The commander-in-chief of an invasion fleet would NOT pick up a rifle and be part of the first wave of boots on the ground. Utterly ridiculous.

Great work

take the time to actually listen to the story and realise it makes no sense. try not using the word resolve, resolution and relentless they are over used in AI

@merlebarney

Ай бұрын

I wish someone would take the time to teach these AI’s some grammar.

@beccabbea2511

Ай бұрын

@@merlebarney So do I. And where to pause correctly and… Oh well I don’t have to listen. No bad, but three thousand years?!

@merlebarney

Ай бұрын

@@beccabbea2511 They are a pain at times but it’s something to watch to kill time when I can’t find anything else interesting to watch.

Love your story

The Captain Lyra Kerrigan should be an Admiral if commanding a fleet. Lyra is leading the fight on the ground??? The concept for the story was great but should have been divide into maybe 3 parts and those flushed out. Captain Lyra would not be commanding a fleet nor leading ground forces. Try reading Honor Harrington series by David Weber to get a concept of how a military operates and it's command structure or watch some WW2 Navy battles to see how the real world operates. The last 30 seconds of the video was good.

@user-pm9bq2bl9k

Ай бұрын

You are training the AI to write as a human would ...

Get a human reader who can pronounce the words.

Honored Matres? Women in charge of everything 😂

@conjumonblue6450

Ай бұрын

In the Dune series the Honored Matres were a powerful all-female group who emerged from uncharted space to become formidable rivals and a sinister reflection of the Bene Gesserit, some two thousand years after the death of the God Emperor Leto Atreides II.

The big problem people have with this is that it has female main characters?!

@lynnsimpson4908

25 күн бұрын

Yeah, too much DEI in AI programs

How long, 2,300,000 light years

@edfrawley4356

Ай бұрын

10 minutes tops

Another rubbish story, badly spoken and the plot was non existent jumping around with no context from one point to another. I would guess that it has sections of a longer novel pasted together. It would have been better to use the entire story broken down into block chapters. Thumbs down.

@fuller1962

Ай бұрын

If you can do better then do it and prove it otherwise shut up and don't listen anymore if you can't do better yourself.

Story makes NO sense. A Captain doesn’t command fleets, and fight ground battles. The enemy doesn’t destroy a planet and then fortify it for 3k yrs, while waiting on the original inhabitants to come back. So much wrong with this. Low effort attempt. 👎

Downvote and blocking channel recommendations.

Not into woke,go away,