that bit of score actually sounds really well put together somehow, I’d recommend throwing in something like a clarinet for melody, but that could evolve into something amazing good job

Sounds great! I hope it turns into a whole piece, I'd love to hear what it becomes.

this sounds fantastic. good luck with this! my personal recommendation is to make the score readability very easy. in the case of this passage, very little double accidental use or perhaps none at all. string players don't usually see Cb's and Fb's and beyond, and im sure violin II, viola, and maybe even cello would be frighted haha. if you can, show this to any string players at your school. that way, youll get a better sense at what they think (or maybe youre a string player too, ive never met you lol)

@Dinis_Brito

26 күн бұрын

You're spot on on I've never tought of that im gonna show my friends this and see what they think Ty Im a pianist btw

idk if there's a good way around this, but the Violin II part in the second measure to the third measure is not great voice leading, it would be nice if it could continue down, but that might not be possible unless you have some part use divisi

@Dinis_Brito

3 ай бұрын

yh but its not the main melody its just for the harmony thats why, but i understand

@thefitness-grampacertest9364

2 ай бұрын

Everything's also moving in the same direction besides measure 5, so it could help to change the harmony some.

@Dinis_Brito

2 ай бұрын

@@thefitness-grampacertest9364 the whole point of not going in the same direction is that the harmony is different

@asukalangleysoryu6695

Ай бұрын

Even Bach would leap in his inner voices sometimes. No one cares.

@Dinis_Brito

Ай бұрын

@@asukalangleysoryu6695 true