank you for all your hard work!!

  • @hulkbustermark5830
    @hulkbustermark5830 Жыл бұрын

    Dam now I want a part 2 so we can see how the guard would react.

  • @tebusan6217
    @tebusan6217 Жыл бұрын

    Bro love your videos I won’t name drop other channels I like for the same type of content but your channel is tied for 1st 🥇 of my fav all time channel. Just wish u had videos of some stuff I really like in warhammer :(

  • @AVoxintheVoid

    @AVoxintheVoid

    Жыл бұрын

    What do you wish to see more matey?

  • @mykelengieza7057

    @mykelengieza7057

    Жыл бұрын

    @@AVoxintheVoid BOOBS....duh

  • @tebusan6217

    @tebusan6217

    Жыл бұрын

    @@AVoxintheVoid saw wet I would love to see content on carcharadons, a video also on tyberos the red wake . But make your own story like how you do yours now doesn’t have to be cannon . Would also love to see videos on the war hounds legion and lunar wolves before they became sons of horus and world eaters PLS!!!! Do those before carcharadons and tyberos. Pls these are the legions I play as well as make and paint 🎨

  • @tebusan6217

    @tebusan6217

    Жыл бұрын

    At some point when I have time I’ll make a special conversion paint and send to you for appreciation for your channel and the content you create , people don’t understand the time and passion you put into your channel but I do.

  • @cb2291
    @cb2291 Жыл бұрын

    Flames for the flame God

  • @jesterdude420
    @jesterdude420 Жыл бұрын

    Thanks for another good listen

  • @Orbotus
    @Orbotus Жыл бұрын

    ... That's it, I will be the first to say it - His story is better than Gav and Bob. Man so angry at himself, he's going on murder rampage for redemption

  • @techpreist8396
    @techpreist8396 Жыл бұрын

    I love stories of traitors redeeming themselves. It is always interesting to see them look around themselves at all of the demons and stuff and go," i have made a mistake." For the way they redeem themselves is always grand and amazing

  • @Nomadith
    @Nomadith24 күн бұрын

    I return a year past to plead for more Crixus, dear VOX

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