I like these short sweeteners, filling in the backgrounds of key characters. I think it is cool to have a dual threat fighter pilot/flight surgeon, with enemy kills and life saves tallied on their ship. That show real imagination.
@vanguard9067Күн бұрын
Just a little something slipped under the door for cocktail hour
@ShaneLochlannBlackКүн бұрын
Very thoughtful sir! I truly appreciate it!
@jb13878Күн бұрын
There are massive gaps in the story? Jason is on the derelict craft then all of a sudden he’s meeting his sister in the hanger back on argent? Is there context missing? Edit: again now another huge hole? they go from inspecting the new version of the strike fighter to suddenly being on the derelict ship under attack by someone? im so confused and it sucks as i really enjoy the story that makes sense.
@vanguard90672 күн бұрын
Good one and darn right.
@ShaneLochlannBlack2 күн бұрын
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@chrisriddle72632 күн бұрын
So glad you are back
@vanguard90673 күн бұрын
Yala is getting a bunch of back talk from his subordinate Scales. Discipline is slacking off among the Sarn.
@Motobro6993 күн бұрын
Great video looking forwad to the next one. Keep up the good work
@vanguard90673 күн бұрын
Starwatch Command is needing some more allies:-)
@voxlupus23894 күн бұрын
Awe story well wrote... i proudly give my like to this one.
@MajMat0735 күн бұрын
Aliens already control human minds. Their just not from outer space, nuff said.
@bfwilley16 күн бұрын
Lots of chrome nice paint job, no engine, no tires ...going nowhere.
@BUCURPOPA6 күн бұрын
" Dominique help me!" 😂😂😂 I literally saw the guys crapping their black pants!
@belelokai33286 күн бұрын
I am half way through this story and I still have no idea what the hell what it's about.
@ShaneLochlannBlack6 күн бұрын
Hey Belelokai! The first book in the series is Strike Battleship Argent. That would be the best place to start 🙂
@steveturner38647 күн бұрын
The only way I watch this is if the girl is topless. Otherwise it’s pure fantasy. Lol women kllling men lol right
@vanguard90678 күн бұрын
First
@user-dx7xp6bw6i8 күн бұрын
Swoosha 🇦🇺 top story 🇦🇺🇦🇺🦘
@ShaneLochlannBlack8 күн бұрын
We love our Australian readers!
@grahammctygue7248 күн бұрын
Thanks for more background be blessed 😊😊
@vanguard90678 күн бұрын
Pre-ordered Jacks or Better. Can’t wait
@ShaneLochlannBlack8 күн бұрын
You are one of our greatest readers! Much appreciated! 👍
@vanguard90678 күн бұрын
@@ShaneLochlannBlack I am hapoy to be a supporter. There is such a tremendous difference between human-authored stories and AI-generated drivel. As many other readers (listeners) on KZread note, the purple prose of almost all AI-generated content is full of cliche phrases such as: the indomitable will of the humans, [some virtuous behavior] shining as a beacon of hope, and my favorite: [some activity] serving as a testament to human strength/compassion/righteousness. If I hear any of these phrases more than once, I stop listening. I don’t understand how there are AI writers, but never AI editors. At the very least, why hasn’t AI been taught the basics of effective writing using The Elements of Style. Have a good weekend.
@ShaneLochlannBlack8 күн бұрын
/madly scribbles notes "testament to human strength" (scribble scribble) "beacon of hope..." (scribble scribble) "indomitable will..." 🙂 The whole reason behind what I do is so I can write the stories I think will be fun and entertaining. The chance to improve craft is also compelling. I like to think my work improves over time and if that's true, I think it's worth putting in the work. You have a great weekend as well! I think you'll really enjoy Jacks or Better!
@carltonmarshall26210 күн бұрын
Let's go Mariines
@groberjager474611 күн бұрын
Shane, what is the correct order in which to listen to all this in order, the Argent to this?
@vanguard906712 күн бұрын
Thank you for that story.
@davidgoulding36612 күн бұрын
Very good, BZ
@zzombeemuffin13 күн бұрын
Where is my audio book?
@ShaneLochlannBlack13 күн бұрын
Hey zzombee! If you have a question about a store order, visit any page on the bookstore and use the Customer Service link at the bottom of the page to email. We'll get it sorted out right away!
@vanguard906713 күн бұрын
Hey there. As you continue to develop the series, I would like more of the back stories for the other key characters.
@ShaneLochlannBlack13 күн бұрын
I think you will approve of my announcement tomorrow! Don't miss it!
@vanguard906712 күн бұрын
@@ShaneLochlannBlack When, more specifically?
@greggiles730913 күн бұрын
Lost me at poisonous gas in space, I guess its just too hard.
@michaell39714 күн бұрын
It's getting a little interesting! ;<) KnifeMaker
@BrettHolst14 күн бұрын
Rare and violent 😂
@carltonmarshall26218 күн бұрын
Can't wait for next esp.
@grahammctygue72419 күн бұрын
Very enthusiastic narrator happy for society watch blessings to All
@Southwest_923WR19 күн бұрын
Well damn. My first time here, and I get yelling ad before START??? I'm out. Good luck BRO.
@user-pk4kb8bx9g19 күн бұрын
Very good, thanx.
@tafara260519 күн бұрын
what happened at epsilon gamma 3
@duckaruck940919 күн бұрын
AWESOME SERIES!!!
@ShaneLochlannBlack19 күн бұрын
It's only because we have the most AWESOME READERS!!
@danielgarner596319 күн бұрын
Thanks!
@ShaneLochlannBlack19 күн бұрын
Outstanding! You are most welcome!
@danielgarner596319 күн бұрын
Thanks!
@ShaneLochlannBlack19 күн бұрын
Thanks for the support Daniel!
@vanguard906720 күн бұрын
Respects to Cmdr Enright, fictional though he is.
@vanguard906720 күн бұрын
I think the crews of the Argent strike group should be awarded a tall stack pancake campaign medal.
@mcjitsu20 күн бұрын
Sorry but this is just a mishmash of random scenario's infused with techno babble. No theme? No story? No cohesiveness. It is just a bunch of oddball episodes with too many characters, all at the same time.
@vanguard906720 күн бұрын
Did you start with first book?
@cski1289421 күн бұрын
So very glad that this writer does not describe anyone's "jaw is set with grim determination."😂 If I hear that again I will become "twisted into alien ghosts" or some s**t. Good description with relatively correct military operations. (Naval).
@ShaneLochlannBlack20 күн бұрын
/makes quick note of phrases not to use
@patbrownlee527422 күн бұрын
LOVEN THE SIERIES
@Poepad22 күн бұрын
Can you rename the playlists so we know how to listen in in sequence
@ShaneLochlannBlack19 күн бұрын
I'll do one better. I'm going to do a whole video on reading order and I just might have a preview of future events to go with it! Stand by!
@brianpatterson778422 күн бұрын
Why u mix the chapters up you never finish a story you ruined it
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I like these short sweeteners, filling in the backgrounds of key characters. I think it is cool to have a dual threat fighter pilot/flight surgeon, with enemy kills and life saves tallied on their ship. That show real imagination.
Just a little something slipped under the door for cocktail hour
Very thoughtful sir! I truly appreciate it!
There are massive gaps in the story? Jason is on the derelict craft then all of a sudden he’s meeting his sister in the hanger back on argent? Is there context missing? Edit: again now another huge hole? they go from inspecting the new version of the strike fighter to suddenly being on the derelict ship under attack by someone? im so confused and it sucks as i really enjoy the story that makes sense.
Good one and darn right.
Join the conversation! We can't wait to hear from our readers! Support the fighting men and women of the Battleship Argent! 📚 Grab the Starships Universe Title of the Day! shane.lochlann.black Become a Shane Lochlann Black Sci-Fi Channel Member! kzread.info/dron/tCG3q7Tl2o6ZbbzIxEUaRA.htmljoin Visit the Gift Shop for Officially Licensed Starships Gear! www.youtube.com/@ShaneLochlannBlack/store
So glad you are back
Yala is getting a bunch of back talk from his subordinate Scales. Discipline is slacking off among the Sarn.
Great video looking forwad to the next one. Keep up the good work
Starwatch Command is needing some more allies:-)
Awe story well wrote... i proudly give my like to this one.
Aliens already control human minds. Their just not from outer space, nuff said.
Lots of chrome nice paint job, no engine, no tires ...going nowhere.
" Dominique help me!" 😂😂😂 I literally saw the guys crapping their black pants!
I am half way through this story and I still have no idea what the hell what it's about.
Hey Belelokai! The first book in the series is Strike Battleship Argent. That would be the best place to start 🙂
The only way I watch this is if the girl is topless. Otherwise it’s pure fantasy. Lol women kllling men lol right
First
Swoosha 🇦🇺 top story 🇦🇺🇦🇺🦘
We love our Australian readers!
Thanks for more background be blessed 😊😊
Pre-ordered Jacks or Better. Can’t wait
You are one of our greatest readers! Much appreciated! 👍
@@ShaneLochlannBlack I am hapoy to be a supporter. There is such a tremendous difference between human-authored stories and AI-generated drivel. As many other readers (listeners) on KZread note, the purple prose of almost all AI-generated content is full of cliche phrases such as: the indomitable will of the humans, [some virtuous behavior] shining as a beacon of hope, and my favorite: [some activity] serving as a testament to human strength/compassion/righteousness. If I hear any of these phrases more than once, I stop listening. I don’t understand how there are AI writers, but never AI editors. At the very least, why hasn’t AI been taught the basics of effective writing using The Elements of Style. Have a good weekend.
/madly scribbles notes "testament to human strength" (scribble scribble) "beacon of hope..." (scribble scribble) "indomitable will..." 🙂 The whole reason behind what I do is so I can write the stories I think will be fun and entertaining. The chance to improve craft is also compelling. I like to think my work improves over time and if that's true, I think it's worth putting in the work. You have a great weekend as well! I think you'll really enjoy Jacks or Better!
Let's go Mariines
Shane, what is the correct order in which to listen to all this in order, the Argent to this?
Thank you for that story.
Very good, BZ
Where is my audio book?
Hey zzombee! If you have a question about a store order, visit any page on the bookstore and use the Customer Service link at the bottom of the page to email. We'll get it sorted out right away!
Hey there. As you continue to develop the series, I would like more of the back stories for the other key characters.
I think you will approve of my announcement tomorrow! Don't miss it!
@@ShaneLochlannBlack When, more specifically?
Lost me at poisonous gas in space, I guess its just too hard.
It's getting a little interesting! ;<) KnifeMaker
Rare and violent 😂
Can't wait for next esp.
Very enthusiastic narrator happy for society watch blessings to All
Well damn. My first time here, and I get yelling ad before START??? I'm out. Good luck BRO.
Very good, thanx.
what happened at epsilon gamma 3
AWESOME SERIES!!!
It's only because we have the most AWESOME READERS!!
Thanks!
Outstanding! You are most welcome!
Thanks!
Thanks for the support Daniel!
Respects to Cmdr Enright, fictional though he is.
I think the crews of the Argent strike group should be awarded a tall stack pancake campaign medal.
Sorry but this is just a mishmash of random scenario's infused with techno babble. No theme? No story? No cohesiveness. It is just a bunch of oddball episodes with too many characters, all at the same time.
Did you start with first book?
So very glad that this writer does not describe anyone's "jaw is set with grim determination."😂 If I hear that again I will become "twisted into alien ghosts" or some s**t. Good description with relatively correct military operations. (Naval).
/makes quick note of phrases not to use
LOVEN THE SIERIES
Can you rename the playlists so we know how to listen in in sequence
I'll do one better. I'm going to do a whole video on reading order and I just might have a preview of future events to go with it! Stand by!
Why u mix the chapters up you never finish a story you ruined it